Между Громом и Солнцем

by FalloutFilly

Rating: teen
Tags: Alternate Universe, Romance, Original Character, Adventure, Princess Celestia, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 3798

A story of Celestia and ThunderShock (OC) being in a relationship.

Princess Celestia and Lieutenant ThunderShock have finally released their feelings for each other and formed a relationship together. I realized my other stories about Thunder and the other Princesses (Twilight excluded) title's were in an alternate language. Thunder and Cadence's is in Italian and Thunder and Luna's is in Latin. I couldn't think of a better language so I went with one of my favorites, Russian. If you haven't read the story yet the title translates to Between The Thunder And The Sun.

I apologize for the delay, I've been working on other stories, it will be updated when I get the time.

There is no longer 'Clopping scenes' anymore, it is strictly a romance type story.

I understand why a good chunk of people do not like OCs, especially Alicorns. I tried to keep him as close to canon as possible, as far as a male Alicorn can be anyway, if you feel like he is OP or something let me know and I will try to fix it.

The background story got some terrible, but needed, criticism. I am leaving the original up as I redo it, it is retired and does not reflect the sequels or final story.

I am heavily editing the new chapter to adapt to the new story, but the primary ideas are the same.

Published 2014-05-28 22:10:02 UTC
Last updated 2014-05-28 22:10:02 UTC

Chapter 1 (No Title Yet)

-- Present Day - Equestria --

After raising the sun Celestia was hungry, she was heading towards the dining hall when she had a slight feeling she was being watched, she turned her head to see ThunderShock staring at her flank. If it was somepony else then Celestia would immediately have them arrested or something, but she felt differently about Thunder and she was sure he felt the same.

"What? No 'Hello, Princess.' No 'How are you doing today?'" Celestia teased.

"Yes, sorry ma'am." Thunder said, even though he was commander of the Equestrian Military, let alone a few years older and substantially larger, Celestia was the Princess, what she said goes.

"What did I say about the formalities?" Celestia said in her mother-like tone.

"Oh, yeah, force of habit. So what are you up to?" Thunder asked dumbly, he already knew, but he was trying to change the subject.

"Heh. I'm going to get something to eat if that's alright with you." She said, joking.

"Oh, yeah, I would suppose that makes sense, the only room in this area is the Dining Hall." Thunder said trying not to sound stupid.

"Anyway, would you care to join me?" Celestia asked with a twinkle in her eye. She had an ability to make her eye twinkle like that, she would only use it on him for some reason, she figured it out a little after he took command of the military. It was his weakness, and Celestia knew it. She never used it to get him to do something like clean or work, but only when she wanted him to join her in something fun.

"I, umm, have to finish some training exercises with the new recruits." Thunder said.

"Please, for me?" Celestia said with a begging smile.

"Damn it all, I hate when she does that." Thunder thought to himself, he actually thought it was cute when she did it, but didn't want her to know.

"OK, fine, for you." He said with a less annoyed voice than expected.

"Great, let's go." She said grabbing his hoof and walking down the hallway. Despite Celestia's commanding and yet mother like tone when talking to anyone else, she wasn't afraid to act like a filly around him. Once they got to the Dining Hall Celestia had her usual tea and biscuits while Thunder had a glass of bourbon and iced tea. Railroad Gambler's Tea as he called it.

"A little early for that, isn't it, Thunder?" Celestia asked teasingly.

"No, not really, I always drink this in the morning." He said chuckling.

"Could I have some?" Celestia whispered.

"Umm, yeah, I don't see why not, I'll get them to bring another glass." Thunder was about to say, but was stopped when Celestia put her hoof over his mouth.

"I don't want a full glass, I just want to try it, sweetheart." Celestia said, blushing.

"Oh, OK, go ahead." He pushed the glass towards her and she took a sip and coughed a little.

"Little strong, 'Tia?" Celestia laughed.

"Yeah, it's....potent, that's for sure." Celestia said, thinking for the right word.

"How about cinnamon? You like cinnamon?" Thunder asked trying to get Celestia comfortable.

