The Mouth of A Super Model...
Author's Note
This is my first purely romance fic. I feel like I went Mace Windu on this. Like I hovered just on the edge of the Dark side.
Anyhow Colgate and Fleur and nearly blank slates. As this ship continues I will be developing them into an interest couple.
Please do not hesitate to unleash a torrent of your feels. All I ask is you comment, even if you have to something bad to say...just say it.
Thank to that piece of crap Tidal for editing. If you find errors go to his page with torches and pitch forks...
The Mouth of A Super Model...
The Mouth of a Super Model:
“As always you never cease to amaze me. I don’t know how you do it, Spike. Your teeth are in flawless condition.”
Spike closed his mouth and made some awkward movements to relax his jaw. He smiled confidently.
“It’s a dragon thing, Colgate. A dragon is born to last. From our scales to our teeth, we are gifted with devilish good looks till we die.”
Colgate giggled and lifted him out of her chair.
“No Spike, you’re the only good looking dragon I know. The other ones are mean and ugly.”
Spike puffed out his chest and leaned against the door.
“Look Colgate just say it. You wanna’ date me. I see the way you look at my teeth.”
Colgate smiled playfully as she motioned for him to leave.
“Oh, Spike, just get out of here will ya’.”
She held a hoof to her heart and gave a look of pain and sadness.
“Besides we all know it would never work… only one mare has ever caught your eye!”
Spike blushed and pulled out his coin purse.
“Oh shut it will you. Don’t have to let the whole darn office hear. How much do I owe you this time?”
She walked up to him and began to push him out while rolling her eyes.
“Spike I have told you countless times. You don’t ever need to pay. Trust me when I say seeing your teeth is payment enough. Also I am the only pony who works here now, dummy.”
Her eyes grew wide in horror as she thought of the teeth she had seen.
“Jeez… with Pinkie Pie’s parties going on nearly every weekend for the last couple of years the quality of teeth in this town has died. They may look white on the front… but sweet Celestia… the rotting and the cavities. The plague build up and tea stains… It’s– it’s torture on the eyes.”
Spike shrugged.
“If you say so, Colgate. I feel bad for not paying though. Just know that if you ever need help with anything I’m just down the road.”
She nodded and watched the little dragon walk out the door. A large smile grew on her face as she stared up at the office clock. It was only two in the afternoon and she had finished all of her appointments for the day. After some paper work she could get off early.
“Oh this is perfect! I might actually be able to go to the spa! Celestia know I haven’t been in so long…”
Ponyville Spa:
Lotus Blossom and Aloe pulled out their finest lotions and oils. The made sure the entire spa was suited for their next guest. Their VIP client and good friend Rarity had been kind enough to inform them that Ponyville was going to be visited by the one and only Fleur dis lee. The spa ponies knew that short of the princesses, Fleur was considered to be the most beautiful pony in Equestria. Even those who thought her a shallow and dim witted model could not deny her beauty. The twins knew that should she enjoy her visit at the spa, she would more than likely discuss it with ponies in the upper echelons of Canterlot Society. With a single comment she alone could turn the Ponyville Day Spa into a target for the rich.
Lotus placed the chilled cider next to a platter containing the freshest fruits and vegetables. The ponies had a contract with Applejack who personally managed and grew produce for the spa. She sighed as she gently placed down some candles.
“Perfect.”
Aloe had ensured the baths had maintained the perfect temperature. Hot enough to soothe and relax any stress, yet not hot enough to strip away natural oils from the coat. She placed another tray of produce and some cider in the corner next to Octavia whom she smiled at.
“Miss Octavia, thank you once again for gracing our spa with your music. Should you require anything at all please let us know. Just because Fleur is here does not mean we ignore other important guests.”
Octavia shook her head and smiled.
“Aloe don’t worry yourself about me. I know all too well how important it is to impress the elite when given the opportunity. When Fleur arrives Octavia will no longer be at your spa. Only my music.”
She smiled at the musician then walked over to her sister. They both gave each other the same nervous yet ecstatic grins. As if it were planned they jumped and squealed in perfect unison.
“Fleur De Lis is coming here!!!”
Within a few moments, the white coated super model gracefully opened the door.
“Hello–”
With physics defying speed that would make Pinkie Pie proud, the sisters grabbed Fleur and led her to a large and cushioned chair. Fleur stared at the ponies in shock. They grinned at her for the exact amount of time it took to make things awkward. Aloe suddenly lost her grin and became near emotionless. She held her head high and seemed to put on an upper class attitude.
“Miss Fleur… seeing as this is your first time here in Ponyville. It has been decided by the sacred spirits of the spa culture, that you are to receive the royal special. Normally only alicorns receive this honor. Be proud Fleur De Lis of Canterlot, be proud.”
Fleur tried to shift out of the seat but the spa ponies held her down. Her eyes traveled back and forth between them with an expression of fear.
