Solar Blaze's forward beginning.

by Solar_Blaze

Rating: teen
Tags: Gore, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Original Character
Length: 2892

Solar Blaze, is a senior in Fillydelphia University, and is a unicorn hoping she will get into the occupation of magic.

Solar Blaze, is a senior in Fillydelphia University. A unicorn hoping she will get into some kind of magical trade. She is very studious and works hard, but when her sister Lunar Blaze (Luna) gets too involved, her life starts to go a little down hill.

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Completion
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1. Pilot - Progress has been made, however, it is still W.I.P

2. The very long day - I'm keeping this chapter

3. Solar Blaze's younger sibling - Completed

4. The Real Big Sister - Not Completed
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Plans
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Going to add a clop chapter on a different story and account PM me if u want to read it(u will feel more lost than u already are.)
More chapters are likely to be added soon.

-Solar Blaze

Published 2014-05-28 23:00:04 UTC
Last updated 2014-06-17 05:45:12 UTC

2 Pilot

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3 The very long day

“Good morning, class. Today, we will be learning about The Way of an Alicorn. An alicorn is a high level unicorn usually in the family of royalty, for example our very own Princess Luna.” The professor started, as he held up a picture of the dark royal mare he was eluding to.

Solar Blaze took notes on everything her teacher said. She did not enjoy repetition, so she did her best to make sure she never had to go over it again. Solar worked diligently and attentively; nothing was gonna stop her from getting her notes down on paper.

“The first thing that an alicorn needs to learn is three basic morals the elements of magic, the elements of harmony, and the elements of spiritual strength. These are mental elements, while the elements of harmony exist; these are not what I am referring to. Within three months we will be learning all three of these elements. While, you will not gain the magical strength of an alicorn, or gain wings , these are still helpful in a unicorn’s life.”

While she still had taken down some notes for the assignment Solar Blaze did not see the purpose of it. The period ended and she packed up for her next class, dragon culture…

On her way to her next class room, she noticed a crowd of students all surrounding an object that wasn't visible right away. As she got closer to it, her horn started to glow softly. Scared, she stopped a moment and sat, having felt the e She was confused. She did not understand why everypony was distracted from their classes. She didn’t pay it much mind and continued to her next class.

As she arrived, she sat at her seat and unpacked using a telekinetic field on her books and writing utensils. She finished unpacking within six seconds. She sat up in her seat and found her pencil in her own telekinetic grip.

The class began and the teacher unpacked her prepared lessons. “Good Morning, Class I am Lunar Eclipse I will be teaching Dragon Culture.” She said. “Dragon Culture is the way of life for dragons.” Lunar Eclipse noted. “As you may know dragons are avoided pretty well by ponies. Scientists may have figured out some stuff but did not come back alive. This class will not have many lessons but will be beneficial for all of you in the Fillydelphia University unicorn program.” Lunar Eclipse said finishing with an excited tone. The class applauded.

“To start the class, we will be working on some worksheets that will basically make it easier to take notes so that you do not have to struggle with finding important parts of the lesson.” Lunar Explained.

Solar Blaze went over the page and read in her head. “What is the origin of the dragon? What is the beginning of the life of the dragon? What does the dragon usually eat? What force allows dragons to fly?” Solar Blaze sat puzzled. “How am I supposed to know all this?” She thought.

She realized that Lunar Eclipse had said that this was just a study sheet, and that she would be taking notes on it. Solar Blaze sat in her seat finally realizing she was still holding her pencil and felt tired. The reason she was tired was because she hadn't been sleeping well. She felt her magic weaken, it suddenly was gone, and her pencil dropped on her desk causing a loud dropping noise, she nearly drifted off. She realized that she dropped her pencil and she quickly picked it up before it fell off her desk.

“…and that is how the dragon can fly.” She heard Eclipse wrap up as she regained consciousness. She felt bad about missing her dragon culture class but celebrated in her head for not having any assignments to work at home. She packed up in unison with her classmates. She had one more class but in the town of Ponyville there was other more important news.

Author's Note

Yeah, much easier took all school year and I could only work on it during keyboarding but it was worth it.

Solar Blaze's younger sibling.

Author's Note

I'm back! and i'll be writing for a while.

Solar Blaze's younger sibling.

In the small town of Ponyville, Solar Blaze had family. Her mom, dad, and sister. The rest of her family was composed of her brother, Sonic Moon Blaze, and he lived in Cloudsdale for flight schooling. This point of the story is about Lunar Blaze, Solar Blaze's sister. Lunar Blaze is younger than Solar Blaze by seven years making her a young filly and being a young filly meant that she was beginning her life and deciding her future. She loves colors, shapes and, well art. She loved using her magic to put together mosaics, paint pictures, and to deviate new abnormal shapes.

"No... No... Why can't I figure out what I want to put in this area i'm almost done. It's like I have writers block but for art!" She yelled in her head. She was normally composed and hid her emotions well ,so well, that ,most of the time, even she didn't know what she was feeling.

