The Hero in White

by bobmarly1234

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Adventure, Crossover, Human
Length: 1977

Valen Darkblood a force sensitive with powerful connection with the force finds a star map with hyper drive coordinates to a peace planet filled with talking pones

Valen Darkblood a force sensitive with powerful connection with the force finds a star map with hyper drive coordinates to a peaceful planet filled with talking pones. An explorer of the stars he hunts secrets where ever they are hiding.
He has a good heart and helps all those he can know matter what. ]

My little pony Star wars crossover.

This is my first story and i do not expect much from it. But if you guys have tips for writing that would be greatly appreciated.

Note this is in the old republic era
Also its my first story so go easy.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-05-13 20:10:05 UTC

Chapter 1: A new world

Chapter 1: A new world

Valen Darkblood a force sensitive but not jedi or sith. He wishes to explore the wonders of the force without the restrictions of the jedi or the evil of the sith. He only wishes to take his own path.

     “So here we are.” Valen said to himself when in front of the old temple He wore a white robe with a chest plate. a belt with two blaster holsters and his light saber. On his head he had a large white hood on and his face was covered with a mask with two black spots for viewing and a small hole rectangular hole for breathing in the air tight mask. He is a human male born on the planet taris. He is on the planet Endor in a cave where he head rumours of a starmap in a cave and he went to investigate. As he entered the cave he sensed no danger at all. But at one of the rooms with a lot of space and many old droids that have been deactivated scattered  in different parts of the room.   As he entered the door closed behind him and the droids just popped pack to life, lifting themselves of the ground Valen counted 40. “To easy.” He muttered to himself as he drew his lightsaber. The hilt was small ment for one hand. It ignited with a golden blade. (Not yellow) He jumped up into the air and landed in the middle of the droids which proceeded to attack him. Some had vibro blades others had blasters. He cut down a group of 15 with ease and shot a hail of force lightning at an other group . The droids fell to the floor burnt to a crisp. He use the force to make a pillar fall down on one group of droids and slide it into an other group. Once  all the droids were dead he un ignited his saber and put it back on his belt.

     As Valen continued down the cave he found what he was looking for, a starmap.

He activated it and it opened up it had one location marked. A system that he has never seen before. It had a star that would keep it of sensors making it hard to detect. Valen never said no to an adventure. He uploaded the coords on his datapad and went out of the cave. He stood in front of his ship it was custom made by himself. It was shaped like an arrow head with guns that could do devastating damage in a dogfight. He entered the ship punched in the coords and was off.

It was a normal day in ponyville. celestia's sun high in the sky as the pony roam about doing their daily business. In the library a lavender unicorn was taking notes on a odd rock that she found. It was pitch black and had a black cloud came from it. As she was studying her assistant spike came in to the room.

“Hey twilight did you see my gems i got from rarity?” She replied

“They are in your bed.” She said rolling her eyes. Befor spike could check he burped out a letter from celestia.

Once Valen exited hyperspace he saw a beautiful world before him.

It was a world that looks like it has not been touched by industrialization. He scanned the world for a safe place to land. He found a large forest and chose it because it seemed secluded. He landed in a large clearing deep in the forest so i would be hard to find his ship if something was looking for it.

Twilight stopped what she was doing and read the letter.

Dear my faithful student Twilight sparkle.

I have news of something not of this world. luna feet a ping and sensed it go somewhere in the everfree forest. I dont know what it is but i want you and the other elements to go and investigate. good luck.

Princess Celestia

Twilight told spike to get apple jack and pinkie pie and Twilight got the rest.

All of them gathered in the library they all stared to brief

“So why are we here.” said rainbow dash.

“ The princess told me something landed in the Everfree forest and wants us to investigate.”said twilight

“The Everfree forest.” Fluttershy said quietly scared.

“yes and we need to know if it can harm any pony.” said twilight.

“O O maybe it an alien from space that came down here with is super cool space ship!” said pinkie pie jumping up and down.

“I highly doubt that pinkie it properly just a meteor for all we know.” twilight said.

With that they all exited the library and went towards the everfree.

Valen stepped off his ship and looked around. It was a dark eerie forest. Nothing like the shadow lands of kashyyyk though. he entered the forest and started exploring the forest. And the next clearing he came across he was attacked by 20 odd wooden wolves.

chapter 2 first contact

Valen was surrounded. Wooden wolves covered all ways of escape. This is how he liked it. He drew his saber and once a wolf jumped him he cut it in half this continued until none remained. once done unignited his saber but kept it in hand just in case. As he walked in the forest he saw a hut that was built in a swamp tree. He peared in the window and saw a what looked like a zebra. It was doing alchemie by the looks. “Odd.” Valen said to himself.