“But I’m not here for–”
Both sisters grew wide eyes and nearly screamed.
“Unacceptable! Seven hours spa! No breaks!”
Fleur found herself nearly slammed down onto a table. She knew Ponyville was different from Canterlot high society but she quickly became concerned on how different. Her mind wandered and began to ponder just how rough the Royal Treatment was. In under one minute the ponies had her covered in massage oils and were rubbing away vigorously at her back while also massaging her hooves. Soon her fears washed away and were replaced by the serene sound of cello. Fleur closed her eyes and relaxed her muscles.
“I know this music. There was a dazzling cellist in Canterlot who used to play music such as this. Mmmm. Oh right there yes. Any how she had the most graceful posture. Like a charcoal goddess demanding my attention with her seductive song….mmmm.”
The music stopped for a brief moment and a faint cough came from somewhere. With her eyes still closed Fleur blushed at what she had said.
“I do hope you two will not repeat anything said while under spa influence.”
The two sisters nodded even though they knew the pony under their hooves couldn’t see. Lotus replied softly.
“Of course not. What happens in our spa stays in our spa. Why, once we had Nightmare Moon herself in this very room and didn’t tell a soul. Most ponies believe that she returned when Twilight defeated her…nope. Poor mare had the tensest shoulders I have felt.”
Fleur smiled as they continued to knead into her back. The two ponies had already impressed her. The massage she currently was enjoying felt like nothing she had ever experienced. Each rub, push, and jab turned her muscles to mush. Having been used to the treatment in Canterlot, she thought she had the best. The massages she received in the city were bland. They sometimes made her feel like a piece of meat getting slathered. Lotus and Aloe had indeed made her feel as if she too were an alicorn princess.
Hours slowly went by as positions were changed, her hooves were shined, and her mane was washed, conditioned and styled. Near the end of the 7 hour treatment Fleur had become even more radiant. She relaxed in a chair as the royal special ended. Aloe provided a tight and slow massage of her neck while Lotus massaged Fleur’s rear hooves. The model inhaled slowly then spoke.
“This is positively the best treatment I have ever had. I feel… so right. I literally cannot think of one thing that causes me stress… I don’t think I have any. I know this: I am going to come here every weekend. Damn my schedule. Your hooves are like heavenly instruments girls.”
Fleur peeked one eye open to see Lotus silently screaming at her sister. Upon noticing she was being watched Lotus immediately regained her composure. Fleur smirked.
“Don’t worry yourself Lotus. I’m well aware that you both have gone to great attempts to impress me. Rest assured you both have my business. This treatment is worth the cost of travel at the very least. I am glad you two forced me against my will. To think I came to Ponyville only looking for a dentist… still need to find one.”
The spa ponies looked at one another and then back to Fleur.
“We can get you a dentist right now.”
Colgate’s Office:
“It’s not fair!”
Colgate slammed a hoof down on her desk. The impact barely nudged the large pile of paperwork next to her. What seemed like the perfect day to relax had turned into a horrible day of dealing with insurance companies and dental suppliers. She leaned back in her chair and rubbed her head with her hooves. It was a little past nine in the evening and she was nowhere near done.
“This is what I get for firing my secretary… drunk or not at least she got some of this done… ”
It did not take long for her mind to wander. As she stared up at the ceiling she wondered what had happened to her life. According to her parents this was success. A smart young mare who owned her own practice. While she was not filthy rich she was certainly well off for a single pony. However Colgate didn’t care much for money. She gave that a second thought. Perhaps it was that she never could use her money for anything pleasurable. Ever since Berry was fired she had been running the whole show by herself for the last four months. Whether it was seeing a movie, going out to eat, or even shopping for anything other than groceries. Her life had become dull.
While lost her thoughts she heard a knocking at her door. She sat up straight and wondered who could be visiting so late.
“We’re closed… like five hours ago closed. Come back tomorrow!”
The knocking continued.
“’Kay then you just keep knocking your little hoof off! I’m still closed.”
For a moment the knocking stopped. Then it continued even louder. She hated repetition. She had to repeat herself to ponies all the time. Constantly telling them to brush, floss, and to use mouthwash. She had to tell them multiple times before they understood that they bucked up their teeth. Minuette grabbed a tooth drill from her drawer and violently stood up. She started a brisk march towards the door.
“Have you ever seen a pissed off dentist? Would you like for me to drill the buck out of your face? I’ve got a stack of paperwork the size of Celestia’s fat flank and you are just going to keep knocking like some half-witted pile of gryphon droppings? You just wait you stupid little pony. Just wait until I ‘open’ shop for you. I’ll clean your bucking teeth and feed ‘em to you. I’ll rip every single one of you–”
She opened the door. Standing before was Fleur De Lis. Colgate watched as the moonlight danced off of her shining white coat. Her Pink mane flowed freely in the wind carrying the scent of the vanilla oils the spa ponies used. Aloe and Lotus were cowering in fear behind Fleur. Lotus timidly stepped forward.
