Transformation I (First Draft)
Bonding with Luna
Previous ChapterNext ChapterA few hours have passed by, and I realized something… I smell horrible. I have not took a shower for at least two in a half days. I grabbed my pack, it held my change of clothes and a swimming shorts? What was a pair of swimming shorts doing in my pack? I continue to unfold the clothing; there was a note. I was hesitant to open it, but decide to read it, it said:
To my Dearest son Trey,
Well we know our family was going to be separated sometime, but dear god it was too soon. I packed a few things in the pack if you forgot to pack in your suit case.
1. Swimming shorts, goggles and a towel: If you stop by a hotel with a pool, you always love the pool when you were younger and still love it today.
2. A book about dating women: For the pasted years when you were in high school, you kept on getting girls from left and right. So I know the college girls will be crazy out there and here’s some advice of how get out or get it the conversation.
3. Extra Solar Charger: I know you already have another one, but who knows you will might need it if the other one breaks (Or you drop it).
4. Your sisters new art piece: Your sister has made this sculpture, it is all the Alicorns in My little pony and you as a Alicorn.
Your dad, sister and I love you so much and have the best of fun in college.
Love Mom
When I finished the note, tears were streaming down my cheek, but I wiped the tear off with my tissue and I put the note on the desk next to the mirror. I looked at myself in my current state, less chubby from before clothes are worn down and I look like a wreck up close. Then I remembered I need to take a shower for the party.
Well minus well shape up and go to the bathroom to take a shower. I grabbed my swim stuff, and my new change of clothes, because who knows what the shower looks like. I saw a sign, it hold a map of the castle. From my room to the shower, it’s literally next door and across the hall from the door is the dining room/party room.
‘I’ll go there after my shower, because I am so hungry, but I hygiene is more important. It’s not like I am starving to death.’ I thought.
I opened the door and headed to the bathroom and I stopped when I saw this beautiful sign. ‘Unisex Showers.’ At first I was at glee, but then stopped and gulped.
‘I know its Unisex, but I am sort of scared to enter.’ I thought, but I slapped my head and said, “C’mon I am a man, I can do this…. I hope.”
Walked in side and it sort of looked like a Japanese changing room; there was a glass that separated the vapor in the bathing area. I scanned the area and quickly changed into my swimming trunks. I carefully opened the slide door, the mist that was holding in the room was released. To keep the room warm, I slid through into the bathing area and closed the door. When the mist cleared I saw that there was three baths with signs. One huge one saying ‘Casual Swimming’ A medium one that said, Personnel Bathing’ and a Small one with bubbles in it says, ‘Sauna hot tub.’
I went the medium one and I realized that there was no dividers for personnel bathing. It was a square within a square and there water was at least of five feet long and 3-4 feet deep; then it there was marble shelves on the surface.
I walked down the stairs and the water was warm, to almost a point of hotness. I picked a shelf, put my goggles and towel on the top. Then I saw a bar of soap and a wash clothe. It was not used, and it seemed new. I grabbed the soap and washed myself and saw something blue in the distance of the mist.
My first reaction, I ducked down and peeked across. It was Luna in the Hot Tub and I tried to wash fast without being caught. It was like I was in the girl’s locker room.
“You know you do not have to be shy, Trey.” Luna shouted across the room.
I was first embarrassed for no reason, “I just want to be at least clean, and so I will not be smelly around other ponies.”
Luna was at first silent, then I heard the water splashed; now I knew that she was heading towards me. I finished just in time to get out, but I just was stone frozen because Luna was resting her head on my shoulder.
“Could you help me with something, Trey?” Luna asked.
I could hear my heart going up to my throat, I know I have not had a girlfriend, but I just do not get it. Even though I was popular nobody could stay with me. Now I think I am in love with Luna; it’s just as simple as that.
My brain slapped itself together so I could say something, “I-I could help you, but it depends on what it is…”
I turned around slowly and Luna standing in the water with me; she was looking at me with her sapphire eyes, looking concerned.
“Can you sir Trey, wash my…” she was blushing and continued, “Wash my scar?”
I was relieved at first, but then I thought. ‘Scar? She has a scar?’ I thought where is the world she got a scar, then it hit me. When Celestia hit her with the Elements of Harmony.
I put my hand on her shoulder, “I would like to do that for you, but I have to ask, why?”
She sighed, got out of the bath and laid down on the marble, “When I use my magic to wash myself, I can only get my whole body, except my scar. When I touch it, my magic goes on the frits and I cannot get wash it with my hooves.” She opened her front legs, revealing her scar has been hidden by her fur.
