Transformation I (First Draft)

by Tank Drill

The 'Negative Side'

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Three days ago….

It seems Tirek is just lying around inside these caves like he owns the place. Touching and absorbing dark crystals make him grow in strength. You might think that I will be betrayed by him, but you are mistaken. If he tries to overthrow me my dark magic will take away his powers to his old weaken state. I have him under wraps.

Gak on the other hand was being obedient and was following every command I was doing. It was still repeating the song over and over. It was diabolical. With Gak we have taken a quarter of the land and soon when we free Chrysalis, the evil power will grow again. Meaning more evil power in an evil group equals Gak growing in strength.

“So how are do we go to sneak into Twilight's Castle?” Tirek asked.

“What do you mean ‘we’?” I asked him.

“What do I mean about ‘we’? WE are a team, WE are meant to work together.” Tirek explained.

I looked through the crystal and pictured the dungeon in Treys memories. Then the crystal showed Chrysalis.

“I will go alone because I can condense my dark magic to a minimum. If you go; you will cause panic.” I said.

“I suppose your right; what would you like for me to do?” he asked.

I walked up to him jumped and touched his forehead with my finger tip. I gave him the memory of Grogar.

Once I got back on my feet I said, “Make sure you add a little more darkness into him when you create him.”

Tirek smirked, “Of course master.”

He walked towards the dark crystal and grabbed a fragment. The crystal in his hand melted and it was harder than clay. With his strength he constructed, like Gak, a Grogar.

I walked into the portal just to let them talk things over. I wonder what Chrysalis is going to think about me. I am technically its son and she is my mother. My mother? Hah, do not be ridiculous. I was born as a good magic spell from Celestia and then corrupted by Chrysalis that made me this personality. So now that I think about it, Celestia and Chrysalis are my parents, but from magic form.

I decided to shake it off and condense my power to a minimum, so I will not be detected. Once I got out of the portal, I was nothing, but a floating gauntlet. I floated to Chrysalis’ cell and my gauntlet grabbed the door and melted it to the ground. I slowly transform into my regular form, and Chrysalis was just looking at me unimpressed. Though she is around a filly, now that he power is returning slowly.

“And who might you be?” she asked.

“I am Yert, born from your dark magic.” I formed a dark crystal in my hand and showed it to her, “With my powers growing, I want to take over Equestria, but with your help and the changelings help, we can over throw both the Griffin Kingdom and Equestria.”

“I am sort of persuaded She stood up and continued, “I you want to take over this world, then you can do it in one condition. I take over Canterlot as our new Queen.”

I take her word and gave her the crystal which she ate. I grabbed her holey hoof, told her I will catch up and led her into the portal first.

“Time to do some research.” I said.

Not even a minute, I encountered Fluttershy. ‘Why was she here?’ I thought. No matter. I sprinted towards her, and she curled up in a ball in fear.

I touched her for head and something came out. It was her negative self, but in a goopy form. I pulled it out the rest of the way and transformed it into a negative Fluttershy (NF).

It looked like Fluttershy, but she was gray when Discord took away their elements. So it looked exactly like that.

“Well is this a surprise? I suppose that miss Boo Hoo is giving up to face against this handsome beast.” Said NF

“W-Well I suppose that I cannot face him, but...” Fluttershy stopped and started to run away.

“Oh Boo Hoo!” said NF

I floated through the next floor and there was Twilight, Rarity and Applejack talking about what to do with Chrysalis. Rarity was wearing a white dress that was dazzling, Applejack seems tired from working out on the apple farm and Twilight looked a little bit taller even though she was sitting down. Then I interrupted their talk with my hand splitting into three and grabbing out their negativity. Then transformed into something a little bit different.

“Twilight you will always be a failure at everything, because I am the number one student of Yert.” Said Negative Twilight (NT). She then burned some books that were on the shelf.

“My, my darlings it seems your fashion is out of date Rarity. Let me rip out some of those dazzling crystals and spend it on nothing but ice cream. So I can become fat and hideous!” Said Negative Rarity (NR). She used her magic and ripped those crystals off Rarity’s dress. Making it useless and ragged.

