Foreign Dimensions

by Bonny Jestra

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad
Length: 4226

Foreign Dimensions is a Story about a Vistitor and something Darker that reveals later.

Something is not right in Equestria and something will turn. Are our Heroes brave enough to face their deepest fears? Is there a Happy End?

(I need some help with the grammar i have to translate all chapters and translators are bad things. Please do not judge this story this early just help me)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-04-30 16:31:24 UTC

1. Arrival

Foreign Dimension

Act 1

Arrival

In the midst of a dark wood glowed a dark light and a sphere appeared which whirled around itself and became quicker and quicker,

from this Sphere it seemed that an object would push itself out.

This object was bent and seemed in the vague light of the Sphere to glow white.

More and more of this object came from the Sphere and the inhabitants of this forest, they noticed this play,

saw that this white object a talon from a five-limbed claw hand was. These claws were long and big and looked very sharp.

Then followed a foot which was also claw like, nevertheless, it was not bend the same way the claws from the hand was. Maybe just to support the creatures stand.

Then the skull followed and this skull was born grinning in this world with teeth so sharp and thin like needles.

As the rest of the creature from the sphere followed the sphere disappeared and the spectator maybe realized that this sphere was some kind of portal.

Now this creature was complete in this world, she was 2 meters high just and now the white one became rather bleach.

Teeth so pointy, claws so sharp, wings which with every movement cracked and crunched and above those wings  grow two outgrowths had been. This outgrowths were long and led from there crookedly about. Nevertheless, this creature also seemed be breakable and too thinly to move around , but this it happened and with one wide grin welcomed the creature this new world.

" Ahhhh! How I hate these trips, i feel like i went through a mincer." "Now let us make a start here, we notice to us this place and we make sure we will have a beacon here first of all"

According to these words the creature looked down his right hand examined  his left hand and broke off one talon from his hand after a loud *Crack!* the Talon rested in his left hand. She looked at the claw and seemed to concentrate then the claw glimmered in a gray light after that the creature inserted the claw into the humid ground.

"Now this  will be enough, let us look around and maybe we could nourish from anything here"

The creature listened in and walked swiftly through the forest and then stopped suddenly as she discovered a group of hare.

"You will be enough for the beginning"

The creature looked at the group of forest animals in without to be noted,suddenly the group of happy jumping hares turned into lame shuffling long ears. Which as it seemed not even cared about each other.

"Well, well a good beginning hahahah"

The creature looked around then she heard something.

"So now I will welcome Zecora to invite her for the big party"

The creature looked confused at the sight of the newcomer then what she  saw  was extremely unusual it was a sort of pink pony

"Uhhh I am observed I feel it"

The creature was now much more cautious because of this statement but her hunger was still large.

She concentrated with care because the other creature was able to sense her... maybe.

"Only a good mouthful"

Suddenly the creature glowed in a gray aura. Her face expression was a mix of pain Joy

"Too much TOO MUCH NO"

The creature hurried into the deeps of the forest but it was too late!

She inflate and seemed to explode!

Then a hiss and a bang

As the smoke dissolved, the creature still stood there. Her back thorns and the thorns  from her forehead had been disappeared as it seem.

Reeling and smoking there staggered the creature out of the forest.

"I must strengthen myself this was too much joy too much fun too much desire for -party-"

On the edge of the wood there was a hut on the ground from that hut was a chicken hut. This hut looked strange more than a den for all kind of animal than a hut.

The creature approached and discovered another of these colorful beings sick of hunger by the previous incident and allot more carefully by that back coupling lived through, the creature wanted to do it now less strong. She approached even closer the shy and colorful Creature.

She concentrated and already it was noticeable that the noble and nice behavior to the animals subsided.

The creature gained strength a little, sucked more and more...

However, Suddenly she heard a dark voice right in her head

"YOU DARE TO HURT MY DEAR FRIEND TO CHANGE HER! I WILL CHANGE YOU SO YOU WILL LEARN HERE!

A draw went through the Creature and suddenly she felt numb and hit the ground stunned.

As she awoke she took a hoof to the head and said with quiet and whimpering voice

"Outch I must have run against a branch where am I?"

This whimper was perceived.

"Hey.... small colt what do you do here near my hut..... and this near to the Everfree Forrest?"

"I am Fluttershy... lets me supply your bump"

In the hut of Fluttershy was a big decorated mirror and as the wound was supplied the little foal was still watching himself in the mirror and it seemed like he was wondering to se himself in there.

