Thunder Bloom

by Thunder Ice

Rating: mature
Tags: Original Character, Apple Bloom, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Romance, Sex
Length: 12400

After a spell backfires, Thunder becomes a colt, And it appears Apple Bloom finds him attractive.

After an unknown spell turns Thunder into a young colt, He realizes that there's no way to change him back. While Twilight thinks of a plan to fix him, Thunder has to go to school. But what does he do when he realizes that Apple Bloom begins to have feelings for him? And what does he do when he finds some of her feelings rather...Sexual?

Published 2012-04-07 23:24:06 UTC
Last updated 2012-04-20 06:48:22 UTC

Backfire

Well, Here's a story involving Thunder and Apple Bloom. I kinda had this idea (THIS SICK PERVERTED IDEA) in my head for awhile, So I decided to share it with you! :D
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Anyway, Here's the story. Enjoy. Oh, And if you're wondering why I keep writing the date and setting of the story, It's because I like that. It's kinda my style.

Enjoy.

Chapter I: Backfire

Town Hall
2:35 p.m.
April 6, 2012

Thunder's P.O.V.

It was a calm afternoon in Ponyville, When The mayor decided to hold a special announcement to address to the citizens of Ponyville. I decided to check it out.

"Attention, Ladies and Gentlestallions, Settle down now!" She yelled to the citizens to keep them quiet. Moments later, Everypony calmed down and began to listen.

"Now then, I have called you all here to address to you a new rule," She added.

"Free Cider?" I heard One pony call out.

"Free clothes?" I then heard Another call out.

"Free Bits!" A third one yelled out.

"None! I'm here to address to you that I'm offically allowing Fillies and Colts to mate!"

Everypony instantly gasped. "WHAT?" They all yelled at the same time.

"I've learned that many fillies and colts have wanted to know the joys of mating, And so It's official!!"

Instantly after, I spoke up. "Mayor, What in the world is wrong with you? These are little children we're talking about! Mating at a young age will lead to many consequences!"

After I spoke, Many of the citizens backed me up with 'Yeah!'s and 'He's right!'s.

But, The mayor just chuckled. "Oh, Well. The more, The merrier!" She yelled with a light-hearted laugh.

The citizens just scoffed and began walking off in anger. I just stood there in shock. But, Soon after, I exited my shock and began walking home.

During my walk, I felt the need to walk back, And punch the mayor across the face. Why in the unholy hell would she allow little children, To have sex? You should only do it when you're my age! A stallion! Or a Mare! Not a child!

But, My thoughts were interrupted when I accidentally bumped into Twilight, Causing both of us to fall to the ground. I hit my head pretty hard. As I tried to get up, I rubbed my hurting head and looked to Twilight, Who was picking up her books and rubbing her head as well.

I decided to help her pick up her remaining books. "Sorry about that, Twilight," I said to her, Chuckling nervously.

"Don't worry about it. I've actually been looking for you."

"Really? What for?"

"Weeelllll," She replied, "I discovered this new spell, But I'm not sure what it does. I've asked the girls if one of them would like to be my test subject, But they all were afraid of what it might do. Even Spike was afraid."

"Annnd?"

"Can you please be my test subject?"

I thought about it for a moment. Hopefully, The spell might not be so bad. "Weeellll...I suppose I could," I replied. Instantly, Twilight gripped me into a hug, Causing the books on her back to fall on top of us.

When we landed on the ground once again, Twilight was laying down on top of me. She chuckled nervously, And even blushed.

"Hehe...Sorry."

"Don't worry." I chuckled.

We got back up, And this time, I put the books on my back. Twilight and I walked back to her house, Me carefully balancing the books on my back.

Twilight's Home
2:56 p.m.

Twilight and I finally reached her Library. The moment she opened the door, I quickly ran to an open space in the Library, Set the books down, And collapsed to the floor. I may be an outdoor kinda stallion, But walking halfway across town, With a ton of books on your back is...well...back breaking!

Twilight saw me and felt bad about me carrying the books all the way back. Then again, It was my decision...

"Uhhh...Sorry."

"Don't...worry...about it," I managed to say. Damn, Those books took alot outta me.

After a few minutes, I got up, Strength back in me. "Okay, I'm good, Now."

Twilight then rushed to get a book from her bookcase. After searching for a few seconds, She grabbed the book, And headed back to me.

"Okay, I might not get this right, So are you sure you want me to do this?" She asked nervously.

"Pretty much. Hit me," I replied, With a determined face.

"Okay. Here goes."

She slowly lowered her head enough that her horn pointed directly at me. After a second, It began to glow. A few more seconds later, Her horn shot a beam of magic at me. I felt the beam strike my body.

I then heard something like an explosion and felt myself fling into the air and crash into the wall. I fell to the ground, And replied with an 'Oomph!' But for some reason, I sounded...younger.

I opened my eyes and saw that smoke covered the room. "Twilight?" I called out, And I instantly was shocked at how high my voice sounded. "What the?"

"Thunder?" I heard Twilight respond, With a few coughs. After a few moments, The smoke cleared, And I could see Twilight.

Her face was a face of shock. Then, She smiled. "Awwwww!" I heard her say.

"What? What happened?"

She then levitated a nearby mirror to me. I looked in it, And my eyes widened. I was a young colt! My tail was a tiny bit shorter, As well as my hair, My eyes were a brighter green color, And my wings were smaller.

But the worst part, I didn't have my Cutie Mark! So I don't have my special talent! Fuck!

"Oh, Man!" I said before I felt a pair of forelegs pick me up. I then was face to face with Twilight, Who was standing on her hind legs.

"You look so adorable!" She yelled. She then hugged me, And I heard some sort of sound that went 'Squee'. After a few moments, I called out to her.

"Uhh, Twilight? Can you put me down?" Instead, She placed me on her back. "Or, Just...Put me on your back."

"Uhhh...Twilight? What was that?" They both heard a noise come from above. They then saw Spike fall down, And land. He looked and saw Twilight with a young, Blue colt on her back.

"Who's that?" He asked.

"Spike, Doesn't Thunder look adorable?" She asked as she looked at me.

I looked at her. "Are you sure that spell didn't do something to you?"

Spike then bursted out with laughter at me. "Look at you! You're a kid!"

"Well, At least I'm cuter!" I replied. Spike immediately stopped laughing.

"C'mon, You two. Let's go show the girls." The three of us began walking out to find the others.

Beach
3:00 p.m.

Near Ponyville, The rest of the girls were enjoying a fun filled afternoon at the beach. Pinkie had a batch of sweets on a table in case any of them got hungry.

As they continued having fun, They saw Spike and Twilight nearing them, But they didn't notice me until I was a little closer, Considering I was hiding behing Twilight's head and mane. She is very soft. And why did I tell you this...?

"Twilight, Dear, You're here," Rarity spoke to her.

The others saw her appearance, And began heading over to us, And they still didn't see me, Until I ended up falling off Twilight's back, And onto the ground.

I landed on my back with a thud. I looked up at the others, But didn't see Applejack. I smiled nervously.

"Hehe...Hey, Girls."

"Ooh! Who's that?" Pinkie asked.

"It's Thunder," Twilight said before picking me up, Smiling. "Doesn't he look cute?" I ended up blushing for some reason.

"Wait. That's Thunder?" Rainbow spoke up.

"Yyeah, Twilight found this new spell, And it appearently turns ponies into colts/ or fillies," I replied.

After a few minutes of the girls hugging me and playing around with me like some little kid, I spoke up to Twilight.

"Uhh, Twilight? Can you please turn me back now? If these girls are like this to me, I don't even want to know what will happen when I get into town."

"No! Keep him like this! He's sooooooooooo cute!" Pinkie cried out.

"Can we k-keep him like this? I mean, If you w-want to...." Fluttershy shyly spoke up.

"Sorry, Girls, But I think Thunder's had enough cuddling for one day," Twilight replied. All the girls 'Awwww'd in Disappointment.

Twilight then took a book from her bag that she had on her back, And took out a book, The same book that she used to make me young and adorable.

She then lowered her head once more, So her horn was aiming at me. She shot a bolt of magic at me, Which engulfed all of us in a smokey explosion, Only this time, I didn't go flying.