"Umm, yeah, cinnamon is good, why?" Celestia said, not knowing what he had in mind. Thunder called one of the maid ponies and whispered something to the maid pony and then she nodded her head.

"Yes, of course, right away." The maid said as she turned away and walked to the kitchen. Thunder looked at the maid in her uniform, he had to bend down and obviously Celestia caught on.

"Lieutenant! Have some manners." Celestia scolded jokingly. He held up a hoof quieting Celestia until the maid was gone.

"I'm sorry, what did you say?" Thunder said. Celestia shook her head, she was actually jealous, but they weren't dating or anything so she couldn't really say anything.

"Nothing, I was joking." She said laughing.

"Oh, OK then." Thunder said just as the maid came back with two glasses of a caramel colour drinks on a tray.

"Here you are, as requested." The maid set down the tray. "Anything else I can get you, Lieutenant?" The maid asked.

"Umm, yes, keep the bottle open and ready, I have a feeling we will need a couple more." Thunder said looking towards Celestia and winking.

"Very well, please let me know if you need anything." The maid pony said walking away. Thunder levitated a glass over to her and she immediately took a large sip.

"Oh, wow, what is that?" Celestia said.

"Cinnamon whiskey. Pretty good ain't it?" Thunder asked drinking his in a few large gulps.

"It's strong, that's for sure." Celestia's voice sounded strained.

"Do you need something to help?" Thunder offered.

"Water will do fine." Celestia said.

"I wouldn't do that, water will make it worse." Thunder explained while handing Celestia a glass of milk. "This is better, trust me." Celestia looked confused, but trusted him enough so she took a sip and then the burning went away.

"See, I told you." Thunder confirmed.

"OK, but why milk, why not water?" Celestia said curiously.

"I honestly don't know, it's what my dad and his dad did as well as me when I was a young colt." Thunder answered.

"Oh, well that stuff is good and I think I'm used to the heat now." Celestia said as she drank the rest of it, hoping to hold up to the heat. Thunder shook his head and laughed under his breath.

"What's so funny? That stuff's hot!" Celestia said getting another glass of milk.

"Only as hot as the mare drinking it." Thunder said. Celestia blushed and looked away.

"That came out wrong." Thunder started.

"Save it. I know what you meant." Celestia laughed, cuttin him off.

"Umm OK, well it's time I get to training, got a few new recruits to break in." Thunder said, looking for an excuse to leave.

"Actually, I need to talk to about some things." Celestia said with a glimmer in her eyes, Thunder didn't notice, otherwise he would have caught on right away.

"OK, what do you need?" Thunder asked.

"It's a highly confidential matter. Not to be discussed here." Celestia said seriously.

"Alright then, where should we talk about it?" Thunder said confused.

"My room, this evening." Is all Celestia said as she got up and walked towards the exit. Thunder grabbed another shot of whisky before leaving to the PT area.

-- Canterlot Castle, Celestia's Room - 7 hours later --

"OK, so what are these 'confidential matters' that need to be addressed?" Thunder asked as soon as they walked in.

"Well, let's just say it's not about the training." Celestia shut the door.

"OK, should I be worried?" Thunder said backing away slowly.

"No, just answer this one question." Celestia said with sultry, but sweet, voice.

"OK." Thunder agreed.

"Do you like me?" Celestia said bluntly.

"Yes, you're a very close friend." Thunder said, he knew what Celestia meant, but was hoping he could avoid it.

"No, no, no, no. You know exactly what I mean." Celestia said with the sweetest voice possible, she knew tough never worked on him so she had to go soft.

"If I say yes promise to banish me to the moon or something?" Thunder asked.

"You have my word." Celestia assured.

"Alright, maybe I like you a little more than that." Thunder admitted. Celestia just hummed and stood next to him and whispered in his ear.

"Are you sure it's just a little?" Celestia whispered.

"OK, maybe a little more than that." Thunder said.

"Really? Every time I turn and look at you you're looking at my flank." Celestia taunted.

"Well I don't see why you're making a big deal about this, I do to most mares." Thunder tried turning the table. Celestia looked toward him and kissed him.