“Working in the Apple farm is sure boring around those parts. I decided I do not want to work and let the apples rot. No more Apple cider for anyone, but myself.” Said Negative Applejack (NA). She then spat on AJ’s hoof which got her angry.

The eight ponies were fighting themselves, it was a wonderful sight to see. I heard a whoosh from the distance and it was Rainbow Dash coming in. She was about to crash into a window. I lifted my hand up and she impacted through the window I grabbed out her negativity. Then I transformed it into a diabolical Rainbow Dash.

As Rainbow dash collects herself from the crash she is encountered with her negative self.

“You are a failure at landing! You think that the Wonderbolts would take you in if you did this? Do not even make me laugh!” said Negative Rainbow Dash (NRD). She then grabbed Rainbow Dash’s tail with her mouth and threw her across the room hitting the wall.

Pinkie Pie showed up out of nowhere and fired her party cannon at me, but it when through me. I turned around and grabbed Pinkie’s head and pulled out her evil side… Pinkamena.

“Ugh! I am so tired of you partying with these ponies. I do not want to do anything else with you, but instead. Let me do this.” Said Pinkamena.

She punched Pinkie, but then kissed her in the lips for no reason. Then punched her again and repeated the process for two more seconds then threw her towards Rainbow Dash. It was a fight frenzy and I was enjoying it laughing.

I snapped my fingers and the negatives stopped their fighting. I snapped them again and they followed me through the portal I made for them. They went through and I followed, but I was being shot at by Twilight’s magic. I deflected like it was nothing and said, “You cannot stop me.” Then the portal closed when I entered back into my cave.

It was already the next day, and everyone was gathered inside the dark crystal room. They were silenced when I was in the room. Everypony was here, Tirek, Grogar, a representation of Gak (Separated from the main Gak to tell reports), Chrysalis (who has grown back to her normal self) and the negative mane six.

“Today we prepare for something we all dream… To take over this land and to fight for what is ours. To take over Equestria after the Griffin Kingdom. Some of you may ask why I did not do Equestria first, but here is the reason. To show an example what we are going to do to Equestria. You get to do anything you want after we defeat Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Princess Cadance, Princess Twilight and Trey. Negative Mane six will go after their counterparts and Chrysalis will take her changelings to the Crystal Empire and revive one more team member. Tirek, Gak and I will go to the Royal Palace to finish off the empire. So who is with me?” I asked.

Everyone shouted in glee, they wanted to get out of this place to cause more evil chaos. Now I opened the portal for the N-Main six through their portal to Ponyville. I then pulled Chrysalis to the side and gave her a big crystal.

“Go to the top of the empire and place this dark crystal on the balcony. This will be able to revive Sombra. I shall send you back to your changelings so you can finish your preparations to take the Crystal Empire.” I said.

“Alright then; next time we meet, we shall take over Equestria.” She said.

Chrysalis walked through the portal to her location and it was just Tirek, Grogar, Gak and I. We talked what we were going to do as to take the Royal Palace.

“We should wait until sunrise because I can convert the sun’s rays and make them into eternal night.” I told them.

“I suppose we can do that, but what stopping us?” Grogar asked.

“Yes, I am too concerned why we need to wait until tomorrow.” Tirek said curiously.

“I am going to be in my ultimate form with this dark crystal. I need to sap every last drop of its power. I wasted too much making a negative main six and I need to recharge. I am not saying we are going to be defeated if I am drained; it’s just that it would be difficult to fight with an empty stomach.” I explained.

Then nodded in agreement even though it was a slight hint that without my power I would be useless. I walked to the dark crystal; put my hand forward and touched it. ‘Now you may erupt my dark friend.’ I said in my head.

There was a slight rumble, but not big enough to shake the kingdom and soon it was working. Each second gave me 10 tons of Dark magic it was overwhelming, but I held on. I wanted every last drop. All of a sudden I was now surrounded by darkness…. “Here I come, Trey….” I said laughing.


Author's Note

Back from the Final and Yes I did pass the Class (YAY FOR ME!!). What did you think of the return of the main six negative sides returning? How about Grogar? Put it down in the comments. Please? I love your guys feed back.

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