Girl From Equstria

by Admiral Q Ponyform

Rating: everyone
Tags: Other, Sunset Shimmer, Human, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 10221

A rewrite of Equestiran Girls where Twilight enters a human world to search for her stolen Element

A rewrite of Equestrian Girls and correct some of the glaring flaws of the movie. Twilight still has to enter a human world when Sunset Shimmer steals her Element Crown. In a strange world with no friends but Spike she will have to find her crown not in a highschool but a city.

Published 2014-06-25 03:30:02 UTC
Last updated 2014-09-15 18:17:51 UTC

Chapter 1

Girl From Equestria

By Admiral Q

It was a typical day in the Crystal Empire since it was pushed forward in time my it's former king Sombra. With the help of the Elemental Bearers the last surviving member of the Old Royal Family Princess Cadance now sits on the throne with her husband Shining Armor and rule with peace and justice as the Empire is now a protectorate of Equesrtia. However the day is not as normal as it seems. At the train station where goods and people travel between Equestria proper and the Crystal Empire we see six mares getting off together and many would still ignore this but for one fact. One of the mares had both a horn and wings. “Oh so nice to be back to the Crystal Empire! Oh those fabulous sparkles! I could just die darlings!' Rarity said as she viewed the heart of the Empire from the train station. Twilight just smiled at her friend's antics and commented.
“You think you brought enough luggage Rarity? Poor Spike can barely handle it.” She could barely see the baby dragon under all that luggage.
“But dear you can never have enough. If I don't have all my materials for a outfit you need in a jiffy I be devastated and my Spikey Wikey has got it under control. You should more concern about the conference princess. This is the first ever Princess Conference ever and you need to be ready.” Rarity then look at twilight's mane. “Your highness please tell me you didn't leave your crown behind?”
“Rarity would you please stop with the titles. I don't want them from you or my friends. I'm still Twilight to you and my crown is in the bags. I'm not comfortable wearing much just like these wings. Heck I'm lucky I didn't kill myself with the glide during my coronation. What a way to start being a princess, face planting right into a wall. That would have looked good in the papers. I'm just not worthy of the title girls.”
“Now that's just rubbish Twi.” AJ commented. “You earned it fair and square with everything you've done. Trust us when we say we're proud of you sugarcube.” They rest of them nod causing Twilight to smile.
“Thanks girls.” Pinkie Pie wraps a hoof around her.
“Ah you're just neverousited.”
“I'm what?”
“Neverousited, neverous and excited at the same time.” Twilight just looked up and shook her head and mentally said. 'Ah Pinkie.' The group finally walked to the capital and withing the city limits they all begin to sparkle as they are within the average shield of the Crystal Heart. They all take a minute to get use to their new look before continuing on and they are allowed in the castle proper. In minutes they were lead to the throne room and saw Cadance sitting on the throne with Celestia and Luna at her sides. But as soon as Cadance saw Twilight cheered. “Twily!” She raced to the younger pony and they both did their signature hoofshake before nuzzling. “How are you my dear sister in law?”
“I'm good Cadance just happy to see you again.” Luna and Celestia approach then and greeted the group.
“Good to see you all my little ponies. I hope this conference will be enlighting and bring many successful ideas. Now go ahead and unpack and meets us for dinner. You must be hungry.” The group admits they are and quickly unpack in their rooms before being escorted down to the dinning area. Where they other were waiting and Twilight greeted her brother and diner was on and the talked between bites catching up on eachother and the occasional joke but as day gave away to night the trip showed it's wear on Twilight and company so they bid ado and headed for their rooms.

Twilight was doing some last unpacking which included her crown. The crown was a modified version of the tiara she wore when wielding the Element of Magic. She placed in on her head and looked in the mirror for a couple minutes before sighing at the image. “What is it Twilight?” She turned to look at him.
“Spike Cadance was given the Crystal Empire to rule and now that I'm a Princess does Celestia expects me to rule a kingdom? I'm not one to lead people Spike.”
“You would be a good leader Twilight but remember it took Cadance years before she got the Crystal Empire. I don't think Celestia would throw that much at you right away.”
“You're probably right Spike. She always tasked me with something when she felt I was ready but I'm certainly not ready for ruling anything right now. But I'm tired so good night Spike.” She places the crown on the nightstand and enters the bed. She sighs as she tries to relax then. FFFROOOMMMP! A wing pops up and she frowns trying to get it back to her side but it refused to stay their. FFFROOOMMMP! No the other one was popping up! She grunted as she struggled with both wings.
“Twilight?” She hears spike ask.
“It's my wings Spike. Just trying to get comfortable that's all.” She manages to get them to her sides and gets the cover on. She lays there for a few seconds then. FFFFFROOOOOMMMMPPP! And Twilight groans.

Hours later a door to another room opened and a cloaked pony came out. She silently walked the corridors and dodge the Royal Guard patrols, checking the rooms looking for something. Finally the pony found that she searched for. Although she hasn't seen it before she heavily research Celestia's records and defiantly caught up on some reading when she returned a couple days ago. The Element of magic. The most powerful of the Elements of Harmony right there in the open. She carefully sneaked past a baby dragon and got close to the night stand. A light blue aura of magic surrounded the Element and she carefully placed it in her cloak's pocket. With a smug smile she walks away, only to be tripped by the sleeping dragon's tail. 'Ah horse apples.' She thought as she hit the floor.

