And Then They Sort Of Banged

by Calm Wind

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Fluttershy, Sex, Big Macintosh, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 4296

Fluttershy and Mac have been together for six months. They've yet to... do it. Fluttershy is worried her lack of "action" is frustrating him. Being a virgin, Fluttershy is very nervous about it. But surely Mac has lots of experience...

Fluttershy and Big Macintosh have been together for six months now. But they've yet to... do it. Rarity convinces Fluttershy she can't go on like that for both her and Mac's sake. Fluttershy begins to worry her lack of "action" is frustrating Mac.

Fluttershy is a virgin. She's never done it before and has no idea how to approach the subject. Will she do it? Will Mac be gentle or rough? Surely a stallion like him has had plenty of experience. He'll know what to do. That's if she can even ask him.

Personal Writing Challenge: Writing a unique and meaningful sex scene without any direct naming of male or female "parts"

(I did it again...)

Published 2014-05-21 23:40:06 UTC
Last updated 2014-05-21 23:40:06 UTC

Um... Sex.

MLP: FiM
And Then They Sort of Banged
By: Calm Wind

(Timeline position: A day after the events of The Weight of Responsibility)

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“What’s the matter Rarity?” Fluttershy asked from across her kitchen as Rarity walked towards her with a bucket of vegetables harvested from Fluttershy’s garden. Fluttershy had enlisted the help of Rarity to assist in finishing her chores early on this particular day. Big Mac and the Apple family had completed a large project the day before, and all of them were taking a day off.

It wasn’t often that Mac got a whole day to himself. Fluttershy was quick to jump at the opportunity. She just had to finish her own work first. As soon as she was finished mixing this particular salad for Angel, she was heading out.

“Oh… nothing.” Rarity set the bucket down, dragged her hooves over to the kitchen table, and slumped into a chair. Fluttershy was not convinced in the slightest. She turned and looked at Rarity sternly.

“Rarity, you look so down in the dumps! How could nothing be wrong?” She asked as she grabbed a couple leaves of lettuce and chopped them up.

“I’m just frustrated.” Rarity sighed and laid her chin on the table top. “I could really use something I have no means of getting right now.” She pouted.

“What do you need?” Fluttershy asked innocently.

“Cock.” Rarity replied flatly.

“Well that’s—” it took Fluttershy a brief moment to register Rarity’s answer. She dropped the kitchen knife from her mouth and her wings flapped open. “W—W—W—WHAT?!” She spun and stared at Rarity wide eyed. She really didn’t know how to respond to that.

“You heard me darling.” Rarity groaned and puffed her cheeks out. “I’m in dire need of a good thigh to plot slapping.” She eyed Fluttershy, who was still frozen, eyes wide and mouth agape. “What? You wanted to know.”

“Um.” Fluttershy turned back around to hide a blush and forced her wings to fold back up. “Don’t you have—, um… ways to satisfy yourself?” Fluttershy wanted the conversation to end quickly. She was caught completely off guard.

“Nothing compares to the real thing…” Rarity whined while pressing her face down flat to the table, “it’s been way too long since I’ve had a good throttling…” She continued to speak in terms that made Fluttershy very uncomfortable.

“I’m—, sorry… to hear that…” Fluttershy bit her lip and squinted to get the images out of her head.

“I envy you darling,” Rarity said, muffled against the table. She looked up and leaned back, slumping into her seat. “Not just you, but Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and even Applejack now too.”

“What do you mean?” Fluttershy asked curiously.

“You all have stallions.”

“Pinkie and Applejack?” Fluttershy tipped her head to the side.

“Applejack ended up banging that pegasus that fell from the sky and broke all their stuff. And don’t tell me you believe for a second that Pinkie isn’t getting her sweet buns rammed by Braeburn.” She threw her hooves up and grunted angrily. Fluttershy covered her ears for a moment and shook her head. Did Rarity have to be so crass about it? “At this rate even Twilight of all ponies will find a stallion before I do… I swear I’m the only one of us trying to find a stallion, the rest of you had them fall right into your laps!” She wailed dramatically before letting her chin fall back onto the table.

“Um, I wouldn’t say…” Fluttershy tried to follow up.

“Seriously Fluttershy! I just need a good man! I need more than that right now!” She pounded her hooves continuously on the table. Fluttershy went silent as Rarity lost control. “I need a good thrusting! I need to be pressed to a wall or bed!” Her magic came to life on her horn. It picked up a large carrot from the bucket of vegetables beside Fluttershy. “The toys only do so much for me! I need the real thing!” The carrot pointed towards Fluttershy and made jabbing motions towards her. “Why are you so lucky!? You also have the SEXIEST stallion in Ponyville!” The jabbing motion of the carrot sped up. “IT’S NOT FAIR!!!!!!” The carrot slammed to the counter beside Fluttershy and Rarity let her face fall to the table while groaning.

