The soul in a flame

by BlazeRocket

Rating: teen
Tags: Main 6, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Sad, Original Character, Spike, Tragedy
Length: 2191

Blaze rocket needed to let all of his pressure out when his friends asked who or where were his parents...so he is telling mane 6 and spike about his life story.

Hello, my name is Blaze Rocket, I am just a friend of mane 6 and I wanted to tell them how I really got my cutie mark, how my parents died, and basically my life story

Mane 6 and Spike gathered around and were ready to hear my story. "Well we are ready to hear your story" Twilight said."
And so I started, "Well...it all started on a great day in Equestria..." I said letting it all pour out.

Note: This is my first fic so go easy on me ok. Plus...let's just say its a sequel to Deadcat's pinkie promise.#PINKIEPRIOMISEISBESTSTORY

Published 2014-05-07 05:10:04 UTC
Last updated 2014-07-14 16:32:04 UTC

How It Started

I woke up on a great day at 9 o clock. I opened the curtains and the sunlight poured in. I woke up my brother Dark Night and we went down stairs. When we got down stairs I saw my baby brother Bolt Strike sleeping soundly. We went into the kitchen and were greeted by mom. "Hey guys! Did you sleep well?" She said while flipping a pancake with ease. "Yep!" I said as Night nodded. "Hey guys!" A voice said behind us. It was dad. "Hi dad!" We said together loud enough not to wake the baby.

We sat and ate our breakfast talking about plans for today. "I wanna get my cutie mark!" I said.

"Ok, we will get started after breakfast." dad said. After breakfast we flew around and mom and dad helping me try to do cool flying tricks.

We would teach Night how to fly if he could fly that is. Sadly though he was born as a unicorn. No one knew why he was born as a unicorn because all my family were pegasi. But he has great ability's like levitating things and doing all sorts of magic spells. I wonder what his cutie mark will be?

But soon the baby woke up and my mom had to attend to him. She made three bottles, one for him and the rest for extra.The baby drank his bottle and fell asleep. Mom put him in the bassinet and left. She went outside to see dad doing a cool trick and helping me do it.

Dad flew up and did three loops through the air giving him lots of speed and agility. Then he shot down like a rocket as he flew down he stopped going down and spun around and around creating a tornado then flying up then down into the tornado creating a becon of light. Mom , me,and night were amazed.

"That...was...AWSOME!!!" I yelled. I also heard cheering all around the neighbor hood. My dad was once a wonder bolt but he quit because they were unfair to him because he was new so they took all of the credit.

Later, we ate lunch. Then we heard a loud crash it was the window.

Mom grabbed two full baby bottles and rushed us upstairs. We hid in the closet(with the baby of course and the bottles are for him not to cry).

I told Night to read a book that had a teleporting spell in it. I knew he could do it because I believe in him. Silence was the only thing that was heard. Until I heard a scream not of fear but of pain. "Get out of hear NOW! I told him. Then I heard hoof steps on the stairs slowly closing in on the door to the room I was scared. As the door slowly creaked open installing fear into us. A burst of magic appeared then disappeared. He did it. They were gone somewhere but the phyco path saw me!

"Hello there my little...FREIND!!!!!" She said maniacally before grabbing me by themane.

I was dragged down stairs and cuffed in metal rings that were sticking out of wood. All of my hooves were locked in. I looked up to see my mom in fear and dad dead. I was terrified.

"Welcome...HEHEHE...to the...SHOW!!" Said the phsyco path as she laughed manically. Then she grabbed a knife and cut moms wings off. I closed my eyes to not see the blood. "Its rude to sleep during a SHOW! I'll help you with that! HEHEHEHE!!!!!!!!!!!" she said laughing again. She sewed my eyes open. I groaned in pain as she did this. Then she proceeded. She cut her front right hoof off with ease.

How can she cut her hoof off with only a knife and why is she doing this.

I thought. Then she cut her stomach open. Cutting out lots of organs and releasing more and more blood and gore. The monster grabbed her taking the last bit of her life out she was dead! The killer/phsyco had killed my creators. "Dear Celestia please please make this a happy ending..." I mumbled to myself.

Now she was gonna kill me. Then she turned around laughing again. But heat burned through me and I was more then angry I was unexplainably angry my soul was gonna explode into flames and burn whoever killed my family. Then I saw a glow from all hooves and I melted the metal and the sewing in my eyes. My eyes glowed with determination. So I snuck into the kitchen while the phsyco paths back was turned and I grabbed a knife...a BIG one too. Then Blaze Rocket was gone...it was some pony else standing there(I call the evil inside blaze Reaper Soul).Then the knife had that same glow that seemed to make the blade sharper. Then I went and stabbed her in the hoof. The heat radiating from the knife burned her as she screamed in pain then I stabbed it through the stomach and blood and gore fell free from the wound. After that I cut open her stomach and tore every thing out of her and she just kept screaming more and more, louder and louder. Then I whispered a few words into her ear. "See you in hell." And with that I cut her eyes,out ears off,and cut her head off and was a bit satisfied. then I looked at my parents as a single tear fell from my face then the Police knocked down the door. They instantly saw my then I fainted when they put cuffs of me.

When I wake I wont be in another house...I thought at last moment remembering the cuffs the police put on me

To be continued...

Author's Note

Hope you all enjoyed! As I said this is my first fic so go easy on me :)

And sry for mushing all the chapters together hehe

And if you have any tips for me that would be great!

Sry if it's to rushed and to boring;(

The Problem

"Hey guys!" I say walking up to the table with my 'food'.

