hello there audience and random troll this is my try at a first person story so please be gentle
Nope ok well at least give me suggestions for improvement
??? ??? Running this was the only thing on my mind, run run from the timberwolfs and I kept running and running ignoring the pain in my side from that attack.
No just keep running and don't look back
And I ran oblivious of the trap that they had setup because one wolf became three, three became five, five became ten and I just kept on running right into a cliff they had me trapped
they have me trapped and there going to eat me... I will never get to angel bunny again, or my friends*sniff* or help out mr bear I have let everypony down
Then to my right there was a deep growl and the timberwolfs started to shrink away in fear. What could make a pack of timberwolfs afraid. My question was answered when a massive silver wolf appears out of my right eye. It was 3 times bigger then any timberwolf it's eyes were yellow and angry, it's skin was made of what looked like metal scale/fur hybrid. It was ignoring me and showing its teeth to the rest which we're looking to run away.
please don't hurt me I don't want to die
Then the alpha timber wolf which was half it's size made a set of sounds that was like it was speaking the silver wolf's teeth started to rotate like that thing pinkie pulled out of here mane, and then he began to approach the alpha and roared which blew the alpha to peaces and with that the rest on the timberwolfs ran for the hills. The wolf started to walk towards me it changed it's eyes were that of worry and it's teeth were almost non-existent.
Then darkness....
~~~~just a time skip ignore me~~~~
I woke up and all I could think about is the pain and I stayed still for a lifetime until it was gone and replaced with warmth and the smell of apple pie
should I open my eyes.... Yes I should thank the pony that saved me
With my mind still hazy I opened my eyes to find a cave with a glowing crystal formation to the roof a small fire pit and grill, a hunk of metal in the conner, and a door of wood, what I was laying on was very soft and as I look down I see a bed of purple grass.
*clang scrape yipp* that came from the conner. Oh no that is the wolf from before ... But is smaller like the size of well me
"Eep" I said when my stomach rumbled and with that it left out the door.
time to see how bad my side is..
I tought as I look to my left side and saw that it was the bone in my wing was fixed and in a sling and my skin was stitched and bandaged with what little my blouse and pants could give which was not Much seeing that it was full of holes.
*gargle* oh my that was my stomach rumbling.
oh I hope my friend find me soon
*creek* that was the door opening I turned my head expecting to see the wolf who I will name Silver come to eat me but instead he had some flowers and a rock in silver's mouth which I now seem goes into a wall sheet of metal. Sliver then gave me the flowers and took the rock which I now see Is ore and chewed it like gum. I slowly look at the flowers which I saw was some sun flowers, daffodils, rose without thorns and some strange orange flowers. I chose the sun flowers first and it was the best one I ever tasted. I then looked at sliver who looked at me with a kindhearted smile. And I tried the orange flowers which tasted sour, sweet, savoury and salty at the same time and then I felt a sharp pain in my side as I saw that one of the stitches broke and flew out and I started to beed out.
nooooo not now I can't die
Was my last thought before the darkness came
FlutterShy ???
I open my eyes to see the sun's warm light I was not in pain nor was I a unknown location
"Hello my name is FlutterShy and I need help" I mumbled and when know answer came I began to look around to find out where I am
And when I turn around I see silver looking at me with joy on his face. "Good your alive you had me worried" he said calmly to me
"Eep how can you talk?" I asked because he just cannot speak about me being alive like it is a common occurrence.
"Well right now you are dreaming because you bled out and I'm giving you some of my power to heal so for the next few hours he can talk." He sated, why would he save me and why would he be giving me some of his power.
"If you don't mind why are you helping me?" I asked he just put a smirk on his face
"Because dear FlutterShy you do not deserve to die today so you won't" he just said with a hint of sadness in his voice should I ask him his name "umm could you tell me your name? That so corse you don't mind" I quickly finished and his smirk faded to show a long forgotten pain "my name is old and not a nice one so I will need a new one soon" he said only to, continue with a lighter mood" I will need a new one any ideas?" He finished.
He asked me to help with a name an identity this is big. Should I give him my nickname for him
" umm Silver seems nice and it matches you nicely that is if you like it" I suggested with a half hearted smile he just started thinking
"Silver I like it oh and by the way I took control of your body and put you into ponyville's hospital. And if you ever need me call my name.... Time to wake up bye" he said with sadness in his voice.
~~~FlutterShy ponyville~~~
sliver..... Thank you
