Torn Shadows

by TornShadows

Rating: everyone
Tags: Random, Adventure, Discord, Princess Celestia, DJ P0N-3, Main 6, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1153

We have heard of the princesses and the six harmony defenders, but never the shadow hoppers join Torn as he try's to protect equestria from harm.

Torn is a shadow hopper the last of them to be exact but he still follows their code in trying to keep equestria safe from harm. However Twilight finds that evil ponies have started to be captured faster than usual and goes searching for this Torn Shadow.

Published 2014-05-06 06:50:02 UTC
Last updated 2014-05-06 06:50:02 UTC

Prologue

Prologue

There has been the sisters that change the day cycle and the harmony defenders that make sure that Equestria is safe, but nopony has ever heard of the shadow hoppers. This family has kept Equestria secretly safe by using shadows. However when Discord had first attacked the family was thought to be wiped out, but some made it through and made family's along the way and then a little Pegasus that wasn't as fully pitch black instead he had white patterns and even white pupils. His name is Torn Shadows for that very reason.

Author's Note

This just so I don't have to explain what they are and welcome to the adventure

The shadows appear

The shadows appear

"YES! I finally did it I finally stole the bits from the royal bank thanks to this train that is." SneakyStorm said while she threw the last of the bits on to her get away train. She was proud that she had no help that she pulled it off she started to think about where she was going to put it all until she finally went under the radar again. She was so exited she didn't even notice the shadow of a stallion on the wall. She laughed and started saying "what am I going to by first?" Then she heard a voice behind her say "how about your bail fee?" She turned around to see a stallion wearing a pitch black cloak that covered almost all of him even his face. She got a little nervous and look around and the yelled "Who are you!"
"I'm the shadows and I see that you have been committing a crime, theft to be exact." the stallion replied as he merged into the wall
She tried to scream out for help but then she was consumed i n darkness.

The newspaper came in like it did on every other day but something caught the eye of Twilight Sparkle. A story that talked about a mare who tried a theft then was stopped by what she called a stallion that was a shadow. Twilight instantly wanted to know what was going on so she started to pack her things to go and see princess Celestia.

Meanwhile not so far away a completely grey mare with a black curly mane found the news as well she then started calling her friend in what seemed like excitement "Torn get over here!"
"What is it I am trying to sleep if you couldn't tell." A black stallion with white patterns over his body,completely black eyes with white pupils, and a spiky white mane said groggily with a touch of annoyance
"It's that one mare you caught last night. She said that you shrouded her with darkness before they locked her up!"
Well I did, she was committing a crime so I had to stop her." Torn looked behind him just in time to see that he was about to be late for an event that a bunch of ponys were going to he needed to make sure to get their on time. Torn thought that in bigger events criminals liked to do more, so he would always go just to make sure everything was alright. "Gotta go but I'll talk to you later shade!" Torn said rushing outside. Shade smiled and waved at as he left but she couldn't help the feeling something weird was going to happen.

Torn made to the market and put on his cloak. When he was walking out of nowhere a pink pony with blue eyes and hair that look like it was inflated almost like an awkward ballon showed up behind him. "Hiya I've never seen you in town before." She said as she was jumping instead of galloping
"Well I just got here a couple of weeks ago."
"Oh I've been at the crystal palace that explains a lot actually. Oh, what's with the big scary sheet is it nightmare night already?!?"
Torn sighed and thought to himself not another jokester " No, I just prefer to wear cloak that's all."
"Well I knew that it wasn't nightmare night but whys it all torn up?" The pony said as she grabbed it.
"because I like it that way, but I really should be going." Torn said with a little bit of anger and annoyance in his voice.
"Okie dokie lokie I'm Pinkie Pie by the way"
"Torn"
"Alright well bye Torn" Pinkie pie waved as Torn walked on. Then he touched a wall and went in.

Author's Note

I'll make these longer over time I just want to see if it gets popular also you see what I did there all torn up? XD

Target unknown

Torn was going through the streets making sure they where okay for about an hour then got hungry so he decide to look for a place to eat. He looked around but couldn't find anything but a stand so he went to see what they had there. "Howdy, what might I do for ya today?" Said the mare at the booth. She look orange, had freckles, her eyes where green, and she was wearing a cowboy hat.
"Um, could I get some apple cider and hmmm I guess I'll try some apple doughnuts." Torn said while grabbing some bits from his cloak
"Why the fancy outfit, Wait I know you my friend Pinkie said something about you wearing some kind of cloak!" The pony exclaimed while packing Torn's food
"Wait you know that little pink pony that was really energetic?" Torn started to wonder if maybe going out was a bad idea Torn wasn't even supposed to be seen.
"Yeah I'm Apple Jack nice to meet ya know you really are an interstin fella ya kno- Where'd he go?" Apple jack looked around cluelessly at where the stallion went.

Torn looked around he felt something was wrong. Then he noticed a weird tail coming from what seemed to be a goat in a trench coat. Torn went closer to see what it was. He finally got close enough until a voice interrupted him. " you know it's not nice to spy on people." This thing said to Torn while him being the Shadows. "Oh yes little shadow hopper I know what you are, but I thought I got every last one of you." Torn couldn't believe what he was hearing its as if this thing could hear or see him.
"What are you and what do you mean every last one of us?" Torn asked
"I'm am chaos and I killed most of your kind." The thing laughed manically then disappeared into a puff of smoke.
Torn felt uneasy and felt nauseous every thing around his started to go black and then he lost his hearing.

Author's Note

Well who knows who this goat guy is? He seems familiar.