Creepy Pasta

by Xx soul sorrow xX

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Alternate Universe, Original Character, Spike, Twist, Rarity, Maud Pie, Human, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1214

Some friends were at a church picnic when a wolf kidnapped them and they got in big trouble. :(

Maud Pie and Rarity and Spike and Twist were at a church picnic and there was a guy dressed like a wolf I guess he was a furry anyway he kidnaps them and they are at a place and he tries to kill them like in Cup Cakes fanfic. Maud may be a part of it....... DUN DUN DDDUUUUUUUNNNNNN >:D read all about it! :).

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Hey this is my firt creepypasty so i hope yo enjoy it :) Dont be to scared lel

Editeded by MontyTheToast since i made a ruff draffed but he hadta edit it again sinec it got reject. :(
also i maked a cover but im not too good at photo shoping so its not too good. :( if some1 wants to amke a new cover let me kno!! :) thx in advance

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SOME1 did a reading of it so yeah go listen11!! thanx bro
http://www.tllps.tk/public/readings/Creepy_Pasta.mp3

Published 2014-04-30 19:50:04 UTC
Last updated 2014-04-30 19:50:04 UTC

Don't get scared

It was a beautiful day in Canton. All the ponies were going to a church picnic straight from church. Rarity volunteered to take Spike because Twilight was too busy adopting a kid. Spike was a super psych to go. He got in Rarity's car and they drive it to the picnic at the Metro Park. Twist wanted to come too, but Rarity gave her a stupid look and said, "Ew, no."
When Rarity got to the park, they stopped the car and got out. Spike looked around. There were many other ponies. Some were getting balloons from a clown pony. Others were eating food. Rarity really wanted some food. Driving down the road made her hungry. Spike put his hands in the air and ran to the food screaming. Rarity smiled as she galloped to the food stand. It was really big and had food in it.

There was a southern pony who was holding a raffle for a new TV. He grabbed a microphone and everypony listened. Rarity and Spike put their names in the raffle and they were off by one number and Rarity screamed.
Spike was sad and he cried but Rarity hugged him and let him eat some chips off Rarity's plate. The whole place was like a big fat barbecue.
Then they all dig the egg hop where you hop to the finish line with a egg on your foot. After the events, Rarity told Spike he could go play on the playground. While on the playground, Spike saw something. It was a guy. He wasn't a pony. He was actually a man, but he looked like a wolf. Was it a man under a costume? Spike didn't know, but he looked fluffy. Spike ran over to Rarity and said in monotone, "Rarity, I seen a guy in a costume. I know how much you like fashion, go check it out, girl."
Rarity, shocked followed Spike to the wolf next to the playground. Foals were surrounding the wolf man and smiling and hugging him. Rarity noticed his shaggy grey fur and big blue cartoon eyeballs. He hugged the kids with love. Rarity took notes on her notebook and wanted to design a dress like it. It would be grey fur with blue on it just like its eye ballz. Rarity drew a dress idea, but when she looked up, Spike was being a troll. He was smacking the wolf's tail back and forth and the wolf was flailing in every direction, trying to find who was touching him. All of the kiddies were laughing and the wolf looked down to see his tail lying on the ground. Spike ran away laughing like a mean. Rarity spanked him in front of his friends.
Rarity sat with Spike but then the wolf came by and grabbed them. All the kids ran away from him after laughing at him. The wolf grabbed their flesh and dragged them to a van and nobody saw it. In the van the wolf didn't talk. The only doors in it were in the front seat, and a caged door blocked it. The man drove far away. They didn't know where they were and Rarity left her cell phone at the playground. Rarity whispered to Spike, "When we get out, run for the hills, man."
They stopped at an old building. It was a old asylum. The man grabbed them and pulled them to the building. Spike struggled to get away but the wolf guy slammed him into the old brick wall and he had a big ol' shiner now on his eyeball.
"Ow" he said.

Inside, the building was covered in blood and the wolf took them upstairs to five floors. In a small room, the wolf threw Spike in and a few rooms from that he threw Rarity in there. Then he went back to Spike and strapped him to the ceiling. Then he took some darts out of a drawer and threw one at Spike. It hit him in the cheek and it was sharp. So sharp, that he started bleeding. Then he punched him and it blood even more. Soon, Spike's face was covered in blood and he drained of his blood and his face ran out. The wolf had blood on his costume. He grabbed a bloody fork and ate a chunk of spike's flesh. "OUCHY MOMMA" yelled Spike.
"Don't do that." he said.
He cried in pain. He was in pain. It was painful. There was blood everywhere. It was gross. Then Spike said, "Why do ya do it to meh?"
But the wolf antagonist guy didn't respond.
"Oh, okay" said Spike. "I guess you're giving me the silent treatment. Well, that's cool."
Then the wolf grabbed a soup spoon and drank his blood dripping from the ceiling. Then Spike screamed 'cause blood makes him nauseous. But the wolf didn't even care. The wolf man opened the door, his puffy mascot costume mouth covered in the liquid of red hues. He walked outside. Spike dropped his head and sighed and stared at the blood on the floor. He not ready to die just yet.

The wolf costume boy walked into Rarity's room. He hair was messed up and she had opened the window. The window was too small to escape from since Rarity is obesity. The wolf guy walked up to her and pushed her into the wall. A bird flew through the window and he picked it up and ate it right in front of her.
"Ew" said Rarity. Then the wolf smeared the half-eaten bird corpse on Rarity's face and Rarity licked it up. She puked and the wolf licked up the puke. Then he tied Rarity to a table and grabbed a knife.
"Ooohhhhh noooo" said Rarity.
Then the wolf chopped off her feets one by one. She screamed really loudly and screamed. Her foot hurt really bad and the wolf ate the flesh off each foot. He was like a bottom less pit. He didn't stop eating. He was like a hungry man. Rarity didn't like him cause he was mean. Eating people's flesh isn't attractive.
Rarity grabbed her shoe and tried to smack him, but the attack missed and the wolf got angry. He then punched Rarity and kicked her guts and they flew out and hit the wall.
"EEEEEEEEWWWWWW, NNNNNOOOOOOOO" she screamed.
Then Rarity took a breath and died. The wolf put Rarity over the window and slammed it shut so her head fell down into the abyss of the dead grass below. A bird pecked it.

The wolf man went to Spike's room and kicked him on the ceiling. Then he kicked him.
Spike moaned and went "AAaauuuggghhhhhhhhhhuuuuuhhhh."
Then the wolf licked the blood off the floor and Spike died, knowing Rarity was died and a bird was pecking her decapitated head.

Author's Note

Omg guys i throwed up when i writed this. :)))))) Hope ya dont egt scared now....

Hey also this was a story biased on the time when i saw a furry. i hated him. Yea He was mad when i rip the tail off it was a velcrow i think

Tellme if ya want me to write more creepypastys :))))) :heart:
edited by IXSparkleShipperXI