"Does that make it clear?" Celestia went from deviant to submissive and caring.

"I, umm, I think it's pretty clear." He stuttered.

"So, what are you going to do about it?" Celestia asked. Thunder didn't say anything, he just walked towards her slowly and gave her a long, deep kiss. After they had to breathe they pulled apart.

"You have no idea how long I wanted to do that." Thunder said with a chuckle, Celestia laughed.

"That's what I imagined." Celestia said grabbing and holding Thunder's hoof.

"So, uhh, now what?" Thunder asked. Celestia looked at the clock.

"Well, I have to lower the sun, but after that I'm all yours, that is if you want." Celestia said with that twinkle in her eye.

"Of course. Do you want to meet in my room or stay here?" Thunder asked.

"How about yours, I've never been in it." She told him.

"Well, you'll be the first." Thunder informed her.

"Hmm, I look forward to it." She said walking out, but flicking Thunder in the side with her tail.

-- Canterlot Castle, Thunder's Room - 25 minutes later --

Celestia walked in his room, only to see Thunder sleeping on the couch in his room. She walked over and nuzzled him in the back of the neck. He just pulled the blanket over him and continued to sleep.

"He always was a heavy sleeper." Celestia thought to herself with a laugh. "But there was one way I got him up, I hope it still works." She started kissing the back of his neck softly. He started laughing in his sleep, but rolled over.

"That didn't work, weird. Well I did this as a filly, I'm a little bigger since then, but so is he." Celestia thought as she climbed on top of him and started bouncing.

"Wake up! Wake up! Wake up!" She said acting like a filly again. Thunder groaned loudly.

"OK, OK, I'm up." He said facing her. He saw something different. She didn't look like the old, wise ruler of Equestria, she looked like she was a little filly again, she had a big smile on her face with her head tilted, she also looked smaller to.

"Morning." Celestia said.

"Is it really?" Thunder said looking at the window. "You little." Celestia laughed and Thunder grabbed her and pulled her down on top of him so she was face to face with him. She kissed him gently and made a light moaning noise. He rubbed her sides and traveled down towards her cutie mark, when he got there Celestia jumped a little, but didn't break the kiss. Thunder smiled through the kiss.

"Damn it all, I thought she was cute before, but now I don't know." Thunder thought while laughing to himself. Celestia was going crazy, it's like she hadn't kissed anypony in hundreds of years. Then she got frisky, she started poking his mouth with her tongue, Thunder knew exactly what she wanted, and he didn't hesitate to let her. He returned the favor by pushing his tongue it to hers and started playing with it. Celestia pulled back, breathing heavily.

"You all right 'Tia?" Thunder asked.

"Yeah....I....Just......Haven't......Done.......That.......In......A.......While." She managed to pant out.

"Lay down before you collapse from exhaustion". Thunder said opening his forelegs. Celestia feel down on top of him panting still. Thunder wrapped his forelegs around her and rubbed her back as well as nuzzling her neck.

"Man, I hate to see how tired you are after you know what." Thunder joked. Celestia just hit him in the side.

"Kiss.....My.....Flank." She panted.

"With pleasure." Thunder teased.

"Shut.....Up." Celestia said jokingly. She pushed her head under his chin as he ran his hoof through her mane.

"Can I ask you something?" Thunder said to Celestia.

"Yeah." She said, still pretty winded.

"How come you've been acting like a filly today?" He asked. Celestia thought he was messing around, but almost immediately knew he was serious.

"Oh, I didn't think it was that obvious. Well in short I guess I miss the old days when we actually were fillies. But I suppose it's also because I feel different around you, like I can do that, you seemed happy when I did." Celestia told him as she sat up and looked at him.

"Well I'm not mad or anything, I was just curious. Just so you know I do like it, you look so cute when you do it." He said giving her a kiss on the cheek.

"Oh, OK, well you had me worried for a second, I thought I did something wrong." Celestia said relived.

"No, I could never be mad at you." He said hugging her. "But one thing I do remember is you always had ticklish wings." He said as he started rubbing her wings lightly. She stifled her laugh for a while.

