The rise of an evil and totally not delicious looking tyrant of evil evilness

I'm not very good at descriptions. This story is about a cookie, An Evil Cookie. A cookie SO evil he makes nightmare moon tremble with fear! Please. Read and criticise. I really appriciate it, Just.. Don't be TOO mean. Thanks!

This is a most likely one shot about the Evil Cookie. I made it specifically to get criticisms. And don't really expect anyone to want me to continue it.

Everyone