Revenge of Jack

Moonrise made his way into a dark, weird-smelling room, and looked down at the bed, specificaly at the sleeping human on it. With a swift, quick move, he punched him into the gut, waking him up instantly.

"OW! What was THAT for?"

"Dude, get up! You got a fanfic to end!"

"Oh shut up, i don't feel like writting..." Another punch had already gotten him on his legs.

"Dude, if i'll puke because of you, you will be the one cleaning that up!"

"Start. Writting. Fanfic! You don't want it to end like the 'Revenge of the Jack' did?"

"Ugh, it was just a test story! I wanted to try myself out!"

"But it wasn't that bad, if you could only change some things..."

"...Things like what?"

"Like, i dunno, change the reason why the guy ends up in Equestria, change his personality."

"Personality?"

"Yeah, i gues... you could make him a typical asshole, you know, a total douchebag, heart of ice and all this kind of stuff."

"This... doesn't actualy sound that bad. And let's say that he was doing some kind of a hard labor, so he's actualy somewhat strong, to not end up as a weak dork to be pushed around."

"So you want to make him overpowered?"

"Not really overpowered, he will never get anywhere near Applejack, but... how about magic?"

"Magic? For human?"

"Yeah, like... the magic of music."

"Like this thing that makes you sing whenever you feel excited or sad?"

"...Something of this kind, but what about that... he can somehow control it?"

"Well for sure he won't enter Equestria and cause a war by singing."

"Of course not, duhh. I... I'll think of something."

"So, are you actualy about to rewrite it?"

"...Let me end the first one, alright?"

"If you will ever end it."

"Oh shut up, you asshole."

Coming soon