Twilight was in a dream when she heard and clatter and a “Oommph!” That woke her up and she rubbed her eyes and saw a pony flee out the door with something gold in her cloak.
“Wha..?” Then Twilight noticed her crown was not on the stand. She fully woke up and raced after the pony. “THAT PONY HAS TAKEN MY CROWN!” The ruckus has woken her friends who look out their doors to see two ponies running past them. Twilight was closing in on the pony and leaped as the pony went into a a room and they collided and fell to the floor and both grunt and Twilight heard a clang of metal hitting the crystal floor and saw her crown bounce of a couple items before disappearing in a mirror. “What in Celestia?” Frowning she looked at the other pony. With the cloak's hood knocked off she had a good view. The other was a unicorn mare with yellow gold fur, a red and gold mane and bluish green eyes. The unicorn looked at her with a smug look.
“Sorry Twilight, nothing personal.” The unicorn got up leaped over Twilight before disappearing into the mirror as well. It was then that her friends and the royal sisters.
“What in the hay is going on Twi?” Applejack asked.
“A unicorn mare just stole my crown and both she and my crown went through this mirror.” Celestia recognized the mirror and looked seriously and asked.
“Can you describe this unicorn Twilight?” Twilight did and Celestia closed her eyes and sighed. “it is her. Twilight, that was Sunset Shimmer. She was a student of mine just before you. She had great magic potential and was quite resourceful and intelligent. But she was impatient and became very interested in this mirror. I got it when Star Swirl passed away. He said it led to another world but I never tried it. I have just read his observations which Sunset took great interest in. She eventually went through it and I waited for her return. When Cadance took over the Crystal Empire I decided it would be good to split the magic artifacts stored in Canterlot to here and it seems the mirror was among those moved.” Celestia then looked seriously at Twilight. “There is no telling what the Element of Magic would do in that world. Out of all the Elements it's the one that can operate alone easier then the rest. Twilight you must get it back. Gather anything you might need for I can't tell you what to expect.”
“Alright we'll get our stuff to.” Applejack said and began to head for her room when Celestia declared.
“You will not.”
“Are you out of your mind your highness. If Twilight's going we're going.” Rainbow Dash stated.
“You can not go with her. It's bad enough that Sunset Shimmer and now the Element of Magic are there but to add you all. That could be very dangerous. No Twilight must do this on her own. I will only risk it if things become dire.”
“I understand Princess I'll go get ready.” Twilight finally said. “You girl's be ready if I need you.” She was about to head out when Celestia interrupts her.
“Twilight the portal remains open for seven days before it closes again for every three months. We don't know how long it's been open right now. If it closes before you're done then wait till the next opening and either return with your crown or send a message. If I receive none then I'll send your friends.” Twilight nodded and went to gather her supplies. Twilight filled her saddle bags with gems for currency a compass, and a blank book and a handful of food and returned to the room.
“Good luck Twilight Sparkle.” She nodded took a deep breath and stepped through the mirror. She vaguely heard her friends yell.
“SPIKE!” Then everything got distorted and she blacked out.

When Twilight woke up she noticed a chill and the wind felt different then she has felt it before. “Twilight?” She heard a familiar voice and opened her eyes. In front of her was a dog, a golden retriever she guessed but it's green eyes held a familiar look so she took a guess.
“Spike?” The dog nodded. “But you're a dog?”
“Yeah I noticed trust me. It's certainly going to be interesting being your number one assistant now.”
“Is that why you disobeyed Celestia's orders?” She manage a shrug with his new body.
“Couldn't let you do it alone, but enough about me. At least we know what I am. I have no clue what you are.” Twilight raised her fore hooves to discover they weren't hooves anymore. They were claws....blunted claws covered in skin with no fur. She had only seen that a couple of times with doctor's operating in an area with no medically train unicorns. She fiddled with her digits getting use to them then took stock of herself. She was fur less all over accept a patch near her pussy and her teat have moved forward just below her neck and on top of mounds. She touched them and that caused a pleasant feeling. She also noticed her mane. It was more black than it normally was and didn't see the usual pink stripes it had. She glanced behind her and didn't see her wings or tail. It also seemed her saddle bags had changed to a single large bag but everything inside was okay. She also noticed the bag still had her cutie mark and went to check if she still did and she did, smaller then usual but they were still there. Since she had claws she figured that her body was like Spike's dragon form and tried standing. She was wobbly but manage to stand and looked around. She was in a park if she was to judge. Next to her and Spike was a stone block with a statue of a large earth pony rearing back. It reminded her of Celestia with out her hair, horn, and wings. She saw towers in the distance and dark clouds in the night sky. She started walking the path, or tried to. She tripped herself and landed hand on the stone walkway. “Twilight you okay?” She gritted her teeth to the pain and replied.
“I will be just trying to get use to this body.” Her knee bleed a bit and throbbed as she tried to stand again.
“Just take it easy Twilight. One step at a time you only have two legs now.” Slowly she got a handle of two leg walking but the wind has picked up and she heard the rumble of thunder.
“Great I pick a night they scheduled a storm.” Then it began to rain and she REALLY missed her fur.

She was pretty soaked as the storm hammered the town when she exited the park. She saw a house at the edge of the park. With a shrug she ran to it and knocked on the door. From inside she heard a muffled male voice. “Now who in the heck knocks on the back door?” She saw a face peek out of the door before it opened. The male then looked at her in shock and blushed. He wore a pair of clothing. One covering his torso the other his legs.
“Sorry to intrude but the storm and it's so cold.”
“It would be without clothes come in come in.” He looked down. “And you dog to. I hope he's house trained.” He stepped aside and allowed them both in.
“Oh Spike is very house trained.”
“Good wait here a sec.” He disappears for second before showing up with a pair of towels. “Hear dry up with these and all be back again.” She took the towels and he disappeared again and she dried herself off and he came back. “Here some clothes. They won't fit you properly but will comfortably cover everything needed and I'll heat up some food for you.” He took off and she and she spent minutes figure out how to put the clothes on. Using what she saw of him as a guide she finally manage to get it on. The top article was red with a galloping pony in black and a pair pf leg coverings also in red. Now covered she walked further into her hosts house.

