Luna Story

Hi, Insert Clever Name here.

My friend, the one that was writing the story for me, told me one day that he couldn't, at the time, write anything for chapter 3 of Luna Story. I also sort of stopped caring for the story, because I started to hate Self inserts, and seeing how this story is a self insert, the only thing keeping me from cancelling it myself, was the fact it wasn't really MY story, and that everyone else seemed to like it.

He and I were exchanging emails recently about the ending of Luna story, which would have been a twist ending. Basically Luna would wake up, screaming and thrashing, Celestia would be at her side, telling her to calm down. She does, but then realizes it isn't real. Celestia turn's into Pinkie, and the rest he writes as follows...

No, the twist was that it's Pinkie, and she starts laughing and the room gets all dark and Luna freaks out and everything's falling to shit, and then her mirror basically explodes and Celestia flies in and starts sun beaming the Pinks and tells Luna to get out through the mirror. And luna starts flying and the world starts twisting and Celestia's holding the monster back and then it grabs her and she forces Luna out of the mirror and finds Twilight on the other side holding the portal open. Then Celestia's flyin' out and tentacles start creeping into the room and she tells Twilight to close it and she just barely escapes and one of the mirror shatters.

Celestia explains that the ward was meant to keep would-be assassins out of the Gala, an extreme measure but one that's proven necessary before, and that, while she was never in any physical danger, she'd probably go crazy if she was left in there too long.

Luna's shaken up by the whole thing, but Celestia convinces her to come down and join everyone for the last few minutes of the Gala, where she says the goodbyes and everyone gives her a round of applause and everything's all happy and whatnot.

Then Luna's headed to bed later and she leans into Celestia's room to say goodnight, but Celestia's not there. She frowns, and asks a guard where she's gone to, who says she was headed toward the throne room.

Luna goes down to the throne room and finds Celestia just sitting there, on the throne, totally blank faced. She smirks, entering the room, and comments that it's still a little early for her to be pranking her about the experience. Before she gets far into the room, however, she notices an oddly shaped mass moving under Celestia's skin, and stops. She frowns, looking up to her sister's face, then at her chest, becoming worried as she realizes Celestia doesn't seem to be breathing. She takes a step back, her knees shaking, and calls out to her sister. When she doesn't get an answer, she starts to backpedal out of the room.

Which would lead to an extremely distorted 'Aww, don't leave yet, you'll miss the after party!'

There's a recording for it, but It's not a youtube video to link in with text, so use your imagination.