"No I think think that phased out a while ago." She said smiling and holding her laughter. Thunder could tell she was and she knew it.

"Is that so? What if I did this?" Thunder rubbing the base of her wings. She started twitching and her face turned red.

"Nope. Not working." She said shaking her head and smiling.

"OK, then, I know this will get you." He said lightly gliding the tips of the feathers on his wings across her sides. She gave in at this and burst in to uncontrollable laughter and fell on his chest. "I knew that'd get you." He said teasing her. Being satisfied he won he stopped and went to rubbing her back nicely. She slowly stopped laughing and relaxed as she felt his hooves on her back. With the mix of tickling and lack of intimacy Celestia was slightly aroused and wanted him to know.

"I think I'm going to take a shower and head to bed." Celestia said yawning and stretching her flank into the air, hoping Thunder catches a glimpse.

"Really? But we were just starting to have fun." Thunder complained.

"I never said I was going to shower alone. Also I didn't say anything about sleeping." Celestia said with a smiling wink as she kissed him and pulled back as he started getting into it.

"Damn it, you always know how to get me. I have a feeling that's going to bite me in the ass later." Thunder said laying back. Celestia got off him and walked away looking back at him with 'bedroom eyes'.

"Well, I pretty sure that it won't be me knowing you, but I guarantee something will bite you, where, well we'll have to figure that out." She said as she got 3/4 of the way to his bathroom. Thunder's eyes lit up and sparked something. He scrambled off the couch and ran behind her slowly. She saw him and giggled and kept walking. Before she got all the way into the bathroom she felt hooves on her hips spinning her around, when she came to a stop Thunder pushed her against the wall playfully.

"Ohh, someone likes that." Celestia said dragging her tail along his back. He didn't say anything, he just pushed his lips against hers and kissed her like it was the last day he had left, almost sucking all the air out of her body. Celestia feel limp under his grasp and kiss and she started making excited squeaks. Thunder pulled away and they were breathing heavily.

"What's with the sudden burst of affection?" Celestia asked half concerned, half aroused. Again he didn't say anything he was lost in her beautiful light lavender eyes. He eventually loosened up his grip on her and let her down slowly.

"I had to get that out of my system." Thunder said with a laugh.

"Well, I'm actually glad you didn't tell me you were going to do that. It made it that much better." Celestia said giving him a reassuring smile. By now Thunder noticed her 'arousal' running down her rear legs.

"So, are we going to finish that shower?" Thunder asked with a lustful infliction.

"Sweetheart we never started." Celestia said running her tail along his muzzle, giving him a view of her lower bits. At this point he was mentally drooling like a kid looking at the world's largest chocolate bar.

"Oh, chocolate, that could get us somewhere." Thunder thought, but was jerked out of his fantasy by Celestia.

"Oh, Thunder, are you coming or am I going to have to wash my back by myself?" She asked in a cute sing-songy voice.

"Oh, yeah, coming." Thunder said walking in to see her getting some towels off the shelf.

"What? Having some sort of fantasy?" Celestia teased.

"Umm, yeah, chocolate to be exact." Thunder said with a nervous chuckle. "Damn it, only Celestia can make me feel like that, and the fact we're in my bathroom about to shower together doesn't exactly help." He thought to help himself loosen up.

"Oh," Celestia swooned. "we'll have to try that later." She said getting soap out of the bottom cabinet.

"Damn I love you." He whispered to himself.

"What was that?" Celestia asked perking her head up.

"I...umm......uhhh....I. Oh, piss on it, I love you." Thunder said pushing her against the wall again.

"How many times are you going to do this? It's getting a little predictable." Celestia joked teasingly. Thunder ignored her and started kissing her neck. She responded by making soft light moans. "Okay, okay. Save yourself Thunder, you'll need that energy later." Said biting her lower lip as he pulled up and looked at her. Thunder laughed and released his grip slowly again.

"Good, now can you help get my necklace off? Or are you going to pin me to the floor instead?" Celestia said as she wiggled her flank teasingly. For a second he actually considered it, but decided he could wait.