She walked into a hallway with a couple doors and a stairway and saw him come around the corner at the edge. “Ah good your dressed follow me.” She did and ended up in the living room with a fireplace going. He helped her to a chair near the fire and that felt nice and warm. He then went back to the kitchen and returned with a bowl of delicious food. “What is it?”
“An old family favorite, chili. I'm Spirit Cimarron.”
“Twlight Sparkle.” Spirit nodded.
“Interesting name, well Twilight what are you doing out in a stormy night naked? Good thing the police didn't see you. They arrest you for indecent exposure.”
“I was looking for something taken from me and issues happened as a search thus my current situation.”
“Why not go to the police?”
“This is something I have got to do on my own.” Spirit stared at her for a minute making her feel uneasy till he finally said.
“Okay, so do you have a place to stay?”
“No I don't, I'm new to the area. I don't even know where I am. I just followed the trail.” She took a bite and loving the taste. It wasn't like anything she had before.
“Well you are in Canter City a small but growing city in the United Colonies of America and I have plenty of room for you and company will be nice.”
“I'm from a place called Equestria and i'll take your offer. I need all the allies I can get.” He smiled.
“Good the room upstairs on the fare right is mine but the other two bedrooms are open. Tomorrow I'll take clothing shopping so you can get your own clothes. Got any cash?” Twilight opened her bag and took out a couple of gem stones. Spirit whistled at the sight.
“How many of those you got?”
“A few.”
“Well then keep a couple and I'll take you to the bank to get some cash and open an account for you. Then clothes shopping.” he left her to finish her meal and she yawned. And she heard him chuckled. “Long day?”
“You have no idea.”
“Well get some rest and i'll see you tomorrow.” She nodded and manage to get up the stairs without too much of a problem. Once up the stairs she was in a small hallway and went to the nearest door. She flung her head back and walked forward. Right into the closed door.
“OW!” She rubbed her head and noticed her horn was gone.
“You okay?” She heard from downstairs.
“Yeah I'm okay.” 'Just lost my ability to do magic that's all.' She said mentally. She used her claw and opened the door, to a bathroom. It was then she felt the need to relive herself and did so with only a little hassle. She tried the next room and found a bed a dresser and an empty closet and a desk. 'Good enough.' She put her bag down and strip. And sat on the bed. Then she noticed Spike. “Hey spike did you get something to eat?”
“Yeah Spirit gave me some carrots and a water dish. So what's thew plan?”
“Well do what Spirit suggested then start looking for clues to where the crown is and get it before Sunset does if she doesn't already have it.” Spike yawned and finished.
'Well that's for tomorrow goodnight Twilight.”
“Goodnight Spike.” She pulled the covers on herself and wonder how her friends were doing and how she was going to find her crown in the strange new world with no magic to wield. Luckily her wings won't be bothering her sleep.

Chapter 2

She awoke the next morning with the sun shining in her room. She stretched and got up grabbed her clothes. She opened the bedroom door and peaked out. Not seeing Spirit and went to the bathroom and after some relief she decided to try the shower. While she found the shampoo and body wash easily trying to use them was another story. They slipped out of her claws so many times. Finally she manage to get herself clean and dried and got her clothes back on and head downstairs with Spike joining her. She comes down and sees Spirit working in the kitchen. It was then she noticed his main, last night the dark and then the fireplace she didn't get a good look at it but in the morning light she saw it was red and orange “Morning.” He looked up and smiled.
“Good morning Twilight. Breakfast is almost ready.” Spike barked at him and he looked down. “Don't worry Spike I haven't forgotten you either.” She placed a plate down and Spike dug in. Minutes later Spirit brought out a pair of plates. “Here we go, scrambled eggs and bacon.” A shocked look came on her face.
“Eggs! And Bacon! You mean this is all meat?”
“Yup, so was the chili last night.” A look of sheer agony appeared on her face. “What's wrong, you said it was good and had no trouble wolfing it down.”
“But, but it's meat. I can't believe I ate meat! Oh Celestia.”
“Sorry didn't know you were a vegetarian. How did you not know Chili had meat?”
“Where I come from that has never been on the menu.”
“Strange place well give me a sec.” He took her plate and dump the contents onto his. “More for me anyway.” He then got up and whipped up a non meat dish and handed that to her.

After breakfast Spirit took her to the back but she was studying the chariot he drove or car as he called it It was a wonder machine but she wonder why it was black. The colors she associated with her host were red, orange and gold not black. She asked him about it and he said the car was given to him by his father and that black fit the car perfectly. She also looked at the wonder of the city. It reminded her of Manehatten over Canterlot. Tall rectangular buildings reading for the sky. They stopped in a area that seemed reserved for these cars for she saw several without anyone in them. Spirit got out and she followed and spike was about to follow when Spirit. “Sorry boy but they won't allow you in. So stay in the car.” He closed the door on Spike and she saw him give a hurt look and pleaded with his eyes. She shrugged.
“Sorry Spike but he knows this place and it's rules.” Spike stepped away from the window which was open a crack for cool air. And She and Spirit and Twilight walked away.
“Man this sucks being a dog. I should be with Twilight.” Spike said when no one was around.

