Infiltration

Ebony Aura and Mystic Shadow, inhabitants of the New Lunar Republic's Northern territory, set a goal nopony else has ever even considered.

Hacking. With some of the most complex of knowledge in hacking, they can expose the vital information the NLR's hiding, and tear the government apart. It's not an easy task, yet their determination keeps them going.

They may succeed and be able to free every imprisoned pony. They may make the slightest slip-up and get taken down by Luna's private militia. They may not affect Luna's realm at all. Whatever the case, they're not giving up without a fight.

Just a quick heads-up - I do not plan on proceeding any further on this story than the Prologue, simply because the concept is but a template to demonstrate my capability to write professionally. Getting some criticism for said skill is all this is for; nothing more, nothing less. This isn't the best of the best, so do not expect a gripping storyline or anything like that. If that is what you're here for, just move on.

EDIT1: [Some rant about how I may have officially cancelled this story on the second day.]

EDIT2: Explanation as to why I've revoked this story's Cancelled status is as follows: It's essentially a fair time-waster, and since I have all weekend (<72 hours, as of 23-5-14, 17:37), I might as well make a fair attempt and see how it goes. …Simple as that, really. :applejackunsure:
Anyway, I just executed a major data transfer from the Prologue to Chapter 1, so don't be alarmed if you're a returning reader (if I have any). The Prologue itself was longer than Chapter 1, so it had to be done. Well, where the Prologue ends is now much more adequate, in my opinion, as well as its length.

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2663 words: Estimated 13 minutes to read

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2 Chapters:

Prologue 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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Chapter 1 - Evasion 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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