“H-hello Colgate… G-good evening. So sorry to disturb you but Miss Fleur was in need of a dentist and well… Normally we would not disturb you… however this is her first time in Ponyville… You do know of Miss–”
Colgate sighed and face hooved.
“Yes I do know who she is. Miss Fleur I apologize about my rant there… I run this entire practice on my own and well… the stress gets to me sometimes. Normally I would have chased you half a block away while screeching like a demon dentist from the depths of Tartarus… but… please come in. Aloe, Lotus I will take it from here. You girls owe me a massage… or I don’t know… at least an hour in the sauna.”
The spa ponies smiled nervously as they released their super model to the dentist. They watch as Fleur entered the office alone. Aloe turned to her sister.
“Should we have stayed with her? What if Colgate was serious? What if-“
Lotus shut her sister up by cover her mouth.
“She’ll be fine. Colgate is a business mare just like us. Fleur’s satisfaction is just as crucial to her as it is to us. Why else would she take a client five hours after close?”
The Chair:
“Again I am sorry Fleur. It’s been a long day…”
Fleur was already happy that she was once more in a chair. Others may find that strange but the experience the spa ponies provided made chairs in Ponyville all the more inviting. In fact Fleur was strangely excited. She waved a hoof at Colgate.
“Don’t worry yourself about. I felt the same way when Fancy Pants and I parted ways. I told him that I needed to lead my own successful company under my own name. He burst into a rage and had the audacity to tell me that he owns me. I may seem like some mere super model but on that day I held the wrath and fury of marekind. I do believe I left him a nasty scar. Disgusting excuse for a stallion… Oh dear I am sorry. How rude of me. I am Fleur De Lis and you are? Colgate?”
Colgate scratched the back of her head while replying.
“Well actually my name is Minuette. Ponies call me Colgate because well…”
She unenthusiastically waved her hoof around the office then continued.
“I didn’t mind because it was less embarrassing than my other nicknames. Minute Maid, Minty fresh–”
Fleur laughed out loud. She tried to stop and even covered her muzzle. Colgate rolled her eyes.
“Get it all out now. Wouldn’t want you to laugh while I’m in your mouth would you?”
Fleur laugh even harder. It was a vibrant and songlike laugh that would have entranced Colgate had she not realized how inappropriate her previous statement was. She shook her head and sat up straighter.
“I’m sorry Fleur that was not professional. Again it’s been a long–”
“Nonsense! Oh my! First I get massaged to the point where I couldn’t even speak correctly and now there is you. It was rude of me to laugh at your nicknames. Minuette is a beautiful name though Colgate fits you just as well.”
Colgate blushed at her compliment. Fleur continued.
“In any case. Let’s discuss why I am here. As I mentioned I have split away from Fancy Pants and am going to start up my own fashion line as well as my own magazine. I have two weeks until a photo shoot for the magazine and I need to prepare. So I need you to bleach my teeth. I hope I can trust you as I trust Aloe and Lotus.”
Colgate furrowed her brow. She gently leaned the chair back. Fleur was now facing the ceiling.
“Let’s not get ahead of ourselves. I’m going to check out your teeth before we do anything. Might want to squint your eyes a bit. I’m gonna’ blind you with my evil dentist lamp.”
Colgate moved the lamp over Fleur and positioned it perfectly. She now appeared to fleur as a faded silhouette. Colgate gave Celestia a quick prayer. She had no idea what Fleur’s mouth held.
“Alrighty. Open up.”
Colgate held only one thought.
Fleur De Lis… I am in love with your mouth.
Colgate had done dental work on her goddesses. She had done dental work on nobles and she had done work on Spike. None of those creatures had mouths that were so entrancing. It was blasphemous but Colgate didn’t care. This mouth was her new idol and would forever receive her prayers. She eyed Fleur’s impeccable teeth. The super model pony had teeth of a perfect and natural white. Not the fake effect than celebrities of today were fond of. They were truly healthy and perfect. No plague build up, no cavities, no stains, no rot… perfect. Colgate’s breathing quickened and her mouth quickly became dry. She felt her horn heat up and could not tell if it was from the operatory light or from some primal desire that was hidden deep inside her. Colgate’s eyes analyzed the shiny incisors that seemed to tease her. She seductively bit her lip as she lifter her explorer with her magic. Ever so carefully she caressed Fleur’s front teeth.
“Your enamel is so strong…”
Fleur squinted against the light’s wrath. Replied as best she could.
“Shank you.”
No… thank YOU…
Colgate gulped as she prepared herself. She slipped the head of her mouth mirror slowly into Fleur’s mouth. The very thought of being inside of it caused her to shudder.