Inside the building Spirit wrote into a book and they took seats nearby. Twilight was nervous and she looked over to Spirit. He was calm and collect and reminded her of her brother Shining Armor. Especially when he noticed her staring and gave her a small smile. “It will be okay Twilight. This is a routine thing.” A male in a fancy outfit approached the book and looked in.
“Miss Sparkle?” He asked and she nodded. “Please follow me and Mr. Cimarron what are you doing back so soon?”
“Just helping the young lady open an account here.”
“Very well.” He led them to an office and offered them seats. “Alright Miss Sparkle or Mr. Cimarron give me the details.” Spirit looked at her with an unsaid question. She just nodded at him and he began.
“Miss Twilight Sparkle here would like to open an account here. She will want exact conversion of value of these gems.” With a gesture to her Twilight opened her sack and took out six gems. She heard the back man whistle at the sight.
“Those a sizable gems. I'll have to take them to our jeweler for appraisal.”
“Go ahead.” Replied Spirit and the banker took out a box and put them in before heading to the jeweler. It was a couple minutes later when he returned.
“They are assessing them now should be only a few minutes. Till then we can get your account setup. You have any ID we can use to speed this up?” 'OH HORSEAPPLES!' Twilight thought. 'The only ID I have would show me as a pony. How am I going to get out of this?'
“Um none you would recognized sir. I very recently came here and any documents I would have of my entering was lost after an accident. I have been living under the charity of Mr. Cimarron here and he's helping me get back on my feet.”
“Okay then well it just means will have to take more time that's all.” They went through a whole list of things starting from her name and date of birth which she answered through number just in case the names of their months were different. They took what they called fingerprints and her current residence. As they were just finishing that one of the objects on the desk made a sound. The banker picked up a piece of it and put it next to his face. “Okay, uh huh, Okay good to know.” He then put the piece back and addressed Twilight. “Well Miss Sparkle, those gems all together are about four thousand dollars worth. Just sign the paper here and we'll finalize the agreement and you should receive your check card within days.” A sheet of paper was pushed in front of her as well as something that seem to take the place of a quill. She took the quill thing in her claw and remember how spike held them when writing and did her best to mimic it. She saw where she was to sign and tried signing. When done she couldn't even read it herself but it was acceptable and the banker took it. He then lead them, to a counter and Twilight withdrew a couple hundred dollars and put them in her bag. Spirit frowned and commented.
“Okay getting you a wallet.” They left the bank and after a quick stop to pick up a wallet for her money they head off to their next destination.

He drove for a few minutes before stopping at a small shop. She looked at the sign and while written strangely it was similar to the language back home so she could make do. The sign said 'Blue Jewel Boutique.' “Did some research last night and this place is the best custom clothing shop in the city. And I always try to help the little guy for my father's company started small. Let's go in.” A small bell jingled as they walked in.
“I'll be right there!” 'That voice, it couldn't be?' in moments a female appeared. Despite the black mane she recognized the mane style and those blue eyes anywhere. How did Rarity end up here? Isn't she still waiting back in Equestria? “Welcome to Blue Jewel Boutique, I am Rayna Tery how may a serve you today?” Spirit spoke up.
“This fine lady is Twilight Sparkle and she needs a full set of clothing for she's borrowing mine right now. “
“OH deary we must get to work right away. Such a tragedy can not stand. We must hurry!” Before either Twilight or Spirit knew it the transformed mare was dragged into the back. Spirit looked in shock then at Spike who had a strange look on his face and start walking to the back. Seeing that Spirit then shrugged to himself and left to take care of somethings and silently wished luck to poor Twilight

The next thing Twilight knew she was on a pedestal and this version of Rarity, yes only a Rarity could pull this off started taking measurements at record speed. “Dear how did you end up in such a situation?” Rayna asked as she finished up the measurements.
“Trouble getting into the city. Only manage with by bag and my dog.” Typical spike he was in the corner adoring the other mare.
“And such a handsome dog too deary.” She walked over and scratched his ears before giving a look Twilight has seen often in her friend. The 'what will work with her' look. Then she brighten and said. “IDEEA! I can make a perfect outfit for you deary and it will take a couple days to get it together but it will be perfect. Till then I do have several items that will fit you.” Rayna then disappeared and Twilight stared in her wake.
“That was just creepy Spike.”
“It was heaven.” he replied.
“Have your crush later Spike we still have my crown to find.” Soon Rayna appeared with a bundle of clothing.
“Here are some that will fit you. The dressing rooms are over there.” She points to a series of alcoves with cloths to block viewers. “Just keep your undergarments on.”
“Um, I don't have any under garments.” Rayna did a drop jaw for a minute before she raced away and came back with a bunch of undergarments.
“There you go deary they are on the house no pick one and try it out.” Twilight went in and close the curtain and changed. She noticed most of the clothes match her old coloration as a pony. How did she know? She even included a matching pair of shoes. She looked at the old worn shoes she wore that Spirit had around. She put it all on and opened the curtain. Rayna looked at her in glee. “You look marvelous dear.”
“How did you know these were my colors?”
“Dear they match your lovely lavender eyes and your back pack has the gorgeous symbol. It was an easy guess. Now if any don't fit right I'll adjust them and the cost will be 150 dollars.” Twilight paid and checked out the front and didn't see Spirit waiting.
“Looks like he's not back yet.” Twilight muttered.
“Why not call him?” Ask Rayna.
“Call?”
“You know,” she put a hand to her head in a fist with two digits out point to her ear and mouth “Call him on your phone to pick you up.”
“I don't have a phone or how to contact him.” That got another dropped jaw with a facehoof.
“Okay you can stay here till he returns just don't touch anything unless I ask.”
“That's fine Rayna. I have a friend like you so I know not to touch.”
“Have I heard of her?”
“No she is a small business but she has the talent to go far.” Twilight looked around. “You run this by yourself?” Rayna nodded.
“Talent, inspiration, timing, and luck got me here. Heck I am making the gown for the Miss Canter City contest. That will really make my mark in the industry.”
“The Miss Canter City contest?”
“Yes deary. Mayor Celina Sunray made it the first year she was elected mayor and was a big hit till a few years ago when Sunset Shimmer won.”
“Sunset Shimmer!”
“You know her?”
“Only heard of her and had a very brief encounter that wasn't on the best of terms.”
“That sounds like her. She made her appearance in Cantor City about five years ago and won her first Miss Cantor contest a year later. She has won it ever since and predicted to do it again this year. No one tries to run anymore because she can be deviously nasty.” Rayna then looked at Twilight again. “You know you're the second person with that style of name after Sunset Shimmer.”
“We come from the same place and it's there I encountered her. If she's nasty how does she win all the time?”
“As I said she's devious. She has plausible deniability or runs unopposed.” Twilight heard a noise and Rayna took out a small device. “Oh it's the mayor I have to take this.” She pressed something and lifted the item to her ear. “Hello mayor what can I do for you?” Twilight strained to hear but barely hear a voice out of the apparent device. “No mayor shouldn't be to much trouble but I need a picture of the new crown to be sure.” Some more from the other voice. “Thank you mayor the gown is on schedule and will be more then ready for the celebration after the contest you have a good day mayor.” She pulled the device away and tab something on it.
“What was that all about?” Twilight asked.
“The mayor found a new crown to use for this years contest and wondered if it be a problem. It shouldn't be but I asked for a picture of the new crown to be sure.” They both heard a tone. “Oh and that should be it.”
“Can I see?”
“Sure deary. Hhhhmmmm, simple but elegant and that star gem is fabulous. I can see why she is using it. Wonder why she didn't change it earlier?” Twilight knew why. That small image on the strange device showed none other then her Elemental Crown. Now she knew where to look and began thinking. While she could have Spirit take her to the mayor and tell them that it was hers she still has issues she didn't have an answer for. One she has no way to prove it's hers only her word. She didn't bring any photo's of her wearing it and those photos will show her in pony form. No she will have break in and get her crown back. She will need Spirit's help getting blueprints of the building it's being housed in and equipment she will need. Well she took down, Nightmare Moon, Discord, and recently Terik she can pull this off.

