Flawless Romance

by LivingHell42

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, Romance
Length: 3251

After living in Equestria for a few months, you've found life to be easy and relaxing. You've adjusted to everything well, and you've made quite the impression on all the wondrous ponies. Of course, the lack of a suitable mate has thrown you off your game. You didn't mind all the round, soft pony plots that were in abundance in Ponyville…. You just didn't really find anyone here to be extremely worthy of your time.

Well… except for one beautiful mare….

This story was originally made on 4Chan and can be found on pastebin by MLP-CYOA-Writer-Dude, I thought I'd just post it here to so even more people and read it! This isn't just another clopfic, it has a story behind it.
(I will make edits to the story just for grammar and other minor things, but it will remain untouched over all)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-07-13 04:58:33 UTC

The Start of Something Beautiful

Your first few weeks in Ponyville were rough. Luckily for you, a certain marshmallowy lady was generous enough to give you a place to sleep and food to eat. Eventually, you began to work for her in her boutique. Everything from rearranging, to heavy lifting, to even being her own personal mannequin. You grew fond of her quickly. You were sure she felt the same way. But how could you be sure? You really wanted to give her subtle signs of your attraction. Just to let her know you were interested. Maybe a long hug.... Maybe a gentle nuzzle.... Maybe a-

"Anonymous, my dear? Are you ok?"

Your focus returns, and reality comes back into play. Rarity was looking at you, awaiting a response.

"Uh... y-yeah... huh?" You stammer on and on, not forming any coherent sentences. In the last few weeks of your stay with Rarity, this is how most of your conversations started and ended.  It was difficult, but Rarity most likely wasn't catching on.

"Are you sure, darling?" Rarity gives you another worried look.

You rub your face and give her a smile. "Do you have any more work for me today?"

She flips her beautiful mane in response. "Well... I'm not feeling to well. I've decided to close the Boutique early and go take a nice long shower."

You nod, showing her that you are -mostly- being attentive.

"We've made enough business today anyways, so don't we deserve a nice break?" Rarity proceeds to lock up the various drawers and containers around you, as was normal for when the Boutique was closing or the night. You can't help but keep your eyes locked on her the entire time. The way she flows about the room. So elegant and carefree, yet completely focused. She is so beautiful. How is it possible that she hasn't found a suitable mate yet? Maybe it's a sign for you to step it up. In the meantime, it's enough to satisfy your yearning by watching this gorgeous display.

Rarity locks up the final few bits of merchandise. Clothing levitating through the air thanks to her unicorn magic. It really was like watching a magic show. But far more lovely. The magician, that is. You can't help but just want her to keep going. Entrancing you more, and more....

"Anon, did you hear me? What is up with you today, darling?"

You shake your head quickly, trying to come back into focus. Too much daydreaming for one evening.

Rarity trots over to you, looking more worried than before. "Anon, please tell me what's bothering you! You've been acting just so strange lately.... It's not like you! Have you been hanging out with Applejack again?"

Rarity did tend to get overprotective of you whenever you went out... But that had nothing to do with how you feel now. All you can think about is Rarity.

Rarity.

Rarity.

Rarity.

"Rarity, I just...." You gulp loudly. You could just tell her now, and be done with it. She will look repulsed by your offer, and forever shun you. Then, you can move on. You'll just tell her how much you really care for her. How beautiful you think she looks. How sexy her voice is. How she constantly makes you feel like you're not alone in Equestria. Just tell her how you feel, Anon. Spit it out!

"Rarity, I think that I may be in l-" You are interrupted by a knock at the door. Your heart almost shoots out of your chest.

"Oh, darn... Hold on a minute dear!" Rarity trots over to answer the door.

You quickly try to catch your breath as Rarity tells a customer she is closed for the evening. After a few seconds, she returns looking frustrated.

"That old mule tried to tell me that he can get better designs from a flea market! Well! I'd like to see him try! I'll be upstairs taking a shower. Please feel free to spend your evening doing anything else. Hmph!" As she angrily heads upstairs to her bedroom.