“Just gonna peek at them from behind… see if they are hiding anything from mama…”
Fleur looked confused. She was so focused on the light that tortured her she hardly paid any attention to what Colgate had said.
The mouth mirror revealed that Fleur’s incisors were perfect from front to back. Pushing the mirror deeper revealed the same for her canines. At this point Colgate was working up a sweat. She was far along and could now see past Fleur’s perfectly shaped canines. This was incredible for the dentist. It was as if she were experiencing the pleasure of good teeth all over again.
“Ok Fleur I’m gonna need you to do your best to open your mouth a little wider okay? I need to check…further in…”
Fleur acknowledged by grunt.
Her mouth opened just enough more to allow Colgate to see her wolf’s tooth. The minute it caught her eye she blushed and her eyes went wide. The heat in her horn went from warm to on fire. Small beads of sweat formed on her brow. She unknowingly giggle in a seductive manner.
“He he. O Fleur if you only knew how cute your wolf’s tooth was…”
“Eksoosh meh?”
“Molar time, baby!”
Colgate grinned and positioned herself closer to Fleur. She adjust herself so she could get the perfect angle to check out Fleur’s premolars.
Spotless… even where all the dirty stuff goes down.
Simply seeing the powerful and flawless bone structures caused Colgate to close her eyes and rest her elbows right next Fleur. She exhaled.
“Uh Cohgate?”
“Hmm?”
“Wat ah oo doin?”
“Deciding on my next course of action.”
“Can yoo tak out dis thing?”
“Oh sure.”
Colgate removed the explorer and mouth mirror from Fleur’s mouth. Fleur noticed that Colgate looked flushed and was sweating.
She immediately became worried.
“Oh no. Colgate is it that bad? Was there some spot I missed? I-I always brush, floss, and rinse twice a day! I never drink tea or coffee! Can you whiten them? You can whiten them right? You know fix this?”
Colgate’s perverted thought of Fleur’s teeth faded away. The super model was nervous and strangely more appealing. Colgate was about to tell her but a thought came to mind.
If I tell her that she doesn’t need any work than she won’t ever come back… Her mouth won’t ever come back…
“Listen Fleur, your mouth seems to be in good condition… but…”
Fleur leaned in and held an anxious look.
“I just can’t approve whitening them. I need to schedule you for a proper cleaning and then we will go from there. You should know that I have nothing but the upmost care for my clients and want nothing more than your mouth.”
Fleur raised an eyebrow. Colgate nearly jolted out of her seat. She covered her awkward behavior by walking to grab paperwork.
“Your mouth’s health! That’s what’s most important. The health of your mouth. So uh… just um go ahead and stop by tomorrow. I’ll book you after close so there are no interruptions. 4:30 sound good?”
Fleur nodded and Colgate smiled.
“Excellent. I’ll walk you out.”
She moved the lamp aside and assisted Fleur out of the chair. As the ponies walked Fleur talked of her concern for her dental health. She asked questions and Colgate spewed the same generic answers all her years as a dentist had taught her. Thought the only thing on her mind was the mouth of the pony next to her.
As they reached the door Colgate opened it and motioned Fleur out. Fleur stood at the entrance and turned to face Colgate.
“Thank you very much for seeing me this late, Colgate. I truly appreciate this. Till tomorrow?”
Colgate was staring at Fleur’s mouth. She shook her head and smiled.
“Sorry dentist’s habit. Of course. Have a good evening, Miss Fleur. Don’t worry. I’ll get your mouth good.”
Fleur’s white cheeks turned a light rose color. She giggled lightly and began to canter away.
Colgate felt like she wanted to chase after her, throw her down in her chair, and watch her mouth.
“Fleur De Lis. I want your mouth…”
Author's Note
So here it is. I apologize to those of you who read my blog saying this would have been uploaded yesterday.
My editor decided to watch Game of Thrones and ignore me.
Anyway I hope you enjoy this chapter. I promise the dental fun will continue and get even crazier as the chapters go on. Until then please leave me some feedback. I take every thing you have to say into consideration! Except for Tidal... because he sucks...
Stay Shiny people...
Remember to Floss....
Remember to Floss:
Colgate twirled the phone cord with her magic.
“Listen Berry, I need to talk to you about a lot of things. Things I can’t… shouldn’t tell you over the phone. You know my hours. Stop by as soon as possible… please.”
With her head on the table she hung on the phone. Her gut had mixed feelings. Berry Punch was her friend and at one point her mare friend. It was a beautiful relationship until Colgate found out about Berry’s drinking. Some days Berry would flirt with customers over the phone. Other days she would yell at Colgate and say terrible things. Things about Colgate being a bad dentist and how she enjoyed flossing at a perverted level. Despite the problems she still cared about Berry and was willing to give her another shot. She also had a stack of paperwork that was nearly the height of a small pony.