"You look so taken aback my little one you never have thus a nice mirror seen... It is from Rarity I was model for her once.... it was funny, however, it was not completely mine"

What the small colt saw was himself a small foal with a white/yellowish coat with gray  eyes and small wings he was obviously a blank flank.

"... Uhm what is your name small guy?"

The small foal looked around taken aback and thought.

I am... My name is... I do not know I... I believe it what had with laugh to do... mmhmmmmmmm or with J. Jes Jes..."

The small one stopped and started to cry

"... Oh small guy do not cry, let me think this has to be a very hard impact

"How would it be with Jesh?"

He shook his head

"Jesaja?"

Again a shake

"How it would be with Jesse?"

He thought... this sounded good, to this was right.... somehow... he nodded his head

"Well Jesse where are your parents? Are you alone?"

Jesse thought and then he sank with the head to ground and snapped sobbing, he answered

"I don´t know but something in my head tells my i am all alone and all that have been are gone!" Fluttershy squeezed Jesse and took him under her wings.

"Oh hush now little foal do not cry i am with you"

"Well you probably have to be from Manehatten this is long way to go and you appeared even in the Everfree Forrest a Dangerous place to be!

"Manehatten?"

"Yes there was 3 weeks ago a misfortune many ponies were injured and some had also disappeared under the debris"

"Debris? Misfortune?"

"Yes something strange had happened over Manehatten appeared a dark ob and this orb caused chaos because it distorted the surrounding and sucked everything towards itself"

"Princess Celestia demanded immediately Discord my dear friend to herself"

"Princess Celestia? Discord?"

Oh you little silly, Princess Celestia rules with her sister Luna over Equestria and Discord my dear friend is a Draconequus... and he likes to do some mischief."

Now... mhmm back to Manehatten..."

"After Discord told me what he has seen, this Sphere so he felt was linked to other Dimensions but right before he could examine this Object it disappeared. Quite for his vexation because this thing would mean allot of fun for him he could do allot of mischief at the other side of the portal. He told me that with a wink.

2. Self-discovery

Foreign Dimensions

Act 2

Self-discovery

"Princess Celestia first suspected Discord behind that what  had happened but he was really surprised and intrigued, somewhat chaotic happened without him"

"Is Discord a comedian?"

"Well he has a strange view of fun, however, everybody understands fun differently"

"To what extent?"

"Now the biggest fun for me is to care for animals and their kind does not matter.

Rainbow Dash loves to fly around at high speed.

Rarity the glamor and noblesse.

Twilight Sparkle new knowledge and reading.

Applejack has the biggest fun in the work she is a very competent pony

and Pinkie Pie well... Pinkie Pie loves party about everything"

"Who are all these ponies?"

"My best friends"

Suddenly the door burst open with a loud roaring and a colored flash shot through the room

"Hey Fluttershy who is your small friend he looks so pathetic"

"... Uhm, hello, Rainbow Dash this is Jesse, he is probably a foundling"

"Oh man this is soo boringly not only Twiligth now you too...."

Fluttershy stared at Rainbow Dash

"Oh not the stare"

"... No"

Fluttershy sighed

"I had to look at you just very seriously Rainbow you do not really think that Jesse is exact like Nyx? Not really a foal?

Rainbow gave a laugh according to that idea

"Bwhahahaha, no, no only that there are two foals now  from what one is an Alicorn foal for Twilight and you got your suitable Pegasi foal.

"Can you fly generally worm?"

Challenging Rainbow looked at Jesse

"...Rainbow..... you can not demand such thing from this little foal...."

said Fluttershy timid as she wrapped her wings around her and she made herself a bit smaller.

By the frightened position of Fluttershy indignantly Jesse stood up in a stubborn mood.

"Of course I can fly!"

Jesse glared to Rainbow.

He fluttered with his wings the strange thing was he was doing a noise like Leafs in the wind but he did not lift from the ground.

"Now you sound similarly strangely like Scootaloo maybe you come only with a Scooter of the spot"

"Rainbow! now you are just mean"

"Fluttershy the self value course has really strengthen your back am i right?"

Again back in her humility position Fluttershy squeaked a little bit, Rainbow completed this totally.

With a Red Head

With bright red head, Snorting and wheezing Jesse lifted less than a half meter above the ground.