He was used to the unexpected from exploring the galaxy and anything can happen in the galaxy. He wondered if he should reveal himself. His thinking was interrupted when the creature approached the door. He hid in the bushes. It went along the path. It got to a clearing and picked a purple flower with long leafy petals. Once it turned around more wooden wolves jumped out of the bushes and surrounded the zebra.

The zebra was scared and ducked down waiting for the end. With no escape that's all it could do. Valen could not stand for it. He could tell its sentient. He would not use the force though because the last time he did that other aliens tried to sacrifice him thinking he was a god and needed to be sent back to the after life. He did not want history to repeat itself. He hopped out of the bushes and came to the creatures aid. He jumped between the wolves and the zebra.

The zebra looked at its savor with a mixture of different emotions like hope but also fear. Valen ignited his light saber and prepared for battle. 3 jumped him and with one swipe of his saber they were cut in half. one got too close and Valen punched and it shattered with the help of the force. He was hoping the zebra did not know that.

Once he slayed the last wolf he went up to the creature and said “Are you okay?”

“yes.” It said so it knew galactic basic. It was scared looking into the mask of the thing it was saved by, he look like he had no emotions whatsoever. “Good do you have a home?”

“Yes i do but might i ask who are you?”

“I'm Valen Darkblood nice to meet you.” Before the zebra could speak the remnants of the wolves started to vibrate. They all started coming together to form one giant wooden wolf. Valen though it would attack him and the zebra but went the other way. Valen did not want that thing lose. He needed to take it out. He ran after it and the zebra was not far behind. “What is that thing!”

“Its a timber wolf if the alpha dies it can reassemble into something bigger!”

“Is there a settlement near by!”

“Yes there's a town not far from here called ponyville!”

“Shit” Valen muttered to himself, if that thing got there who knows what havoc it can cause.

The mane six has been walking for about 30 minutes now and raritys complaining. “My hooves are getting tired.”

"ges rarity we've been walken for only 30 minutes.”  Said applejack annoyed. Then they heard rumbling in the distance. They all turned and saw a giant timberwolf. they all were really scared of it. twilight could not focus for a spell. applejack knew she could not take that thing on. Rainbow dash thought the same thing. fluttershy was cowering. rarity fainted and pinkies mane deflated. They all waited for the end but something unexpected happened.

Valen saw the wolf tower over 6 small horses.

“The elements of harmony” the zebra said. all Valen knew he had to save them. Killing it would be easy but without the force that will be a challenge. Valen ignited his lightsaber and jumped between the wolf and the horses. The wolf charged him he jumped and brung his saber down on the beast. It howled in pain and then swatted  him to the ground and attempted to pick up Valen. Valen recovered from the blow and stabbed the beast snout. It roared in pain and clawed Valen right in the chest. It pierced the chest plate and Valen winsted in pain but quickly recovered. He knew there was no bring this thing down without the force. With that he shot a hail of force lightning at the beast. Valen was really good at force lightning and it was big enough to consume the entire beast. After it was stunned he picked up a large boulder with the force and through it at the beast. The wolf fell down and Valen Jumped in the air with his saber aimed for its neck and beheaded it. Once that was done he went up to the horses and said “Are you all right?”

The girls stared in awe of their savior. They don’t know what it is but it saved them.

“Um...yes.” Twilight said.

“Good.” It said.

“w..who are you?”

“Valen darkblood.” It said it voice sounded male.

“Ok” She said scared of the thing in front of her.

“Don’t worry I wont hurt you.” It said in a comforting to while at eye level.

“So who are you.” He said. Twilight regained her composure and said

“I'm twilight sparkle these are my friends applejack”

“Nice to meet y'all.”

“Rarity”

“Hello darling”

“rainbow dash”

“The fastest flyer of all of equestria!”

“Pinkie pie”

“hiya there i'm pinkie pie i'm a pony who loves parties! OOH OOH can i throw a ‘welcome to equestria mister white alien party’

“and this is fluttershy”

“um...Hi” she said quietly.

“well nice to meet you all” Valen said. zecora came out and was greeted by her friends.

“ Oh hi zecora why are you here” She explained what happened to the girls and twilight said to Valen.

“ You risked your life to save zecora”

“yes I defend those who can’t defend themselves no matter what species or race i will defend them all the same.”

“really” Valen nodded.

“Amazing” she said in awe so did the other girls.

“How do we Know this is true” said rainbow dash sceptical.

“I could of let that thing eat you but I jumped in between you and the beast, something that could easily kill me and I killed it so you were safe.”

“Oh ok” said rainbow dash now grateful he saved them.

“why are you here” asked twilight.

“I can answer that in a less exposed place.” she nodded in agreement. Well it getting dark soon how far is your house.” not far follow me. With that they all went to twilights residents.