When the smoke cleared, The whole group stared at me in shock. "What? What's wrong?" I said, And was shocked to hear that my voice was still the same.

"Twilight? Why am I still young?" I asked in slight panic.

"I don't know! I've never done this spell before!" She said as she began looking through the book. She started looking for the side effects to the spell.

"Here. 'If the age reducing spell is used at least twice, The subject may stop aging and may end up becoming a colt/filly...'" Twilight stopped for a second. Her eyes widened with shock. She gulped before continuing. "'Permanently.'"

The girls all gasped, Including me. This can't be happening! First, The mayor allows Fillies and Colts to have sex, And now this!

Eventually, The shocking news went into my head. "Thunder?" Twilight asked me in worry.

Seconds later, I began to fall, And was out cold by the time I hit the ground.

I awoke hours later, In a warm, Comfortable bed. I woke up to find myself in Twilight's bed. The lights in the library were off, But only a few candles remained lighting the room. I looked next to the bed to see Twilight sitting there, With a creepy smile on her face.

"T-Twilight?" I asked to her.

"Why did you leave us?" She said in an eerie voice.

My eyes widened. "Wh-What?"

Eventually, I saw the candles begin to burn faster, The wax just melting before my eyes. Eventually, I saw time begin to pass by quickly, Mere seconds turn to days, Then weeks, Months, Years.

Then, I saw the Library begin to fall apart in front of me. The bed, The table, The interior of the entire library began to rot away before my very eyes.

I had to stand after the bed rotted away. And soon, The most scariest thing happened. When I looked back at Twilight, She began rotting away as well; Her eyes disintegrated. Her mane began to fall apart. Her skin began rotting away like the wood.

Eventually, She was reduced to a skeleton. Tears began to fall down my face as I saw the skeleton hit the ground around the wreckage of the library.

"DON'T LEAVE US..." I heard the skeletonized Twilight say in a very creepy voice.

I laid there and cried, Wanting this to end. I closed my eyes.

When I reopened them, I was face to face with Twilight. I saw that she was scared, So she must've heard me. I stared at her for a few moments before I hugged her, Beginning to cry again. She hugged me back as well.

"Twilight...." I cried to her. "It was horrible."

"I know....Don't worry...I'll fix this, Thunder. I'll make sure you won't leave us..." She cried back to me.

I continued hugging her, Crying into her shoulder, Until I could cry no more. I eventually fell asleep in Twilight's forelegs. I could feel her laying me back onto the bed, And covering me up once more.

A little Twi/OC thing right there, But It might not happen for a while. It got funny and cute, But then it got all sad and scary. Chapter 2 is where Thunder goes to school, Apple Bloom and such. Maybe at the end of the story, Thunder, AB, and TS will have a threesome. AND NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW.

Time for School

Okay, Here's the second chapter. It may not be so good, Because It's 2:00 in the morning, And It's Easter. I love Easter. Happy Easter!

Anyway, enjoy.

P.S. The rest of the story will be in Thunder's P.O.V. If I end up making a regular P.O.V. somewhere in the chapters, Lemme know.

Chapter II: Time for School
Twilight's Library
8:00 a.m.

Twilight and I sat down in a few chairs. Twilight was looking though a few books. I was...Well, I was sleeping. Turns out, Twilight placed me on the chair during the night. And that bed was so comfy.

Eventually, I woke up to find myself on a chair. I looked around for a few moments, And then spotted Twilight looking through some books.

She saw me awaken, And smiled. "Morning, Sleepyhead," She said to me.

I rubbed my eyes, And looked at her. "Morning." I heard my high voice again. "Great, So it WASN'T a dream. Even...Last night."

"Thunder, You don't need to be ashamed of a nightmare. Everypony has one sometimes."

"I know. It's just...What if you can't fix me? What if I end up living forever, While everypony I love dies around me? Pinkie, Dash, Rarity, You... Everyone."

"Don't worry. I'll make sure that doesn't happen," She replied with a smile.

"Thanks, Twilight." I smiled at her, Too, And closed my eyes, So hopefully, I can at least get some more sleep.

"No problem." She then looked at the clock. 8:05 a.m. "Oh my. You need to get to school."

After she said that, My eyes shot open. "Say what now?" I looked at her.

"When you were out cold yesterday, I headed to the school, And told Cheerilee about you. I didn't tell her your name, So you'll have to think of one when you get there."

I sighed, And facehoofed. 'The one thing I hate more than nightmares, Is school. The flying academy was the one I hate the most,' I thought to myself.

"Oh, Come on, It's not that bad." I heard Twilight respond.

I quickly looked up at her. "Did you just hear my thoughts?"

"Yep. Now, Hurry up. You gotta get to school."

I groaned. This is gonna be the worst day ever.

Schoolhouse
8:10 a.m.

After walking all the way across town, I finally reached the schoolhouse. Why didn't Twilight just teleport me? It would be a lot easier than having to walk all the way across Ponyville.

I shrugged it off, And walked into the schoolhouse. I entered the schoolhouse, And saw fillies and colts sitting in seats, And some colts and fillies getting ready to start the day.

"Why, Hello there!" I heard a voice call out to me. I turned to the front of the class to see Cheerilee standing there, A smile on her face. She always has one...

"You must be the new student Twilight Sparkle told me about," She added.

"Uhhh, Y-yeah," I stuttered for a second.

"By the way, She never told me your name. What is it, Hon?" She asked. I have never heard her say 'Hon' to anypony, Ever.

'Cmon, Thunder. Think of a name!' I thought to myself.

"Uhhh...Lightning Breeze?" I said. Good name, Thunder.

"That's a wonderful name, Lightning," She replied with a smile. Yes, I'm in the clear. I then saw Cheerilee look to the class.

"Good Morning, Everypony!" She yelled with delight.

"Good Morning, Ms. Cheerilee!" They all replied. Then they all spotted me, And started staring at me. Creepy...

"We have a new student joining us today, So let's say hello to Lightning Breeze."

I stood there for a moment, Before speaking up. "Uhh...Hello." I waved to everypony.

"So, Lightning, Where are you from?" Cheerilee asked me.

I didn't want to tell them that I grew up without parents, who I never saw again after the parasprite invasion in Canterlot.

"Well...I came from...The west side of Manehattan." I said. Good going. You might get through this day.

But, Just after I said that, The whole class gasped. I then saw an orange filly pegasus, Which must be Scootaloo, Speak up.

"Isn't that the rich part of the city?" She asked.

Oh shit! Great job, Thunder! "Uhh, Yeah. My parents were rich, But sadly, They got sick and passed away." Let's just hope that didn't really happen to them.

"Oh, No. I'm sorry to hear that." Cheerilee said with sadness. "Who are you living with now?"

"I'm living with Twilight. She's a close friend. She and her parents knew my parents very well." It's true. Except for them knowing my parents. They only knew me.

"Well, I'm very sorry for your loss, Lightning," Cheerilee replied.

"Thank you, Miss Cheerilee." To be honest, I never knew my parents much. I wish I knew them more.

Cheerilee smiled at me, And pointed to the class. "Now, There's a free seat right next to Apple Bloom."

"Okay." I began walking over to my empty seat. As I sat down, I completely had flashbacks of School in the past. The rulers...The bruises...The rulers...Oh Celestia.

But, The flashbacks went away when I felt a piece of paper hit me in the face. Cheerilee didn't even see. She had her back to us. I saw the paper land on my desk. I opened it up.

It said:

GO AWAY. NO ONE WANTS YOU HERE.

I looked at whoever threw it at me, And spotted Diamond Tiara, A filly who I heard was trouble, Sitting a row to my left, and two rows down. She glared at me.

She mouthed some words. Watch out, new kid.

I mouthed some words back. Bitch, Try and see what fucking happens.

She just rolled her eyes and paid attention back to the front of the classroom. This was the only time I've been like that to anypony.

I was just about to look to the front of the room, Until I noticed Apple Bloom on my left, Staring at me dreamily.

I just smiled nervously, Then slowly looked back to the front.