Colgate used her magic to place the paper in a neat stack. As she ran through her usually closing duties her thoughts focused in on one thing.
Fleur. 4:30. Mouth.
Fleur’s mouth had an intoxicating effect on the mare. Of course she knew that her obsession would more than likely seem weird, however; Colgate did not care. The lust of a pony’s mouth was no different to her than the lust of a pony’s flank.
What’s wrong with liking her mouth? Normal. That’s normal? Yes. Other ponies would be admiring her eyes and her mane and… it’s no different. I am perfectly fine. I’m normal.
Colgate continued to justify herself to herself while unknowingly sprucing up her office for Fleur. The table in the waiting room was wiped clean and held the latest magazines. Any dead, dying, or bland looking plants were replaced by fresh flowers that were blooming and vibrant. Colgate’s personal dental tools were receiving a sanitizing bath in boiling water. A small stick of incense was lit and filled the office with the sweet vanilla aroma. Everything was made to be perfect like Fleur’s mouth. After a few minutes Colgate heard a knock at her door.
I told her 4:30! She shouldn't be here now… I’m not ready!
Colgate rushed over and stood before the door. She took in a deep breath and exhaled. A happy grin found its way on her face as she opened the door. The grin then fell and she found herself confused.
“Berry?”
The plum color mare smirked.
“Well you did say as soon as possible. Considering everything you look good.”
“What do you mean I look good? What the buck are you doing here Berry?”
Berry smirked as she brushed past Colgate. She maneuvered around like a purring cat until she found what she was looking for. Colgate heard Berry sigh as she found the stack of paperwork.
“Jeez Colgate. See what happens when you ditch your mare friend? I could be drunk off my flank and have Derpy’s eyes and still finish more paperwork than you!”
Colgate walked around Berry and started to push her out the office. Berry blushed.
“Back less than five minutes and you can’t keep your hooves off me. Most employees would charge for sexual harassment…lucky for you I always enjoyed your hooves on training.”
“Damn it Berry! Not Now! I can’t have you hear when she- “
Berry twirled around until her head was now pushing back against Colgate’s. Berry raised a brow.
“She? Who is she?”
The dentist pony stopped pushing Berry and fell back on her haunches. She nervously shuffled her hooves. Berry Scoffed.
“You already have another mare friend!? Well buck me Colgate! I know it’s been a few months but damn it I didn’t think you would just go and buck the next pony who smiles at you. Fine I’ll leave since I’m always a problem!”
Berry started to storm towards the door. Colgate screamed after her.
“Berry don’t go! Please!”
The plum pony turned to face her friend. Colgate was still sitting and she looked scared.
“Look she isn’t my mare friend. She is Fleur De Lis. The most attractive supermodel on the bucking planet. I’m nervous. It’s not because she has the best damn flank I have ever seen. It’s not because she has a perfect mane and hooves. It’s… Well… I am in love with her mouth.”
The silence that followed was deafening. Both ponies stared at each other for a minute long eternity. Berry had known Colgate longer than most ponies. The only skeleton Colgate had in her closet was that she had a rather strong fetish for ponies’ mouths. Berry never understood it. Maybe it was because she was an overly passionate dentist. Maybe it was because she was really just kind of creepy. Berry didn’t know but, what she did know was that Colgate was trying to score… a mouth. Berry burst into laughter and began to roll on the floor.
“I’m serious Berry! I have never been so attracted to something in my life. I nearly fainted on top of her when working. It was perfect. I even thought blasphemous things. Berry! Seriously listen to me!”
Berry pointed a hoof at her.
“Colgate! You are the best! Bucking weirder than manticore sex but that’s ok! You know I was honestly jealous and angry too. I probably still am but by Celestia’s sunny plot I am going to help you score some super model mouth. Oh buck just saying it sounds funny!”
Colgate lowered her head. While she always justified her mouth fetish she was still sensitive about it. Berry noticed her friends gloomy face.
“Oh cheer up will you! You aren’t that weird! I hear Twilight has sex with her books! Don’t’ believe me? Just ask Spike! I heard that Rainbow has a blow up doll of Spitfire in one of the clouds above Ponyville. Trust me Colgate. You aren’t the only pony with some weird kinky fetish. In any case I’ve got your back only because I have to see where this goes.”
Colgate stood and walked to her friend. She hugged Berry tight.
“Thanks Berry. It means a lot to me.”
“No problem. Now when is she supposed to be here?”
“In ten minutes.”
“Perfect.”
Fleur made her way to the dental office from Rarity’s shop. She had seen Rarity’s work and knew that if any pony could help her start a fashion company it was Rarity. Deep down Fleur did not care at all for creating designs. She knew that was not her strong suit and figured having Rarity on her team would fix everything. It would provide Fleur’s new company the edge it would need to crush the competition and give Rarity everything she could ever want. The designer would never have to worry about impressing the high lords of fashion as she would become one. Fleur was happy that Rarity accepted the offer so quickly because it only left her with two more ponies to convince. If her visit to Ponyville goes as she planned she will leave with a new company and whiter teeth.