"I feel so silly! I don't know what I want ,yet I always figure it out later. Why can't I figure it out now?!" She stomps her hoof, causing a bang to go through the floor of the bedroom.

"Oh, darn." She said anxiously, realizing her actions, hoping her parents don't come up to her bedroom knock on the door then barge in screaming.

"Luna, what's wrong? Are you ok?" She said in a mocking tone feebly.

"Ugh, I'm so annoyed by them. All they do is constantly dote on me when I just want to be alone with my art. It's all I ask, I'm thirteen years old I'm able to take care of myself!" She Got out of her position in front of her easel and canvas, and walked over to her bed and plopped herself on top of it.

Lunar Blaze feels herself get tired as her eyelids get heavy she can't help but fall asleep. She makes a sigh of relaxation sliding under her sheets and falling into a deep slumber.

"Luna! Luna! Get up you're going to be late for school!" Lunar Blaze's mom exclaimed rather frantically. "Up, Up, now! Luna! Get. Up. Now." She repeats.

"Ugh!" Lunar Blaze moans groggily. "Mom, i'm too tired I can't, I literally don't have the strength to get up" Lunar Blaze says with a cracked voice in a tired fashion.

"Lunar Supernova Blaze Get out of bed, Now or i'm getting your father!" Sapphire Blaze exclaimed.

Lunar Blaze slams her right hoof onto her quilt and quickly and angrily takes it off of her followed by her other coverings. Her facial expression ,one of anger. "All I ask, ALL I ASK!" she mumbles to herself.

"What did you just say ,young filly?!" Sapphire asks.

"Oh, just admiring how wonderful you are for a mother" whilst grinning sheepishly in hopes of her mother buying her story. having a good feeling she might due to the fact that Sapphire's ego was a big as AppleJack's prize apple when the fruit bats returned.

"Hmm, you better not be lying to me! Now come on into the shower you go you might actually make it to school if you hurry. And don't forget to pat down your coat you don't wanna get sick" Sapphire said out of concern.

"Yes, Mom!" she said annoyed.

Lunar Blaze lit her horn as her magical aura opened the door to the restroom. She never enjoyed getting sick but neither did she want to spend time rubbing down her coat carefully getting all traces of liquid off her coat. She stepped into the tub.

This bathtub was a lot like a tub in the human world only this one was bigger in width and looked more like a hot tub. The shower head was bigger so it could cover more area.

She turned on the water with her telekinesis, making it a lukewarm temperature.

She extinguished her horn, the aura dissipating, just in time for the warm water to hit her horn and run down passing through her light and dark blue mane, hitting her coat eventually drenching her entire body.

She sighs pleasurably then quickly moves the thought out of her mind, recognizing she is on a time limit.

"I better wash my mane and coat before it gets to be too late." she thought.

With that, she lights her horn grabbing a container of shampoo with a magic aura. She spins off the cap she gives the aura more strength as she places the cap back down in the exact place the bottle was located she then turns the bottle upside down and levitates it over her head. She adds more strength to the aura making her grunt in effort squeezing the bottle forcing shampoo out of it. The undefiled chemical oozing out of the bottle and onto her cobalt blue mane. She then puts the bottle back where it was replacing the cap in the process.

Lunar lights her horn and surrounds her mane in a magical aura, she scrubs her mane with the soapy substance in her grasp, thus causing suds to appear as she scrubs her mane clean.

She once again extinguishes her horn and puts her head under the flow of water. The warm liquid rinsing her mane. She moans as the warm water hits her skin the water that was already on her fur and skin having become cold, the warm water soothing her cold skin.

"I better get out." She says as she turns off the water with her magic and steps out of the tub she "having forgotten to carefully pat down her coat to get rid of excess moisture" just uses a towel to dry her mane and coat.

She rushes out the door carrying the towel with her then throwing it into the laundry room ,as she passes it. She grabs her saddlebags whilst advancing forward and places them on her back.

She opens the door to the front yard, runs out, then halts. "Please work!" Her horn gains a heavy azure color as she starts a teleportation sequence. She grunts as she adds more effort to her spell. She stops working as a violent jab of vertigo and ecstasy over takes her abruptly, telling her the spell was successful.

"Thank... you... Solar!" She then runs into the school house. It so happened that she arrived early. She slows her pace as she nears the entrance of the school. She enters the classroom and sits at her assigned seat. "I'm here Miss Cheerilee!"

"Lunar Blaze, you're early today!" The teacher said surprised.

“Thank you, Miss Cheerilee, I try my best.” Lunar Blaze said. “Ma’am, do you think you could help me with my magic? I stumbled upon a problem and I need your help.” She asked hoping she could give off the vibe of actively seeking help. She knew that some teachers liked that.

"Certainly I'd love to help you after school.” Cheerilee said.

The Real Big Sister

Lunar put her saddlebags along side her desk.

Shortly after Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara showed up, entering the room in a happy mood being their giggly selves, they sat at their desks.