4 Hours Later
Outside
Lunchtime

I sat at a table outside. Some fillies and colts were eating their lunch, Others were playing. This day is less scary then when I first went to school.

I just stared at the table, Wondering what I'm going to do. If Twilight can't fix me, I'm gonna have to watch these kids grow up, While I permanently stay like this.

My thoughts were distracted when I saw a filly sit next to me. I looked, And noticed that it was Apple Bloom. "Hai," She said in her cowgirl accent. "Ahm Apple Bloom."

I smiled. "I know who you are."

"Really? Ah've never seen you aroun' here before," She replied in confusion.

I instantly remembered what I just said, And began to get nervous.

"W-Well, I m-mean, Is that...I've heard of your sister...Applejack. And Sweet Apple Acres. I read about how delicious your apples are, And I kinda wanted to visit your farm. But, After my parents died, I haven't really had time. Now that Twilight has been taking care of me, I might visit sometime." Nice save.

I then saw Apple Bloom begin to blush. "Uhh...What's your name?" She asked me.

"I'm Lightning. Remember, Miss Cheerilee introduced me?"

"Oh, Right. Sorry," She replied.

"Eh, No worries."

We continued to talk for a while, Until we heard the bell ring. "Time for class, Everypony!" I heard Cheerilee yell in a sing-song voice that reminded me of Pinkie.

I saw the kids begin to run back to the classroom. "I guess we should go, Now."

"Oh. Okai." Apple Bloom replied.

I began walking back to the classroom.

Apple Bloom's P.O.V.

I watched as Lightning began walking back to the classroom. I stared dreamily at him.

"Ah...Ah'm in love."

Short P.O.V. for Apple Bloom, But whatevs. Here's the second chapter. As I said, It might not be very good, So I might make much changes to it. If you want me to, That is. Man, I sound like Fluttershy.

Chapter III up soon!

Telling Friends

Alright, Before I start this, I have something to say. Appearently, The other day, April 6th, 2012, Seth (A.K.A. Rendan), Had passed away. His brother, Seth, Had taken control of his account, And will be the new Rendan. I'm not sure if it's his brother or cousin, But, I want you all to know that we lost a good friend, Whom we will all miss dearly. This is just as sad as Edd's death.

Also, The computer I'm using has a virus on it, And Is doing some check thingy. I have to activate my activation code. Buuuut....Only my uncle knows that. If this thing breaks, I'm so fucked. But, There's always another User. I'm just praying this thing survives. Also, Thunder will be called Lightning until he turns back to normal, Which will be chapters from now.

Anyway, Enjoy.

Chapter III: Telling Friends
CMC Treehouse
3:00 p.m.

After School ended, Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, And Sweetie Belle had gone to the treehouse of the Cutie Mark Crusaders.

"Alright, Cutie Mark Crusaders!" Scootaloo yelled. "It's time to start searching for our special talent!"

"Yay!" Sweetie Belle replied.

"So, What should we do first?"

Sweetie Belle had thought for a moment, Then spoke up. "Ooh! What about bowling?"

"No, Silly. We already did that, Remember?" Scootaloo replied.

"Oh, Right." Sweetie Belle smiled nervously.

"Apple Bloom?" Scootaloo called out to Apple Bloom, Who was staring out the window of the treehouse, Eyeing a certain, Blue colt heading back towards Twilight's home.

"Apple Bloom?" Scoot called out again. "What are you doing?"

She walked towards Apple Bloom, And noticed she was eyeing Lightning dreamily. Sweetie Belle also noticed as she neared her.

"Isn't that that Lightning colt?" Scoot asked.

"Yeah. Why are you looking at him like that?" Sweetie Belle asked.

Apple Bloom heard her, And snapped out of her fantasy. "Uh, Ah wasn' lookin' at him!" She yelled loudly. They all heard a voice.

"What the?" They heard distantly. They turned their attention to Lightning, Who was staring at them in confusion.

They all smiled nervously. Scootaloo waved to him. "Uhh, Hi, Lightning!" She yelled to him nervously.

They saw him just wave back slowly, Then begin to walk away. They kept waving to him until he was completely out of sight.

The three sighed in relief. "That was close," Scoot said. She then turned her attention to Apple Bloom.

"Why were you staring at him like that?"

"Uhh, Wa, Well, Ah...Uhh..." She knew she couldn't lie again. She decided to tell the truth.

She sighed before continuing. "W-Well...Ah...Ah like Lightning, Okai?" She replied.

Scoot and Sweetie Belle were silent for a second, Until they smiled. "Awwww!" They both said in unison.

"Did you tell him yet?" Scoot asked.

"No...Ah can't seem ta. Ah wanted ta tell him today at Lunchtime, But Ah couldn't. But...What if Ah do, But he doesn' like me back?" She asked worried.

"Don't worry about it, Apple Bloom. You can tell him tomorrow. He's sure to like you!" Sweetie Belle replied.

"Thank ya, Girls."

"No problem. Now, Come on! Let's find out how to find our cutie marks!" Scoot replied.

"Oh...Okai." The girls all sat down and began to discuss. Apple Bloom was still thinking about Lightning.

Two Minutes Earlier
Lightning's P.O.V.

I was walking down the road on my way back to Twilight's home. After my home was destroyed last month, It's gonna take a long time to fix it, And since I'm a colt, I guess it's alright to move in with Twilight for a while. But, It would really help if she would teleport me to school and back. These damn wings won't do anything. They barely lift me a foot off the ground! Being a young colt can suck at certain moments.

But, I began to think about today. Apple Bloom staring at me like that in class. Why was she? Or was she looking at someone else next to me? She didn't do anything at lunch, So I'm guessing she doesn't like me.

"Ah wasn' lookin' at him!" I heard a voice say from a distance from my left. I quickly recognized the voice as Apple Bloom.

"What the?" I said as I looked to my left to see the treehouse of the Cutie Mark Crusaders. But that wasn't all. In the window of the treehouse, I spotted Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, And Apple Bloom, Staring at me nervously.

Seconds later, Scootaloo started waving to me. "Uhh, Hi, Lightning!" She yelled to me.

I just slowly waved, Then began to walk away. "Weird..." I said to myself.

As I walked away, I smiled. "Apple Bloom does look a little cute..." I bonk'd myself against the head. "Get it together, Thunder! You may look like a colt, You may sound like a colt, But inside, You are still a stallion! You cannot get these feelings inside you!"

I looked around, Hoping no one heard me. Luckily, No one was around.

"Better think those words next time, Rather than say them."

Twilight's Home
3:10 p.m.

I finally reached Twilight's home after 10 minutes of walking. Finally!

I opened the door to find Twilight sitting down on a chair, Reading a spell book. She looked up the moment she heard me walk in.

"You're home!" She yelled before smiling.

"Uh Huh."

"Have a good day at school?"

"Well, I'll tell ya one thing: It's way better than school 14 years ago." I said, Remembering when I was just 4, And entering the Flying Academy. No! Must not think that time.

"Make friends?"

"Yep. And enemies. Well, Just one."

"Thunder..."

"Hey, Don't blame me, Twi! She hated me the moment I walked in that classroom." I said. Then, A smell of something delicious filled my nostrils.

"Mmm! What's that smell?"

"Noodles and Hay," She replied.

"Haven't had that in years."

"Well, You'll be able to have it in a few hours."

"Can't wait." I sat down on a chair, While Twilight began to read again. I started to think again about Apple Bloom staring at me dreamily, And at the treehouse.

'Why did she do that?' I thought to myself.

"Who did what?" Twilight asked.

Damn! I forgot she could read my mind. "Uuuhh...No one did nothing."

"Thunder, Did something happen at school?" After a few seconds, I sighed.

"Okay, Can you please not tell anypony about this, Especially Applejack?"

"Why? What's going on?"

"Uhh...Well...During school today..."

"Uh huh..."

"When I sat down in my seat...I saw...I saw Apple Bloom staring at me dreamily."

Twilight's eyes widened only for a second, Before she started giggling.

"What?" I asked.

"Oh, You! Looks like somepony likes you!" She said before giggling again.

"Twilight, Don't you know how serious this is? Don't forget I'm still a stallion."

