Twilight. All I have to say is this. Your ‘Twilight Time’ really did get the Cutie Mark Crusaders to improve on their hobbies. So all I have to say is keep on doing the good work.

I saw the episode, Twilight Time, I had mixed emotions about it. Overall I thought they are really growing as characters, instead of pursuing their talents (Their Cutie Marks). Which is good, not thinking what you are going to do in the future, especially when you are at a young age, could in fact affect their personalities.

When confronted by the CMC, Luna and I were taken to their Tree house. We agreed with them to answer some questions and Sweetie Bell was keeping a good eye on us, even though we were invisible. I had to ask her how she learned that and Luna was too surprised that a foal was able to detect us.

We sat down on a bench that was made by Applejack, the name was engraved on the top board. Luna and I just sat there; we looked at one another of what happens if they found out who I really look like. Luna looked concerned, but I just waved at her like it was going to be fine.

“Alright, who are you sir? Why are you invisible?” Apple Bloom asked.

Sweetie Bell corrected her, “Uh, Apple Bloom there are two of them. All I can say is one is a pony and the other is not."

“How do you know that? Did Twilight teach you some detecting spells?” Scootaloo asked her.

Apple Bloom and Scootaloo were glaring at her wanting to know and I too was wondering the same.

Finally she fessed up, “I borrowed a spell book from Twilight and she was OK with that. I looked through the book and some seemed complicated. I asked my sister, but the only one she could give me was this detecting spell. I guess it’s for my protection. It was the only one for me and Twilight said it takes time to learn certain spells so… I guess it came in handy?”
Apple Bloom cleared her throat, “Anyway, like I was saying, who are and why has not the other on talked yet?”

Luna was about to say something but I covered her muzzle with my hand. She glanced at me and I put my finger to my mouth making a ‘shhh’ gesture. She smiled, she knew that I was going to get us out of this and nodded in return.

“Alright, you got me, but before I answer anything, I would like to read your past.” I said and there were just confused faces all around.

“How can you read our past? Do you have magic?” Sweetie Bell asked.

“No, I do not have magic, I am an earth pony.” I fibbed.

“Yeah, we do not believe you. Just answer the qu-” Scootaloo was stopped by Apple Bloom’s hoof against her mouth.

“Wait Scootaloo, let’s just see what he has to say. I am interested to know what is going to unfold.” Apple Bloom explained.

“Isn't this working against us? He might just asked us questions instead of him answering ours.” Sweetie Bell explained.

Before they responded to Sweetie Bell’s remark I got my knowledge rolling, “Sweetie Bell, Scootaloo, Apple Bloom the Cutie Mark Crusaders that had made Babs Seed the honorary member of the CMC. She is to help find more ponies that do not have Cutie Marks and search for their talents.”

That really did made them up go quiet. All of them gathered around the bench, curious of what else I had to say. Luna was in awe of my knowledge she has yet to learn from me.

I continued, “Apple Bloom, youngest foal in the Apple family. You have a Big brother name Big Mcintosh, and you have an older sister named Applejack. You have a grandmother name Granny Smith. You and Twilight have been improving on you science and growing plants.”

Apple Bloom was shocked, she did not know what to say. She looked at Scootaloo and Sweetie Bell who were surprised about it. To their point of view the saw nothing, but they wonder what kind of pony I really was.

I looked at Scootaloo, “Scootaloo, fan of Rainbow Dash and you consider her as a sister. You have tried to fly, but sadly you have not. That is OK, because you try hard and you have made improvements with Twilight to break apart items and put them back together. You had to fight your fears and Princess Luna was able to aid you.”

Scootaloo slightly smiled and she liked that compliment. I was starting to like this, and when I glanced at Luna she was enjoying the foal’s faces.

I looked at Sweetie Bell, “Sweetie Bell, you are the younger sister of Rarity. You and your sister had had some fights, but overtime you learn from each other and you bond as siblings. Even if your parents are away you try to make the best of it. For example when you destroyed Rarity’s project that Sapphire Shores wanted for her group; you never understood Rarity’s point of view. Later when Luna visited your dreams she told you that you need to fix it. Then you were able to and you learned your lesson.”

Luna was nodding when I was saying this. It took a good while for the Crusaders to snap out of it. The stepped away when all of a sudden, I saw Applejack outside the front door with Rarity through the window. Luna saw this too and when they knocked on the door, we stood up.

The Crusaders looked like they wanted to ask more questions. So they opened the door and went outside. I pointed towards the exit, that lead to the other way and she nodded. I opened the door and Luna went out first and I was about to follow, but I wanted to eavesdrop on the Cutie Mark Crusaders talking to Applejack and Rarity.

“But I do not want to go home yet.” It was Apple Bloom.

“I’m sorry sugar cube, you did not do your chores and you have to do them before they double tomorrow.” Applejack explained.

“I agree Applejack, Sweetie Bell, your friend Button Mash stopped by and he wanted to know where you are. Did you see him? I pointed to this Tree house.” Rarity said.

