Pinkie and the Remote Control World

by The Isapie

(11) Hurricane Pinkie

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Hurricane Pinkie

By The Isapie

Pinkie woke up  the next morning on the train, utterly exhausted. She wasn't sure why she'd awoken until she heard two noises.

One, Dashie's snoring in the upper bunk.

And two, the train whistle.

Dashie jumped right out of the bunk and managed to not hit the floor. That would be very bad for her foal or filly...whichever.

Meanwhile, the conductor yelled, "Next stop, Mount Luna!"

Pinkie automatically started to feel tension in her very bones. "Tightish bones...Flopping ear...Itchy nose...DASHIE! THIS IS OUR STOP!" She yelled, which effectively got Rainbow Dash our of bed. "Pinkie! I was dreaming of...stuff!" Yelled Dashie, but she did get off the bunk and start packing up.

Within a few minutes, the duo were done washing up, eating breakfast (one of Pinkie's homemade biggie cookies) and packing, they hopped into the cart where the doors were.

The train screeched to a stop.

"Mount Luna, folks! Anyone who is stopping at Mount Luna, please exit!" Yelled a young unicorn colt.

Pinkie and Dashie, along with the few other tourists who actually wanted to visit the not-as-grand-as-Mount-Celestia mountain stepped off the train.

After a quick scan of their surroundings, Dashie confirmed something to Pinkie.

"Pinkie, there is a gondola system, so we don't have to climb any more mountains. That's always nice. Now all we really need to do is get up there and find your hubby and the triplets."

"Dashie, I didn't say they were up there. I only said we needed to go there."

"Huh?"

"When I woke up, I felt something trembling through the ground. I realized that it was somepony trying to send me a message through the fourth wall system."

"Well, will you have enough connection to receive this message?"

"If I can feel it, then I can receive it."


Half an hour later, the duo had gondola-ed up the mountain. Pinkie found a small cave, and she set up her instant fourth wall message system("I call it my IFWMS!"). She plugged it into a crack in the cave, and a blue portal appeared.

"Hop in Dashie!"


For Rainbow Dash, the portal seemed very scary.

For Loyalty, it was scarier.

For one, Loyalty had a bruised foot (from a sports event). For another, she'd stayed up really long comforting Laughter and telling her it wasn't all her fault.

Laughter wasn't all Laughter-y anymore.

Loyalty now guided Laughter in the fourth wall. Suddenly, she saw a mass of pink and next to it, a rainbow striped topped blue mass. "Rainbow Dash! Pinkie Pie! We're here!" She yelled, hobbling towards the two ponies.


Pinkie had travelled once by accident to the world of humans that Twilight had gone to. These humans looked nothing like the ones there.

The taller one had a dark brown mane, with occasional streaks of golden brown. She had bronze skin and was very, very tall. She wore a light blue shirt with a curving rainbow designAlthough she was clearly very strong, she had a wrap around her foot. She must have bruised it or something,thought Pinkie.

The shorter one was shorter by about five centimetres. She had a black mane, and had peachy, yellow-ish tanned skin. She was wearing a bright pink shirt, the same colour as Pinkie was all over. She was noticeably skinny, but she still had some strength, for otherwise, she wouldn't be holding the massive bag that was threatening to drop to the ground any second.

Pinkie did note that this girl was crying into the other girl's shoulder, and the other girl was trying to comfort her.

At this point, the girl in pink got up.

"Pinkie, Dashie...We need to talk."

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