Twilight continued to giggle before calming down. "Don't worry, Thunder. Tomorrow, Just ask her. If she does, Then...If she asks you out, Then, Accept it."

"But, What if Applejack finds out that the colt Apple Bloom is dating is ME?"

"Don't worry. Just ask Apple Bloom tomorrow. You'll think of something."

I sighed. "Okay..."

Hours later, Twilight took out the noodles, And we began to eat. By about 10:00 p.m., I got into bed, And quickly fell asleep. But, Before I fell asleep, I could hear Twilight getting into bed as well, And even giving me a kiss goodnight. I smiled.

And, Tonight, I actually had a peaceful dream. There was no death, No sadness, Only happiness.

Man, I'm tired as fuck. 3:13 in the morning, And I gotta get up in 3 hours for school. Spring Break is over. FUCK!!

Anyway, Hope you liked this chapter. I decided to do Lightning's P.O.V. two minutes earlier, To do what he was doing before he heard AB yelling out.

Adios for now.

Revealing our Love

I'm almost beginning to run out of what to write next, But I'll try to come up with some ideas. While at school today, I had a thought about the South Park boys being bronies, and them meeting the mlp gang, And....Well, I just don't feel like doing that. So, if you would like to do that, be my guest. Chapter might not be so good. But...I try my best. :D

Also, The computer isn't doing anything much, So I guess it's fine for now.

This chapter will tell of where Cheerilee went off to. Eventually, AB and Lightning will tell the others. Lightning's identity will almost get exposed. Shit, told part of the story. Oh well...

Here ya go.

Chapter V: Revealing our Love
Sweet Apple Acres
11:00 a.m.

It was almost noon at Sweet Apple Acres, when Applejack was bucking apples from the apple trees. Twilight sat under the trees, a basket on her back, and helped collect the falling apples.

"Woo-eee! Mighty kinda ya ta help me out, Twilight," Applejack said.

"Thank you, Applejack. I know it's hard to do this alone while Big Mac is sick," Twilight replied. After she said that, they both heard a sneeze from the window where Big Macintosh's room was located.

"Yea. Isn' there a spell that can cure ponies?"

"I'm still looking for one. It's difficult when I have my studies."

"Right...Wait, why don' we just have Thunder come over an' help us buck these trees? It'd be a lot more quicker."

Twilight panicked for a moment. "Uhh, sorry, Applejack, but Thunder's out of town for a while. He went to Manehattan for a vacation."

Twilight didn't want her friend to know about the thing going on with Thunder and Apple Bloom. If she does like him....

Her thoughts were interrupted when she saw Cheerilee heading towards the orchard.

"Hey, ain' that Miss Cheerilee? What's she doin' here?" Applejack asked.

"I don't know." What happened this time?

Once Cheerilee reached the two, she cleared her throat. "Twilight Sparkle. Applejack."

"Yea?"

"What's going on?"

"I have appearently found out that your sister," She pointed to Applejack, "And Lightning," She pointed to Twilight, "Were passing notes in class."

"What? But mah sister is a nahce student. She'd never pass notes!"

'Did she really walk all the way over here just to tell us this?' Twilight thought to herself.

"Also...I realized that she wrote about her feelings for him on the note. Much of it was just...well...inappropriate! I couldn't even read the rest of it to the class. I had to shorten it."

"Before we continue, Who's Lightning?" Applejack asked.

"Lightning is...well, Lightning is my...nephew. His family died from a sickness about a week ago. I'm taking care of him for a while." Twilight managed to make a good lie.

"So, mah sister likes your nephew. What did she write on tha note?" Applejack asked as she turned to Cheerilee.

"Here." She handed the girls the note.

After the girls read through it, including the extra section, their faces were a shade of red.

"Uhhh...Mah...Mah sister wrote th-this?" Applejack asked blushing.

Cheerilee nodded.

"Thank...Thank you, Cheerilee. Don' worry, I'll talk to Apple Bloom when she gits back."

"Thank you, Applejack. And I'm sure you'll be having a talk with Lightning when he gets back?" She asked to Twilight.

"But, Lightning didn't pass out a note. You said only Apple Bloom did it. Why is he in trouble?" Twilight asked.

"Because, he was reaching out to get it." Cheerilee replied before she heard a bell in the distance.

"Excuse me, girls, but I have to..." She was interrupted when she heard a voice. Make that two.

"Teacher!!" She turned around to see snips and snails (Do they have S's at the end of their names?), panting heavily.

"Teacher, that Lightning kid, and that filly with the bow hair is gone!"

"Mah sister's missin'?" Applejack panicked.

"They just ran out. As well as two orange and white fillies."

"Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo?" Twilight guessed.

"Yeah, that's them. We saw them heading near the forest," Snails replied.

"The forest?" Twilight panicked as well. She then turned her attention to the forest, when she saw a yellow filly and a blue colt heading towards them, as well as an orange filly, and a white filly.

Apple Bloom and Lightning
Lightning's P.O.V.

Apple Bloom and I were beginning to head towards Sweet Apple Acres, which wasn't far, considering we could see it.

"A-Ah don' know, Lightning, Ah'm so nervous."

"Don't worry, Apple Bloom. We'll be fine," Scootaloo replied to her friend, smiling.

When we got a little closer to the farm, We could see Applejack, Twilight, and even Cheerilee. So, that's where she went...

"O-Okai," Apple Bloom replied a few seconds later.

Within a minute or two, we finally reached the farm. It was silent for a few moments, Until I broke it.

"Hello."

"And, where have you four been?" Cheerilee asked.

"W-Well, we were sitting down behind a tree, having a break," I managed to lie.

Cheerilee glared at me. Those eyes are eyes of the devil. Dear Celestia...

"Alright, here's the truth. After you told the note, everypony started laughing at the both of us. Apple Bloom started crying and ran out, and I quickly followed after her. After a few minutes, I found her. I knew that she liked me, and, well...I like her, too."

Twilight's eyes widened, but they went back to normal, and she smiled.

"I wanted her to feel better, so I...I kissed her."

"It was so adorable!" Sweetie Belle replied.

"So, now..." I wrapped my left foreleg over Apple Bloom. "...We're finally dating."

"Datin'?" Applejack spoke up, "But, you two just met."

"Well...It was like love at first sight." I replied as I smiled at Apple Bloom.

"It's good that you two are dating, but I think it would be best not to be passing notes about your...feelings," Cheerilee replied, partially blushing.

"What do you mean? She just wrote that she loves me."

"Well...Not exactly," Twilight replied as she levitated the note from before over to me.

"What is it?" I asked as I grabbed the note. I saw that Apple Bloom looked very panicked. I read the note, and when I finished, I was fazed. She...wants to...Uhhh...Umm...Doesn't matter.

I looked over to Apple Bloom, who had her head down in embarrassment, her face was red, and even had a tear in her eye. She must think I think of her as a weirdo.

I smiled, and raised her head up with one of my hooves.

"Hey...what's wrong?" I asked.

"You must think of me as a creep...don't ya?"

"None of that changes the way I look or think about you. I still love you," I replied. Out of the corner of my eye, I could see Twilight smiling at me.

I then slowly leaned my face to her, but before I could kiss her, a voice stopped us.

"Ahem," I looked to see Cheerilee staring at us, with a straight face, motioning her head towards the schoolhouse.

I looked in the direction she was motioning her head, and slightly chuckled. "Oh...right. Hehe..." I looked to Apple Bloom.

"Guess we gotta head back to school," I said to her, which caused her to huddle close next to me.

"C-can ya please h-hold me?" She asked, with puppy eyes.

"Okay." I placed a foreleg around her, and we turned around, and began to head back to the schoolhouse.

I thought it would be a little difficult walking with only 3 hooves, but it was fairly easy, and I was making sure Apple Bloom was comfortable during the walk back. I even kissed her on her cheek. She smiled and blushed, so she was comfy.

"Awwww!" I could hear Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle say in unison. Damn, they've been pretty much quiet since they've gotten here.

Regular P.O.V.
SAA

Applejack and Twilight smiled as they saw Lightning and Apple Bloom walking together.

"Don't they just look cute?" Twilight asked Applejack.

"They sure do."

Applejack continued to look at them, then she started to laugh.

