Thunder Bloom
Make things right
Previous ChapterWell, here's the last chapter. I had a thought before that since chapter VII was so short, I would make that the last chapter and extend it so it would have this chapter mixed with it, but I decided not to at the time. If you guys want me to do that, I could.
Also, sorry about the delay. As you guys know, FIMfiction kinda stopped working for the day. At least, I think it did. Also, my computer is trolling me, AKA: shutting off on me, so yeah, the chapter got erased a couple of times. Luckily, I memorized what I typed. Take that, you computing bitch.
Anyway, here's the last chapter.
Enjoy.
Chapter IX: Make things right
Sweet Apple Acres
3:45 p.m.
I flew as fast as my wings could flap. Before I knew it, I finally reached the orchard. I flew down in front of the Apple Family's house, and stretched my wings before closing them. Damn, that feels good.
After I closed my wings, I proceeded to the door of the house. Once I reached it, I knocked on the door. Moments later, I heard hoofsteps. But, these weren't soft, or average hoofsteps. These were hoofsteps of something big. Once the door opened, I knew it were the hoofsteps of none other than Big Macintosh.
"What do you want?" He asked angrily.
"Look, I want to make this right. Can I please talk to Apple Bloom?" I asked.
"No. She doesn't want to talk to ya. She don't ever wanna talk to you, so why don't you pick up your stallion plot, and your stupid, pathetic face, and just go away?!" He said, almost yelling.
I began to turn away, giving up almost instantly, when I saw something that kinda shocked me. "Uhh, Big Mac," I said to him, "Your barn's on fire."
"Nice try, stallion, but you ain't gettin' in."
"No, really. It's on fire."
"No matter how many times you try that, it ain't gonna..." I was getting annoyed, so I yelled at him.
"For Celestia's sake, Big Mac, your barn is on fire! look!"
He finally looked at the barn, and noticed that It was on fire. His eyes widened. He then quickly began to sprint towards the barn, gathering a few buckets of water before running again.
I looked back to the door of the house, which was still open. "One chance, Thunder. Don't fuck it up."
I proceeded into the house. I've never been in their house before, but something told me to go forward, then left. Sure enough, I found myself in the living room, with Applejack and Apple Bloom sitting down on the couch.
Applejack was the first one to notice me walk in. She glared at me.
"What're you doin' here? Why did mah brother letchya in here?" She asked angrily.
"Actually, he didn't. He's going to put the barn fire out."
"Barn fire?"
"Yyyyyeah, the barn's on fire," I said.
"What?!" She yelled, as she ran past me, and headed to the barn. I looked back at Apple Bloom.
"Ya made that up, didn't ya?" She asked, making a pouty face.
"Actually, no. The barn somehow went up in flames."
"Why are ya here?" She asked confused, but still frustrated.
I was silent for a moment, a tear tried to fall down my face, but couldn't. Finally, I spoke up.
"I'm sorry. For everything...For lying to you, not telling the truth, everything." The tear finally fell down my face.
"Why didn't ya tell me?"
"Well..." I chuckled. "Well, because I don't think you would like it, knowing that your coltfriend was a 19 year old stallion on the inside, but a 4 year old colt on the outside."
I slowly walked over to the couch that Apple Bloom sat on, and sat next to her.
"And...I was afraid that...you wouldn't like me anymore...I wish I could've told you before...but I couldn't..."
"But, if ya told me then, we wouldn't've been together."
"I know...Which meant that you would never've been happy..."
It went silent for a few moments, before I spoke up once more. "I'm sorry, Apple Bloom...please forgive me."
She smiled, and leaned close to me. "I forgive ya. But, is it alright if we can be friends?" She asked.
"Of course, Apple Bloom. Friends it is." I leaned close to her, as well, and embraced her in a friendly hug. I then heard the second she hugged me, that same noise that went 'squee' when Twilight hugged me just days ago. I chuckled.
Just a few moments later into our hug, I heard hoofsteps. I noticed that it was Applejack and Big Mac when I looked back at the doorway of the living room. Appearently, they saw us hugging, and Applejack, finally knowing we made up.
Big Mac, though, didn't smile. He just stared at me. I felt a little bit of fear inside me. Then, slowly, Big Mac smiled weakly. I knew he was happy, too.
And, the funny thing is, It took me just 2 hours just to make things right.
After we made up, everything pretty much went back to normal. Applejack, Apple Bloom, and Big Mac went back to bucking trees together. I went there a few days each week to help them.
All of the girls were a little sad after they found out I was back to normal, but Pinkie...well...she acted like I was still a colt. She hugged me and even tried to throw me into the air a couple of times. I apologized to Twilight about what I did a couple of days ago.
She quickly forgave me, but wanted me to help her around the library when I'm not helping at the farm.
I told Princess Celestia about the "colt and filly sex" rule that Mayor Mare had allowed. The mayor had to spend a couple of weeks in the Canterlot Rehabilitation Center.
Eventually, my love for Apple Bloom died, but our friendship will always remain.
Finally, after about a few weeks of this story, I. Am. Finished. This story was a little difficult to do, considering I had to think of ideas. Eventually, before I started working on chapters VIII and IX, I thought I was gonna eventually run out of ideas, and possibly cancel the story (Because I'm lazy like that), or hand it over to someone else.
Then, I thought, "The fuck is wrong with me? I'm fucking stupid if I think I'm gonna give up this story, or hand it over to somepony. I must continue this!"
Then, after I said that, I heard Rarity in my head, saying, "You must! You must! You mussst!"
Then, things got creepy. But, then I said okai. :D
Anyways, hope you liked the story. There will be another story coming up soon. And since I hate keeping secrets, I'll tell you. Man, I sound like a fucking girl...
Anyway, remember "Human of a Pony?" Well, I'll be glad to tell you that HoaP is going to have...
*Drumroll*
A sequel! :D
Now, I would like to say, that to every hater who thinks I'm pathetic, FUCK YOU I DO WHAT I WANT
Okay, I'm done. Seeya.
