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What do you do when you look around, and your home isn't your home?
Rainbow Dash is lost. Not in the normal sense of lost. She's in Cloudsdale, but it's not the same. She can't figure out why until she visits Ponyville and makes a startling discovery. Will she ever be the same?
(A/N): I like constructive criticism, because it helps my writing. you can be harsh, but not downright rude, things that will help me become a better writer. Thank you :)



2352 words: Estimated 12 minutes to read
3 Chapters:
- What's going on? 2014-06-01 09:17:23 UTC617
- The Games Begin 2014-06-01 09:20:47 UTC818
- the king has arrived 2014-06-09 20:52:21 UTC917