Once upon a time, in the magical land of Equestria ,there was a two princesess and they rule Equestria.
One day, the Older sister started to be jelous.
Ponies looking at the moon and wishing.
But they can´t look at her beautiful Sun.
Then the flares started..
"The ponies get to marvel at your gorgeous nights, staring at the stars in the sky and appreciating their beauty. The only thing with
beauty in my sky they can't even behold it with their mortal eyes for fear of injury! The one beautiful thing I create, and it can't even
be looked at by anypony!"
"Sister please! Calm down! The sun has to be bright to allow ponies to see in the day!"
"I know, but if there were only day, then there would be only one beautiful thing to behold, and ponies would have no choice BUT to see my beautiful creation."
"Celestia, what are you saying."
"I'm saying, that there can only be one princess in Equestria, and that princess... is me!"
"Celestia, stop this madness!"
"Madness? This isn't madness, everything is finally clear to me! THE DAY, SHALL LAST, FOREVER!"
"Celes-... sister, please, I don't want to fight you."
"Then don't, little Luna. Step aside as I make the ponies bask in the light for all eternity."
"... then... you leave me no choice...""
"Come on big sister , one more page" whistle Scootaloo.
"No Scoots, it´s late night and you have to go to school tommorow" Said Rainbow Dash.
"Ok then...But you will read it tommorow , i want know how it en..." Scootaloo yawned, and then she fell asleep.
"you´re so cute when you are sleepy , lil sis" Rainbow Dash kissed Scootaloo on forehead and then ske went into living room.
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"Soarin you look so tired, Go home" said Spitfire.
"Ok ma´am, just few minutes please" Soarin replied.
"But for what?" She asked.
"I just...have...something to....Do...Hehe" He said nervously.
"Fine , see you tommorow" Said Spitfire and then flew away.
"And now i have time to see what Dashie doing" Said Soarin to himself.
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Rainbow Dash was lying in her rainbow pool and thinking about something.
"Hi Dashie!" Said woice from darkness.
"Huh?" she woke up from dreaming and rapidly turned."Oh...hello Soarin, What are you doing here? It´s a middle of the night!"
"I just have said- Really really thanks Dash." He said and sat down.
"You´re welcome, Wait! For what?" She asked.
"Well you saved my life three times, opened my eyes and you´re so cute" Soarin said and then started to blush.
"C-cute?" She said , red as chili pepper.
"Y-yeah?" he said, and he began to shake from nervousness.
"Oh c´mon , you don´t need to be stressed." she said and started softly smiling .
"On the other hand, it is nice to know that someone is nervous of me"
"B-but i´m not nervous at all" he said nervously.
"Then why are you sweating?"She said, and started looking at him with very sexi face.
"Guh...huh...umm..."He couldn´t say normal word.
"You're even more shy than Fluttershy is!" She screamed and kissed him.
They kissed gently, about a minute or two, and when they separated, Dash said-"I helped you a little. Better?"
"You have no idea how." he said, and began to smile, like a child what gets ice cream.
"So this means yes?" He whisped to her ear.
"Maybe, I need inspiration.."She smiled and they started to kissing again.
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"What is that sound?" Scootaloo asked herself, and and then she got out of bed and looked out of the window ...
"Daaaash?!" She screamed....
'Where is she?' she thinked 'Maybe i should look to her bedroom...'
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"Rainbow are you....uhhh"She looked to her bedroom and saw two light blue pegasus slleping in bed.
'Maybe he is her coltfriend...' She smiled 'And maybe i should go to bed right now '
Then she leaved Rainbow's bedroom and went to hers.
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"Hi Scoots , what's up?" Asked Sweetie Belle
"I have one VEEEEEERY special news" Said Scootaloo and smiled.
"How news? You've got your cutie mark?" Asked Apple Bloom.
"Yeah , tell that to us!"Screamed Sweetie Belle.
"I think.....that......Rainbow......HAVE A COLTFRIEND!!!!!!!" Whistle Scootaloo.
"Rainbow and coltfriend? That's better than "Evil Princess Celestia"" Said Sweetie Belle....
"B-but i saw them together in Rainbow's bed........And Rainbow, yesterday she read to me the story of the Solar Flare!" said Scootaloo...
"What is Solar Flare?" Asked Apple Bloom.
"I'll tell ya tommorow, OK?" asked Scootaloo...
"Oki, See ya later" said Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle drinking tea.
"Fine Bye!" Said Scootaloo and went away.
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"What did you want Dashie?" Asked Pinnkie Pie.
"Oh...nothing importand...Can you give me an usual please" Said Dash
"Oki doki loki, So that's Big Mocca Coffe, slice of pie and one Cherry cupcake, Anything else?"
