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Remembrance of a Dear Friend

by Deathscar
Fluttershy remembers the life she has lived and how a certain Rainbow has helped her through it all

Fluttershy tells the story of how a certain Rainbow-colored mare has helped her through all her difficulties in her life and how one fateful choice ended it all.

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Author's Notes:

For those wondering where Gilda is, allow me to explain why I didn't put her in. When Fluttershy first meets Gilda in Griffon the Brush Off, she didn't seem to recognize Gilda and vice versa. As such, the Junior Speedsters were always a separate after-school activity in my head so I thought that Fluttershy would have no relation to Gilda.

I need to widen my vocabulary by a lot if my writing is going to get any better. I also need to start writing consistently.

Cover image and story inspiration provided by the very talented Megacreomon: http://megacreomon.deviantart.com/

Don't forget to Read and Rate! Thanks for reading!
-Deathscar
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Edit 1: Spelling and Grammer check. Added some important lines to clarify as to why Rainbow would make the choice she did. Re-read is recommended only for the second last scene. Added minor details here and there.

Edit 2: Corrected a lot of things, such as sentence structure and grammer, after a proof reading my JohnPerry (seriously he has helped me drastically) and added a new major scene to provide even further clarification!

Everyone
Complete
Tragedy
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Sad
 
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7001 words: Estimated 35 minutes to read

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