Fluttershy kept staring at the carrot that now lay motionless on the counter. While Rarity was still not looking, she quickly opened the trash bin nearby and brushed the carrot into it. She was not using it in Angel’s salad after seeing that.

“Um…” She fluttered over to Rarity. “If it makes you feel any better—” She paused and blushed. “Macintosh and I—,” She blushed a little harder, “have never done it.”

“WHAT?!” Rarity’s head sprang up from the table. She grabbed Fluttershy’s cheeks and pulled her face into hers. “YOU’VE YET TO RIDE THE PONY?!”

“Uh… yes?” Fluttershy wasn’t quite expecting this reaction.

“ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?!?!?!” she pressed her face further into Fluttershy’s.

“Is that… bad?” Fluttershy looked back and forth as she shimmied out of Rarity’s grip. Rarity’s eyes suddenly narrowed into a stern glare.

“You have that big, muscular hunk of a sexy stallion all to yourself and you haven't done what most Ponyville mares can only dream of?” She gritted her teeth. “This is a crime! Fluttershy he’s a god among stallions! He’s probably as much of a god in bed! Just look at him! He’s already three times your size! I can only imagine the size of his—,”

“RARITY!!!!!!!” Fluttershy’s voice squeaked at a pitch so high it almost couldn’t be heard. Rarity cringed as the tone crashed through her ears. Fluttershy’s face was completely red and her eyes squinted shut. She slowly opened them slightly and looked away “I… guess we’re just not like that.” Fluttershy fished for answers.

“Not like that?! Fluttershy, listen to me darling.” Rarity used her magic to force Fluttershy to look her in the eye. “I admit, I’m craving it for the pleasure right now, but there’s more to sex than just grinding a shaft against your pleasure walls.” She explained with a completely straight face. Fluttershy squeaked as Rarity used more “creative” terms. “To those who actually care about who they do it with, sex is a very deep and intimate connection shared between lovers!” Rarity pouted, “Believe me, I want that just as much.”

“But… but I’m…” Fluttershy averted her eyes.

“How long have you two been together?” Rarity suddenly asked. Fluttershy blinked and thought.

“Six months I think?” She yelped as Rarity began to shake her with her magic.

“SIX MONTHS?! Dear god Fluttershy! He must be ready to BURST! You have to do it for him too you know! Not just you!” Rarity fumed.

“I do?” Fluttershy looked mortified. She had really, truly not thought at all about sex.

“Darling, stallions have needs. He may not say it, but I’m sure he’s thought about it.” Rarity stopped using her magic, and Fluttershy face planted on the table. “Oh goodness I can’t even imagine it! Fluttershy you’re torturing the poor thing!” She shook her head as Fluttershy slid off the table and plopped on the floor.

She never thought of it that way. Could Mac just not be telling her out of shyness? Courtesy? Was her lack of action… frustrating him? She couldn’t have that! Was it really that important? Rarity had mentioned how good it felt, but she also said it was a deep connection shared by lovers.

It had been six months.

They were lovers, right?

That means by now they should have…

The thought made Fluttershy’s whole body heat up and her wings twitched like crazy. But it was such a personal thing done with two very personal parts of the body. How could she ever ask him? But what if she really was making him frustrated? She couldn’t take that chance. She loved him and he loved her. If this is what two ponies in love were supposed to do…

Then she’d do it.

“I sense contemplation.” Rarity poked her head under the table and smirked at Fluttershy. “Or fantasizing, judging by the wings, are you as innocent as you let on?” Fluttershy turned redder, bit down hard on part of her mane hanging in front of her face and covered her ears.

Rarity wasn’t helping. Fluttershy already had a hell of a time just initially confessing love to Mac. This was going to be just as bad, possibly even worse. But how much longer could she and Mac go on if they never shared the deepest possible connection?

Why did Rarity have to bring it up?

After Fluttershy finally finished her chores, she got to spend the rest of the day with Big Macintosh. It was a beautiful day. They got lunch in town, went on a long, quiet walk outside of town, spent some time at Sugar Cube Corner, had a picnic in the dim glow of the sunset for dinner, and were now heading back to Sweet Apple Acres.