She approached the door to the office and raised her hoof. Before any knocking could commence the door opened and Fleur was greeted by Berry.
“Miss Fleur welcome! Please come in we have been expecting you!”
Fleur walked past Berry and looked around the office in confusion. Everything had been cleaned, rearranged, or altered in some way. While the new look was nice, the rapid change confused Fleur. Had Colgate gone out of her way for a simple dental appointment What was with the sudden presence of Berry? Fleur looked to Berry and politely nodded at her.
“I do not believe we have met miss-“
“Berry Punch! It’s a pleasure to meet you Miss Fleur. I’m sure Colgate is as honored to have you here as I am. I am her assistant. Whether it is paperwork or dental work I am here to help her.”
“Pleasure to meet you Berry. Colgate made no mention of an assistant. It is nice to know she does not drown herself in her work alone.”
Berry eyed Fleur from head to hoof and liked what she saw. Most ponies had seen the mare in magazines or the news. Berry enjoyed watching her up close. She directed Fleur to one of the comfortable cushions available in the waiting lounge. Fleur followed along even more confused. She thought she was coming after they had closed. She wondered why exactly she had to wait and what Colgate was doing.
“So Fleur may I grab you something? Water or a magazine?”
“No thank you Berry. Not to sound rude but, why am I waiting? Colgate led me to believe that I was to be the only pony she was meeting after the office closed.”
Berry smirked.
“Don’t you worry Fleur! Colgate is just getting ready. To be honest I think she is a little nervous around you.”
Fleur cocked her head to the side. Her curiosity peaked.
“Why would she be nervous?”
Berry invited herself onto the cushion next to Fleur. She spoke like a filly spilling gossip while showing off a devious smile.
“Well you are Fleur De Lis! You are the mare of mares! You are no mere supermodel! No, you are the closest thing to a goddess without actually being a goddess.”
Fleur blushed at that. The blush intensified as Berry leaned in closer to her and continued to shower her in compliments.
“What I mean by that is, that you are not looked at in the same manner as a pony would look at Celestia or Luna. Like Celestia you have a coat as bright as the cleanest snow in the north. You share the same jaw dropping figure that Luna has. You mane is smooth and flows in the wind with a natural beauty. When most ponies look at you they see some of the best features that a pony can have. The only other ponies to have those feature are deities. Most ponies have respect though. They don’t look at Celestia or Luna as sex symbols. They look to them as ponies today look at the nude sculptures from ancient Preek culture. Sure those sculptures are naked mares and stallions but, we look at them as art and not for sexual pleasure. You?”
Berry leaned in even closer. So close that Fleur could feel her breath on her neck.
“You aren’t a goddess. You are just the finest specimen of pony ever to grace this world. So most ponies look at you in the exact opposite way. They want you. Mares, stallions, and everything in between can’t resist the perfection that is Fleur De Lis.”
Fleur cautiously turned her head to look at the ponies who was mere inches away. Berry was watching her with the most lustful look she had seen and that was saying something. Fleur felt dirty just receiving that stare. She bit her lip then chuckled like a scared filly.
“Uh. T-thank you? I think?”
Berry bit her own lip but in a seductive manner.
“You are welcome.”
Fleur shuffled awkwardly to add a few inches between them. Berry just turned and immediately closed their distance. Fleur fell on her back and Berry stood on top of her with all four legs trapping Fleur right under the mare’s lustful gaze. Fleur smiled nervously.
“So um… Colgate?”
Berry lowered her head. Fleur thought that she was going to attempt to kiss her. Instead berry stopped exactly one inch away from doing so. Strangely enough it was then that Fleur noticed that Berry actually smelled like Berries.
“Oh Fleur don’t worry. Colgate is just nervous because you are a celebrity. She doesn’t want to do to you want some ponies do… She just wants to impress you so terribly bad. So, bad… so…”
“B-berry?”
“So…bad. Just… so naughty…”
Berries eyes were closed now and she was daydreaming right over Fleur. The model felt so scared as she watched the plum pony lick her lips with her eyes shut. Fleur had some idea of what she was daydreaming about.
“BERRY WHAT THE BUCK?! GET OFF OF HER!”
Berry jumped up and fell backwards as dental instruments whizzed past her head. Colgate’s horn glowed with magic. Several different tools levitated around her. One by one they flew at Berry who struggled to dodge them.
“Colgate! Watch-“
“OUT!!! GET OUT BEFORE I TEAR YOU BUCKING TEETH OUT AND SHOVE THEM UP YOUR PLOT!”