“I believe you got this when you faced against Celestia?” I asked and I got a nod from Luna.
I grabbed my unused washcloth and soaked it and rubbed some soap in the clothe under the water to the surface.
When I walked close to her, I said, “Just tell me when you are in pain, so I can stop.” Luna looked at me and nodded.
I put my hand on her hoof, it was wet and warm; I put the wash clothes near the scar. Learning from the internet on how to wash scars, is to wash around the scar and slowly dab the middle. That is what I did and Luna just sighed and slightly moaned a little.
Then little by little I swabbed the middle of the scar, and Luna let out a squeal.
I jumped to the other side of the pool, “I’m sorry!”
Luna put her hoof on her mouth and made a ‘shhh’ face, “I’m sorry Trey, I am just so sensitive when someone tries to wash me or touch me.”
I got back up to her, I finished the job. I grabbed a handful of water and said, “I have to wash this off and it might sting because it’s trying to heal.”
Luna nodded, I put the water over her scare and released it. She held in squeal, and was banging her hoof on the marble. When the pain settled, she sighed. There was some tears in her eyes, it must have hurt.
“I’m sorry if I hurt you, but you had some dead skin and I had to wash it out. So just get some healing herbs and it will heal in no time. If I could ask you a question; why could not your sister to help you?” I asked.
Luna smiled and leaned in her head on my shoulder, “Thank you, Trey. I was trying to hide my scar from my sister, I just could not get her worried.”
“I understand, but you can trust your sister, you are her only family; or so what I think. I have another question; why did you pick me to do this?” I asked again.
I could feel Luna’s head heat up, “Well, since your intelligent with Pony knowledge… I just had to trust somebody.”
My heart exploded, ‘SHE IS SO CUTE!!!’ Never in my life was I ever entrusted to do anything for anyone. I felt touched.
Out of nowhere I tickled Luna’s belly and she was giggling, “Hey! *laughs* No fair! *laughs*” She pushes me away and jumps in and says, “HERE COME THE KISSES!!!” She was making these kissy faces and was kissing my face.
My back was against the wall, “Alright! Alright you win!” She stopped, looked at me and I was looked at her. We laughed, I was enjoying this and she was as well. I am happy, so very happy.
I grabbed my stuff and we headed out to the changing area. I was blushing because Luna was following me. I looked at her and showed a face meaning ‘I need privacy please?’ She understood and went back to the Hot tub. I got in dried off and changed into my Jeans, and my little pony shirt with the mane six and the Alicorns.
I opened the door and she was there right in front of me, “I did not peek honest.” She said.
I just trusted what she said and I let her in. I was surprised that Luna did not react to my shirt. I wonder... Anyway, I saw her shelf which was holding a blue dress. I stared at her, without her armor she is on beautiful Alicorn. She levitated her dress and looked at it and looked at me.
“I think you should go your room and wait until you are called to the party room.” Luna said. I was compliant to her orders.
Before I left I said, “Let me know if you want any other help.” Luna smiled and covered herself with a towel in embarrassment.
I step out and headed back to my room. When I went inside, I saw something different in my room, there was a laundry hamper right next to the door. Conveniently I put the dirty clothes into the hamper and walked to the window.
I see ponies working in the party area, the party was getting bigger and it was extending to the outside. ‘This is going to be an awesome party.’ I thought.
The door opened, and I looked behind me and it was Luna in a stunning, white, sparkling dress. I was staring in a good way.
Luna was blushing, “Sir Trey the party is ready for you. You do not have to stop looking at me… Or do I have something on my face?”
I laughed, “No. No. No… I was just wondering if Rarity made your dress and if so, she did capture your beautiful night to reflect on yourself. So what I am saying is that; you look as beautiful as the night and the moon.”
“You’re flattering me, sir Trey.” Luna was hiding herself with her wing.
I walked to her, lightly touched her wing, “When I say something to make anybody happy, I mean it.”
She looked at me, I looked at her; there was a long silence. I coughed to break the silence, “Well we better surprise everypony.”
Luna nodded, “R-Right, let me lead you to the room to surprise and maybe stun everypony.” She giggled and I giggled.
We walked out of the room, and headed to the doors which lead to the party. Luna opened the door to let me in and it was dark when I entered.
Author's Note
Now I hope you like that romance, I'll make another chapter with Luna's point of view. Hope everybody likes it.
So hopefully I'll have time to do the next chapter tomorrow. So wish me luck!
(Update) I have a website that lets me check my grammar and I'll be using that to post more chapters.
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