"Ya know what? Now that I think of it, Lightnin' reminds me a little of Thunder."

Twilight flinched for a moment, although Applejack didn't see it, but she laughed as well.

"Now, that you mention it, he does," She replied, hoping Applejack doesn't find out that her own sister is dating one of her own friends.

I'm not very proud of this chapter. As I said in the beginning, I'm beginning to run out of ideas and what to say, But I'll do my best to think. You guys can even help me, If you want. Give me an idea, And If it's good, I'll do it. No sex ideas, for that wont be for a few more chapters. *licks lips*

If you did like this chapter, good, if you didn't...meh.

Again, It's 3:00 a.m. Tired. As. Fuck.

Chapter VI will be up soon.

Telling the others

Authors Note: Sorry 'bout the delay, but a weird event happened to me at about 12:16 p.m. today (Apr 11). I was packing up my instrument in Orchestra class, and getting ready to leave. I place my instrument down, get up, and what happens? I pass out. But, I passed out only for a second or two. I was completely unconscious as I fell. The last thing I remember was me putting my instrument down, then I find myself on the floor. I kinda sprained my middle and ring fingers on my right hand because they smashed into a cabinet during my fall, but other than that, I'm okay.

My head still hurts, but it's no problem. One question, though. If you pass out time and time again, won't you eventually die? Because, you know, the brain cells and...Enough wasting time. Enjoy.

Chapter VI: Telling the others
Sweet Apple Acres
3:10 p.m.

Finally, after hours of boring work, eating lunch, and playing, school was finally done for the day. Apple Bloom and I walked back to Sweet Apple Acres. When we got there, we noticed only Applejack was there, still bucking apples.

"I'll see you later, okay?" I spoke to Apple Bloom.

"Okai. Bah," She replied. Her voice is so cute. Before I left, I gave her a kiss on the lips that lasted about 5 seconds. We parted, and I left, waving to her.

She waved back, and smiled. I saw her head towards Applejack, who smiled upon her arrival. With my good hearing, I could even hear Applejack say something.

"You two are so cute together," She said to Apple Bloom. I smiled.

A couple of minutes later, I finally reached Twilight's home. I heard some music playing inside, and even Pinkie Pie.

I slowly opened the door and walked in, revealing all of the girls staring at me. Creepy...

"Uhh, hey," I said, "What's going on?"

"Celebrating you and Apple Bloom dating, Silly!" Pinkie said.

"So, you guys already know?"

"Yep! And we made this party just for you!"

I chuckled. "Look, girls, we're just dating. That's it. No need to make big news of it," I said to them.

"Wanna celebrate, anyway?" Pinkie asked.

"Uh, no thanks, I'm not into partying right now," I replied.

"There's cupcakes and pu-unch!" She said in a sing-song voice.

I was feeling a bit tired, and punch and cupcakes are just what I need to keep me up. "I'm in."

"Yay!" She yelled. She's always so happy.

So, for a while, we partied, had punch, and pretty much did everything else Pinkie could think of.

Soon, while I was having some punch, I saw the door to Twilight's room open. "Thunder? Can you come here?"

"Sure, Twi," I replied after I swallowed the punch. I headed up to Twilight's room, and entered. Twilight closed the door behind me.

"What's up?" I asked, with a smile on my face.

"I haven't gotten it completely through yet, but I managed to find a spell that can change you back," She replied.

My smiled faded. "What?"

Her voice quickly changed to confusion. "Don't you want to become a stallion again?"

"Well...Actually...I'm kinda thinking of being a colt. You know...It's not actually so bad."

"But, Thunder...You won't be able to age. You're gonna be like that forever unless I change you back."

"Well, can't you find a spell that CAN make me age, but keep me a colt?"

"I don't think there is one. But, you've been dying to change back."

"Yeah, well, that's before I fell in love with Apple Bloom. Since I'm a colt, I'm the same age to date her."

"You're NOT a colt!"

"Yes I am!"

It was silent for a moment. "I'm going back downstairs. I've made my decision, Twilight."

I began walking back to the door, when I heard her voice. "Fine. Good luck staying young forever. Have fun when your fillyfriend dies old, and you still live young."

I continued walking, completely ignoring her. I don't need her. I'll just grab a couple of books, and find a spell where I can grow up with the filly I love. I don't need Twilight.

12:20 a.m.
Apple Bloom's P.O.V.

I moaned in pleasure as Lightning kissed me, him laying on top of me. Our hooves explored each other's bodies. It felt very incredible.

"I love you, Apple Bloom," Lightning whispered to me.

"Ah love you, too," I replied.

"Are you ready?" He asked me. I was more than ready. I leaned my head up to one of his ears, and whispered...

"Stick it in me."

Lightning blushed and smiled as he lined his colthood up to my entrance. Just as he was about to stick it in, I found myself back in my bedroom.

I remembered about the dream I just had, and blushed. "Oh...Oh mah..."

Suddenly, I felt a warm liquid running down my hind leg. I removed the covers to see a clear liquid running down my left hind leg, from my...my nether region.

I blushed again. "Is...Is this what sis was tellin' me about? Am I...in heat?"

I believe this is a bad chapter, but It's almost 4:00 a.m. And after the passing out, My head has just been hurting. TBH, I've never passed out ever, in my entire life.

Also, I said this in the previous chapters, If anyone would like to make some fan art of this, feel free.

If you guys think this chapter is good, well good. If you think it's bad...meh. Also, I apologize for it's shortness.

Chapter VII up soon.

In Heat

Sorry 'bout the delay. Been vacating on my weekend. Been clopping, so yeah. Also, I've been reading some stories that have updated. ALSO, I even watched the 2nd trailer of the movie "The Amazing Spiderman," and I gotta say...

I'm heading to the theater on July 3rd.

This chapter is THE chapter that will have S E X ! ! ! So, cloppers, take out your lotion. Prepare for the clopping.

Obviously, you knew this was a sex chapter, because of the title "In Heat." It's pretty obvious, kids. Anyway, enjoy.

Chapter VII: In Heat
Sweet Apple Acres
1:20 p.m.

Since today was Saturday, I decided to head over to the orchard to visit Apple Bloom. After that fight with Twilight...well...I do want to change back, but I don't want to leave Apple Bloom.

I shook these thoughts outta my head. I continued my walk to the orchard. A few minutes later, I finally reached it.

I looked back to the path I walked through, but caught sight of my...wings. I could've flown over here. Why must I make stupid choices?

Doesn't matter. I'm here. I headed over to the house and knocked on the door. I then heard hoofsteps. After a few more seconds, the door opened to reveal Applejack.

"Howdy, Lightnin', Whatcha doin' here?" She asked.

"Hey, Applejack, is Apple Bloom here?"

"She's in the barn. Don' know why, but she says it's for you. Also...she kinda seemed...strange," she told me.

"Really? Well, I'll see what she's up to," I replied.

"Well, alrighty then."

"Later," I said to her before heading to the barn. I can't believe Twilight hasn't told her yet.

After a few moments of running, I finally reached the barn. I knocked on the door of the barn. A second later, the door opened up a little, but opened enough to reveal Apple Bloom, her mane and tail messed up.

"Apple Bloom, are you al..." Before I could finish, Apple bloom took me and threw me into the barn. I landed onto my back. It only hurt for a moment.

Before I could get back up, Apple Bloom jumped on me, and began to kiss me wildly. What's gotten into her?

After the kiss broke, I could finally manage to speak. "Uhh, Apple Bloom, what's going..." I was cut off once more when Apple Bloom said something I never heard her say, ever.

"Buck me."

My eyes widened. "Wh-What?"

"Buck me! Right here, right now, Buck mah apples! Buck me hard!" She yelled. She then stared right into my eyes. After a moment, her eyes widened. She then turned around, and began to blush a very deep red. Like, blood red.

"Ah'm...Ahm sorry, Lightning. Ah didn't mean ta..." I turned her around towards me, and smiled.

"Hey, it's alright. Don't worry about it. I'm not angry," I said before chuckling, trying to make her know I'm not shocked or mad. Well, shocked, yes, but angry, no.