"Yeah, I can help." Thunder said as he walked to the back of her. He did want to have a little more fun to. Instead of using his hooves or magic he used his teeth, but 'accidentally' missed and nibbled on the back of her neck, which he knew was one of her most sensitive spots. She was not expecting it at all so she couldn't help but making a high-pitched squeal as she arched her neck and back. Thunder nibbled playfully a little longer and then proceeded to actually take off her necklace. When he stopped she made a disappointed, yet happy sigh.

"Where do you want it?" Thunder asked with the necklace in his mouth by the clasp. Celestia looked around for a second.

"On the sink will be fine." She said nodding next to him as she removed her gold slippers and crown, putting the crown next to the necklace and slippers in front of the sink on the floor. Thunder was walking in to the large shower, big enough for him and Celestia, even Luna if they wanted. Celestia stood behind him and ran the tip of her hoof along the center of his back with a deviantly innocent smile.

"Enjoying yourself?" Thunder asked her.

"Yes, are you?" She returned.

"Fairly, yes." Thunder said running his tail along her chest.

"Okay, we're both going to be tired before we even start the shower." Celestia said patting his back and walking in the shower. Once they were in Celestia turned the water on hot, enough to where it was steaming, but neither of them noticed. Celestia looked straight at Thunder, her light lavender eyes cutting through him.

"So how's this going to continue?" Celestia asked biting her lip in anticipation. Thunder just looked at her like a tiger watching it's prey. "What? Are you out of energy already? Hmm, I must pretty good if I can tire you out that fast." Celestia said as she looked up, letting the water hit her mouth and run down her chin and mane.

"That's and under statement." Thunder whispered to himself.

"What was that?" Celestia asked opening her eye to look at him, but not moving her head.

"Nothing, thinking out loud." Thunder chuckled with a half smile. Celestia hummed in acknowledgement. Thunder walked slowly up behind her and placed his hoof on her shoulder then ran it along her neck up to her cheek.

"Something wrong?" Celestia asked actually thinking something was.

"No, I'm just making sure you're actually here and I didn't drink a whole bottle of whisky and this is a dream." Thunder said holding her head up with his hoof.

"Here, how about this for confirmation." Celestia said easing closer to him, but he got the jump and pushed back, locking his lips to hers. She made a surprised squeak of delight and pushed back. Thunder tried to maintain dominance, but Celestia used her advantage and pushed back, giggling and teasing him. She pulled back and looked at him waiting for an answer.

"Nope, I don't think I'm dreaming." Thunder said with a laugh.

"Well good, now then I have a problem reaching my back with the soap so if you could help me out," Celestia said turning and facing away from him. "Vanilla if you have it." Celestia said with a soft smile.

"I think I might have some." Thunder said levitating a bottle of vanilla scented body wash over to him. He squirted a generous amount on Celestia's back, in between her wings, and thoroughly started rubbing it into her soft white coat and Celestia made satisfied grunts in response.

"I take you're enjoying this?" Thunder teased while giving her a soft kiss on the back of the neck.

"Is it that obvious?" Celestia through a laughing sigh.

"Just a little sweetie." Thunder said as he continued washing Celestia, being sure to get every inch he could. "Alright, here comes the fun part." Thunder said stopping for a moment. Celestia couldn't think of what he meant, but then realized he had finished everywhere except her wings.

"Oh, no." Celestia squeaked quietly.

"That's how I figured you were going to react." Thunder said starting to wash the base of her wings. Celestia bit her bottom lip and started giggling and tapping her hooves trying to forget about him touching her sensitive wings.

"Here, this'll take your mind off of it." Thunder said kissing the back of her neck softly. She started squeaking as she tried to hold back her laughter.

"I'm going to hurt you later!" She said through stifled laughs. Thunder chuckled, he finished washing her wings, but was just teasing her now.

"Well unfortunately I remember a little trick from when we were fillies." Thunder informed her. Celestia thought for a second but couldn't think of anything, at that moment she felt a soft warm breath on her neck.

"Oh no." She thought to herself as her heart hit her stomach. She enjoyed foreplay, but this was to much and she whimpered