Unexpected Visitors

by TheWriterYouNeverKnew

Chapter 1: Not another one

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Adenn Gra'tua

It was a late afternoon in Equestria, most of the ponies were either returning to their homes for the night or doing other activities that you do at night, unbeknownst to them a ship was about to crash, holding an unwanted visitor that would disturb things around Equestria, that visitor being Adenn Gra'tua.

"Darn it ship! Why do you have to go around all crashy?" The man said while he franticly tried to stop himself from crashing "Shab, why? I just wanted to go for a nice flight!"

He looked out of the ships viewport to check how much time he had, it wasn't much. Adenn slammed a fist against the control console "Piece of osik." He swore "And I just fixed you!" He lied, his ship just sucked.

He was very close to the ground now, a stupid thought came to his mind at this time though "I gonna need to bail." He quickly got up from his seat after pushing a button to open the ships ramp before rushing towards the back, tripping over some boxes on his way there, where below the ground below was moving fast, very fast "I hope this doesn'hurt to much." Was all that he said before jumping.

Fwoooooosh

The sound of his jet pack turning on was music to Adenn's ears, slowing his fall by a lot and giving him some time to watch as his ship crashed with a loud boom "well, let's hope-"

Thump

--2 minutes later Later--

By the time Adenn Gra'tua woke up it was already turning night, or at least getting so the sun was dipping behind the hills. He didn't bother lifting his head though, as he could see in a three-hundred-and-sixty-degree radius, thanks to his helmet "Uhg, my kriffing head... And everything else."

After a bit The bounty hunter slowly moved his arms into a position to lift himself up, then he slowly pushed down, it took a moment but after that Adenn was kneeling in the small man shaped crater he had made "Well that doesn't seem right." He said while standing up. If anything the crater he made should have been not as deep, and more round.

Shortly after he collected himself he turned to his ship, seeing it was crumpled at the front and partially on fire "Osik that's gonna attract a lot of attention." Adenn was right on that subject, near his smoldering ship there were small quadrupedal beings, multicolored quadrupedal beings "Never in my life..." He quickly realized that they were probably just the planets inhabitants "... Never mind."

Adenn then realized that they might not be to happy about him crashing a ship onto their planet "Time to leave, or at least move." He said as he scanned around him for any place to hide, or at least take shelter. His eyes settled upon a town, he didn't see any more of the multicolored beings there though 'They could be hiding in the buildings though, waiting for a surprise attack! Wait no, that's dumb, they wouldn't do that, would they?' He quickly pushed the thought out of his mind before starting a slow jog towards the town.

--30 Minutes Earlier--

Vendir

"Kark!" Vendir yelled into the sky, again, for the twelfth time since he had gotten stranded thanks to three men who were supposed to bring him to Tatooine. The hills that he was standing on seemed endless, it almost made Vendir return to the forest he'd just came from, but he didn't, the place messed with his head 'At least there are some mountains out there, along with what looks like a structure.'

The man had been walking for quite a bit, his feet were sore, his legs ached, and he definitely wasn't able to think straight thanks to no food and water for almost eight hours. The main thing on his mind though, was finding civilization, which meant food to eat and hopefully some consumable food, and most likely transport off this planet.

"Stupid bright green hills," his pace slowed a bit.

"And dark blue sky, and your occasional cloud!" He shook his fist at the air, making nothing change, much to Vendir's annoyance.

For the next 28 minutes Vendir trekked towards the nearest mountain, which it became clearer to him that there, in fact, was a structure on top of it, or more so, partially hanging. It was nearing night now, the sun making Vendir a silhouette from anyone in front of him, and it also highlighted a town in front of him, he didn't know how close he was to it, but at least it gave him hope for finding water.

"Ah, a town... And... A ship, on fire?" That surprised him, and it did even more when he realized the ship was headed towards him.

"Wait, why is it... Gotta run!" He immediately turned to his right and started to run, making him forget all about food or water. Even after he heard the ship crash he continued running, for he did not know what it held... Or if it was going to blow up again like in the holo-vids.

After another minute or two of running Vendir started slowing down, before stopping completely, then falling on his face.

Whump

Vendir was now laying in a small hole which made him stand up quickly, before inspecting the walls then looking above the hole he was in.

"Who are you?" A muffled voice behind Vendir asked

"Huh?" He responded

"I said 'who are you'"

"Oh, I'm uh, Vendir." He said while turning to face the other man

"Vendir? Good, I'm Kallion... Or at least his fifth clone." He held out his hand for shaking.

"Your with the CIS right?" Vendir shook his hand "cause if you are, then greetings."

From how Kallion looked it didn't seem like he was with the Confedaracy, but Vendir didn't look like that either

"Yeah, just died." He sounded a bit too cheery when he said that, which made Vendir raise an eyebrow, but no one could see it of course

"So, uh how'd you get here?" Vendir asked, quickly trying to push his last thought out of his mind

"As I just said, I died, this is one of the chambers that I, or to be more precise, this clone was put in."

"Why don't you finish your story while we make our way to that town." Vendir pointed towards his original destination, the crashed ship now surrounded by small creatures

"Sure... And may I ask"

Vendir nodded

"Did you crash that ship?"

--Ponyville Library--

"Twilight! I've got a letter from the princess!" Spike shouted as he ran down a set of stairs

"What? Another one? Hand it over." Spike quickly handed it to her, who quickly opened it up and started to read.

"My dearest student, It seems that More humans have arrived, one of them will arrive sooner than you expect, I hope you get this letter before then, for that would be-" Twilight looked up for a moment, puzzled, before looking back down to the letter "What does she mean by 'sooner than I expect'?" She was answered by a loud drawn out smashing noise, followed by a loud explosion.

"Could she have meant that?" Spike asked slowly

"Not another one." Twilight complained.


Author's Note

Thanks for reading the story, also I'd like it if you would leave some feedback, it helps.

Don't expect this to be updated often, it takes me a bit to write.

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