You can only think about how much you want to spend your evening with her. Now isn't the time to be scared. You need to go tell her how you feel. You need to first comfort her, of course. But THEN tell her how much you mean to her.

You leave the room and head up the stairs in her wake. You were stomping quite loudly on the stairs. Luckily, her parents and her loud (but cute) sister went on a trip to Manehattan for the weekend. You make haste, for you want to catch her before she takes her undoubtedly long shower. You arrive at her bedroom door, it being slightly ajar. You give it a quick tap.

"Yes, is that you Anon? Please come in! I need a favor!"

She was clearly yelling from her bathroom.

Dammit.

You missed your chance. Regardless, you head into her room. Large, lush, and fragrant are the three words that you've always described her room. Tidy would be a suitable one as well. Her cleanliness and attention to detail were just a pair of her traits that you had fallen in love with.

"What do you need, Rarity?"

You hear the shower running. A bit of steam is leaking from underneath the bathroom door. It probably feels really nice in there....

"Clumsy me! I forgot a towel... could you be a dear and bring me one? The purple one, if you could...."

You agree, and head over to her linen closet. After a bit of rummaging, you find her incredibly comfortable purple towel. She made this on the day she met you. She said that you looked good in purple.... You grab it and head over to the bathroom door. Now what...?

"I... uh, got it right here! Should I just leave it or..." You hear Rarity drop something in the tub.

"Drat! Come in, Anon. I can't hear you too well. And don't forget that towel!"

You gulp nervously. This can't be happening! You were glad it was, but damn is this great! Don't get ahead of yourself, caballero. Take it easy. You're just bring your best friend a towel. That's it. What else could happen?

You peer into the bathroom before you waltz in. The heat refreshes your body, but the steam makes it hard to see. You hear Rarity drop something else in the tub.

"Drat...!"

You laugh to yourself as you think of a corny prison joke. You slowly enter the bathroom. You make your way to the counter and gently lay the towel upon it. All good, now let's get out. Just as you turn around, you hear Rarity drop something yet again.

"Ugh! Anon! Would you be so kind as to bring me a new bath pouf? This one keeps..."

You quickly search the bathroom for another pouf before Rarity has a cow. Found it.

"I got it Rarity. Should I just...."

"Well, bring it here!"

WAT. Is all your brains says to hearing that. "Uh... what was that? I-I couldn't hear-"

Rarity flings the shower curtain open. And here you thought she looked beautiful dry.... The hot water splashes over her pristine coat, making it shimmer even more beautifully. Her mane droops down her face and neck, still retaining that gorgeous purple color you've come to love. Her face was slightly rosy, which could be from any number of things.

Really, all you could think of this was.

"Wow...."

You were having a hard time fighting the creeping erection in your pants. But you knew that wasn't you. No, you just want to embrace Rarity. Hold her ever so tightly. Wash her, massage her, rub her. Love every single essence of her being. Damn was she making it hard to resist. You stand there, staring stupidly in her direction.

Rarity waves at you.

Your attention does not return so quickly.

"A-anon! Hello!?"

You just couldn't stand it anymore. You shake your head and rub your face.

"Anon, what is it, darling?"

"Dammit, Rarity. You look absolutely stunning. You always do. You always look so..." Before you can finish, Rarity grabs the pouf out of your hand with her magic. Your heart drops completely out of your chest. You had a feeling this would happen.... Rarity doesn't feel the same way.... You just knew it.

"R-rarity, I'm sorry, I..."

She slowly pulls the pouf towards her. She sighs deeply, and places it in the tub. The shower seems much hotter all of a sudden. Before you can continue to say anything, Rarity's magic engulfs your upper body. She slowly and gently pulls your shirt off. You look into Rarity's large, blue eyes. She gives you a smile, and you see her face get redder.

"Won't you join me, darling?"

This obviously must be a dream…. You pinch yourself a few times. Nope, definitely reality. Before you can react further, you look down to your pants. Rarity was undoing the button. You look up at her. Her hair now covered her face, but you could tell she was smiling at you. You hear a long zip. Within an instant your pants fall to the ground. Followed soon by your boxers. You struggle to form a coherent thought about the current situation. But you feel like Rarity is tugging on your mind. Pulling you further. She knows that you’ve wanted this. She’s wanted it too. Rarity is completely in control. And you’re going to let her be.

