The Stallion in the Mirror

by Dashey10

Rating: teen
Tags: Random, Adventure, Tragedy
Length: 1121

Big Mac becomes mean to his sisters and realizes what he has done.

Apple Bloom pressing her stop watch said, "One minute and 34 seconds. That is the longest time he said something!" Apple Jack gave Apple Bloom a little punch. "Oww, what was that for?" said Apple Bloom. "I'm gonna go talk to Big Mac. You go help Granny Smith," said Apple Jack ignoring Apple Bloom. Big Mac all red ran up the stairs into his room! Apple Jack turned at Apple Bloom, nodded, and went up stairs.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-05-24 15:06:04 UTC

Chapter 1

   "Wake Up! Wake Up!" yelled Apple Bloom bouncing on Big Mac's Bed, "It's today! It's Today!" Big Mac woke up yelling, "What? Cheerilee. Ugg, it was just a dream!" "Rise and shine, Big Mac! Let us get started!" yelled Apple Jack ready for the apple harvest. "Get out and let me get ready Okay. Five Minutes!" said Big Mac pushing his sisters out of his room and slamming the door on his face hitting Apple Jack's snout. "What's his problem?" said Apple Bloom. "He just woke up on the wrong side of the bed. I bet you after we start planting apple trees, he'll be all better!" said Apple Jack. "And those big long sentences," said Apple Bloom Looking down and shaking her head not even listening to a word Apple Jack was saying. "Did you even hear what I said?" asked Apple Jack to Apple Bloom. Apple Bloom just ignored her and still taking about Big Mac's difference about today Apple Jack clapped her hooves together and made a loud sound that snapped Apple Bloom out of her own conversation to herself. "Huh?" said Apple Bloom surprised. "You were taking to yourself," said Apple Jack starting to laugh. "Huh, I thought I said all of that in my head?," replied Apple Bloom very confused. "What ever, let's just get breakfast down stairs. It's Pancake Saturday!" said Apple Jack starting to walk down the stairs. " Wait for me!" yelled Apple Bloom trying to catch up to Apple Jack.

                              Right when Apple Bloom and Apple Jack just finished their food, Big Mac came stomping down the stairs. "Ah, Big Mac what do you want for breakfast?" asked Granny Smith tossing some pancakes into the air made them land perfectly in the center of the pan. "The usual," said Big Mac grabbing some juice from the fridge. "What is the usual, you usually change the usual everyday," said Granny Smith. Apple Bloom and Apple Jack stared  at each other confuse of what Granny Smith said.  "YOU DON'T REMEMBER THE USUAL. I NEVER I MEAN EVER OLD LADY CHANGE THEE USUAL. SO WHAT I MEAN ABOUT THE USUAL IS 3 PANCAKES, COVERED IN SUGAR, BROWN SUGAR, AND CINNAMON, WITH FROSTING, WHIPPED CREAM, SYRUP, A PAT OF BUTTER, AND A CHERRY DIPPED IN JELLY. NOT JAM, JELLY! AND IF YOU CAN REMEMBER ALL YOUR CHILDHOOD STORIES THAN YOU SHOULD OBVIOUSLY REMEMBER THIS!" yelled Big Mac in Granny Smith's face. Granny Smith just turned around, ran to her room and started to cry. Apple Bloom pressing her stop watch said, "One minute and 34 seconds. That is the longest time he said something!" Apple Jack gave Apple Bloom a little punch. "Oww, what was that for?" said Apple Bloom. "I'm gonna go talk to Big Mac. You go help Granny Smith," said Apple Jack ignoring Apple Bloom. Big Mac all red ran up the stairs into his room! Apple Jack turned at Apple Bloom, nodded, and went up stairs.

                         Big Mac looked at himself at his mirror. "Who am I?" said big Mac to himself on the mirror, "Am I Big Mac or a Jerk." Big Mac put his hoof on the mirror. He had a flashback moment. I am a Jerk. No one will like me after what I done."

                         A couple Minutes Later...

                         Apple Jack took a deep breath a knock on Big Mac's door. "Uh, Hello. Big Mac are you here?" said Apple Jack. Apple Jack finds out that the door id unlocked so she opened it. "Big Mac where are you?" said Apple Jack. Apple Jack realize a note on the desk. Apple Jack picks it up and reads it:

Apple Family:

                           There is a stallion in the mirror. Not a nice one. Not a friendly one. And a jerk. He told me that Granny Smith is crying and I hurt Apple Jack and I just want to say, I'm Sorry. I'm sorry I slammed the door in Apple Jack's face. I'm sorry I talked rudely to Granny Smith. And I'm sorry Apple Bloom had to see the dark side of the stallion. I decide to move out of Ponyville. Tell Cheerilee that I love her and I'm sorry, Apple Family, for everything I have done.

                                    Big Mac

                                     Apple Jack started to cry. Tears of sadness. Where is her brother going? Will he ever come back? All these question flowed around her head for a bit. Apple Jack took the strong side out of herself. The side the made her do anything. She wiped those tears out  and got the note. She dashed to the Living room where Apple Bloom was talking to Granny Smith trying to make her feel better. "Here," said Apple Jack filling her bag up with food and supplies. Granny Smith read the letter and passed it on to Apple Bloom. "We have to find him," said Granny Smith. "I'll go," said Apple Jack. "I'm going, too," said Granny Smith. Apple Jack nodded her head. "Me, too!" said Apple Bloom. "No you're taking care of the farm," said Apple Jack. "Does that mean I'm staying home alone!" said Apple Bloom shaking. Apple Jack put on her bag and put one on Granny Smith. They headed for the door. "Apple Bloom, if we don't come in three days, call the cops," said Apple Jack. "So am I in charge?" said Apple Bloom. Apple Jack looked at Granny Smith. "Yes!" said Apple Jack.  Apple Jack leaned towards Winola, "You're secretly in charge." "Bark," went Winola. And off went Apple Jack and Granny Smith.

                                        After a couple hours, they were lost in the everfree forest. "Hello, is any one here?" said Granny Smith. "I hear something," said Apple Jack. They both turned around and saw Timber wolves growling at them. "Careful wolves, you wouldn't hurt a living Treasure would you?" said Granny Smith. A dog was just about to eat Granny Smith's head when Big Mac swung from a branch and caught them both in time just before they were dinner. Big Mac kissed Granny Smith's fore head and jumped off the tree. He tried to fight off the wolves. They dragged him into a bush. Apple Jack, in shock, took off her hat and put in front of her heart. They bowed down when suddenly Big Mac came out of the bush covered in timber wolves remainings. "We, we thought you were dead?" said Granny Smith jumping down the tree. "Those timber wolves didn't eat you?" said Apple Jack. " Nope," said Big Mac. "Well that's a relef, I didn't want to lose another grand kid," said Grnny Smith. "What!" yelled Big Mac and Apple Jack together. "I'll talk about it later.

THE END