Berry galloped out the door as fast as possible. Colgate slammed it shut using her magic and hurried over to Fleur. She help the pony up off the floor.
“Fleur I am so sorry. I can’t even believe what happened. I am such a stupid pony. If you want to leave I’ll understand. Are you hurt? Did she do anything? This is what I get for trying to give her, her job back. Buck me.”
Fleur shook her head and was still flustered from Berry’s antics. She took a chance to regulate her breathing.
“I am fine Colgate. A little shaken by such… bluntness… but fine.”
Colgate walked the pony into her room and sat her down in the chair. She pulled out Fleur’s files and placed them on a table next to her.
“I will get to work ASAP! Then we will see about the condition of your teeth. Just let me grab some other tools. I have some that should be sterilized now.”
Fleur nodded and Colgate exited the room. She cautiously approached the front door and cracked it open just enough. Berry was still their smiling. Colgate looked for any watching ponies and then gave Berry a kiss on the cheek before closing the door. Berry blushed and grinned widely.
“Good luck buddy…”
The Chair (again):
Fleur’s heart rate and mind had settled…mostly. Berry had changed her view on ponies. She knew many ponies had desired her. It was part of being a super model. Her job was to be beautiful and she was damn near perfect at her job. What troubled her was what Berry had said. Did every pony desire like she was some kind of goddess? Did they all view her as the unofficial princess that was buck-able? Fleur tilted her head to watch Colgate enter the room again. The dentist pony smiled and sat next to Fleur. She placed her hooves on the chair and began to lower it into position. As the chair slowly adjusted Fleur spoke.
“Colgate? Are… are you nervous around me?”
Colgate was taken aback by the question. She took a moment to think.
“I suppose I am just a little nervous. I try to treat all my clients the same but, you are… well… you.”
“But why does that make you nervous? Am I intimidating? Haven’t you worked on some of the princesses before?”
“Well yes I have but…”
Fleur sighed and crossed her fore legs in a stressed manner. This worried Colgate. She wondered if she had said something to anger the super model. Carefully Colgate placed a hoof on Fleur’s shoulder.
“Listen Fleur, I didn’t mean to upse-“
“Colgate are you nervous because you find me attractive?”
She retracted her hoof and her eyes grew wide. Her attempts to answer Fleur failed. All the came out of her mouth was a nervous stutter. Colgate was scared.
Oh sweet Celestia… Berry what did you tell her?
Fleur was nearly flat as the chair had reached its position. She turned over to face Colgate as if the chair had been a bed. Her face held the same stressed and stern look. She raised an eyebrow.
“Answer me Colgate.”
Colgate’s face heated up.
This is already awkward… should I just tell her? ‘Oh Fleur you make me nervous because you have a mouth more worthy of worship than all the princesses put together!!!’ Damn it! Colgate are you a bucking idiot?!
“Fleur, you are a very pretty mare. I know for a fact that some ponies melt on the inside when they see you in a magazine or walking down the street. That being said… I am nervous around you because…”
I want to clean your mouth! Floss, rinse, and scape! I want to have Twilight shrink me so I can build a bucking house out of one of your molars and live in that oral heaven you have concealed from me! You’ll never have to fret about your oral health because I’ll handle any oral things you need!!!
“…you are a celebrity. While it’s true that I have done work on the princesses, they are actually down to earth ponies. Even when Luna nearly blew out my eardrums she still managed to seem like a normal pony. You however, I have never met. I don’t know what kind of pony you are. If you aren’t happy with my professional opinion or with the way my office looks, are you going to spread rumors to other Canterlot elite? I don’t mean any disrespect but, you have the power to ruin me if you wanted to.”
Fleur’s stressed look became one of sadness. She looked at Colgate with eyes that put a wide eyed Sweetie Belle to shame.
“Y-you really think I would do that? Ruin your life b-because I didn’t like the way your office looked?”
Oh no please don’t cry. Fleur don’t cry. You might get a salty tear on one of your teeth…and… wow I’m bucked up…
Fleur placed a hoof on Colgate’s shoulder. Her eyes held tears yet burned with beautiful determination.
“Colgate you are right I could destroy you. I could ruin every damn pony who crosses me and that’s the problem. I don’t want you to be nervous. I would never go out of my way to ruin you unless you did something terrible.”
I could do a few terrible things to your mouth…
“I am going to fix this and I would like your help. You’ve been honest with me and you have not tried to… do whatever Miss Berry had planned to do to me… so I would like for you to show me around Ponyville. Introduce me to ponies and help me quell this nervousness that ponies have. For your help I promise that I will do exactly the opposite of what you are nervous about. I will plaster you name around Canterlot as my personal Dentist. You’ll be in the first issue of my magazine and I will even have Rarity design some dresses for you.”
It’s like a date but not a date! Wait that sucks… ugh. Crap!
