MLP: Revamped Equestria Girls

by spikerules302

Chapter 2

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Author's Note

Word ahead of time. The designs for the mane six and Spike were done by an artist called Mauroz, but we tweaked them a little as the pics we were looking at were hard to describe. So we added a little adjustment here and there. But remember, the main designs of them belong to Mauroz, who let us use them in this story.


Chapter 2

At the next day, the mane 6 and Spike looked ready to go through the mirror into the new world. And while most of them wore a bag in which their elements and rations were, Rarity had a dress and a backpack which made everyone sweatdrop because it seemed that no matter where they were going, Rarity would always be Rarity.

"Well elements of harmony, son, are you all ready?" Asked Celestia, whom despite one part of her wanted them or at least Spike to remain there, she knew that they had to go. "For I must warn you that after this, there is no going back."

"Yes we are, princess Celestia." Said a determined Twilight as everyone else nodded before they went through the mirror into a new adventure.

A bright light filled their sights as they made contact with ground beneath their hooves, but suddenly noticed something entirely different. Twilight found her balance a little off and soon ended up falling on her butt.

"Twilight! Are you alright?" came Spike's voice to her right. She turned to rely but stopped when she saw her assistant. He wasn't a dragon, but something entirely different.

Spike now looked like a young human boy (Not that Twilight and the others knew what they were yet) with spiked green hair and green eyes on his face, regular skin and was wearing a purple hooded shirt with green spikes similar to his dragon form and green shorts with white sneakers.

"Spike, what happened to you?!" Screamed a shocked Twilight before said boy looked at her and said:

"I-I would ask you the same, Twilight..."

"W-what?!" Twilight looked at her reflection in a nearby lake and saw why Spike was shocked; Twilight now looked like a young woman with purple hair that still had her magenta/pink streak and purple eyes on her face, also she had a pale skin and wore a purple long sleeved shirt with a black vest and a red tie over it with a magenta skirt and purple sneakers.

"What about us?!" Twilight and Spike turned to their friends and were still shocked.

Applejack had an orange shirt that showed off her stomach and also had tassels on the back of it. She also had a pair of orange short shorts that were cut off at the bottom. Her blonde hair and green eyes stayed the same. She even had her hat on her head. She also wore brown boots on her feet.

Pinkie wore a pink short-sleeved shirt with a blue and white skirt on. Her feet had a pair of white and blue sneakers on them and she also had white knee socks extending from them. Her hair still retained it's puffiness while her blue eyes remained.

Rarity had a white long sleeved blouse that left her shoulders bare. Underneath that was a black tank top. She had a white skirt on with a black and white belt going over it. She also had a purple scarf draped around her neck that matched her hair and made her already blue eyes stand out with the light blue shadow above them. She also wore a pair of purple high heels that seemed to glitter int he sun.

Rainbow wore a pair of jeans that stopped half way towards her rainbow colored sneakers. She had a white shirt underneath a blue jacket that matched her coat with rainbows going down the sleeves. Her Rainbow colored hair was done into a ponytail that seemed to work with her red eyes.

Finally, Fluttershy had a green sweater on her body, which seemed to make her chest stand out a little bit more. She wore a pair of yellow jeans that reached down to her pink sandals.

Each one of the girls stared at their new bodies in shock while Spike tried to keep himself from passing due to the heat he was feeling for some reason.

'They...they look so...beautiful...' Spike blushed before shaking those thoughts out of his mind, 'W-what am I thinking!?'

Meanwhile, the girls looked at each other in surprise before looking at Spike and blushing.

'Is that...Spikey-wikey?' Rarity gasped in surprise as heat went straight to her face.

'That's Spike...not bad...' Rainbow Dash grinned as she liked his new "cool" look.

'O-oh dear...' Fluttershy blushed upon thinking some unexpected ideas about her and Spike...

'Damn it, you actually grew up, didn't ya Spike?' Applejack thought while holding back her blush.

"OHMYGOSH! OHMYGOSH! OHMYGOSH! SPIKE, YOU LOOK SOOO CUTE LIKE THAT! I JUST WANT TO HUG YA AND NEVER LET YOU GO!" Pinkie grinned as she hugged Spike, making the boy blush as he was pressed upon her bosom as the other girls looked with envy and surprise.