"Lightning...Mah sister...she said somethin' 'bout being "In Heat..." ...Well...Ah think Ah'm in heat."

I was surprised once again. "But, aren't you a little too young to be in heat?"

"No. The age ta be in heat, mah sister said, was about 4 years old. Ah'm 4."

She kinda leaned towards me, and blushed once more. "And, ah also learn'd that to relieve the stress is ta...mate."

I blushed as well, "Uh, well, Apple Bloom, aren't you a little too...you know, young to be mating? Even if in heat?" I asked.

"I heard a few days ago, that the mayor allowed fillies and colts ta mate," she replied. I completely forgot about that. Trust me, that mayor is a crazy bitch.

"Sh-she did, huh?"

"Mmm-hmm. S-so...w-will ya mate with me?" she asked me.

And, for the first time, after she asked that, my wings kinda just...shot open. It appearently made Apple Bloom giggle.

"Ah'll take that as a "yes.""

*HERE IT IS! THE SEX SCENE!! CLOPPERS!! LOTIONS READY!! READY!! GRAB!! AND....! CLOP!!!

HATERS OF CLOPPING...Well...Just scroll down...*

I then saw Apple Bloom reach one of her hooves down to my young colt member, which was beginning to grow. The moment her hoof made contact with my hardening cock, I let out a moan.

I looked at Apple Bloom, who smiled at me as she began to stroke my cock, making it harder. I shuddered from her stroking. This was really, and I mean, REALLY amazing.

It's 20% cooler than masturbating. Oh, Goddamnit, Rainbow Dash...

I looked at Apple Bloom again, who was staring into my eyes dreamily. She reached towards me and then began to kiss me.

A few minutes later, I felt this sensation reaching down to my member, signaling that I was about to cum.

"A-Apple B-Bloom...I'm gonna..." Just as I was about to cum, Apple Bloom stopped stroking me. And, it felt good, too.

Then, I saw Apple Bloom get up, and sit right over me. I already knew what she was about to do.

"Y-ya ready?" She asked.

I just nodded stupidly, receiving a giggle from Apple Bloom, before she began to slowly lower herself onto my member.

She moaned as I slid into her. A few moments later, she was completely lowered onto my hardened cock. This was incredible. I could feel her pulse, her warmth, her fluids...I was in heaven.

"Uhh...Okai. Here ah go." She then started to rise up, then lower again, making me moan. Soon, she began to go fast, at a steady pace. She went up and down, up and down. She began to moan again.

Eventually, I rose my back from the hay pile I was laying in this whole time, and wrapped my forelegs around Apple Bloom. I then lowered myself back down, her with me, which caused her to stop in confusion.

"You look tired. Don't worry, I'll be gentle," I whispered in her ear.

She blushed, then moaned as I removed my forelegs from her back, and gently placed them onto her flanks. I then slowly raised her flanks upward, then back down, receiving a moan from my yellow fillyfriend.

Soon, my pace of thrusting into her accelerated. Her liquids from her love hole dripped onto me. Apple Bloom moaned louder.

I continued to thrust into her faster and faster. Eventually, I could feel Apple bloom getting tighter and tighter around my cock.

"Li-Lightnin'...Ah...Ah'm gonna...AH'M GONNA...!" She couldn't finish, but instead, let out one loud scream, as her juices erupted from her slit.

Her scream caused me to release my seed deep into her, and fill up her womb. Our juices mixed together, and soon began to pour out of Apple Bloom's entrance.

The two of us were sitting there, panting hard. I then lifted Apple Bloom's head to mine, and kissed her deeply. A few seconds after, I pulled out of her.

*IT'S OVER! STOP CLOPPING, YA BASTARDOS!!*

My member eventually shrank, but Apple Bloom was still on top of me, along with the liquids from our love making.

"I love you...Apple Bloom," I whispered to her as I looked into her eyes.

"Ah love you, too...Lightning Breeze."

Eventually, the gap between us closed, as our lips touched once more. We kissed each other deeply, as I wrapped my forelegs around Apple Bloom.

This whole thing was completely perfect...Until I heard the door of the barn bust open.

"Apple Bloom! Are you al...WHAT IN UNEQUESTRIAN TARNATION!!" Applejack yelled at the top of her lungs, but Applejack wasn't the only one here. Twilight was here, too. The two of their faces were of complete shock and hidden anger.

But, the whole time, only two words flowed through my mind...

I'm fucked.

OH SHIT, NIGGA! HE FUCKED!!

Just joking. I'm not racist.

Also, it's 2:00 a.m. I should REALLY be sleeping right now. Also, It has been offically 100 exact years since the sinking of the famous ocean liner, R.M.S. Titanic. ABC did a 4 part special of untold, real stories, that were revealed. And lemme tell you...

That 4 part special was the best thing I have ever watched. The animation of this ship, the sets, the actors, the clothing, everything was perfect, even the ship's break-up on part 4. Trust me, you have got to watch it. It's out for DVD, so yeah. Trust me, It's something you've got to watch.

Now, back onto the story. I have lost my touch with sex scenes, but I don't really think I did bad on this one. I should just copy and paste a sex scene from a story on fanfiction, and replace this one. NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW.

Ooooooooookay...That's it for now.

I gotta sleep for school. What's sad, though, is that there's only 5 bronies in my school. I'm one, and a friend of mine is one. The other 3, I have no fucking clue.

Chapter VIII will be up soon.

Exposed!

Here is chapter VIII. By the way, if you're wondering why I'm using roman numerals, is because roman numerals are utter win.

So, now in the last chapter, Lightning and Apple Bloom FFFFFFFFFUCKED!! And after that happened, Applejack and Twilight found them. Now, Lightning's dick didn't have to be in AB for AJ and Twilight to know. The cum was all that proved it.

...

I really need a girlfriend. Anyway, enjoy.

Chapter VIII: Exposed!

Apple Bloom and I sat there in shock, not knowing what to do as Applejack and Twilight stared at us. Applejack's eyes were wide with anger.

"A-Applejack...Ah-Ah can explain...!" Apple Bloom stuttered.

"You...YOU!!" She yelled. She looked at me. "Ah can't believe you would make mah sister. MAH SISTER! Do somethin' like this! She's only four!" She yelled at me.

"I...I..." I couldn't speak.

"I can't believe you would do something like this, Thunder!" Twilight said. The moment she said my name...my real name...my heart stopped.

Applejack slowly looked to Twilight. "Wha?"

Twilight turned to Applejack. "Applejack, the reason Lightning reminds you so much of Thunder, is because he IS Thunder!" She said.

"WHAT??" Apple Bloom yelled in shock. My left eye twitched.

"Here!" Twilight yelled as she pointed her horn at me, and instantly shot a beam of magic at me. A white light engulfed the room, as well as smoke.

When the light faded, and the smoke cleared, I began to cough, and my voice! It was deep again!

I looked down to find out that...I was normal again. I was a pegasus once more. My wings were big, my tail was longer, and I even got my cutie marks back!

"O...Oh mah celestia..." I heard Apple Bloom whisper.

I looked to her to find a face of shock, and...disgust.

"Apple Bloom..." I said to her as I neared a foreleg out to her, only for her to quickly jump back.

"Don' touch me!" She yelled.

"C'mon, Apple Bloom...Let's get to the hospital."

"Why?"

"To see if you're carryin' HIS foals," She said as she looked at me. She completely acted like I was a stranger, a freak.

"Okai." Apple Bloom walked out of the barn, not even looking at me. Before she left, Applejack neared towards me and whispered into my ear.

"If she's carryin' your foals, I'll make sure you'll never be able to make a foal ever."

After that, she walked out of the barn.

I...I can't believe it...In just a few short moments, I lost my fillyfriend, one of my friends, and I'm normal again.

I stood there in shock, depression...I couldn't even move...

"Thunder?" I heard Twilight speak up. She sounded like she cared. I couldn't even tell.

Instead of replying to her, I just slowly began turning towards the door of the barn, walked past Twilight, and walked out.

The only sound I heard was my hoofsteps, echoing in the air. Then, quickly, I fell to the ground, and It all went black...

2 Hours Later...

I opened my eyes to find myself in a hospital bed. I looked at my surroundings to see only the curtains from the windows, to the chairs next to my bed.

