Author's Note

Sorry it took me so long but I have been hit with a big time young life crisis and wondering what the fuck I am going to do now... I don't know but fuck it...... SO here it is another chapter, continuing with Dusk and Eris.
I know ........ no fucking editing AGAIN but its like.... no matter what editor I get, they never respond back right away and I don't like keeping you all waiting especially if they clopfics.......... sigh.......... so no edit sorry but hey..... CLOP!!!!!!!

New revised version by SuperChaosKG!!

Crazy Chaos Cuddles Pt. 2 (Revised)

If there was one thing that Dusk learned from Eris, it’s her total and completely unpredictability and madness. Of course that happened with Pinkie Pie as well, but the madness from Eris went to a whole new level.

Here he was, bound to a vanilla cloud (surprisingly comfortable and sweet smelling), with his cock, out standing tall and proud. Eris, villianess of chaos, was teasing him by slowly, and oh so painfully stroking him, while she was fingering (Clawing?) herself with a luscious grin that would make stallions fall to pieces.

Dusk was getting coated by her juices as she stroked his staff at an almost snail’s pace. His precum slowly oozed from his cock tip and dripped down past her claws and onto the cloud below or on his coat.

He desperately tried to resist the madness of Eris as she went so far as to casually bring her legs to her head. She gave him a look and made him watch, as she slowly brought her pussy close to her head. Her dripping folds glistened as her tongue reached out and touched her lips. She gave a moan that caused Dusk to shiver and shake in excitement.

The serpentine tongue easily split and slid in between her folds, dragging an even longer moan. Her stroking on his shaft did increase though. As she pleasured herself more and more, her moaning grew louder and louder.

Her tongue explored her own depths, going deeper and deeper and swirling all around her inner walls. Her juices flowed out like a fountain, coating her fur and the rest fell onto Dusk. Dusk was moaning himself as her stroking was ever increasing and his climax was approaching. He thrusted his hips into her talons, his precum flowing freely over her.

The climax was imminent and the slowing down when she wanted to play with him only fueled his fire. He didn’t dare admit that he was enjoying this but his thrusting hips say otherwise.

Eris was enjoying herself immensely as she continued to eat out her own cunt, almost approaching her orgasm. Her tongue seemed almost desperate to eat or drink her own juices. Whatever her tongue didn’t catch, it fell onto Dusk.

With their climaxes fast approaching, Dusk made a final attempt to reach his climax by thrusting his hips deeply into her talons. Just as he was about to reach his peak, the talons slipped from his cock and the emptiness made Dusk cry out in agony as his climax was denied. Eris grinned in her and giggled before making the loudest moan of all and climaxed hard onto her mouth and face.

She opened her mouth large enough to cover her gushing pussy and drank in her climax, only leaving a few droplets to fall onto Dusk Shine. Dusk continued to moan in agony as his climax was slipping from him and he watched as Eris enjoyed her orgasm.

With a satisfied ‘ahh’, she removed her lips from her lower lips and left it almost cum free. A few juices still dripped out. She then twisted her body so her cunt still dripped the leftover juices over his face.

“Mmm, that was satisfying. Wouldn’t you say, Dusky?” she answered sweetly. Dusk was coming from his high, his breaths were almost whinny and wheeze. His stallionhood was still standing hard but slowly it was starting to loose its strength.

“Hmm, if you weren’t the only stallion of your kind, I would fuck you till you died.” She paused before grinning. “Maybe even after that. Though I am thinking that Silhouette would be on that department with her whole ‘dark magic’ and ‘necromancy’ knowledge.”

Dusk shuttered before he stopped breathing. Silhouette? As in evil Queen ruler of the Crystal Empire, Silhouette?

Eris grinned. “Yeah I’m taking about her. Once I am done with you, its gonna be Queen Chrysalis then her, then us again with two then three and finally all of us again on you…” she leaned in and whispered in his ear. “At once. Fucking You. Non-stop. All day. Until you become. OUR. LITTLE. BITCH.” She finished with a pop before licking his face with her cum coated tongue and then shoving it in his mouth.

Dusk’s eyes shot up and tried to fight her invading tongue. He tried to shove it out of his mouth using her tongue but she ended up wrapping her tongue around his and making sure she tasted him and he to her. Still bound in both his body and horn, he could do nothing as she assaulted him.

To make matters worse, she began rubbing her body over him, already once again her cunt rubbing over his shaft. She rubbed him hard, grinding her lower body over him, trying to get as much of her scent on him.

Her mouth was still on him and her tongue still trying to fight or rather, trying to get Dusk hard again. His tongue and senses were already dulled due to the overwhelming factor of her scent, her taste, and her physical abuse on his body.

Her favorite thing is vanilla. With that factor, not only did her juices taste like that, but all he was tasting or even smelling was that. His eyes were already blurry and his body was filled with the smell. He was getting weaker, slowly losing his already lost fight against Eris.

His struggles slowly seized and his mind was blurred. All he knew was that the pleasure and pain from earlier came again as his cock rose and was being grinded by her hips. His cock would occasionally brush against her lips but never enter. She moaned as she withdrew her tongue.