She managed to hide it, but the whole time Fluttershy couldn’t stop thinking about sex. Rarity had planted the idea in her head that she may not be doing enough for Mac. She dreaded the thought of him being frustrated at her for a lack of pleasure in their relationship.

One advantage of their preferred quiet interactions was that it was hard to pick up if something was bothering the other. This wasn’t always a good thing, but right now it was a blessing for Fluttershy. She wanted to bring it up. She had to do it. But when and how?

Well she only had one chance left. Typically whenever they got together, they always ended the night by going to a barn on the Apple Family property and getting some intimate snuggle time in. If they were really comfortable, sometimes it would be accompanied by light kissing.

It’s only the perfect time and place to ask him and/or do it. She thought to herself as Mac closed the door to the barn behind them. He lit the oil lamps around the interior to create a soft orange glow to counter the darkness from outside.

Get comfortable, and then bring it up. You can do this.

Fluttershy smiled at Mac as he approached. He smiled right back as he reached her and lay down, wrapping his large body completely around her little frame. She always loved it when he did this. As Rarity said, he was three times her size. He was like a big, strong mountain that surrounded her and kept her safe. She sighed contently as he lightly nuzzled the top of her head.

She was really comfortable, but she was still thinking about sex. Luckily her face was currently turned away from him. She was blushing at the mere thought.

Just do it Fluttershy. Just bring it up casually. Act like it was bound to happen eventually.

Her thoughts made it sound easy. She had to make sure she had this just right.

“Um…” She accidentally said immediately. She wanted to think more first, but she already had Mac’s attention. She glanced back at him and flinched when she saw him staring down at her with his head tipped to the side. “Oh dear.” She put her face to the hay covering the floor and clutched the top of her head with her hooves.

“What’s the matter?” Mac asked caringly.

“Um… I…” Fluttershy bit her lip as her thoughts raced. Mac was clearly not expecting this, and she didn’t think she’d let it slip so early, but she couldn’t stop here. If she didn’t ask now, she’d continuously feel like she was doing something wrong. “So we’ve… um… been together a while.” She shifted so her body was facing him as well.

“Eeyup.” He smiled and nodded obliviously.

“I love you very much… and you love me…”

“Eeyup.”

“So…” She swallowed and her face turned very pink, nearly disappearing into her mane. Mac continued to look at her and smile. She shut her eyes and held her breath for a moment. She exhaled and stared up at him as innocently as she could, because after asking this, she would feel anything but innocent, “would you like to… have sex?”

Mac’s eyes shot open, his ears stood on end, and his voice inadvertently released a nickering sound. Fluttershy panicked. She couldn’t read his expression. She couldn’t tell if it was a pleasant surprise or alarm.

“Um… I mean… we don’t… I’m sorry… I didn’t…” She started stuttering while waving her hooves up.

“Errrr…” Mac’s voice hushed her. “Ya sure…?” He asked. Fluttershy wasn’t sure if this was better or worse. He seemed uncertain, just like she was.

“I’m sorry Macintosh,” she pulled her mane around and covered her face with it, “I didn’t mean to be so forward… I’m… um…”

“Errr uh… well.” He grinned and rubbed a hoof against the back of his head, “I’ve certainly thought about it. Just surprise ya asked first.” He chuckled.

Fluttershy let her mane fall away from her face. He had thought about it. Ooooh Rarity was right.

“Ya really wanna?” He asked her politely. She thought carefully. While Rarity had been very graphic with her descriptions, she had made clear how important it also was for two lovers to share a moment of complete physical connection. They were lovers. She loved Mac dearly and shown him how much she loved him for six months. It was time. She had disregarded sex long enough.

But she was still nervous about it. They had to touch… those things together. She had never had sex before. What if it hurt? There had to be something great about it if Rarity went gaga over it. Well, she had been a virgin long enough, and who else would she trust to pluck her flower than Macintosh?

“I do… but…” She looked away in embarrassment. She hoped being a virgin didn’t make him think differently of her. She wouldn’t be surprised if Mac had had lots of sex in the past. Just look at him! Rarity was right when she said he was one of the hunkiest and sexiest stallions in Ponyville. Maybe it would be good for her to have an experienced pony help her through her first time. “I’ve… um… never done this before…” She squinted, refusing to look at him in fear of his negative reaction.

“Actually…” Mac spoke up, “neither have I.” She looked directly at him, but he had averted his eyes. A look of pure embarrassment was wrought across his face. He almost looked ashamed.

Big Macintosh a virgin? Fluttershy would have never thought such a thing could be a fact.

But that changed everything. She found a good portion of her fear had disappeared. They were both virgins. He was just as unfamiliar with sex as she was. It had suddenly turned into a very special moment. Fluttershy reached up and used her little hooves to turn his head towards her.