Lunar Blaze could swear she heard her name mentioned. “Are they gossiping about me? I'm glad Solar Blaze taught me a hearing enhancing spell.” She thought. Just as she lit her horn she caught herself. “No, Luna eavesdropping just isn't becoming!” She reprimanded herself.

Shortly after that Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Bell walk through the door. “...best night ever!”
Scootaloo exclaimed. They make their way towards their desk.

Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon get up from their chairs and “accidentally” trip Apple Bloom on their way up to pass in their homework.

“Hey!” Apple Bloom exclaimed.

“Oops sorry.” They giggle in a girly and mocking fashion.

“Why are there a couple of 'blank flanks' in my way?” Diamond Tiara mocks.

Lunar Blaze gets up and warns them. “Hey, you leave them alone!”

“Or what?” Diamond challenges.

“You don't want to challenge me, Diamond Tiara! My sister is a master in combat and quantum magic; she has taught me a lot of it! So you might want to be a little nicer to my friends!”

“Oh, what are you going to do? Blink me to death?” Diamond asks in a mocking tone.

Lunar Blaze lights her horn and surrounds Diamond Tiara with a magical aura lifting her off of her hooves.

“What's going on? Put me down!”

“Apologize first! I hope you don't get sick from being upside down.”

“Well, I d-omgh” Diamond Tiara gags as she fights her regurgitating breakfast.

“Are you going to apologize?”

Diamond swallows. “I'm s-mph” She swallows once again. “Sorry!”

“Don't apologize to me! It's the cutie mark crusaders you have to apologize to.”

“I'm-ugphm” Diamond Swallows. “Sorry cutie mark crusaders.” The last part being easier to say due to Lunar Blaze turning her back around and putting Diamond back on her hooves.

Lunar Blaze gives Diamond a look of pure anger and warning.

“You touch my friends again, and Apple Bloom, Scootaloo and Sweetie Bell won't be the only 'blank flanks'.” She warned. “Come on girls.” Luna walks up to Cheerilee's desk the CMC following thereafter.

“Thank you so much, Luna we have to put up with that everyday and the ĉonstant physical abuse is starting to show signs.” The three say turning so their sides are visible to Luna, blood having soaked into their coats and bruising in the exact place the position of their future cutie marks will be located.

“You should get help.” Lunar says concerned.

“What's the point, Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara... Nevermind I've said too much anyway.” Scootaloo explains as Lunar Blaze passes in her homework.

"Girls, you wanna share with the class what you're whispering about?" Cheerilee says, The teacher giving them a concerned yet strict look.

"No ma'am." the four say in unison.

"Then I strongly recommend that you stop."

"Yes, ma'am" They say with sorrow in their voices.

"Homework please."

Lunar Blaze levitates her finished assignments into a desk tray where the assignments of Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara had already inhabited and heads back to her desk..

Following afterward, were, Sweetie Bell, Apple Bloom, and Scootaloo placing their assignments neatly atop Luna's. They were starting back for their desks when Cheerilee stopped them. "Girls, I'd like to talk to all four of you after class." She said in a kind tone.

"Yes, ma'am" they all say in unison.

Author's Note

I don't know if I should add gore as a warning category.

1 Prolog

Author's Note

This first chapter was a bit difficult to write, but the rest of the story is better. My Writers block can last for months at a time. I think it has a little bit to do with the fact that I'm autistic but... meh.

1 Prolog

On a warm and tranquil night, there was a pony. This pony wasn't like most on earth, in fact, this wasn't even earth, it was an entirely different dimension, humans called it the second dimension whilst the inhabitants called it Equestria. In this world, there were four types of ponies: pegasi, unicorns, alicorns, and earth ponies. Pegasi have a magic that allows them to fly on their flimsy wings, they have the magic to even walk on clouds unlike earth ponies and Unicorns.

Solar Blaze, one of the main characters of this story, is a unicorn. A unicorn has a horn located on their head just above the forehead. It acts like a wand. Magic fuses from a unicorns brain in the magic center of the brain called the extra physical cortex. A nerve from this part of the unicorns brain streams around bone another part of that bone encases it in a spiral. A microscopic opening follows the nerve all the way up to the top where the nerve then goes back down to the brain in that same spiral pattern for return of information. That way, unicorns can feel what they are casting the spell on, may it be simple telekinetic lifting or casting a combat flame spell. Depending on how well read they are, they can cast spells that can allow them to fly and walk on clouds, of course, with limitation.

Earth ponies are only gifted in one way: strength. Earth Ponies run fast, and have strong hind legs for, in this case, bucking apple trees so the apples fall off.

This prolog is for those of you who are reading this story who haven't seen My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. In this world equines are the dominant race so likely the language is altered to fit it. I.E. Somebody becomes Somepony Everyone becomes Everypony.

PS: this story is currently being rewritten. Sorry for any inconvenience. This story is about a few Original Characters designed by some run of the mill teenager. If you seriously want to wait until even the first revised chapter is out then, THREE WORDS: You. are. crazy!