“You know, when we goddesses get out fire on,” She said sultry, rubbing her body on his and staring and his dazed eyes. “it’s almost impossible to turn off, especially if not sated right. We could go on for days and days and rut you completely till your dead or probably emptied and left ... well… I wouldn’t say hanging.” She giggled madly. “But lets just say that you would no longer have the ‘tools’, to keep going and pleasing others.”

With that, she began grinding her lips over his cock, already reaching its length and an approaching climax. Her claws ran over his body and would give him an occasional pinch or swat on his cutie mark. He let out a whimper for every hit or pinch, but was a weak one. His body was already completely exhausted. Even if he didn’t do much, Eris’s effects were making his body feel ached and numb. His cock was the only thing he was feeling and even that seemed numb. His climax was coming again and he prayed that she would allow his release.

She was the goddess of Chaos and completely unpredictable, but she wasn’t cruel beyond reason(though the complete destruction of Ponyville the 1st might be considered cruel). Her juices coated his cock and covered his lower half of his body. She was doing so, adding her scent to Nightmare Moon’s scent and making it all that much more difficult to rid of and strong enough that now anypony could smell it.

With climax at peak, he released a loud groan and blew his load at her pussy and lower belly. Eris too moaned and released her second orgasm. Dusk’s orgasm managed to spew so much that it was a hydrant on her pussy, preventing her cum from fully coming out till it flowed out with his.

Their juices mixed but ultimately fell onto Dusk’s body. His cum out flowed hers and mostly splattered over his body, coating his chest and lower body. Eris continued to grin, trying to prolong the orgasm of them both, enjoying the feeling. She grabbed his head and brought them into a kiss again. This time, Dusk joined in rather than fight it.

His orgasm then began to reside until it only flowed from his cock tip and was dragged over Eris’s body. Any juices she still had, she made sure his cock received it with it entering her body.

Their kiss was passionate yet there was also something else there. Eris held him like a lover would and although they were enemies, she couldn’t help but have a little something for him. Yes, he did turn her back to stone, but there was something that she saw in him. He had the ability to forgive, to forge something with anypony or anyone for that matter, either it be friendship or even has the ability to see the good in others.

All that she got from the kiss. A kiss she had yet to share anyone special with her. Something else came from him. That something… she couldn’t describe it. Their kiss ended and Dusk looked up at her with curious eyes. This to him felt more… personal.

Trying to break the tension and uncomfortable silence, all he managed to say was, “Wow.” Eris grinned again.

“Yep, that is what happens when you lay with the goddess of chaos.” Dusk couldn’t help but nod.

“You know Dusky, we could go for another round.” She slowly began rubbing him again but he quickly shouted. “STOP!” she did. He struggled to get away but still found himself held by the cloud.

“What’s wrong, Dusky?” she asked cheekily. “You don’t want to cuddle anymore?” He glared up at her.

“No! I want you to release me! I know you’re planning to do some chaos and I am going to stop it.”

She gave a snort before waving her hand around. “You mean like this?”

He stopped struggling and saw that already there was chaos around. The things that were happening all around him, all of it was… chaotic. But what he didn’t see was that the chaos was in Ponyville. In fact, it was nowhere he recognized. She took them somewhere else where she could still cause chaos and not cause any harm to anypony.

“Why?” Was all he asked. Eris gave a smile. Nothing menacing but rather a friendly smile. It seemed almost impossible. Yet, Eris herself was impossible.

“Oh Dusky, I did this because I knew that if I did it in Ponyville, your precious Princesses and your friends would be coming to save you and da da da. We would be in a fight in which I had no intention of being part of. So, I took a little ‘secession’ here in the wastelands.” She leaned in. “Where no one can disturb us.”

“Why not just kill me than?” It was the same question he asked to Nightmare Moon. “You have me where you have me. You can have your revenge. Why not just kill me instead of raping me?”

She gave a mock sad face. “So, you didn’t enjoy our time together?” she asked, already creating fake tears.

“I… well it wasn’t…” He stuttered but regained his composure. “That doesn’t matter. Answer my question.”

She gave a snort and crossed her arms.

“Fine. I didn’t kill you because the four of us decided to keep you alive and try to make you are little bitch. A pet more or less, so that when we do try to take over Equestria, you, being the Element of Magic, wouldn’t be able to stop us along with you friends. Not only that, but with you as our dog, the Princesses wouldn’t dare attack us and we would easily conquer everything!” she finished with a pump of her fist in the air, followed by a manic laugh.

Dusk blinked.

“Okay that sounds pretty sounds…. like the plan might work, but I’ll make sure to tell the princess of your plans since you so foolishly decided to tell me it.” He said confidently. Eris looked down at him and gave a grin back.

“And, if you do that then, we will come for your friends and even you pet dragon. Even if you do manage to keep them safe, what is to say that we won’t target their families or people close to them? Hmm?”

Dusk was stumped and he felt so crestfallen. They would not only go after his friends, but their families or loved ones. He could think of many ideas on how to stop her and harmony will prevail, but all that kept coming back was his friends and their families being hurt.

