Transformation I (First Draft)

by Tank Drill

Transformation

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A bright light surrounded me and engulfed my body. I closed my eyes to wait for death to take me to heaven. This has been one of the greatest experience coming to Equestria, loving Luna, defeating of Yert, and just being there just made me happy.

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When my eyes were still closed, a light was still going through my eyelids. I open them slightly to adjust the brightness. Everything was misty, I got my hand and tried to see if I can feel a halo. There was no feeling of a halo, just pure air. Speaking of that I was holding my breath because I died. I looked at my wounds they were all healed.

I gasped for air, “GAH!”

I looked around me and I was laying on a bench. I got to a sitting position and kept on looking. Everything was pure white to the distance I saw a desk with a Alicorn writing some papers. She looked familiar I just cannot put my finger on it.

I got myself up, I was a little wobbly at first, but I continued to walk towards the Alicorn. I got closer and the features were coming to me. Long brown mane, white fur and a quill and ink container as her cutie mark.

Wait a second, “Are you Laruen Faust?”

She stopped what she was doing and looked at me, “Why yes and I know who you are Trey.”

“Why would you know my name? I am unknown where I came from.” I said.

“Yes where you came from was Earth and you became quite popular in Equestria.” She said.

“I lost my memories, but I was able to recognize you… Why is that?” I asked.

She got up and walked around me, “There was only one memory that you kept when you died. That is when I re-mastered My Little Pony. When you defeated Yert your enemy, you sacrificed yourself to save my world that I created. For that I can give you a special award.”

I was shocked to hear this, I defeated an enemy? I saved her world that she created? I am getting confused… My face was expressionless. I did not know what to say. I searched my mind for any more memories, only two showed up. One was Lauren Faust and the other one was Luna.

Luna? Why is she in there? I tried harder to get anything out of it, but the only thing I got was when we first met. What did this mean? My heart is beating faster and faster when I think about her. I realized that I was letting tears stream though my cheek.

“I believe you love someone in Equestria. A certain Alicorn is it?” Faust asked.

“Yes. My heart is beating faster when I am think about her, but it is only one memory about her. At the same time I cannot love someone who is a pony… I am a human.” I said.

“That is why the award is going to be your choice of what you want.” She said.

“It can be anything?”

She nodded, “Anything.”

I walked up to her and gave her a hug, “I wish to be… a Alicorn."

“I believe I can do something about that. Before I continue, I just want to state something.” I let go so she continued, “The only reason I only make Alicorns female is because they know who to use magic in a good way. When a male becomes a Alicorn, he can use the power to become a tyrant. You have to promise me this, do not use your power for evil.” She explained.

“You have my word Miss Faust.” I said.

She walked back to her desk and got her pastel paint board. She looked at each color, red, pink, blue, purple, etc…

“What are your favorite colors?” she asked.

“Green and red.” I said.

“Alright red mane with some highlights on the tail and head. Green fur that will not be annoying to look at. Skinny Alicorn and quite tall. Some friendly eyes and some facial features and finished” She said.

“What about my cutie mark?” I asked

“It will appear when you found out what you did in Equestria.” She said.

I did not know what that meant, but I nodded. She got the painting and gave it to me. I held it in my arms and I looked at her and her horn glowed. A green and red light appeared to my left and right. They started to cycle around my body, it went faster and faster. Soon I was surrounded with green and red streams; the painting deteriorated and I was soon floating in the air.

“Tell Luna and Celestia I said, ‘You are doing a good job in keeping Equestria in check!’” she said.

“I will!” I shouted.

I was engulfed in a bright light again. I closed my eyes and all the memories are returning to me. Celestia, Luna, Cadance, Shining Armor, Twilight Sparkle, Rarity, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, everypony. They go as far as I can remember when I entered Equestria.

My memories of me being a human still stayed and the next thing I knew; my hands were turning in hooves. My feet, body, transformed into a pony, I looked to my side. My wings grew and they were huge. I put my hoof on my face is had a muzzle. I felt the top of my head, I had a horn.

I was excited being a Alicorn for the first time! I cannot wait until Luna gets to see me. Wait. Will she even recognize me? ‘Of course she will! She loves me and I love her!’ I thought.

The light was disappearing and speaking of Luna I landed on top of her.

“Ugh!” I said.

“Ah!” she said.

I got up, but I was on my two legs and next I was on all fours. I tried to walk, but I was walking backwards and rammed into the closet.

“Hey! You get out of here this instant!” She shouted.

“Luna? Is that you?” I asked.

“Yes it is I, I do not know who you are.” She said.

“Don’t you remember me? It is I Trey.” I said.

“Yeah right. The Trey I know would not be a Unicorn.” She said.

‘She did not see my wings.’ I thought.

“Let me prove it to you. You are the magnificent Alicorn Luna, you are in charge of the night, once was nightmare moon, fell in love with a human. You have a scar when you fought Celestia. I defeated Yert, by sending you away. I know I broke that promise to let you fight alongside me, but it was for your own being. I am Trey the Alicorn.” I said.

I stepped out of the closet and I leaned against the door frame. She looked at my wings, facial hair and my mane. Luna walked closer and closer to me. It looks like she does not believe me at all. There we were face to face, she puts her horn on top of me.

“Then prove it to me…” she said.

Her horn glowed and she was looking through my memories. There was tears going down her cheeks, I lifted my hoof to her cheek and she leaned on my hoof.

“Trey?” she asked.

"Before I died; I said that I loved you from the bottom of my heart. This is the truth; nothing has changed. I met Lauren Faust and she gave me this transformation as a gift for me saving Equestria.” I said.

Without a word she leaned in for a kiss and I leaned forward as well. It was heartwarming, she let her tongue and I let it in. We were making out for about three minutes. Then Celestia came in through the doors.

“Sister I just have to tell you-” She stopped in mid-sentence and smirked.

“I suppose you do not love Trey anyway, just for this Pegasus?” she asked.

“Sister this is Trey and he is a Alicorn! He came back from meeting Lauren Faust and she transformed into what you see today.” She said.

“Hello Princess Troll- I mean Celestia. Nice to see you again. How is Discord?” I asked.

She looked surprised, “Did Lauren Faust said anything?”

“She just left a message for you too, ‘You are doing a great job keeping Equestria in check.’ That was about it.” I said.

Luna and Celestia were surprise about what I said to them, but they set it aside and looked at me.

“I suppose we do not have to keep you in secret anymore, now that you are a pony.” Celestia said.

“Yes let us celebrate your return.” Luna said.

All three of us have walked out of Luna’s room and they helped me out wobble out to the outside to meet the other ponies who were still gathered around.

‘Now I think that everything is going to be fine for now on. I got the love of my life, my new body. Nothing could possibly happen.’ I thought.


Author's Note

The Epilogue will be coming tonight. So what did you think of the encounter of Lauren Faust? Treys cutie mark will be in the next chapter.

Here is a question for you viewers: What did you think of Transformation? How do you feel about male Alicorns?

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