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Bricks in the Wall

by _NAME_
Sometimes, we put on a mask to hide our true feelings. Sometimes, we wear them for far too long and we forget who we are underneath. A story about a troubled stallion and his descent into madness. All in all, it was just a brick in the wall.

Sometimes, we put on a mask to hide our true feelings. Sometimes, we end up wearing them for far too long and we forget who we are underneath, and we lose ourselves to the madness.

My name is Pink, and I am alone.

I found my mask at an early age, and I’ve been wearing it ever since. I’ve hidden myself away, behind this wall I’ve made myself.

My entire life has been nothing but heartache and misfortune. I found solace in the bottom of a bottle, in sex, drugs, and rock ‘n’ roll, anything to fill in the empty spaces and block out the pain.

I used to think none of it was my fault, but now I’m not so sure. I’ve caught a glimpse through the cracks in the bricks that make up this wall, and I’m afraid.

I’m afraid that I was wrong.

I’m afraid to take off this mask and face the reproaching eyes of the world.

All in all, it’s just another brick in the wall.

All in all, you’re all just another brick in my wall.





~All chapters but the very last chapter of this story are finished. I made the decision to abandon this story with a heavy heart, but I have to move on from it. I have, however, posted everything I did write for the final chapter, as well as detailed notes to fill in the blanks. I consider this story completed now. Read this blog post for more info.

~Inspired and adapted from Pink Floyd's 1979 album, 'The Wall.'

Teen
Complete
Sad
Drama
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Profanity
Violence
 
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162763 words: Estimated about 14 hours to read

28 Chapters:

  1. Chapter Zero: The Show? 2012-09-21 20:48:59 UTC
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  2. Chapter One: A Million Tear-Stained Eyes 2012-08-22 23:44:52 UTC
    4073
  3. Chapter Two: Just a Memory 2012-04-23 10:25:31 UTC
    2861
  4. Chapter Three: Within Inches of Their Lives 2012-08-22 23:46:33 UTC
    4243
  5. Chapter Four: Just Another Brick 2012-08-22 23:46:57 UTC
    5857
  6. Chapter Five: Cozy and Warm 2012-08-22 23:47:16 UTC
    7250
  7. Chapter Six: The Promise of a Brave, New World 2012-07-04 17:45:40 UTC
    3046
  8. Chapter Seven: With Our Backs to the Wall 2012-07-05 14:54:22 UTC
    1877
  9. Chapter Eight: The Good Times? 2012-08-02 15:00:57 UTC
    4741
  10. Chapter Nine: A Passing Phase 2012-09-09 19:52:47 UTC
    3773
  11. Chapter Ten: The End of the Road 2012-09-09 19:58:03 UTC
    1258
  12. Chapter Eleven: The Writing on the Wall 2012-10-22 13:52:25 UTC
    13160
  13. Chapter Twelve: Goodbye Cruel World 2012-12-16 03:50:41 UTC
    3305
  14. Interlude: Behind Gray and Paranoid Eyes 2013-01-12 18:33:01 UTC
    130
  15. Chapter Thirteen: Getting Lonely, Getting Old 2013-01-21 16:43:14 UTC
    7231
  16. Chapter Fourteen 2013-02-01 21:08:57 UTC
    3701
  17. Chapter Fifteen: Fading Roots 2013-02-03 22:08:37 UTC
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  18. Chapter Sixteen: Where the Hell Are You? (Part One) 2013-05-12 17:36:17 UTC
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  19. Chapter Sixteen: Where the Hell Are You? (Part Two) 2013-07-06 16:09:00 UTC
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  20. Chapter Sixteen: Where the Hell Are You? (Part Three) 2013-08-09 15:20:21 UTC
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  21. Chapter Seventeen: A Few Hundred, Ordinary Lives 2013-12-16 20:59:17 UTC
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  22. Chapter Eighteen: Coming Through In Waves 2013-12-17 19:39:08 UTC
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  23. Chapter Nineteen: Take Away My Soul 2014-01-19 23:11:58 UTC
    3039
  24. Chapter Twenty: The Show 2014-03-13 16:47:47 UTC
    5495
  25. Chapter Twenty-One: Nerves in Tatters 2014-11-23 19:49:53 UTC
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  26. Chapter Twenty-Two: Stop! 2014-11-25 15:40:33 UTC
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  27. Chapter Twenty-Three: The Wall 2014-11-28 22:57:10 UTC
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  28. Chapter Twenty-Four: Outside the Wall 2016-08-30 15:22:27 UTC
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