It is a lovely day in ponyvile until a shady character with a vendetta arrives. A vendetta against who? why princess Celestia of course. For reasons unknown this man want's to punish Celestia. So this enigma goes after the one thing Celestia cares most about. Her people one person that holds a specially warm place in her heart. Princess Celestias Faithful student Twilight Sparkle.

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So yeah that's the plot of this story more will come though I ensure you. Some characters who I listed as Major don't Have a Major role in the first chapter's , but they will in the next two or so. The characters are also humanized maintaining their pony abilities. Such as Rainbow Dash having wings and Twilight being able to use magic.

This is my first Fan Fic EVER as such prepare for some noobish mistakes. I'm apologizing beforehand. I will grow and learn, but I can't do that unless you comment telling me what I did wrong. So Yeah constructive criticism is wanted.