Doctor Whooves: Past Adventures

by JohnSmith1963

Chapter 3: Commander Hurricane

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"G-Grandfather! I-I'm slipping!" Susan screamed, her hooves slowly losing grips from one of the control console's handles.

"Just hold on, Susan! Hold on!" The Doctor tried to reach the button on the control console to close the doors, sweat was running down his neck. His old physical body gave him difficulty, he could've done this easier if he was younger.

Susan loses grip and fell. Everything slowed down for the Doctor's perspective as he sees her dear granddaughter fall down towards the open doors and into the depths of the time vortex... The blue mare reaches her hoof forward for Susan to grab. Susan barely caught the blue mare's hoof and the force dislocated the blue mare's shoulder. The blue mare morbidly screamed as her hoof is just hanging around like a rope.

The Doctor slowly grabbed onto another lever, pulling his body closer to the button. He was able to reach it and closed the doors.

"Get ready for emergency landing!" The Doctor said.

The "Vwoorping" noise goes faster and faster as they go near to a random location in time. More electricty blows up inside the interior. The Doctor was able to put the TARDIS back to its upward position. The Doctor leans on the control console, coughing while grasping his aching chest.

"Grandfather!" Susan shouted as she trotted towards her grandfather and hugs him tight.

"Oh, Susan... Oh, my dear child..." The Doctor said in relief, hugging his granddaughter back.

The blue mare was on the corner, sobbing in both pain and sadness. The Doctor approaches her and examines her shoulder, it was badly dislocated.

"Take a deep breath. This shall only hurt for a moment." The Doctor snaps her shoulder back to place with a simple pull, making a loud snap. The blue mare screams in agony. "Susan, get the first aid kit."

"Okay, grandfather..." Susan said as she walks off to get the first aid kit.

"You know, I never did catch your name." The Doctor said.

"Berry Blossom..." The blue mare answered.

"Nice to meet you, Berry. I assume you knew the red stallion as well?"

"His name was Fire Heart... He used to be a royal guard, but he resigned and became a school principal instead so he can be with me." Cherry answered again.

"Fire Heart, hmmm? Well, I am deeply sorry for your loss." The Doctor commented.

Equestria, A very long time ago, 12:00 am

At an empty spot in the midnight sky, the TARDIS materialises slowly.

The Doctor looks at the TARDIS monitor. They have landed on somewhere (or somewhen) on Equestria's past. unicorns, Earth Ponies and Pegasi doesn't seem to get along. The Doctor and his companions open the doors of the TARDIS and sets hoof outside. The ponies are staring them while some are slightly afraid.

"Grandfather, I think we landed thousands of years into Equestria's past! Susan said.

Suddenly, a ringing sound is heard inside the TARDIS' doors. It's behind the white panel with writings on it. The Doctor opens it, revealing a telephone. He has a confused look on his face, knowing that it wasn't supposed to be a real phone. He grabs the phone and answers it.

"Hello? Who is this?" The Doctor asked.

"Hello? Can you hear me? Is this the Doctor?" The voice on the phone said, he seems to be in a hurry.

"Yes? What is it? What do you want?"

"Remember the thing that hit your TARDIS in the time vortex? That was a Creevix. It went back in time, and started altering history. You see, I am telephoning you from the future. If I remember correctly, you have been sent back in time to Equestria's past. Well, there's trouble that only you can fix. Remember the tale of the three ponies that defeated the Windigos? That event should lead the tribes to get along and form Equestria. But the Creevix altered that event and you need to fix it VERY VERY quickly! If you fail, time will be controlled by the Creevix and then they would devour the entire universe. How? I don't remember. Make sure you write all these down on your diary as it would help a future friend ALOT. It's timey wimey stuff. Anyway, Good luck!"

"Who are you? WHERE and WHEN are you?" The Doctor asked in an annoyed tone.

"Spoilers." The caller hangs up...

"Who was it...?"

"I do not know, Susan."