I then looked to my right, to see Twilight sitting in a chair.

"Twilight?" I asked. She quickly looked up to see I was awake.

"Oh, thank celestia!" She said as she hugged me.

"Hey, watch it!" I said as I felt pain in my back when she hugged me.

"Sorry."

"Don't worry about it." I looked at the clock. 3:30 p.m.

"How long have I been out?" I asked.

"Just a couple of hours."

"Did...Did they come here?"

"Yes...I saw them a couple of minutes ago. The results were negative, but they're still angry at you."

"Well, what was I supposed to do? Tell them I'm a 19 year old stallion stuck in a 4 year old colt's body?"

"Telling the truth is better than hiding it, Thunder..."

I sighed, and looked at her. "But, you did the same thing by hiding my identity."

Twilight's ears lowered and her face reddened in embarrassment.

I covered my face with my hooves. "Twilight...what am I going to do? They hate me! ...Including Apple Bloom."

"I think the best thing for you to do right now, is to go over there, and make things right. Tell them the full truth. The real truth."

I sat there for a moment, then looked back at her. "Okay."

I began to get out of my hospital bed, removing all of the equipment from my body, and stood up. I was going to head out the door, but then I saw my wings.

"You know what? I'm gonna fly."

I headed to the window of the 10 story hospital, opened it up, and jumped out. My wings opened up, and I flew into the air.

Sweet Apple Acres, here I come.

I'm really not proud of this chapter. Well, a tiny bit. But, at least it's a chapter. Next chapter will be the last chapter. But, you don't need to feel sad (Like you would ever feel sad), because I'll be starting another fanfic, starring Thunder. Every fanfic I do will have Thunder in there. It's a thing with me.

Also, here's a preview of my next fanfic.

As Thunder walked through the long, slanted hallway, all he could see on the floor were suitcases and clothing. He made a left turn down another corridor. Eventually, he reached the room. B-24.

"Here we go," he said as he opened the door to the stateroom.

Inside was a bed, a lamp, a drawer, and a suitcase.

"There you are."

He grabbed the suitcase and opened it, revealing many papers, most of them pictures of possibly the stallion's friends and family. Thunder smiled slightly at the pictures. He then put the pictures back in the suitcase, and found the stallion's ticket, labeled, "S.S. TITANIC: STATEROOM B-24."

Thunder then thought of when he first saw the Titanic at the Manehattan docks, in all it's glory.

His thoughts, however, were interrupted when he felt a cold feeling in his hind legs. He looked down and his eyes widened.

Water.

Get the hint? Get what the story's about? Eh? EH? I'll explain. The story is NOT on Earth. Silly people...Uh-I mean ponies. :]

Chapter IX will be uploaded tomorrow.

Make things right

Well, here's the last chapter. I had a thought before that since chapter VII was so short, I would make that the last chapter and extend it so it would have this chapter mixed with it, but I decided not to at the time. If you guys want me to do that, I could.

Also, sorry about the delay. As you guys know, FIMfiction kinda stopped working for the day. At least, I think it did. Also, my computer is trolling me, AKA: shutting off on me, so yeah, the chapter got erased a couple of times. Luckily, I memorized what I typed. Take that, you computing bitch.

Anyway, here's the last chapter.

Enjoy.

Chapter IX: Make things right
Sweet Apple Acres
3:45 p.m.

I flew as fast as my wings could flap. Before I knew it, I finally reached the orchard. I flew down in front of the Apple Family's house, and stretched my wings before closing them. Damn, that feels good.

After I closed my wings, I proceeded to the door of the house. Once I reached it, I knocked on the door. Moments later, I heard hoofsteps. But, these weren't soft, or average hoofsteps. These were hoofsteps of something big. Once the door opened, I knew it were the hoofsteps of none other than Big Macintosh.

"What do you want?" He asked angrily.

"Look, I want to make this right. Can I please talk to Apple Bloom?" I asked.

"No. She doesn't want to talk to ya. She don't ever wanna talk to you, so why don't you pick up your stallion plot, and your stupid, pathetic face, and just go away?!" He said, almost yelling.

I began to turn away, giving up almost instantly, when I saw something that kinda shocked me. "Uhh, Big Mac," I said to him, "Your barn's on fire."

"Nice try, stallion, but you ain't gettin' in."

"No, really. It's on fire."

"No matter how many times you try that, it ain't gonna..." I was getting annoyed, so I yelled at him.

"For Celestia's sake, Big Mac, your barn is on fire! look!"

He finally looked at the barn, and noticed that It was on fire. His eyes widened. He then quickly began to sprint towards the barn, gathering a few buckets of water before running again.

I looked back to the door of the house, which was still open. "One chance, Thunder. Don't fuck it up."

I proceeded into the house. I've never been in their house before, but something told me to go forward, then left. Sure enough, I found myself in the living room, with Applejack and Apple Bloom sitting down on the couch.

Applejack was the first one to notice me walk in. She glared at me.

"What're you doin' here? Why did mah brother letchya in here?" She asked angrily.

"Actually, he didn't. He's going to put the barn fire out."

"Barn fire?"

"Yyyyyeah, the barn's on fire," I said.

"What?!" She yelled, as she ran past me, and headed to the barn. I looked back at Apple Bloom.

"Ya made that up, didn't ya?" She asked, making a pouty face.

"Actually, no. The barn somehow went up in flames."

"Why are ya here?" She asked confused, but still frustrated.

I was silent for a moment, a tear tried to fall down my face, but couldn't. Finally, I spoke up.

"I'm sorry. For everything...For lying to you, not telling the truth, everything." The tear finally fell down my face.

"Why didn't ya tell me?"

"Well..." I chuckled. "Well, because I don't think you would like it, knowing that your coltfriend was a 19 year old stallion on the inside, but a 4 year old colt on the outside."

I slowly walked over to the couch that Apple Bloom sat on, and sat next to her.

"And...I was afraid that...you wouldn't like me anymore...I wish I could've told you before...but I couldn't..."

"But, if ya told me then, we wouldn't've been together."

"I know...Which meant that you would never've been happy..."

It went silent for a few moments, before I spoke up once more. "I'm sorry, Apple Bloom...please forgive me."

She smiled, and leaned close to me. "I forgive ya. But, is it alright if we can be friends?" She asked.

"Of course, Apple Bloom. Friends it is." I leaned close to her, as well, and embraced her in a friendly hug. I then heard the second she hugged me, that same noise that went 'squee' when Twilight hugged me just days ago. I chuckled.

Just a few moments later into our hug, I heard hoofsteps. I noticed that it was Applejack and Big Mac when I looked back at the doorway of the living room. Appearently, they saw us hugging, and Applejack, finally knowing we made up.

Big Mac, though, didn't smile. He just stared at me. I felt a little bit of fear inside me. Then, slowly, Big Mac smiled weakly. I knew he was happy, too.

And, the funny thing is, It took me just 2 hours just to make things right.

After we made up, everything pretty much went back to normal. Applejack, Apple Bloom, and Big Mac went back to bucking trees together. I went there a few days each week to help them.

All of the girls were a little sad after they found out I was back to normal, but Pinkie...well...she acted like I was still a colt. She hugged me and even tried to throw me into the air a couple of times. I apologized to Twilight about what I did a couple of days ago.

She quickly forgave me, but wanted me to help her around the library when I'm not helping at the farm.

I told Princess Celestia about the "colt and filly sex" rule that Mayor Mare had allowed. The mayor had to spend a couple of weeks in the Canterlot Rehabilitation Center.

Eventually, my love for Apple Bloom died, but our friendship will always remain.

Finally, after about a few weeks of this story, I. Am. Finished. This story was a little difficult to do, considering I had to think of ideas. Eventually, before I started working on chapters VIII and IX, I thought I was gonna eventually run out of ideas, and possibly cancel the story (Because I'm lazy like that), or hand it over to someone else.

Then, I thought, "The fuck is wrong with me? I'm fucking stupid if I think I'm gonna give up this story, or hand it over to somepony. I must continue this!"

Then, after I said that, I heard Rarity in my head, saying, "You must! You must! You mussst!"

