A Second Chance

So here we are reader.  Under ol' Mak's story page.  Here is where I explain everything and say something special.  Basically, I'm going to do a possible first, a live story.  That means if I write it and stop.  You guys will see the unfinished writing and all of you get one chance to change the story to make it look better, like an audiance editor.  Now that that kind of explaining is over.  Time to explain the alternate universe thing.  We now look inside the TARDIS of pony Doctor Whooves with his assistant Derpy Hooves.

Over Manehattan, in an alternate universe, the Doctor and Derpy go over this universe.  Observing the readings and looking out a newly installed monitor to observe the outside world.  What the Doctor finds on the monitor and data is astounding.

"It seems we have reached another Equestria.  Only, this is filled with humans."  The Doctor says.

"I think you told me about humans before...."  Derpy responds.

"Yes a bi-pedal species with 4 limbs, but no hooves.  Instead, they have hands and feet, more useful for grabbing instead of- hang on, what is this?"  The Doctor says while he looks at a monitor.  "Well I'll be a monkey's uncle!"

"You are?"

"No, of course not.  It seems that this is no ordinary human Equestria.  Any pegasi from our world who are humans in this world have wings.  Any unicorn from our world that are here in this world can cast magic only through their hands, no horns.  Regular ponies, however, are just normal humans in this world.  So this is just a human counter part dimension to our own!  Fasinating!"  he explains.

"Uh-wah, I don't get it...."  Derpy says, her head tilted.

"Lets just say that the ponies and pegasi and unicorns we know from our universe are humans in this universe and they all have their special talents."  he explained.

"OHHHHH, ok.  Well, moving on I guess, sidewards and forwards!"  She exclaimed.

"It's, upwards and onwards, Derpy, but close enough,  Moving on then!"  The Doc yelled.

SO, yea that's my explaination for everything.  Hope you like the live chapter scheme.  Another terrible idea by me, so expect the story soon, tomorrow at most.