“Wow I- I’d be honored to Fleur but what about my other appointments? I can’t just cancel on-“
Fleur raised her hoof to silence her.
Damn even the bottom of her hooves are perfect… so clean… so…
“You can and you will. I assure you that when I am done promoting you, you will have more clients than you can handle. I just need you for a few days alright?”
Oh dear Celestia she needs me… I need you too…
Fleur sat back into the proper position and smiled.
“Now Colgate hurry. Get in my mouth and do you thing! We have a town to explore!”
Upon hearing those words Colgate felt heat all over her body. The mare with the perfect mouth just invited her to do her thing in her mouth. Suddenly any and all nervousness left her body and was replaced by sinful and lustful thoughts. She smiled as she turned around in her chair to grab her tools.
Oh I’ll do my thing baby… when I’m done I’m gonna have you in my hooves.
She spun around to face Fleur, her dentist’s mask hid the seductive smile she held.
“Alrighty Fleur open up for me.”
Fleur opened her mouth and looked happy. Colgate stared at the heaven before her.
“Let’s do this.”
Nearly half an hour passed. Colgate’s brow held small beads of sweat and her breathing consisted of deep breathes. Fleur had questioned her if she was ok because it seemed as if the dentist was going to pass out.
I’m just passionate baby… no need to worry. Stress isn’t good for your mouth…
Colgate was finishing up and began to floss Fleur’s mouth. She used her magic to floss as it was the most efficient way. She also did this because Colgate knew what she could do with her floss. Most ponies scheduled regular cleanings because of Colgate’s “floss therapy”. Her flossing gave ponies pleasure in ways they never thought they could get it.
The green string gently made its ways around each of Fleur’s teeth. It passed in between each tooth until the floss was around every single one of them. Colgate smiled.
Get ready Fleur… you’re about to be mine…
Suddenly the floss began to vibrate and move. The string became like a snake that constantly curled around every tooth. The micro vibrations broke up any plaque that Colgate may have missed. Fleur’s eyes grew wide at the sudden feeling then became half lidded with pleasure.
That’s right… Just relaxed and let my little snake work around in your mouth…
The floss began to work up and down on the teeth as well. It pushed ever so slightly on the gums. Hard enough to massage them but, not hard enough to cause any bleeding. Fleur let out the smallest groan of pleasure. Upon realizing what she had done her cheeks burned red and her wide eyes glanced in every direction but Colgate’s.
Well, well, well… some pony likes it when I clean her mouth.
Colgate thought to herself for a moment. She wondered if she could try more with Fleur. The model did seemingly enjoy the magic happening in her mouth. Colgate bit her lip and smiled. The floss began to vibrate a little more. In response Fleur simply closed her eyes. This caused Colgate to smile. Flossing was dirty work that she made enjoyable.
Lucky for you Fleur… I’m a dirty pony…
The floss-er-bation continued for longer than it should have but neither pony complained. Colgate finished by slowly pulling the floss out. The entire string left the same way it came in. It winded out around each tooth until it came out. Fleur exhaled with her eyes shut. While her eyes were closed Colgate leaned in close and whispered.
“Miss Fleur I’m finished.”
Fleur kept her eyes shut and moan again.
“Yes I know but… Why?”
Colgate smirked. She had not expected Fleur to enjoy her flossing so much. It gave the dentist control over the situation. She didn’t speak and gave the model a few moments to realize that she had said. Fleur’s eyes shot open and she jerked out of the chair as fast as Pinkie Pie. She nearly tripped and took a few moments to regain her footing. She still fell to the floor. Colgate walked around to help her up.
“Your legs are probably asleep right? Happens from time to time.”
Fleur didn’t meet her eyes.
“C-Colgate I am sorry that was… I-“
Colgate assisted her back up. When Fleur was standing Colgate had to look up a little. The model was nearly Luna’s height.
“Don’t worry about it Fleur. You just experienced my flossing. I do my best to have every pony leave feeling as if they left Lotus and Aloe’s spa… so you liked it?”
Fleur blushed and cleared her throat.
“Oh uh yes… I certainly do feel… Yes.”
“Good. I always remember to floss my ponies good before they leave because most ponies don’t floss. Now just give me a minute to put away some papers and I’ll take you to the some of the shops around Ponyville. We can talk about your teeth and what not on the way.”
Colgate left the room triumphant while Fleur stood awkwardly and shook her head. She had never felt something so… good? Perhaps that was not the right word. Whatever word she was looking for she knew she wouldn’t find. What word could properly describe feeling satisfied from your dentist? How could one describe that pleasure? It was not the same pleasure a pony gets from visiting the spa. No it was something more intimate…taboo even. The thought made her nervous. The fact that she was now nervous of the very pony that was nervous of her only increased the silent panicking in her head. Many thoughts raced through her mind but one was more prevalent than the others.
Did I just get off to being flossed?