Spirit showed up an hour later ending a lively chat between the two girls. Rayna worked on outfits while chatting and during the chat Twilight swore she was chatting with Rarity back home at times. She had come to the conclusion that this word was an alternate to her own, she now understood why Celestia was concerned of all her friends coming. If everypony had a counterpart here and they met who knows what could happen. She had to get her crown back and get back home fast. Back to the present however she saw Spirit's bright smile. “Twilight I forgot you didn't have a phone so I went and got one for you and it even has my number already in it. Well let's go have lunch.” He look towards Rayna. “Hey Rayna thanks for watching over her, you wanna join us for lunch.”
“Love to but still have work to do.”
“Well then I owe you a meal. Here's my card for you to cash in on.” He hands her a card and left the store with Twilight in tow. They got into the car and head out.
“Spirit I found what I was looking for. It's the crown to be used at the Miss Canter City contest.”
“Awesome, well after lunch we'll head over to reclaim it. I have met the mayor before and she is a fair and just person, sadly a rarity among politicians.”
“We can't.”
“Why? Wait, you have no proof you own it right?” She nodded. “So how are we going to get it?”
“I'm going to have to break in and take it and I need your help with that.”
“You're asking to break the law.”
“Just asking you to take me to the nearest library and hardware store. I'll take care of the rest.” He sighed.
“Well the library won't be needed. Let's have lunch first then we'll take care of this.” They ended up at a place called McDaniel's and Spirit got her a salad, fries and a cider drink while he had a double cheese burger, fires, and a chocolate shake. The food was good but what caught her attention was the cider. It was really good and when she looked at the label it to her surprise said, Sweet Apple Acres. She never imagined Sweet Apple Acres here. Spirit noticed her look and checked the bottle and smiled. “Oh Sweet Apple Acres the city's main supply of apples and apple related products which makes sense since they are the main reason the city exists and I have to admit their products are good.” First a Rarity and now Sweet Apple Acres, how much of her world is copied over to this one with a unique twist? The two went on and ate in silence enjoying the meal.

Once they arrived back at his place he gestured for her to sit at the table. She saw him take a thin object and saw a part of it open up like a book but sideways. He then touches something now revealed area for a minute or two then placed it in front of her and swung it around. “Here you go the blue print of city hall where she would likely have it.” Twilight looked at the imaged before her. It was indeed a blueprint of a building.
“Such an amazing device.” She commented.
“What you haven't seen a laptop before?”
“Not where I'm from.' She touched a button on a keyboard like thing and saw the image get bigger. “OOOHHHH!” Spirit snickered at her reaction to the laptop.
“I will call my people and have a van come over with various equipment you might need.” He left her to her work and made the call for the equipment needed. After a few minutes he hung up and a chirp from his phone made him bring it back out. “Yes KARR?”

“Interesting.” Spirit looked back in the direction of the kitchen. “Is he aware of your true nature?”

“Keep your eyes open. I knew something is off about them. I don't think they are a threat but I am curious.”
KARR signed off and Spirit again looked back at the kitchen and saw Twilight still looking at the screen and finding her way with the laptop as Spike sat next to her side. 'Who are you really Twilight Sparkle? There's something about your bag's icon that seems familiar.'

It was late at night that they began their mission. The plan was simple. Spirit would drop her off at a nearby park and she would use the park to get close to City Hall and break in grab the crown and head back to Spirit. Spike was left behind at the house and Twilight and Spirit were silent as he drove for minutes but then as they neared the drop off point they were interrupted. Twilight looked at him with an unsaid question.
“One of my people,” he then looked at the radio area. “What's up?”
The both look at eachother and think of only one thing. THE CROWN.

Chapter 3

Twilight was dejected when they returned to the house. She sat on a chair, and Spike went over and hopped onto her lap. She hugged him as she stared at the empty fireplace. Spirit sat in the chair next to her and sighed. Twilight looked at him.

“Any chance of getting it now?” Spirit just shook his head.

“Nope. For pride alone they will tighten security, and if Celina guesses that the crown was the target, then she will likely move it elsewhere. For an empathetic and caring mayor, she can be quite secretive when she wants to be.” Spirit frowned and continued. “No, the only option left is that you try to win the crown in the contest. I can get you into that no problem. Being a sponsor has its benefits. As for how to win, you are on your own. The only advice I can give is to be yourself and to be honest with the people.”