Scootaloo explained, “He wanted to be in the CMC, but he is a boy and we cannot have a boy in the CMC. So I turned him away before he came to the tree house.”

“YOU DID WHAT?” Sweetie Bell was outraged!

“It’s true Button wanted to join the CMC!” Scootaloo said.

It was starting to heat up and they were about to get in the tree house. I jumped down into the hole and closed the door lightly. I landed on my feet and was running towards Luna which was ten feet away from me.

“That was incredulous, Trey. You really know all about them. It’s like you are a fortune teller.” Luna said. She looked very impressed of my intelligence, I blushed a little.

It was getting near sunset time and we continued From a distance we hear the CMC scream. Well they now know we were gone, we ran a little bit towards town.

Before we went into time square, Luna stopped me, “What’s wrong?”

“I need to raise the moon for tonight so can we sit at the small hill at the park so I can do my job?” Luna asked.
Realizing the time, I was compliant to her. We walked towards the hill and sat next to one another. We watched the sunset together and she stood up and focused her magic to raise the moon. It was beautiful after the sun disappeared in the mountains, the moon came up after it.

After she was done, she sat back down. I glanced at her, “You know in my world, the earth has its own gravitational pull and the sun and moon move on their own.”

She was admiring me and I turned to see if anyone was around, “Is anybody there?” I asked.

She giggled, “No I just admire your intellect. You are very foreign Trey and I like that about you.”

Again I was being embarrassed and blushed, “No, you are just flattering me.”

She got her hoof and put it under my chin and moved my head to see eye to eye, “When a Princess says something to their subjects, they do not take it for granted. When I speak I am serious.”

“Hey that was my line, but you phased it in a different way.” I complained.

She stared at me, “Then prove it.”

We stared at each other’s eyes and looked away and laughed. Luna and I were have a great time. Then I looked at my hand it was turning to regular color.

“We need to go. The spell is wearing off and fast.” I said when I got up.

“Let’s make haste.” Luna said offering me to ride her back.

I got on and she took off, I looked at the hill and there was a purple horn in a bush. I tried to get a better look and Twilight's head popped out of the bush. She was spying on us? Why, how and when I do not even have a clue.

It was getting darker and I could not see anything other than Luna’s moon and shadows. I looked at my hand it was back to normal. Wait if the invisible magic worn off, then the light weight magic is about to… Oh no!

“Luna! How long do we have until we get to Canterlot?” I shouted through the wind.

“Only about three minutes, why?” Luna asked looking at herself and realized the situation, “Hold on tight!” she shouted.

Out of nowhere, we jumped to one speed to a faster speed.

“WWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!” I yelled grabbing on to Luna’s chest for dear life. We shot up into the air and we started to turn like a football.

“The window that we exited out of is closed!” Luna shouted.

“Let’s try your room! Got to your balcony!” I shouted back.

Her horn glowed and the doors opened, “Hold on tight Trey!”

“I’ll try!” I said, there was a magic aura surrounding me, the spell was about to end.

Only ten feet to go to Luna wings were only flashing, through my eyes. She was sweating and breathing heavily, we rose above the rail of the balcony and past through the glass doors. She used her magic to stop her wings thrashing back and forth and the g-forces took its course. Luna saw me as I was flying past her, she responded by using her levitation power to stop me and her in place. She stopped her levitation's and we landed on her bed.

I was in shock; that was the most dangerous thing I or we have ever done. I looked at Luna she was exhausted, breathing heavily, sweating buckets on her clean sheets. I was not different the whole experience was thrilling. The magic aura disappeared, I started to feel my own weight.

“Maybe next time we can take the train?” I asked.

Luna let out a snicker, “I second that.”

I got up, but I felt very woozy and landed on the bed. I think that the weight adjuster spell has some side affects. I thought about how Celestia put the Scroll of spells on the table. Did she plan this? I have no clue, I was starting to get superstitious.

“Can I ask you a question?” I asked.

“Ask away.” Luna asked and it her breathing was returning to normal.

“It seems the spell you cast on me had side affects and I think it's taking its toll.” I explained.

Luna was silent, she then was embarrassed or it might be the exhaustion. I only known her for a week and we have been bonding like crazy, but it was more than that. We trusted each other and it was her turn to trust me even more.

“If you stay on your side of the bed then I do not see why not.” She answered.

I gazed at her, I was in fact happy. Now I looked at her body, silky legs, fine butt rounded cutie mark, slim belly leading up to her face. Then reality snapped me in half in realization. ‘What am I am doing? I know I am at Equestria and I am the only human here, but I am Human!’ My instincts are telling me to stop, but my heart wants to be with her.

I shook my head, “Good night Luna.”

Luna put her horn on my forehead, and it glowed. My eyes were getting heavier. I was falling asleep.

“Good night Trey, see you in your dreams.” She said before I fell into a deep sleep.

Author's Note

Now was that a great escape? A great romance? Or a great realization?

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