"Sup, Blaze!" Says Speed with a slightly annoyed tone in his voice

I look at him concerned "ok...what's up?" I ask

"HE is out of solitary." He said with a now deep tone in his voice

"Uh...He?" I said "who's h-" I got cut off by a hoof over my mouth

"Shhh!" Says Spark shivering "he's coming."

Suddenly I notice there was a lot less noise being heard...but of course with nurses being there,they 'tried' to calm them down but clearly they were very loud still. All of a sudden the door opens. 'HE' walks in smiling. It was a terrifyingly and unbelievably wide smile. It became a lot quieter when he walked in. Seeing this he then speaks.

"Why is it so quiet in here...YOU SCARED!!" Which he was right about. Fillies were scared. The nurse had to make him sit down.

"How bad is this guy anyway?" I whispered.

"Worse then you can imagine." Speed whispered more silently

"He is a bully" says Spark

Then Speed looked at Spark. " BULLY...he is a BUCKING murderer! The buck you sayin bully! He killed countless colts and raped and tourtured fillies to their death! And I thought you were the SMART ONE here!" Nurses then ran over to him.

"Guys chill OUT!" I screamed as the nurse started running over to me to.

She told me that I was going back to my cell. And just before I get up I see a small shadow move across the room from a table. Right where the 'problem' sat. But...the shadow was to small. I just threw it off as an animal or illusion because a nurse wasent after it.

To be continued...

Author's Note

Blaze rocket will be in a lot of my stories

But there will be others

Plus... HOPE YOU ENJOYED

The Story Of DarkKnight

DarkKnight...

3 months ago...

I woke up with a big headache. I look around to see I'm in someone's bed. I hear a baby's laughter in the background. And I smell the smell of fresh baked pie.

"Hello...I see your awake" says a voice similar to grandmas voice. "That was quite the teleportation spell you did there."

"Who are you." I say groaning in the process.

" it's me Granny Feathers" Granny said in a happy voice

"Granny Feathers! I teleported THIS far! WOW!" I yelled forgetting about pain

"Yes my dear." She said happily.

I got up and looked around seeing Bolt playing in his bouncy seat,laughing happily.

"Wait...where's...BlazeRocket?" I said with a sad tone.

"I don't know my dear..." She said sadly

"Oh ok I'm sure he's fine." I say as the phone starts to ring.

*ring ring ring* *ring ring ring*

"I'll go get it...you go and play ok." Says granny

I go over to see Bolt and play with him.

meanwhile...

"Hello" says granny on the phone.

"Hello miss, we would like to talk to you about BlazeRocket."

"Oh yes please...where is he?"

"An insane asylum ma'am...he has gone there for murder."

After having a conversation with the stallion granny was feeling uneasy. She went into her room and pulled out a small wooden box.
In this box was a horn...her horn. She was born an alicorn but after awhile Celestia herself cut it off so now she was just a Pegasus

"I don't know how I'm gonna do it but I'm gonna do it. Dark knight" she yelled Dark Knight going over.

"What do you need granny feathers?" I say

"We are going to train your magic" she says.

a long time later...

Then after a long time of training Dark finally got some great spells. Then a lot of them. Plus the fact he became much more serious. After years living with Granny he learned even sword skills. After He was old enough, he decided to go and live somewhere else. He even took Bolt with him. Eventually he found a town named ponyville. He moved there and got a job as a magic tutor. Bolt helps with the weather patrol. And plus the newest princess lived here. And Dark was in love but still serious as ever. And he also knew about Blaze Rocket but Dark thinks he's dead.

to be continued...

The New Kid

3 months later...

I woke up in a room with white padding all over it. I tried to get up but my hooves were locked in restraints. I started to panic as I struggled to move. "HELP I CANT MOVE!!!! GET ME OUT OF HERE!!!!! PLEASE!!!!

And with that a nurse walked in. "Hello Blaze Rocket." She said while using a fake smile. "It's ok calm down. Here let me get you out of these restraints." She said

"Ok,so...where am I?" I asked totally forgetting about the restraints.

"Well,your in the Hooves Heart Hospital." She said in a slightly higher pitched voice then before.

I put on a robe and she brought me to the area where we get 'breakfast'. I got a biscuit and some apple juice. I looked around at all the fillies twitching,smiling widely and creepily,and of course laughing crazily.

But then something caught my eye. It was three colts sitting at a table. But they weren't laughing crazily or twitching. But...they were laughing not a crazy laugh...a real laugh.

"Can I sit with them please?" I asked hoping my nurse would say yes.

"But of course dear." She said walking with me to the table.

Then they all looked at me.

"C...can I sit w...ith you?

"Sure" the blue earth pony said grining

I sat down and smiled " thanks!" I said

"So what's your name?" Said the white unicorn

"Names Blaze Rocket." I said "And yours?"

"My names Magic Spark." Spark said

"And my names Light Speed" Speed said

Thinking that he was an earth pony how could his name be Light Speed? Was he a Pegasus in disguise or just he was fast? I thought only Pegasus were super fast. I thought to my self.

"How is your name Light Speed if your an earth pony?" I questioned

"Well,ya see I can run really fast... Check out my cutie mark." He said

He lifted his flank showing what looked like three blue streaks

"Nice mark Speed,I wish I had one...how about you Spark?" I questioned thinking I was the only blank flank at the table

" I don't have one yet sadly." He said frowning sadly

"Well...welcome to my world then." I said giggling slightly

After lunch we all went to the so called 'class'. Sadly each race had a different type of class

And even as my first day "awake"in an insane hospital I wasn't alone

Author's Note

Well here's chapter 2 hope you all enjoy! :)

P.S. I DONT CARE ABOUT HOW MANY DISLIKES I GET IM GOING TO CONTINUE WRITING!!!!!!!

P.P.S. sry if the chapters are to short I'll make them longer in future chapters :)