"Halt!" A royal guard yelled. The royal guard approaches the Doctor and his companions. The royal guard is a pegasus and is wearing a black helmet.

"This is a property of the Pegasi. Earth Ponies have no rights to be here. You must present yourselves to Commander Hurricane." The royal guard said.

"And why would that be so important, hmmm? We're just time travellers from the future." The Doctor said, moving closer to the royal guard. The royal guard then suddenly points his spear on the Doctor's face.

"You WILL come with us and face the Commander. We don't tolerate disobedient ponies who aren't part of our tribe." The royal guard threatens the Doctor by moving the tip of his spear closer to his face. The Doctor doesn't seem to be reacting that much and stayed perfectly calm as if nothing happened.

"Yes, Yes... Whatever you say. Now get that thing off my face and get this over with." The Doctor said as he slowly moves the royal guard's spear using his cane. "There's a good fellow."

"Careful, grandfather..." Susan whispered, slowly hiding behind the Doctor's back.

"Who do you think I am, child? Do you think me so old and addled that I can't handle a single spear wielding fool?"

"I didn't mean him... I meant THEM!" Susan pointed at the approaching royal guards. There were 5 of them. The Doctor knew he couldn't take that much so he instead surrendered.

The royal guards surrounds them, all of them pointing their spears at the time travellers. Blue Berry and Susan are clearly very nervous. The Doctor, however, was annoyed.

"Oh, very well then. Take us to your leader if you really must. Must say, I might want some word with him." The Doctor sighs.

"Him? Wasn't Commander Hurricane a mare?" Blue Berry asked, being a history teacher.

"Your ridiculous book contains so many history inaccuracies. Especially that pathetic play. Augh, that cyan pegasus portrayed Commander Hurricane all wrong."

"Play? There's never been any play about Equestria's founding..." Blue Berry scratched her mane.

"Enough talk." One of the royal guards pushes the Doctor and their companions, forcing them to follow. They started walking, seeing all the miserable lives the ponies are living at the time. The earth ponies grow all the food, and in payment for providing weather, the Pegasi demanded some of the food. The Unicorns also demanded payment for magically raising the sun and moon. None of the tribes cared what happened to each other.

According to the Doctor, the real Commander Hurricane was a stallion and was very strict. He doesn't allow earth ponies on his land, merely seeing them as source for food in exchange for weather manipulation.

"Hurry up!" The royal guard yelled at the Doctor for his slow movement. He grabs him by the shoulder and forces him up.

"Get your filthy hooves off me, you impetuous fool! The Doctor slaps the royal guard's hoof off him.

The Doctor and his companions go to Commander Hurricane's fortress. It was guarded by almost countless of identical royal guards Inside, they walk down a very long hallway towards Commander Hurricane's office.

The royal guard knocks on Hurricane's door. The door opens, revealing his office. It had many statues and a collection of spears and helmets.

"Take him in. Leave the others behind." Commander Hurricane said, walking towards the Doctor. "I only need this old stallion..."

"What for, hmmm? Do you need some of my assistance?" The Doctor formally asked.

"Grandfather! He might kill you!" Susan tried to trot towards her grandfather, but the royal guards restricts her.

"Worry not, Susan. You know I can take care of myself. This will be over before you know it." The Doctor said as he enters the Commander's office. As the Commander follows the Doctor inside, Susan saw the Commander reach for his knife as the door closes...

Present Time, 4:50 am

Twilight wrote down notes about what the voice on the telephone said. She knows it could be the Tenth Doctor, the Doctor she knew and travelled with. She looks behind her to see Spike sleeping. She began flicking the pages of the book and sighs...

"Ugh, thousands of pages more and still going..." Twilight yawns and heads towards her bed. "I guess taking a rest won't hurt..."

Twilight gets ontop of her bed and hovers her blanket over her body using her magic. She closes her eyes, tired from all the reading. Outside, something entered the TARDIS and quietly close its doors...

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