Then, things got creepy. But, then I said okai. :D

Anyways, hope you liked the story. There will be another story coming up soon. And since I hate keeping secrets, I'll tell you. Man, I sound like a fucking girl...

Anyway, remember "Human of a Pony?" Well, I'll be glad to tell you that HoaP is going to have...

*Drumroll*

A sequel! :D

Now, I would like to say, that to every hater who thinks I'm pathetic, FUCK YOU I DO WHAT I WANT
Okay, I'm done. Seeya.

THE GAME

The note that brought us Together

You know why I'm excited? Because in just 5 days, It will officially be 1 whole century since the famous cruise liner, Titanic, Sank to the bottom of the ocean. For some reason, I feel like 100 years wasn't even that long ago. Oh, Well. Doesn't matter.

Anyway, My computer isn't doing anything else. There were two options on this one window, "Scan and fix," I need activation key for that, And "Scan later." NEVER X OUT OF IT IF YOU EVER SEE IT. IT WILL DELETE TONS OF YOUR SHIT AND YOUR COMPUTER WILL GO ALL GHETTO ON YA, BECAUSE MICROSOFT IS TROLL.

Alright, Enough of my dumbassness, Here's the next chapter. It's 1:00 right now. Tuesday, April 10th, 2012. 1:14 a.m.

I should be sleeping right now...

Chapter IV: The Note
Cheerilee's Classroom
10:30 a.m.

It was the next morning. I was sitting at my desk at school, While Cheerilee writes down an easy equation. I finally managed to fly to school without landing on my face.

Apple Bloom was sitting in her seat, Holding a piece of paper in her hooves. She looked over to Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle, who were smiling at her, and nodding their heads.

Eventually, I felt a tug on my left shoulder. I looked to my left to see Apple Bloom holding the note out to me.

I was reaching for the note, And didn't even notice Cheerilee turning around to see us. "Apple Bloom. Lightning. Is that a note?" She asked.

Apple Bloom and I froze in shock. I slowly panicked. The last time I was caught passing or receiving a note, I got a ruler to the face. Maybe things have changed since then...

I heard Apple Bloom stutter nervously. "U-Uh, Wa-Well...."

Cheerilee slowly walked towards us, And plucked the note out of Apple Bloom's hoof. "I hope you do not mind if I read this to the class, Do you?"

Apple Bloom's eyes widened. "N-No! P-Please d-don't..." But Cheerilee didn't listen. Why is she choosing to be like this? I thought teachers were supposed to be nice and not read notes allowed. Does she want to embarrass us?

But, Nevertheless, Cheerilee read the note anyway.

"Dear Lightning,

I've been wanting to tell you this since yesterday, When I first met you. I've been thinking about it, But I decided I didn't want anypony except you or my friends to know. If you read this note, I wanted to tell you that I really like you. No...More than like you. Love you. This may be a little too fast, But I was wondering if you might want to...well...go out with me?

Your new friend, Apple Bloom."

After Cheerilee finished reading it, It was awkwardly silent for a few seconds. I sat there, My eyes wide. They were like saucers. Apple Bloom does like me.

"Well, I will be right back." Cheerilee said as she walked out the door. I didn't even hear her.

I looked over to Apple Bloom, And pretty much, Her face was a deep red of embarrassment. Why, Cheerilee?

After a few more seconds, I began to hear snickers, Then giggles, And then full on laughter. Everypony, Except for Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle, were laughing very loudly. And then, I even heard someponies singing a song.

"Apple Bloom and Lightning Breeze, Sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G!" Everypony continued to laugh.

I looked back at Apple Bloom, Who was shaking, Tears in her eyes. She looked like she was about to cry from embarrassment. I felt extremely bad for her. And one thing went through my mind...WHY ISN'T CHEERILEE DOING ANYTHING ABOUT THIS?!

I looked to the front of the classroom to find that Cheerilee wasn't there. Where the hell did she go?

Eventually, I heard crying. I looked to see Apple Bloom getting out of her chair, Crying, And running out of the schoolhouse.

Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle's eyes were wide like mine. All of the kids continued to laugh. I got out of my chair, And began running to follow Apple Bloom, But a voice stopped me once I reached the door.

"Running to get your wittle fillyfriend?" I heard the voice say. I recognized it as...Diamond Tiara.

Quickly, I felt rage flow through my body, My green eyes turned a dark red. I turned around, And yelled at everypony, My voice deep with anger. I almost sounded exactly like my normal self.

"You all are assholes, You know that! You ponies just couldn't leave her alone, Huh! All she does is like me! NOTHING MORE!! HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IT IF YOU LIKED SOMEONE AND SOMEPONY ELSE LAUGHED AT YOU, HUH!"

I really didn't know what else to say at the moment, but it seemed to shut them up. I looked at Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle. I winked to them, Keeping a straight face. Luckily, The other kids didn't see me wink at Scoot and Sweetie Belle.

I then turned, And left the schoolhouse, Hoping Apple Bloom didn't run too far.

When I was a few yards from the schoolhouse, I began calling out her name.

"Apple Bloom? Apple Bloom!" I yelled, Hoping she would respond.

Soon enough, As I was walking, I felt something wet touch one of my hooves. I looked down to see a small trail of water. But not just any water, It was tears.

I looked ahead of me to see A Trail of Tears. I instantly began to follow it. Following this will lead me to her.

After a few minutes, I reached the edge of the Everfree Forest. Luckily, The trail didn't go into the forest, But really, On the edge. Pretty much walking along the edge of the forest. Weird.

I continued to follow the trail, And eventually...I heard crying. I continued following the trail, And the crying got louder.

After a few moments, I reached a big tree, And behind it, Revealed Apple Bloom sitting against it, Head in hooves, Crying.

"A...Apple Bloom?" I spoke to her, my voice cracked up.

"Everypony knows mah secret...Ah never shoulda made that note..." I heard her say, her voice cracked up, as well.

"If you didn't make that note, I would never have known you liked me."

"Please...Just...Leave me alone..." She replied quietly. I decided to ignore her, And sat down next to her. I then gently held her, And did something that made me forget about all of my other problems...I kissed her.

Her lips were very warm, And they tasted of...Well, Apples. It felt good. Real good.

I heard her quietly moaning. I opened my eyes, and saw hers closed, a look of bliss on her face. I closed my eyes once more.

After a few more moments, We parted our lips, Leaving a small trail of Saliva. Our eyes partially opened enough to see each other.

"Uhhh...Ah...." I heard Apple Bloom say, Causing me to chuckle.

I then wrapped my right foreleg around her, And laid very close to her.

"So...A-are we coltfriend and...fillyfriend?" She asked.

"Does this answer your question?" I asked as I kissed her again, But for only a second or two. She was dazed again, And slowly nodded yes.

I chuckled.

We then sank lower, So that we were laying down.

"Sh-Should we get back to class...?" I heard her ask me. I didn't want to go back to the classroom if all of those asshats were gonna just pick on her.

"Apple Bloom!" I heard a voice yell. We both turned to see Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle running towards us.

"Where did you guys go?" Scootaloo asked us.

"How did you find us?" I asked.

"The tears you left," She said to Apple Bloom, Who smiled nervously.

After a moment, The two of them noticed what we were doing. "Why is your foreleg around Apple Bloom?" Scoot asked.

After a second, They finally knew. They both smiled. "You two are...Dating?"

We both nodded.

"Awwww!" I heard Sweetie Belle say.

"So I guess things did turn out well?" Scoot asked.

"Uh huh," I heard Apple Bloom reply, Making me chuckle.

I had known Apple Bloom for a long time, But I never thought that we would actually be dating. But, It felt good.

I didn't really care if I was a stallion as a colt. What I really cared about right now, Was Apple Bloom.

Once again, It's 2:00 a.m. And I'm tired as fuck, so the ending isn't all that good. Still, I think this chapter was pretty good.

If you guys are happy, I'm happy. Also, If anyone is good with drawing, I would love to see if you guys would like to make Fan art of this. I'm not good at what to say when It comes to these things, But if you love this story, And like making fan art OF stories, I'd be glad to see what you can make.

Again, I have no idea what else to type above.

Chapter V will be up soon.