"HA! YOU ARE ABLE TO DO IT"

By this crier Jesse was Frightened and folded up his wings like jackknife.

*Ptump! *

"This was a quite good small guy"

"Has nothing happened to you?"

Baffled Jesse looked around.

"I...i...i, am  flown"

He looked to his back and moved his wings now more of course and more quietly, bu the sound of  leafs remained...

3. Get to know

Foreign dimensions

Act 3

Get to know

Three Pegasi left the house and went to Raritys shop

"I must still clear with Rarity in which time we this week in the spa they go deals currently so much"

Fluttershy and Jesse went side by side here, nevertheless, Rainbow flew about theirs head to and fro

"Comes already fly much faster you, nevertheless, are are no lame earth ponies"

"RAINBOW DASH!"

The group winced on account of the vigorous voice

"What do to Hey you maintain about earth ponies I must run you to this flying Schummlern remind you?"

Jesse looked in the direction of the voice

What saw he a pony with a blond mane under a stetson was which a little angrily in the direction of Rainbow Dash looked, then you fell look at Jesse and this dashes behind Fluttershy frightened by this pony

"Hey small honey pot before me you need to be not afraid."

".... Hello, Applejack I may introduce to you my foundling Jesse"

Fluttershy stepped aside and pushed the small foal forwards with her wing

"Oh you poor small guy a foundling completely only? Come sometimes here to aunt Applejack"

With strong one walked it shut to him and pressed Jesse firm ones.

To him it worked thus as if a tree crushed him

"So I hope now you are better"

"Where wanted to her three, actually?"

"We wanted to visit Rarity I must discuss something else with her"

"and you Rainbow dash?"

"I will look the flight progress of the mite"

"Ah, it is a Pegasi like could overlook I his wings?"

"Hey buzzer point you what you are able to do"

"Off it is OK"

Fluttershy prodded Jesse easily in

Encouraged by Fluttershys touch Jesse caught in to flutter

*Crackling sheets*

"What to the hay?"

"Yes he can fly, besides, however, he really makes a strange noise, there the worms should bite, nevertheless,"

Nevertheless, again Jesse folded together this sometimes he intercepted himself shortly before the ground

"You must practice the landing still bluebottle"

"... Further allow to go for us Rarity waits certainly"

With Rarity come one heard groaning and sighing

"Whether Rarity despairs once more whether they now Bordeaux or rose-coloured should take ha-ha"

While opening the Türe became in a mess everywhere clothes and suits lay scattered

"What to make hay a wild herd cows is swept out here"

"Ohhh this disharmony it simply does not fit is not fabulous enough!"

"Finally, Rarity you could decide I will still arrange deaf in all this is worse than cervical pains after a reading marathon"

The pony violet gleaming in a dark with the violet strand looked unnerved to the white pony by his doctored hair a white horn gleamed.

Suddenly lighted up the dress Magenta and went away like from mind hand of the violet pony

"Uff"

if the violet pony groaned

"well rarity you have visit"

"Whaaaat? Oh no thus in a mess and now still guests"

"Hey Raaarity come down sometimes thus in a mess, nevertheless, is top class"

"Rainbow Dash ordinarily you are responsible for in a mess if you here thus by dashes"

"Heyy this time you yourself are responsible ha-ha"

"Who is then the small guy there Fluttershy"

It was right it came behind Jesse was the violet pony

From reflex Jesse ran forwards and rammed with it Applejack

"We must practice this still honey pot"

"Ah a pegasi foal has almost the same fur colour like you up to his mane them looks a little colorless, Fluttershy, somebody related?

"... No Twilight he is a foundling I suppose from Manehatten"

"However, Manehatten this is away another and a foundling oje certainly by this disaster"

"Then it is determined to you like Nyx, however, they go has fast makes friends with the beauty spot cross knights found"

"So, besides, what knows you these small devils make Appeljack I gave way heard they are renewed on your court"

"Yehaa them test currently whether them with the apple juice her beauty spots produce got granny smith her help can well use"

Meanwhile consulted Rarity and Fluttershy when they then this week in the spa meet.

"Now let us clear up sometimes here, Fluttershy you could look sometimes after tank he is currently in my library"

"Oh this condemns the reason why was I only with you there dashes Fluttershy to him it does not go well"

"... Oooh an animal in miseries on then Jesse to the library this cannot wait"

Fluttershy and Jesse left the shop, because the friends were to be cleared up with it occupied this.

