Furyheart comic script

by majenta mane

furyheart concept outline

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for starters, this is an outline, and details the extended plot of the comic, even if you intend to read only the script of furyheart and not wait for me to get off my ass and draw the comic, this is heavily spoiler oriented.

if you're willing to get things completely out of context then go ahead and continue

furyheart is thrown from the tower

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meets changeling, who is being chased by her own kind

changeling's powers don't work, but she finds a compromise

a group of ponies rescue furyheart

after some talking one of them notices a thing on his forehead

brushes at it, and it falls off, a transparent tube

everypony looks up at the horn now visible on furyheart's forehead, he screams

after some study, the unicorn speculates that it is in fact a pocket universe

the unicorn reaches in. after a moment he starts struggling to take off the tube of reality, but cannot, and begins screaming

he pulls out the bloody stump where his hoof used to be, and collapses from the pain

what happened? expansion of the miniverse pulled his hoof apart

that's all the short term stuff i have so far

in the long run, eventually everypony will discover that fury heart is from a long line of alicorns. he would have been in line as leader of his clan, had his cousin Little Boot (aka Caligula for those who don't know latin [no for real, Google Caligula if you don't understand]) not totally destroyed his face up in the tower on the clouds.

Furyheart's other cousin Frozenheart is hunting for him. this is a pseudo penance for her being related to Furyheart, to prove that she is more loyal to the clan's leadership than her close relative, and the way things "ought to be"

meanwhile Little Boot is absolutely tormenting the rest of his clan, and that's about all i've got at the moment

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