"Alright alright, that's enough." Twilight pried the two of them apart with a noticeable blush on her face. She found Spike's look incredible as well, but needed to stay focused. She also didn't like Pinkie hugging Spike so close. She wasn't jealous, she just didn't want Spike to suffocate. Yeah, that's it.

"Everyone, we need to figure out where we are." replied Twilight as everyone managed to calm down their blushes.

"Well from what I can tell, this looks like a park." replied Applejack.

"Alright that's good, but we need to find out where we are still. Like a sign or something." replied Twilight pacing back and forth in front of them.

"What about this one?" Rainbow asked as she pointed to a sign near the park's entrance, and the mane 6 (7 with Spike) looked at the sign that Rainbow saw, which said something very shocking.

"Ponyville...Park?! IS THIS PONYVILLE, BUT HOW?!" Twilight's mind broke down in disbelief as the others looked at the "Ponyville" they were in, which was actually more like Manehattan with all the high buildings and cars with other "beings" like them walking around.

"Perhaps since this is another dimension, there are differences with this Ponyville from the one that we know." Deduced Spike as everyone else nodded before Fluttershy noticed something very important.

"Umm...guys?" Everyone looked at her, "W-where are our wings and horns?" Then they looked at each other before noticing that, in fact, Rainbow and Fluttershy lacked their wings while Rarity and Twilight lost their horns...

"WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!"

"This is bad, this is bad. No, scratch that. This isn't bad, this is HORRIBLE!" screamed Rarity feeling nude without her horn.

"What about us? We can't fly and now I have to use these, whatever they're called." replied rainbow feeling her center of balance off with these.

"I don't know what you're all complaining about. Me and Pinkie never had them. So we should be okay." replied AJ.

"Here we go with the whole "We don't need magic or to fly" attitude." replied Rainbow crossing her chest with these strange limbs.

"What did you say?" AJ walked over to Rainbow with the intent to get right in her face and give her a piece of her mind.

"Now girls, calm down!" Twilight said with a serious tone of voice as she kept AJ and Rainbow Dash away from attacking each other. "While we might not have our wings and horns, we have to focus on catching Danger Beast!" That made the girls calm down, even though AJ and Rainbow still glared at each other.

"So, where do we go now?" Asked Rarity before Spike answered;

"Well, we need to find a building that is big enough for us seven to stay for the moment. What do you think?" Spike's idea surprised many.

"Good idea Spike, now we need to find a building." Twilight said before she and the others walked out of the town.

As the girls, plus boy, walked through town, Spike noticed the guys seemed to stare at them a little too much for his liking.

"Hey girls, I think I found something." replied Twilight who stopped. The rest of them crowded around her and saw a sign in the window that read 'Vacant apartment.'

"One problem there Twilight. How are we suppose to pay?" Asked Rainbow.

Twilight slumped at realizing that, but suddenly perked up when she noticed a bag on the sidewalk with a note attached to it. Curious, she walked over and picked it up. She unfolded the note that said:

"My Dear Student, Twilight Sparkle and the girls,

If you're reading this, I'll tell you that me and my sister Luna managed to sent you this bag with the currency money that the world you're in uses so that you can pay for your temporal stay in that world. But I pray that you don't end up there for another 30 moons, and so I wish you luck.

Your Faithful Teacher, Princess Celestia."

"Thanks mom!" Spike grinned in happiness as the group went inside the building, and saw to their shock that the apartment had seven rooms, one for each one, with a kitchen, a living room, and a bathroom.

"What a nicely made place, this is indeed." Said a happy Rarity as she and the other went to place their belongings in their new rooms.

After getting their bags put away, they met back up in the living room to try and come up with a plan of action.

"Alright, we managed to get shelter. But we still more info on this world." replied Twilight.

"Maybe they have a library." suggested Spike.

"Good idea. Me and you will try and learn all we can and the creatures we've become. The rest of you spread out and learn what you can, but don't draw any attention to yourself." replied Twilight with a serious face.

"Oh poo. I wanted to show off a new design I brought with." Rarity folded her arms with a pout but understood that this was a serious mission.

"Alright, if you get into some trouble, get back here as fast as you can and wait for the rest of us." Everyone nodded their heads and began to head out.

"I hope they have a bakery!" yelled Pinkie as they headed out of the building.

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