As you stand there naked, Rarity backs up in the shower a bit. No need really. Her shower is enormous for a pony shower. Bigger than you’ve ever seen, in fact. You feel Rarity’s magic pull your body gently. She really wants you to be in the shower with her. Who are you to deny her? You slowly step towards the shower. Your member gets a bit harder, but you manage to control it. You don’t want to scare her off!

Rarity continues to giggle as her magic persuades you to join her hot shower. You step in, letting the water hit you at full blast. It feels absolutely amazing. Not to mention the fact that there is an amazingly perfect mare standing in front of you. You reach over and move her mane from in front of her face. Her visage is a deep red now. You can’t help but smile at this.

”Oh, Anon…. Darling…!” She stands on her hind legs, positioning her forehooves on your shoulders.

You instinctively put your own hands on her lower back, holding her close to you. Your faces are mere inches from one another.

”Kiss me, Anon. Please…. Just kiss me….”

You can’t even process what she said. She just presses her lips against yours. You stagger slightly, not expecting the kiss. You return the sign of affection with equal force. You pull her lower body closer into yours, her soft coat brushing against your bare skin. The water continues to fall as the two of you embrace. Her tongue begs for you to give her more. You comply, sliding your tongue into her mouth. Rarity’s mouth feels so perfect. Her lips, her tongue. Her saliva, so warm and inviting. You wonder how long she had felt this way. But it doesn’t matter. This moment is too precious to not focus on. You eventually pull away, wanting to lay down all of your feelings for her. Rarity looks into your eyes, but quickly gets off of you. Her face looks a tad strained. She hides behind her mane, clearly in shame.

”I… I don’t know what’s gotten over me…. It’s so… unladylike… Anon, I’m so sorry, I-“

You pull Rarity back into your embrace. “Rarity, don’t apologize. You hear me? Don’t apologize.”

Her face glows with happiness as she climbs back on your shoulders. You decide to get a bit more playful. You pick her up by her flank, hoping she’ll comply. She doesn’t even hesitate to wrap her legs around your waist. You hold her tightly still, kissing her all over her neck and face. Rarity moans softly as you continue to give her the utmost affection.

You feel the warmth of the shower begin to slightly fade. You can’t even remember how long you’ve been in there with her. Honestly, it’s not long enough. You move your hands lower on her back. You feel her tail invite you lower. You’re scared to go on, so you decide to test the waters more. You give her rump a playful squeeze.

”Oh! Anon!”

She gives you the most loving eyes, and a smile that says it all.

”You… you can hold me there. Come now… don’t be so shy!”

You waste no time sliding your hands right down to her round rear.

You squeeze both of her cheeks. Rarity responds with a loud moan. She buries her head into your chest and begins to nibble you. You continue to rub her rear and her thighs, eliciting as many responses as you can. You’re so overrun with emotion that you are unsure of what to do next. Rarity senses your uncertainty, and begins guide your hands. She moves your hand right up in between her soft rear. You feel her warm and moist nethers. You hesitate slightly.

”It’s ok, darling, I want you to….”

She forces your hand inside her warm marehood. Rarity moans louder than ever. You feel your own member get hard in an instant. You begin to rub her slowly, milking the pleasure out of her slowly, but surely. Her warm juices begin to cover your hand.

”Ohh…. An-Anon… give me more, please…. Please….”

You feel her magical grip loosen on your hands, giving you more freedom. You continue to rub her soaking marehood. Rarity moans louder and louder with each rub of her clit. She wraps her tail tightly around your arm. You finger her faster and faster….

”Anon! Oh, Anon!!! Yes!!!”

She bites down hard on your chest to suppress a scream. Her lower body jitters as she squirts her warm juices. She moans your name loudly as her orgasm throws her body into a state of nirvana.

You slowly remove your fingers, returning to holding her plump rump.

Rarity lies against your body, breathing heavily. She eventually lifts her head and gives you a peck on the lips.