“You really are evil… Cold… Heartless… Evil...”

Something inside of Eris hurt her. Something that she hadn’t really felt in a long time. So long that she almost forgot what it was. Empathy and sadness. Yet she couldn’t be able to do that or even have those things. Right. Quickly gaining her composure, she brushed it off.

“Well if you keep your little mouth shut and don’t mention it to anyone, than we won’t be so evil.”

“You keep saying we.” He didn’t realize that he had been released from his hold when he told Eris she was evil. “Who are the others? All I know is I got attacked by Nightmare Moon than you. Whose next? Queen Chrysalis? Queen Silhouette?”

Eris’s grinned remained but she spoke with a sarcastic voice. “My, my, you are a smart one. You already figured out our plan though i already told you before… Probably the sex made you forget.” She muttered the last part. Dusk’s face turned to a look of horror.

“I WAS KIDDING!” he yelled. Eris giggled.

“You make it sound getting raped by four goddesses is such bad thing. Especially if its four goddesses who just want to use your body for your pleasure. Besides, you're still kind of a virgin and a social kill buzz. We trying to make you into a stallion and get you laid, you make it sound like its the most horrible, bad thing in like… exsistence.” She finished nonchanlantly.

“IT IS A BAD THING!” he began yelling frantically, already on his hooves and completely oblivious to the fact that he was free. “I am getting raped by four of my Enemies and you expect me to be okay with it?!” He half yelled.

Eris put a claw and her chin in thought.

“Well… I could always convince the others that we should kill you in the most inequine way possible. Nightmare wanted you to suffer in the cold vacuum of space on her moon. She would let you have some air in you only for you to suffocate soon after, in which you would slowly and painfully gasp for air in the cold.

“I was gonna literally make you lose yourself in disharmony so much you fade away from reality, which is less painful but still torturous in a way. You will lose your mind and watch as your friends and families do the same and they disappear or kill themselves from it.

“Chrysalis was going to drain your life force but she would take everypony you love and make you watch as she drained their life force as well before she killed you. I think she would also try to convert you into a loyal changeling subject and do it yourself.

“Lastly, Silhouette was gonna make you her slave and mine for crystals, but she would make you force your friends and family do the work by whipping them till they dropped dead. After that, she would turn you dark and either keeps you as her pet, keeping you around for a while and torture you with your worse fears. After which you may end up crazy and either be killed by her or you would kill yourself.

“In which case, one of us would get to kill you permanently or we would use our powers to bring you back from the dead over and over again just to kill you in so many different ways till Equestria becomes ours. Or maybe time ends.” By now, Dusk was shaking with fear and dread. Eris leaned down and stood up close to his face. “Does that sound better?”

‘No…” He managed to say in a Fluttershy like voice. Though he isn’t surprised he hadn’t pissed himself.

She grinned.

“I thought not, though they do sound smarter to do, so… Here is how it’s going to go. Each of us it going to have our way with you. I won’t say when or where but that won’t matter. Once each of us had our turn, we will team up in twos to have you, then in fours, then if we haven’t broken you yet… well we will just have to keep doing it until we make you ours.”

Gaining his composure, he stood a bit tall and gained back his confidence.

“And what is in it for Equestria? If you try to take over Equestria, the princesses will stop you. If not them than others. The dragons, the gryphons, the elk, zebras, and so on. You can’t beat everyone if they see the damage you have done and none of them will stand for it.”

“Oh don’t worry, My Little Pony. We are only sticking to Equestria… more or less. Silhouette is going to take back her Crystal Empire. Nightmare Moon will take the throne of Equestria and share it with Chrysalis. And me well… I can cause havoc elsewhere.” She said as she snapped her fingers and they both appeared back at Dusk’s library.

“But first, we’re just going to make everypony you know jelly when they smell all of us on you, so they will either stay away from you or just plain hate you.”

Dusk was about to retort but she beat him to it. “Yeah, sure take a bath and wipe the smell off. You won’t be able to smell it anymore but the mares will.” She giggled. “Ohh, will they smell it off you! Nightmare’s scent was just a brief sniff. Something if they are close by and really inhaled deeply. Mine will be able to be inhaled if they are ten hooves from you. Imagine when the others hit you with their scent. Nopony in Ponyville would want to be near you but us.”

Dusk remained silent. He honestly felt hopelessly lost on what to do. No matter the options, he would lose.

“Don’t worry Dusky,” she said, trying to sound reassuring. “At least you will get laid a lot instead of being killed of in many different, horrible ways by us. Until next time then. Bye!”

With that she disappeared and not a moment when the door to the front of the house opened to reveal Spike coming in. As soon as he did, he saw that Dusk was sweating a lot and the same order from yesterday came only a lot stronger and smelled of vanilla.

Looking at Dusk, he saw that he also seemed tired and that looking closer, despite all the sweat, there was still some cum on him. Not even acknowledging it, he quickly said ‘Nope’ and slammed the door shut, leaving Dusk by himself.

Dusk sighed heavily and collapsed.

“I am going to be sore all week, I just know it.” Then fatigue hit him and he was out.