“Yeah, be honest with them. ‘Hey folks, vote for me! I'm a Pony Princess from another world wanting my crown back. Why are you running away from me?’” Twilight shook her head at those thoughts, then looked over to her latest friend.

“Any big issues in the city?”

Spirit shook his head.

“None that I know of, sorry. But Celina runs the city pretty well. If you find one, go for it. Any little bit helps.” Twilight was about to reply when a yawn came out. It seemed the news sapped her energy tonight.

“I guess I’d better get to bed. I have a lot of work to do tomorrow.” Getting up, she walked away. Spirit bade her goodnight and she headed upstairs.

Once in her room, Twilight sat on her bed and sighed.

“Well, this is going great, Spike. The crown gets stolen, and now my best chance to get it back is gone. And the most likely route to get it back is a popularity contest!”

“It could be worse, Twilight. We’re friends with Spirit. Imagine not having this place to stay! How long would your gems have lasted?” Twilight winced at that thought. Too used to being supported by Celestia with a stipend, she didn't have a steady income.

“Also, Twi, you do yourself a disservice. You are not that antisocial pony that came to Ponyville. You have been changed by our friends and they have been changed by you. You wouldn't be a Princess without them. Whether you can admit it or not, you are a popular pony back home. You can do this, Twilight. Have faith in yourself. Celestia has many times. So you have to win a popularity contest, big deal. Like it compares to Nightmare Moon, Discord, or Chrysalis.”

Twilight smirked at that. What was a little popularity contest compared to those?

“You're right Spike, I have faced worse things than this. I will find a way to get my crown back no matter what.” Another yawn came out. “Tomorrow.” She went to bed, with Spike laying down beside her.

In the morning, breakfast was a silent affair, the events of last night still on their minds. After cleaning up, they went out, and Spirit took Twilight back to City Hall. After going through the heightened security, they were directed to the mayor's office. There, Twilight saw Celina Sunray. She was a tall mare with long, bright gold hair that really shined in the sunlight. She turned to look at her guests and revealed magenta eyes and a warm smile.

“Ah, Mr. Cimarron. Good to see you.” Twilight was really creeped out. She just heard Celestia's voice coming out of this mare. Did everyone she knew have a counterpart in this world?

“Celina, how many times have I told you? You can call me by my first name!”

“Sorry, Spirit. It's already been one of those days. I swear I'm this close to ordering a box of doughnuts to munch on.” That got Spirit laughing a bit before he got serious.

“Yeah, I heard about that. Anything stolen?”

“No, thank God. But their target was the new crown for sure. I wonder why. Miss Shyra donated it to us after she said she found it, so I figure it was one of those really good fake pieces of jewelry, but now I'm not so sure. I'm having a jeweller come in to appraise it.”

“And what happens if it is a real piece of jewelry?” Spirit asked, worried about his current plan to help Twilight.

“I already announced it to be the new crown, and if I take it out now, people might think it was stolen. I'll just have extra security around it, and whoever wins it this year will get it.” Celina then looked at Twilight. “Oh goodness, I forgot my manners!” Extending a claw, Celina leaned towards her. “I'm Celina Sunray, mayor of Canter City. And you are?”

“Twilight Sparkle.” Twilight shook her claw. Celina smiled an unnervingly familiar smile.

“What a beautiful name.” Celina then looked back at Spirit. “Now did you need something, Spirit?”

“Yes. I'm using my privilege as a sponsor for the contest to bring in my own entry.” He gestured to Twilight next to him.

“Of course it's within your rights. Well, Miss Sparkle, head to the convention hall. Miss Parasprite is in charge of the decorations and the running of the contest. Go to her and tell her you’re in.”

“Thanks, Celina. See you later.” Spirit led Twilight out and they went to the car. They headed in the direction of the Convention Center.

They were halfway there when the car talked.

“Sir, the Board needs to meet with you right away. Q level alert.” Twilight saw her friend mutter something as a frown came on his lips. He eventually sighed and responded.

“Alright, let them know I'm on my way.”

“Yes, sir.”

“I'm sorry, Twilight, but duty calls. I'll drop you off at the Center. Call when you’re done, and if I'm not available, I'll have one of my people pick you up.”

“Actually, when I'm done there, I want to explore the city. See what I can do here.” She saw Spirit raise his eyebrows in amazement and nod.

“Good idea. Certainly would help your cause. When you’re done, call, and either me or one of my people will pick you up.” She nodded and they drove on until they reached the Convention Center.

The Center was a building made up of three large sections. There were more narrow areas that connected them, and the main sections had domed roofs. Spirit waved to her and her dog before taking off, only to stop a block or two away. He got out and looked at the dash board.

“KARR, go disguised and keep an eye on her.”

“Understood, sir.”

Spirit nodded and shut the door and walked away. The car without a driver tinted the windows so no one could see inside, and in a shimmer, the vehicle was now a red truck, but still had the distinctive yellow light that strobed side to side. It took off towards the Convention Center. Spirit smiled and walked into an alley, and soon afterward, there was a flash of light.

Twilight entered the Center and looked around. The room she was in was wide, but narrow, with several closed doors on the opposite side from the entrance. At the closest pair of doors was a sign promoting the Miss Canter City Contest. With a deep breath, she stepped through the doors to a room larger than the Canterlot ballroom. She saw tons of balloons and streamers around and several ponies...err, people…setting the balloons and streamers up. She turned to look, when suddenly, she saw big light blue eyes staring at her.

“ACK!” Twilight yelped and stepped back to the giggles of a female.

“You are SO funny,” the female said in a familiar voice. “Hi, I'm Polly Parasprite, heading the Miss Canter City Contest. So what can I do ya for?”