”It’s your turn, I think….”

You don’t even feel worth of letting her do anything. Before you can even decline any attention, she pulls herself off of you. Her magic gently tugs at your hard cock. It’s like nothing you’ve ever felt before. Like the softest and warmest hands were stroking your member up and down. You slide back against the wall of the shower. You let a large moan escape from your mouth. Rarity giggles as she continues to magically pleasure your manhood.

"Rarity… shit… ugh….”

Rarity shushes you and begins to stroke you harder. You just stand back and take it. Rarity steps forward, her face lined up right with your throbbing cock. She gives it a long lick, from the bottom to the top. You twitch from the immense pleasure. Her magic stroking you and her tongue licking you was far too much to handle. You slide down the wall a bit, but her magic holds you up. Rarity is taking complete control right now. You look down at Rarity. Her eyes meet yours for an instant, before she closes them. She wraps her mouth around the tip of your member. You let out a load moan as she begins to orally pleasure you. You struggle to stand in the shower, but Rarity’s magic keeps you up. She begins to suckle you, her tongue wrapping around all of your length. Your insides beg for her to keep going. Rarity refuses to let up as she bobs her head up and down, slowly gaining speed. Her warm mouth pleasures you better than you’ve ever had before. Your body begins to shake. You feel the cum rise up your shaft. You let out a load moan as you spray your seed into Rarity’s mouth. She takes every drop, continuing to suckle on your head. After a few seconds you pull her away. You feel like your dick is about to fall off. After catching your breath, you hear the shower knobs turn. Slowly, the water recedes back into the showerhead.

”Shall I meet you in the bedroom, darling?”

You don’t respond immediately, but you nod in approval.

Rarity giggles and walks slowly out of the shower. You lift you head up to see her leave. Her perky rear jiggles as she walks towards the counter. It’s almost inviting you to smack it. Her tail was barely covering her marehood. You were certain that she was teasing you. You get out and walk over to the counter. Rarity hands you the purple towel that you brought for her.

“This is your towel, Rarity. I can go get my own.”

Rarity laughs as she grabs a towel from behind the door. She had a towel all along.

”I knew you would follow me up here. Why would I simply walk away from you when we were talking, dear?”

You feel stupid at this point. This sly mare knew all along. She knew you had feelings for her.

“How long have you known?”

Rarity wraps her towel around her mane. She grabs the towel out of your hands and begins to dry you off.

”I’ve always had a hunch, darling. You made it so painfully obvious.”

Point taken. “Well when did you feel the same about me?”

Rarity gently wraps the towel around your hair. She walks out of the bathroom, turning the light off on her way out. Her rump was shaking more seductively know than ever.

“So… you’re not gonna tell me, Rarity?”

She giggles playfully before plopping on her bed.

You leave the bathroom, closing the door behind you.

Rarity gives you a loving look.

”Why should I tell you? I don’t want to ruin the secret!”

She pats the bed, insisting that you join her.

You comply, sitting right next to her. She immediately lays her head on your chest. You wrap an arm around her, rubbing her back gently. Rarity sighs deeply as she nuzzles your chest.

”You’re more friendly, good looking, and caring than any other creature I’ve met.”

You put another arm on her stomach, and rub it gently. She moans softly in approval.

"You’ve always treated me well, and I strove to do the same. But I could never top you.”

She kisses your chest a few times. Damn she feels good.

I’d be lying if I didn’t say that I liked you from the beginning, Anon.”

You pull Rarity on top of you. You gently rub her back. Rarity unravels the towels from her mane and your head. Her hair droops down in front of her face. You take a hand and move it, to reveal her stunning blue eyes.

“That’s better.”

Rarity presses her lips against yours. She pulls ways, her face beet red.

”Anon… what do you really think of me?”

You waste no time in responding.

“I think you’re perfect, Rarity.”

She immediately kisses you again before putting you in a tight hug.

After sometime passes, she sighs deeply. She lowers her head next to yours. Rarity whispers softly in your ears:

”I love you, Anon. Don’t ever leave me.”