When they by Ponyville went a grey pony came to them against which probably them looked..... or the Nascherei in his hoofs

Of "muffin"

If Derpy murmured

Jesse was taken aback a little by him look this pony seemed to look at him and at the muffin at the same time

Shortly before the library a pony attacked against them

"Uhaaaaaaa... no, nevertheless, not! I thought I would have discovered the spy"

"Nevertheless, Pinkie does not frighten Jesse"

Which kept itself hidden once more behind Fluttershy

"Ohhh you are new? I remember every pony! I have to do a PARTY! for you YAY" hold

"Smile, nevertheless, small guy"

Grinning she met him

"Mhh pinkie reflects mmhh... again away"

Pinkie looked jesse deeply in the eyes as him extremely cautiously smiled it turned again to Fluttershy

"Now I have to do off PARTY!"

"Who was the Fluttershy?"

"...... These were Pinkie Pie they quite is crazy on it everybody to smile to bring"

Nevertheless, smiling Jesse nodded as a Fluttershy nobody turned away itself noted the silvery one light up of the grey eyes from jesse and his expression, however, the pure loathing was also a worry.....

At the market

Foreign dimensions

Act 4

At the market

When she will wanted to open the door of the library this from the inside opened

"Oh, hello, Fluttershy, I had expected, actually, Twilight or Rainbow Dash"

"She will come quite late Rarity has made considerable in a mess with Twilights fitting"

"Mhmm Rarity"

Spike caught in to fantasize

"Hey who is then the small guy looks almost like you Fluttershy"

"What are you then?"

Suddenly Jesse stood taken aback before Spike Spike fell to the back

"However, one this was quick, nevertheless, he stood just still beside you"

"Jesse this is Spike a baby dragon"

"Amusing"

"Whoa! is this your cousin? At that time he is as inspired as you"

"No he is a foundling from Manehatten"

"Oh, I see then. I bet you would like to look after tank today he has flown by the Türe and has probably injured himself the leg"

"Oh with Celestia show him to me Spike"

Fluttershy hurried with Spike in a next space.

Jesse was still focused on Spike, nevertheless, noted as him where they were

"Books!"

After Fluttershy had looked after tank He came, Fluttershy and Spike from the next room in the Twilight a resting place for him had made.

"You are Jesse where"

The small stallion seemed disappeared.

Fluttershy was in worry

Suddenly Spike a book mountain struck

"Nevertheless, he was not there just now yet"

Then this book mountain and Jesse moved appeared

"The elements of the Harmony... the saga of Nightmare Moon..... Dragon's ponies..... The crystal kingdom... Myth of the Changelings....

marble marble... amusing"

"Hey! It is probably a bookworm there, however, will be glad Twilight!.... and he reads 4 books at the same time even more to clear up for me"

"Come Jesse Tank is supplied I still wanted to the market around a few strawberries for hinge to shop"

Spike sighed

"Well"

He read in the books

Hello, small land tortoise with the leg will fall it to you really hard to run

Tank looked at Jesse and moved in the cable of his apparatus, stuttering the machine and tank started cleared out

"OK hihi I have said nothing"

"So now we are here ready Rainbow here is a little of the medicament give this once daily on his leg"

"If it does not allow to fall Rainbow this is a tincture from plants of the Everfree and I would not like to have to go so fast again in"

"Goes absolutely clearly Fluttershy"

Thus they went to the market

On her way Fluttershy greeted there a very big stallion with red fur colour who pulled a quite heavy cart only.

"Also on the way to Mark Big Macinthosh?

"Ayup"

If was one single answer what Jesse a little, however, it surprised it rests and friendliness this pony emitted let him smile and thus smiled

Big Mac back

He had no notion he was observed....

At the market come Fluttershy shut strictly to a strawberry state

"Hello, Strawberry Heart you have a few particularly tasty strawberries for hinge you know as demandingly he can be"

Smiling the tan pony with twelve strawberries answers as a beauty spot arranged as a heart.

"Yes this is fine I was reminds me like her together with my brother Cherry Stone after cherries have searched and he his half a stand has taken apart"

To him it came strangely before he these spots only now he noted there none seemed to have, he pulled at Fluttershy

"Fluttershy why you have butterflies on your hip and Strawberry Heart strawberries?"

Strawberry Heart seemed astonished, nevertheless, Fluttershy smiled only and answers:

"This are our different beauty spots which one gets if one his special talent discovers"

"Which is why do I have nothing?"