“Well, my name's Twilight Sparkle, and I'm here to sign up for the contest.”

“Okie dokie lokie.”

The girl then quickly moved to a table nearby and Twilight actually got a good look at her. She seemed the same height as herself in this form. She had poofy, curly light brown hair and wore a lot of pink. The girl practically hopped back to Twilight with a clipboard.

“We haven't really gotten anyone else but Sunset Shimmer to sign up.”

Polly went into a thinker's pose for a bit as Twilight signed the form. Not her best writing, but hey, she had always used her horn's magic before. When she was done, Polly got out of her pose.

“Come to think of it, you two have the weirdest names I ever heard! And trust me, as the city's premier Party Girl, I have heard them all. Still cool, but weird.”

Before Twilight could respond to that, the Polly looked over to where some doors opened.

“Ooooohhhh! Great, the juice is here. Excellent, Amber!”

“Well of course it's here! Dis here contest always brings in good money for mah family, Polly. And Sweet Apple Acres always delivers. We have a tradition of reliability to uphold. We didn’t become successful by puttin’ others in a hard spot.”

That voice and accent greatly disturbed Twilight. It sounded WAY too much like Applejack's. Looking in the direction of the voice, she saw a tall, fit mare with brownish skin with a light color, almost like foxes back home. Her dirty blond hair was tied like Applejack's was, and she even had freckles and green eyes. By Celestia, she even had a stetson hat! She was standing behind a dolly with cases of liquid drinks, from what Twilight could tell.

“Yupperoonie! Your family makes the best drinks and food stuff in the city, Amber. Between it and Sugarcube Corner, we've got this party stocked.”

“True dat. This will be one heck of a hoedown. I’m sorry, I forgot mah manners. Ah’m Amber Jane Appleson. And you are?”

Amber held out a claw, or “hand”, as Twilight had gathered. She grabbed it and shook it.

“I'm Twilight Sparkle.”

“Pleasure to meetcha, Twilight. You helping out Polly here?”

“Nope, she's signed up for the contest. Isn't that great?”

“That's mighty brave of ya, Twilight. Not many sign up anymore since that Sunset Shimmer gal always seems to get the crown. Be glad to see someone else get it for once. So good luck to ya'll.”

“Thank you, Amber. Well, I have to get going, and I guess I might see you all later.”

“Count on it,” Polly said. “I’ve got a 'Welcome to the city' party to throw you after the contest.” Twilight waved goodbye to them as soon as she and Spike left the building.

“That was...awkward,” Twilight said when they were alone.

“Tell me about it. Change their colors and put them in a pony body and bam! Pinkie Pie and Applejack.” Spike replied.

“Is this some cosmic joke that I'm running into versions of my friends here? I swear that Celestia would laugh her mane off if she knew. Come on, we've got a city to explore.” They headed into the city while a car slowly followed them.

An hour later at the Convention Center, Amber was just finishing up the last load of non perishable goods for the celebration party after the crowning, when they heard a familiar voice.

“What is this!?” Both girls saw the reigning Miss Canter City coming in. “This is an adult contest, for the crowning of me again! Not an eight-year old’s birthday party. Show the city's people some respect. I really wonder why Celina hired you for this year's contest.”

“And why are you sure that we'll be crowning you this year?” Amber asked. Sunset turned to the girl and smirked at her.

“Because no one in their right mind other than me enters anymore. My victory is assured.” Mentally, Sunset added, 'And after that, everything will change here.'

“I wouldn't count on that.”

“Yupperoonie! A new girl entered the contest earlier today. A girl named Twilight Sparkle.” That name caused Sunset’s smile to die.

“Well, she will lose like all the others. Now, less balloons and more streamers,” she said as she left the two.

'So the new princess followed me here in a pathetic attempt to get her crown back,’ Sunset thought. ‘Brave, Twilight, but you don't know this world, and I’ve spent years here. You will fail, and the Element of Magic will be mine.'

Chapter 4 (uneditted)

Twilight and Spike wandered the small city, checking the sites and getting a read on the ponies...er people. They seemed friendly waving at her and she waved back, but when she saw them gather in groups is was in separate groups not a big one. She saw every type of group you could think of during her walk. It reminded her of the story of Heart's Warming Eve. They were like the ponies tribes before Equestria, willing to work together but not be together. Maybe that was something she can promote, better unity. It worked for Equestria. Unbeknownst to her she was being followed. One was a sentient car making sure she would be safe the other none other then Sunset Shimmer herself. Sunset got lucky spotting her while doing other things and decided to observe the latest princess of Equestria and how to ruin her on Earth.

Twilight was still in awe of Canter City, it reminded her of Manehatten in style but more advance. She was walking next to a large building that reminded her loosely of the Cloudsdale Colosseum. She didn't walk by it long when somepony collided with her and they both went down in a heap. There was a pair of groans came from the pile. The other pony...person got up first.

“Hey sorry about that, let me help you up.” The being held out a claw and Twilight grabbed it and was hauled up and she got her first good look at the by voice was a mare. She was about her height and was lean and muscular. Her hair was a brown, light brown, and blond. She had magneta eyes and a smirk that seemed a bit too familiar. What really caught Twilight's eye was the logo on the shirt. It was the Wonderbolts logo. “You okay? I was a little distracted and didn't see you.”

“It's okay, I'm sort of used to it. I'm Twilight Sparkle.” Twilight held out her claw as she had seen Spirit and Celina do. The other mare took it and shook it.

“Girl, I feel sorry for you with that name.” Twilight scowled at the other mare.

“It's a perfectly fine name where I come from and at least I introduced myself.” The mare put her claws up in surrender.

“Okay I get the point, but I'm surprise I have to tell you. I'm Rainee Donaldson. He most talented player in the Wonderbolts.” Twilight cocked her eyebrow at the familiar attitude she saw. Did all her friends have counterparts here?