"No, that's everything." Replied Dash
"So that's 3 bits Dashie"Said Pinkie
"Oki Pinkie" said Dash, and paid Pinkie.
"So what is Scootaloo doing, she said that se is going look what Sweetie and Bloom doing.
"That's good that Scootaloo have friends, before , she was very lonely"
"Yeah, now she is very happy, no matter , that she still can't fly, i must go now, Bye"
"Hi!"Said Pinkie and Dash left.
The next day:
‘I was allways wondered , why Rainbow Dash lik-…’ thought Pinkie Pie as she was mixing the muffin dough, but she was the interrupted by CMC.
“Hi Pinkie Pie!"screamed Cutie Mark Cursaders.
“Hi , what can I get for you today girls?" asked Pinkie.
“Three berry cupcakes with sprinkles , please !“ said Sweetie Belle.
“Oki doki loki girls!” Pinkie then heard a DING, which meant that her cupcakes were ready. She pranced from the counter and into the kitchen to see if the cupcakes were ready. After 2 minutes, Pinkie came out with a fresh batch of Berry cupcakes, warm and fresh from the oven.
“Here ya go girls, hear are your berry cupcakes with sprinkles".
"Are you the element of generousity Pinkie? It seems as if you were offering us cupcakes that need to be payed for with bits. But do we need to pay you anything?"Scootaloo asked in confusion.
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"Hehe… no silly, that’s just because I’ll do anything to make my friends smile. And Scoots, you don't need to pay for it because it is free. After all, you're all my friends for my life". The pink mare gave all 3 of the friends a big hug, almost causing them to lose some air.
The cutie Mark crusaders started eating, Pinkie smiled at how cute they were when they were eating the cupcakes as if if they were only 4 1/2. The mare was about to go back in the kitchen when she suddenly stopped by the leader of the crusader: Apple Bloom.
" Thanks Pinkie for the cupcakes they're absolutely tasty", Apple Bloom muttered with her with her mouth full.
"It was no biggie, but you're welcome". Then she walked back into the kitchen to bake more pastries.
Here is the edited version you asked for, but maybe you should add more paragraphs for this chapter you are writing for this story of yours.
“You’re welcome” replied Pinkie. ”And , did you see Rainbow Dash? I haven’t seen her all day.”
“Hmmmm…no we didn’t” Said Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom.
“I did!” Said Scootaloo
“And where ?”asked Pinkie.
“I saw her with Soarin today,”Scootaloo whispered into Pinkies ear.
“SHE' S WHAT?!
“Who’s what?” Asked Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom.
“I saw Rainbow Dash and Soarin from the Wonderbolts hanging out today just a half hour ago. I think he is her coltfriend, because two days ago I saw them in bed together".
“We must find evidence!” Said Apple Bloom.
“Are you sure? Last time when we tried to interfere in the relations …You know how it ended.”Said Sweetie Belle.
“Yeah….Lets start hunt for Rainbow Dash.” Sceamed Pinkie.
“But how? We don’t know where they are now…And What we are gonna do , if we will find them?”Asked Apple Bloom.
“Maybe we should take a photo of them..” Scootaloo thinked out loudly.
And then what? This doesen’t give any sense Scoots.” Said Sweetie Belle
“No , it’s briliant. “said Pinkie and then they left Sugarcuube corner to get ready..
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Even before that day:
“Are you sure you want to go to city?” Asked Dash. “What if somepony will see us together?”
“Are you ashamed of me?” Asked Soarin with cute smile and started to kiss her neck.
“No , I’m just worrying about , Spitfire…..You know what I’m talking about.”Said Dash with a little moan.”Heeey stop, this is not a clopfic!”
“Yeah ,yeah I know.” Soarin stopped kissing her and asked :”So are we going out or not?”
“Of course!”
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“So , I want blackberry ice cream , and I want Apple please.” Said Soarin and Dash together…
“So that’s one bit please” Said ms. Cake.
“Okey “said Soarin and paid her. Then they went away from Sugarcube Corner…But Sorain gnawed into his ice cream and he god a brain freeze..
“Uhh my head!” He squeaked..
“Awwww you poor , kiss would make better?” Asked Dash.
“Sure”He threw his ice cream to the ground kiss her , but on the other side of the road , in the shade of the house , were standing four ponies , One big with fluffy hair , three smaller..When Rainbow and Soarin were kissing each other , they three were taking a photos of them and talking to themselves.
“So it’s true , Rainbow is dating Soarin.” Said Pinkie and then they four hid to the shade of the house and started planing next action…
Author's Note
Heeeeeyyyy...so i finally found an editor....
So if this still isn´t good.....