"Oh smaller either you have probably forgotten this, or your parents have not explained this to you, we are not born with beauty spots"

"Oh, I see well and when do I receive my beauty spot?"

"If the time has come Jesse"

A little crustily he gave way

"Well"

He looked around and discovered a few ponies in his big who already seemed to have noted him

Fluttershy noted his look and said

"Go only to your contemporaries you will not probably run away or Jesse?"

He shook the head and shut to both ponies

"Hello, I am..."

"Quite anew here and walks around with this dull animal lover"

He imagined this this no friendly greeting was, nevertheless, maybe he had with his call at a mistake made he was unnerved

"Yes exactly is used certainly with the fur colour hahah"

Now Jesse definit did not imagine a little bit tuned these both ponies were unfriendly without reason to him with a face fierce now Jesse spoke

"I am Jesse! and it is not to be talked nicely unfriendly things about Fluttershy"

"Ha now it still become challenging a shining flank ha"

"Exactly ha of shining flank"

With these repeated ones noted Jesse the bespectacled white pony states a silver spoon on the hip carried and the other the same symbol had like her headdress he was the more unnerved there these ponies to his old one would have to correspond

They walked around him and shouted

"Shining flank shining flank shining flank"

Suddenly an apple flew against the forehead of the headdress to weight-bearing pony

"What? Who?"

Three Looking nevertheless around them unbosomed itself only Big Mac to his carts pulled and probably no hoof free ones had to throw around something, then there flew a few apples of the cart and a small red-haired pony came from the apple heap and held an apple in the hoof

"The next meets you Silver Spoon!"

"You do not venture this Applebloom!"

This came from the headdress to weight-bearing pony

"For you is another aloof slide moon Tiara"

Applebloom showed with the hoof at the Tiara weight-bearing pony as Jesse Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon over the head of slide moon Tiara looked they saw an apple about slide moon Tiaras head float which darkness blue gleamed

"Who? however, not possibly Sweete Barking!"

From the cart a black bespectacled pony burrowed to himself the deep-blue symbol on her hip a sign with a half moon was it a horn had it exactly like Twilight, nevertheless wing also had this astonished Jesse very much.

Up to now he had only normal ponies which with horns or which with wings like him and Fluttershy seen, nevertheless, this combination seemed to him unusual

"Nightmare Moon!"

With this name exclamation there came Jesse a short flash of thought he had not read this name?

However, the black pony at all did not seem to like the mention of this name folded up the ears and made a sad look

Infuriated about this said Applebloom with full outrage

"Your creeps call them with her right name! Nyx!"

Big Mac said the Rangelei in his back noting

"Hey Stopping"!

In her belligerence braked withdrew slide moon Tiara and Silver Spoon

"We still see ourselves shining flank"

"Hello, I am Applebloom and this is Nyx who you are then we could not understand your name just now completely"

Jesse still answered Nyx staring as dazedly

"Nevertheless, Jesse, you will not annoy me also or?"

"We we never are the beauty spots cross knight and on that looks for our special talent!"

Applebloom seemed to balloon with the mention of the cross knights a little

"But uhmmm Nyx if I have not misheard"

The mention of theirs by her mother given names, spoken by an absolutely foreign pony without any strange undertone like it, otherwise, with almost all inhabitants Ponyvilles was usual, pleased Nyx very much and she smiled

Eager smile by this, Jesse also smiled again

"You have one... To beauty spots something like that is your special talent?"

if Jesse Nyx asked bluntly

"I protect to me are important"

"So to bombard both common ponies was your idea?"

"No she came to use Applebloom my magic from around them further to verunischern and my presence have done there her remaining one I probably suppose"

This smile disappeared from Nyx... as strangely Jesse found.

However, it was not entrancedly from her emerald Greens eyes which to him anyhow normally seemed, however, he did not want to ask.

"Hey allow to go for us to the clubhouse I bet Scootaloo and Sweetie Barking also are just there."

Not further what question this for a special clubhouse may be Jesse Applebloom and Nyx on came along away

Half from the market under it Jesse turned round and galloped to Fluttershy

"I have everything if Jesse observes go quietly with Applebloom and Nyx allows to bring you only tonight home you do not know away back yet there we some detours have gone"

Though Jesse was certainly he the way, however, would find one should hear, he nodded and came along away