“Well I'm from out of town, foreign exchange student kind of thing.”

“Well I'll by that if you haven't heard of me.”

“Rain, did you run into another person? Jeeze you need to slow down sometimes.” Both mares look over to see another mare by a closing door. She had spiky red blond hair and wore a similar to the shirt Rainee wore.

“Sorry Sammy. At least she is okay.'

“For once, it's a good thing you are good on the court.” Sammy looked at Twilight. “Sorry for her antics. She can be a handful at times.”

“It's okay, I'm used to such collisions back home.” Sammy just shrugged and walked away. Twilight looked at Rainee and asked. “Who was that.”

“Sammy Fireheart, captain of the Wonderbolts. Well I have to get going. See ya around Twilight Sparkle.” Twilight saw Rainee get into a cyan blue car that scream speed to her and watch it drive off.

“This place is just freaking me out. I mean if that wasn't a version of Rainbow Dash then I won't eat ice cream for a year.” Spike commented now that they were alone.

“I'm with you there Spike. I wonder if it has to do with the connection between the worlds.”

“I believe it. Heck this world likely has a version of you somewhere. If you find her you can have a study off together.” Twilight serious considered that but she was in a time crunch and a mission.

* * * * * *

Twilight and Spike were still wandering around the city after a lunch break when Twilight heard someone call her name. Looking in the direction it came from she saw Rayna next to a mare with strawberry blond mane but she couldn't see her face since a wall of mane hair covered her face. Twilight smiled and walked over to them.

“Hello Rayna, what brings you here?”

“I was doing some shopping before meeting Felene here for our weekly spa outing. Felene, this is Twilight Sparkle. Twilight, this is my good friend Felene Shyra.” Felene very weakly said hi to Twilight. Going with a gut feeling Twilight introduced spike and watched as Felene's eyes widened and lit up. She was quickly next to Spike kneeling asking all sorts of questions while petting him. Spike gave Twilight a knowing look to which Twilight sheepishly smiled back. Rayna looked on before her eyes went wide. “Say Twilight, why don't you join me and Felene to our spa outing?” Twilight rubbed her neck nervously.

“I wouldn't want to impose on you.” Rayna waved with her hand.

“Pishtosh, you aren't imposing. I am even paying so come on.” Due to her experience with Rarity Twilight knew resistance was futile. So she relented and followed the girls to the spa.

* * * * * *

Twilight sighed as she laid back in the hot tub, her mane in a towel to prevent it getting wet. Rayna and Felene were next to her also relaxing in the tub.

“So Twilight, how has been your experience in this fine city?” Rayna asked.

“Very strange but friendly enough. I am just fascinated by how you live.”

“In what way, I thought we were a pretty average town? Granted we are in the most prosperous country but still.”

“Well..” Twilight began think of a way to say it without having to reveal the full truth. “How you do certain things are different from home. We can still do it but have a different means of doing it. You have also invented some things that we haven't back home.”

“Forgive my prying, but does that explain your tattoos?”

“My what?”

“Those pair of tattoos on your hips. I must say they are rather striking if a bit odd. They even match that image on your backpack. I saw them before we got into the hot tub.” Rayna was talking about her cutie marks.

'Think fast Twilight.' “Oh those, well they are a ...custom in my country. Everypony gets one and each unique to their owners.”

“Oh, that's a strange custom but they are well done.”

“It's just the way home is.” Twilight shifted a bit in the tub. “Aaaahhh! This feels good. Reminds me of the spa trips I have with my friend Rarity.”

“What's she like?” Rayna asked.

“She is a lot like you actually. I up and coming fashion designer. She could be far more successful then she is but she is so generous with anypony who comes by in a bad situation. Heck if she gets an idea she won't rest till she has tried it out. But she does have an issue with vanity.”

“I think I might like her.” Rayna looked coyly at Twilight. 'Any chance that I would be her?”

“Not likely.” Twilight shook her head as she said that.

A couple hours later the girls emerged from the spa with Spike giving Twilight an irritated look at being left outside. She went over an pet him before getting close to whisper an apology. They all heard a rumble and looked up to see a clouded sky and the wind pick up.

“We better get home girls. This storm is looking nasty.” Rayna said. “I've got my car nearby so I could drop you off Twilight.” Twilight was about to respond when Spirit's car showed up.

“No, that's my ride. Cya girls later.” With that they break up and Twilight and spike raced to the car and the open door. Spike got in first and as Twilight sat down and buckled up she started to say. “Excellent timing Spirit...” She noticed the empty seat next to her. “What the hay!?”

“W-what are you?”

“Ooooookay.” Twilight heard the car chuckle.

Twilight sat back and exchanged a look with Spike and she observed KARR drive them back to the house.

* * * * * *

She and Spike were back in the house after leaving KARR in the garage. Twilight turned on the TV and saw the standard program on with a new thing on the bottom. It read Severe Thunder storm Warning and spewed name after name which Twilight didn't recognize. But considering the lighting flash that happened out there as well as the rain, she assumed that the city was part of the warning area.

“Spike I wonder why their weather teams are allowing such a powerful storm?”

“Beats me Twi, but I am worried about KARR. He knows that I can talk.”

“That's not good but we can't do anything about that right now. We are running out of time.” Another flash of lighting happened and they both heard the door be opened.

“Whoo, that is some storm out there.” Spirit said as he was drenched from the rain. He saw them and smiled. “I'm glad you two got home alright. Excuse me while I get out of these wet clothes.”

When he got back down later they basically hung out and Twilight was introduced to the world of video games. Eventually though they loss power and the backups Spirit had kicked on but they decided to call it quits for the night. However as Twilight walked past his room to hers she heard guitar music and after listening for a few minutes it cause a cold chill down her spine. That was Winter Wrap Up Tune he was playing.

Author's Note

filler chapter with some hinting at the end.