The Hero in White

by bobmarly1234

Chapter 1: A new world

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Chapter 1: A new world

Valen Darkblood a force sensitive but not jedi or sith. He wishes to explore the wonders of the force without the restrictions of the jedi or the evil of the sith. He only wishes to take his own path.

     “So here we are.” Valen said to himself when in front of the old temple He wore a white robe with a chest plate. a belt with two blaster holsters and his light saber. On his head he had a large white hood on and his face was covered with a mask with two black spots for viewing and a small hole rectangular hole for breathing in the air tight mask. He is a human male born on the planet taris. He is on the planet Endor in a cave where he head rumours of a starmap in a cave and he went to investigate. As he entered the cave he sensed no danger at all. But at one of the rooms with a lot of space and many old droids that have been deactivated scattered  in different parts of the room.   As he entered the door closed behind him and the droids just popped pack to life, lifting themselves of the ground Valen counted 40. “To easy.” He muttered to himself as he drew his lightsaber. The hilt was small ment for one hand. It ignited with a golden blade. (Not yellow) He jumped up into the air and landed in the middle of the droids which proceeded to attack him. Some had vibro blades others had blasters. He cut down a group of 15 with ease and shot a hail of force lightning at an other group . The droids fell to the floor burnt to a crisp. He use the force to make a pillar fall down on one group of droids and slide it into an other group. Once  all the droids were dead he un ignited his saber and put it back on his belt.

     As Valen continued down the cave he found what he was looking for, a starmap.

He activated it and it opened up it had one location marked. A system that he has never seen before. It had a star that would keep it of sensors making it hard to detect. Valen never said no to an adventure. He uploaded the coords on his datapad and went out of the cave. He stood in front of his ship it was custom made by himself. It was shaped like an arrow head with guns that could do devastating damage in a dogfight. He entered the ship punched in the coords and was off.


It was a normal day in ponyville. celestia's sun high in the sky as the pony roam about doing their daily business. In the library a lavender unicorn was taking notes on a odd rock that she found. It was pitch black and had a black cloud came from it. As she was studying her assistant spike came in to the room.

“Hey twilight did you see my gems i got from rarity?” She replied

“They are in your bed.” She said rolling her eyes. Befor spike could check he burped out a letter from celestia.


Once Valen exited hyperspace he saw a beautiful world before him.

It was a world that looks like it has not been touched by industrialization. He scanned the world for a safe place to land. He found a large forest and chose it because it seemed secluded. He landed in a large clearing deep in the forest so i would be hard to find his ship if something was looking for it.


Twilight stopped what she was doing and read the letter.

Dear my faithful student Twilight sparkle.

I have news of something not of this world. luna feet a ping and sensed it go somewhere in the everfree forest. I dont know what it is but i want you and the other elements to go and investigate. good luck.

Princess Celestia

Twilight told spike to get apple jack and pinkie pie and Twilight got the rest.

All of them gathered in the library they all stared to brief

“So why are we here.” said rainbow dash.

“ The princess told me something landed in the Everfree forest and wants us to investigate.”said twilight

“The Everfree forest.” Fluttershy said quietly scared.

“yes and we need to know if it can harm any pony.” said twilight.

“O O maybe it an alien from space that came down here with is super cool space ship!” said pinkie pie jumping up and down.

“I highly doubt that pinkie it properly just a meteor for all we know.” twilight said.

With that they all exited the library and went towards the everfree.


Valen stepped off his ship and looked around. It was a dark eerie forest. Nothing like the shadow lands of kashyyyk though. he entered the forest and started exploring the forest. And the next clearing he came across he was attacked by 20 odd wooden wolves.

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