Thunder Bloom
Backfire
Load Full StoryNext ChapterWell, Here's a story involving Thunder and Apple Bloom. I kinda had this idea (THIS SICK PERVERTED IDEA) in my head for awhile, So I decided to share it with you! :D
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Anyway, Here's the story. Enjoy. Oh, And if you're wondering why I keep writing the date and setting of the story, It's because I like that. It's kinda my style.
Enjoy.
Chapter I: Backfire
Town Hall
2:35 p.m.
April 6, 2012
Thunder's P.O.V.
It was a calm afternoon in Ponyville, When The mayor decided to hold a special announcement to address to the citizens of Ponyville. I decided to check it out.
"Attention, Ladies and Gentlestallions, Settle down now!" She yelled to the citizens to keep them quiet. Moments later, Everypony calmed down and began to listen.
"Now then, I have called you all here to address to you a new rule," She added.
"Free Cider?" I heard One pony call out.
"Free clothes?" I then heard Another call out.
"Free Bits!" A third one yelled out.
"None! I'm here to address to you that I'm offically allowing Fillies and Colts to mate!"
Everypony instantly gasped. "WHAT?" They all yelled at the same time.
"I've learned that many fillies and colts have wanted to know the joys of mating, And so It's official!!"
Instantly after, I spoke up. "Mayor, What in the world is wrong with you? These are little children we're talking about! Mating at a young age will lead to many consequences!"
After I spoke, Many of the citizens backed me up with 'Yeah!'s and 'He's right!'s.
But, The mayor just chuckled. "Oh, Well. The more, The merrier!" She yelled with a light-hearted laugh.
The citizens just scoffed and began walking off in anger. I just stood there in shock. But, Soon after, I exited my shock and began walking home.
During my walk, I felt the need to walk back, And punch the mayor across the face. Why in the unholy hell would she allow little children, To have sex? You should only do it when you're my age! A stallion! Or a Mare! Not a child!
But, My thoughts were interrupted when I accidentally bumped into Twilight, Causing both of us to fall to the ground. I hit my head pretty hard. As I tried to get up, I rubbed my hurting head and looked to Twilight, Who was picking up her books and rubbing her head as well.
I decided to help her pick up her remaining books. "Sorry about that, Twilight," I said to her, Chuckling nervously.
"Don't worry about it. I've actually been looking for you."
"Really? What for?"
"Weeelllll," She replied, "I discovered this new spell, But I'm not sure what it does. I've asked the girls if one of them would like to be my test subject, But they all were afraid of what it might do. Even Spike was afraid."
"Annnd?"
"Can you please be my test subject?"
I thought about it for a moment. Hopefully, The spell might not be so bad. "Weeellll...I suppose I could," I replied. Instantly, Twilight gripped me into a hug, Causing the books on her back to fall on top of us.
When we landed on the ground once again, Twilight was laying down on top of me. She chuckled nervously, And even blushed.
"Hehe...Sorry."
"Don't worry." I chuckled.
We got back up, And this time, I put the books on my back. Twilight and I walked back to her house, Me carefully balancing the books on my back.
Twilight's Home
2:56 p.m.
Twilight and I finally reached her Library. The moment she opened the door, I quickly ran to an open space in the Library, Set the books down, And collapsed to the floor. I may be an outdoor kinda stallion, But walking halfway across town, With a ton of books on your back is...well...back breaking!
Twilight saw me and felt bad about me carrying the books all the way back. Then again, It was my decision...
"Uhhh...Sorry."
"Don't...worry...about it," I managed to say. Damn, Those books took alot outta me.
After a few minutes, I got up, Strength back in me. "Okay, I'm good, Now."
Twilight then rushed to get a book from her bookcase. After searching for a few seconds, She grabbed the book, And headed back to me.
"Okay, I might not get this right, So are you sure you want me to do this?" She asked nervously.
"Pretty much. Hit me," I replied, With a determined face.
"Okay. Here goes."
She slowly lowered her head enough that her horn pointed directly at me. After a second, It began to glow. A few more seconds later, Her horn shot a beam of magic at me. I felt the beam strike my body.
I then heard something like an explosion and felt myself fling into the air and crash into the wall. I fell to the ground, And replied with an 'Oomph!' But for some reason, I sounded...younger.
I opened my eyes and saw that smoke covered the room. "Twilight?" I called out, And I instantly was shocked at how high my voice sounded. "What the?"
"Thunder?" I heard Twilight respond, With a few coughs. After a few moments, The smoke cleared, And I could see Twilight.
Her face was a face of shock. Then, She smiled. "Awwwww!" I heard her say.
"What? What happened?"
She then levitated a nearby mirror to me. I looked in it, And my eyes widened. I was a young colt! My tail was a tiny bit shorter, As well as my hair, My eyes were a brighter green color, And my wings were smaller.
But the worst part, I didn't have my Cutie Mark! So I don't have my special talent! Fuck!
"Oh, Man!" I said before I felt a pair of forelegs pick me up. I then was face to face with Twilight, Who was standing on her hind legs.
"You look so adorable!" She yelled. She then hugged me, And I heard some sort of sound that went 'Squee'. After a few moments, I called out to her.