“Macintosh, I love you.” She said straight up with a little more confidence found upon the discovery. “I want you…” she paused and looked into his eyes very lovingly, “I want you to make love to me.” It wasn’t a demand. It was a request. One that Mac found no means to deny with how much pure hearted desire filled Fluttershy’s eyes.

“I… love you to Fluttershy.” He answered as he felt a wave of passion overtake him.

He caressed her face gently and drew it towards him. She closed her eyes and let him guide her as her lightly planted his lips on hers.

This kiss was different. It was new to Fluttershy. Usually they kissed very lightly and cutely, never going much beyond. Mac’s kiss was strong, and she felt inclined to fire every bit of his passion right back to him.

Was she doing it right? It’s not like they could just have sex on the spot. They had to be in the mood. She had to be doing it right because it felt right.

“Oh Macintosh.” Fluttershy quietly moaned as he picked her up and lay on his back, placing her on his chest. She kissed him again, running her hooves over his powerful muscles. He gently stoked her mane as he kissed her back. Their kissing turned into more lip sucking than innocent kissing. All the restraints were coming off. Fluttershy giggled as their mouths became deeper involved.

This felt so good! If this felt amazing what was the actual sex going to feel like?

Mac suddenly pulled her away. The two were panting and blushing. This was far more than they had ever done and neither wanted to stop.

“Uh, Fluttershy?” Mac spoke with a hint of embarrassment.

“Yes Mac?” She said with a dreamy look in her eyes.

“Are ya ready?” He seemed hesitant and looked over her shoulder.

“Go ahead M—,” She turned around as she answered and froze.

Mac was certainly ready. Fluttershy’s eyes grew so wide they almost overtook her face. “Big” Macintosh was a very well deserved name. “Oh my…,” She squeaked. It was literally almost as long as her tiny body from neck to plot. She looked down at her lower regions and frantically glanced between the two. She was supposed to fit THAT inside her? This was going to hurt.

“Fluttershy?”

“Um…,” She shook her head. No. She didn’t care. They were going to do this. She would endure for him, or at least try for him. It was the effort that counted. “Yes.” She turned and looked at him with determination. “Please.” She added. Mac smiled. He looked around and spotted a small, soft, square bale of hay nearby.

“Here.” Mac stood, trying not to poke her as he did, “On this.” He grabbed the bale and tugged it over. Fluttershy was anxious. This was really about to happen. They were really about to have sex. She was really about to have something pushed inside of her that probably didn’t fit at all.

“Like this?” She asked as she leaned forward and rested her stomach on the bale, placing her front hooves on the bale as well, and keeping her hind legs on the floor. She was completely at his mercy now, presenting him the prize. He took a moment to respond. The moment made Fluttershy feel more relaxed. Mac was clearly nervous too. He didn’t even have to assure her, she knew he’d be gentle.

Mac removed his yoke and slowly moved towards her and stood over her from behind. His shadow completely shaded her from the glow of the oil lamps. He leaned his head down and whispered to her.

“Ready?” He asked. Fluttershy took a deep breath and exhaled, relaxing her body completely.

“I am.” She replied.

“Okay…,” Mac slowly pressed his stomach gently to her back and laid his hooves over her shoulders. He took care not to press his weight down upon her as he put himself in position.

Fluttershy remained relaxed, but waited anxiously.

Then she felt it press lightly against her.

“EEP!” She squeaked and blushed.

“You alright?” Mac paused and asked.

“Yes, please continue,” she answered with slight shivers. She braced herself as she felt him push forward. She shivered as the way parted for him and he was right at the entrance. “AH!” She yelped as the first bit of pressure arrived. Her wings unfolded and her face grew extremely hot as he slowly pushed a little further in. “Ah…eee!!!” Her voice squeaked incredibly high. Mac halted.

“Is it too much?” He asked out of pure concern. She was touched every time he asked. He clearly wanted the sex, but he didn’t forget his concern for her.

“N—n—no… Keep going,” she assured him. Her voice was shaky. Her body was reacting to a new feeling. He was only a little ways inside her, but the pressure was already unbelievable. However, it was accompanied by an incredible feeling unlike any she had ever felt before. “Don’t stop, I’ll be fine.”

“Okay…,” Mac nodded and pushed further.

“Ah…ah…ahhhhhaaaaahhhhh,” Fluttershy grimaced and clutched the hay bale. “AH! AHHHHH!!!!!” She suddenly wailed. It hurt. It hurt a lot, but the pain was being completely balanced out by an intense wave of pleasure. Mac paused again. Fluttershy panted and shuddered as she felt him inside her. There was so much. “Are you… all the way in?” She asked.

“Err… Nnnope… only about a third.” Mac bit his lip as he replied.

A third?! She already felt like she was filled to the brim!

“Just a little more…,” she squeaked. Mac hesitated, but granted her request. He slowly inched himself forward.

“OOOOooooooo… AAAHHHH!!!!!!!!” Fluttershy cried out. “Ahhh…aaaaaaaaaahhhhhh…” Her tongue hung out of her mouth as her voice dropped multiple pitches in seconds and her voice disappeared into a moan. The pressure was still there, but the pleasure had grown stronger. Mac tried to push again, but she moved forward instead. “EEEEEEE!!!!!” she squeaked. Fluttershy’s wings stiffened out at her sides as she moaned out loud. The pleasure had grown incredibly strong. It was the greatest thing she had ever felt in her life. It felt so good, tears were squeaking out of her eyes.

“That’s as far as I’m getting’,” Mac halted as looked her over from above. “You’re okay?” he asked, a little concerned upon seeing her tears. His fears subsided when he saw the tears take a wide angle to get around an enormous smile on her face.

“Macintosh… oh Macintosh it feels… ah! So good!” She blushed furiously and released a heavy sigh of delight. Mac released his own sigh, but his was of relief.

“Then let’s try a few…,” he said as he replaced his hooves on her shoulders. He slowly pulled back. She squeaked and moaned in pure bliss, but also grunted and wailed as if in pain. She was just so small and he was just so big. She felt so good when he was inside her, but when he moved she could feel just how strained her insides were.

“Oh…! Ah…!” She flinched and shivered as he slowly pushed back in. “Oh Macintosh…” She moaned as he got back to the pleasure spot. “YIPE!” But she stiffened and grimaced as he moved again. Mac hesitated with each light thrust. She was loving it, but it was clearly painful at points.

She wanted it to last as long as she could bear. She wasn’t just doing this for the hell of it. This was their moment. This was not only the first time either of them had had sex, this was the first time they had made love. They were sharing the deepest physical connection a mare and stallion could share. That fact alone held so much meaning for them both.

Mac pushed into her one more time to give her one last spike of pleasure.

“Oooooooooo…,” She cooed, bit her lip, and inhaled sharply. Mac leaned his head down and nuzzled her lightly behind the ear.

“I love you Fluttershy,” he whispered.

“I… love you… too… Macintosh…,” she said between heavy breaths. Mac smiled and carefully pulled out. Fluttershy twitched and flinched as he slowly removed himself. When he was finally entirely out, she exhaled and wobbled to her hooves. “Oh… ah… ee…,” her body shuddered as she turned away from the hay bale and took a few steps. She couldn’t walk without taking wide swinging steps with her hind legs that had a small limp in them. “Oh dear…” She swayed and plopped down on the ground. The back half of her body felt a whole lot wider. “That was… oooohhhhhh…,” she sighed delightfully.

Mac chuckled and made his way over to her, lying beside her as she regained herself. She frowned as he gently rubbed his neck against hers.

“Sorry that… I didn’t get you off,” she apologized. She never expected how intense the initial sensation would be. The pressure and pleasure were both incredible, but she couldn’t bear it for very long.

“I don’t care,” Mac reassured her, “we made love.” He rested his head on the ground beside hers. “I’m happy.”

“Aw…,” she smiled wider than ever before. He was right. It was a sloppy and somewhat awkward first attempt, but they did it. They had sex. They made love as lovers.

They were both no longer virgins and both felt closer than ever. Now they just had to work on it a little.

“Fluttershy?” Mac blinked as her head began to wobble.

“I’m… fine…” she said right as her face plopped down into the hay. Mac was alarmed at first, but upon closer inspection she was breathing steadily. She was really worn out. He body rose and fell evenly as she curled up and sighed happily.

Mac simply smiled and gently draped his hoof over her little body.

“Sleep well,” he whispered into her ear as he curled his body around her and rested his head next to hers.

--- The End ---

Author's Note

sigh... i wrote pony sex again >_<

But i'm sure the sharp contrast between this sex and the soarindash sex was very obvious.

I didn't feel quite as dirty writing this because it was about something meaningful that we (hopefully) all go through at some point. I definitely wasn't a superstar the first few times.

Sex isn't just about the pleasure. When you have someone you truly love, its a form of trust and the is the closest connection you can share with a significant other. I hope i was able to convey that :)