"Uhh, Twilight? Can you put me down?" Instead, She placed me on her back. "Or, Just...Put me on your back."
"Uhhh...Twilight? What was that?" They both heard a noise come from above. They then saw Spike fall down, And land. He looked and saw Twilight with a young, Blue colt on her back.
"Who's that?" He asked.
"Spike, Doesn't Thunder look adorable?" She asked as she looked at me.
I looked at her. "Are you sure that spell didn't do something to you?"
Spike then bursted out with laughter at me. "Look at you! You're a kid!"
"Well, At least I'm cuter!" I replied. Spike immediately stopped laughing.
"C'mon, You two. Let's go show the girls." The three of us began walking out to find the others.
Beach
3:00 p.m.
Near Ponyville, The rest of the girls were enjoying a fun filled afternoon at the beach. Pinkie had a batch of sweets on a table in case any of them got hungry.
As they continued having fun, They saw Spike and Twilight nearing them, But they didn't notice me until I was a little closer, Considering I was hiding behing Twilight's head and mane. She is very soft. And why did I tell you this...?
"Twilight, Dear, You're here," Rarity spoke to her.
The others saw her appearance, And began heading over to us, And they still didn't see me, Until I ended up falling off Twilight's back, And onto the ground.
I landed on my back with a thud. I looked up at the others, But didn't see Applejack. I smiled nervously.
"Hehe...Hey, Girls."
"Ooh! Who's that?" Pinkie asked.
"It's Thunder," Twilight said before picking me up, Smiling. "Doesn't he look cute?" I ended up blushing for some reason.
"Wait. That's Thunder?" Rainbow spoke up.
"Yyeah, Twilight found this new spell, And it appearently turns ponies into colts/ or fillies," I replied.
After a few minutes of the girls hugging me and playing around with me like some little kid, I spoke up to Twilight.
"Uhh, Twilight? Can you please turn me back now? If these girls are like this to me, I don't even want to know what will happen when I get into town."
"No! Keep him like this! He's sooooooooooo cute!" Pinkie cried out.
"Can we k-keep him like this? I mean, If you w-want to...." Fluttershy shyly spoke up.
"Sorry, Girls, But I think Thunder's had enough cuddling for one day," Twilight replied. All the girls 'Awwww'd in Disappointment.
Twilight then took a book from her bag that she had on her back, And took out a book, The same book that she used to make me young and adorable.
She then lowered her head once more, So her horn was aiming at me. She shot a bolt of magic at me, Which engulfed all of us in a smokey explosion, Only this time, I didn't go flying.
When the smoke cleared, The whole group stared at me in shock. "What? What's wrong?" I said, And was shocked to hear that my voice was still the same.
"Twilight? Why am I still young?" I asked in slight panic.
"I don't know! I've never done this spell before!" She said as she began looking through the book. She started looking for the side effects to the spell.
"Here. 'If the age reducing spell is used at least twice, The subject may stop aging and may end up becoming a colt/filly...'" Twilight stopped for a second. Her eyes widened with shock. She gulped before continuing. "'Permanently.'"
The girls all gasped, Including me. This can't be happening! First, The mayor allows Fillies and Colts to have sex, And now this!
Eventually, The shocking news went into my head. "Thunder?" Twilight asked me in worry.
Seconds later, I began to fall, And was out cold by the time I hit the ground.
I awoke hours later, In a warm, Comfortable bed. I woke up to find myself in Twilight's bed. The lights in the library were off, But only a few candles remained lighting the room. I looked next to the bed to see Twilight sitting there, With a creepy smile on her face.
"T-Twilight?" I asked to her.
"Why did you leave us?" She said in an eerie voice.
My eyes widened. "Wh-What?"
Eventually, I saw the candles begin to burn faster, The wax just melting before my eyes. Eventually, I saw time begin to pass by quickly, Mere seconds turn to days, Then weeks, Months, Years.
Then, I saw the Library begin to fall apart in front of me. The bed, The table, The interior of the entire library began to rot away before my very eyes.
I had to stand after the bed rotted away. And soon, The most scariest thing happened. When I looked back at Twilight, She began rotting away as well; Her eyes disintegrated. Her mane began to fall apart. Her skin began rotting away like the wood.
Eventually, She was reduced to a skeleton. Tears began to fall down my face as I saw the skeleton hit the ground around the wreckage of the library.
"DON'T LEAVE US..." I heard the skeletonized Twilight say in a very creepy voice.
I laid there and cried, Wanting this to end. I closed my eyes.
When I reopened them, I was face to face with Twilight. I saw that she was scared, So she must've heard me. I stared at her for a few moments before I hugged her, Beginning to cry again. She hugged me back as well.
"Twilight...." I cried to her. "It was horrible."
"I know....Don't worry...I'll fix this, Thunder. I'll make sure you won't leave us..." She cried back to me.
I continued hugging her, Crying into her shoulder, Until I could cry no more. I eventually fell asleep in Twilight's forelegs. I could feel her laying me back onto the bed, And covering me up once more.
A little Twi/OC thing right there, But It might not happen for a while. It got funny and cute, But then it got all sad and scary. Chapter 2 is where Thunder goes to school, Apple Bloom and such. Maybe at the end of the story, Thunder, AB, and TS will have a threesome. AND NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW.
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