Sir. Lancealot the 1st

Behind the Liditure:

Sir. Lancealot the 1st

The Main Idea Origin:

So, as the description said, this was originally made for the contest. In fact, the moment when I had read the categories, was the moment all the ideas came to my head, and the full plot had already came to mind.

How Long it Took to Write:

I manage to work under the spam of three weeks. Sadly, do to some real life n’ stuff, I couldn’t upload it in time.

The Creation & Choice of the Main Character

Sir. Charles Bronze Wolfgang Hesus Lancealot the 1st was a reference to Sir. Lancelot. I was originally spelling the name wrong when I added the ‘a’ in LanceAlot, but I decided to keep it that way. In a way, it made a good parody, instead of a 100% copy and paste. But, I did not research the original, so I made him far more different. In fact, his character was rather dole, but I had to work in the spam of three weeks.

Details on Quotes and Hidden References & Commentary:

Part 1

“- along with golden shoe hooves thingys, like what Celestia wears,”

Yeah, that was rather lazy. But I’m sure you guys thought it was funny, right?

“- and a long -yet not too long- blond mane”

So he won’t look that girly. Try to picture Shinning Armor’s mane or something.

“- Celestia was awaiting for you, and everything was perfect...”

Yeah, I know that’s a bit overly used. But I thought it would work.

“This human is named Jerry.”

So the original name I was gonna go with was Stan, but Jerry seems to work rather well.

“He has short, un-styled hair,”

That was inspired by The Evolution of Stan. In fact, naming the useless Human ‘Stan’ was rather an un-original idea.

(Warning, that was a clop-fic that I regret reading)

“he had a red buttoned tucked-in shirt, with sand colored pants,”

Try and guess what his job is. I’ll give ya a hint;

~Like a good nighber, Jerry is there!~

“- and a black belt... and sadly not a karate belt... just... a normal, black belt...”

I thought just saying ‘Black Belt’ was gonna be a bit confusing, so I worked my magic’s to make it clear....

“- there was no point in washing your paw and claw... or hooves... if you’re just gonna eat food and get your cla- pa- HOOVES dirty.”

In a way, eh, I guess it’s like that.

“He rubbed his hands intensely, now filling with anger on how confusing claws, paws, hooves, whatevers- were so confusing,”

Yeah, if ya think about it, having all of these different intelligent species like that can get quite confusing, with all of the Hooves, Paws, Claws, etc. Especially for Discord, whom has a Paw and Claw.

“Thank Celestia... or the water company...”

I bursted out laughing when I wrote that. Do you guys think it’s funny?

“- washing my claw and paw, that’s all.”

Discord snickered, sensing a little rhyme in there.”

Honestly, I’ve just noticed the rhyme the moment I first wrote it. I didn’t take my time to come up with such a rhyme.

“- whom I didn’t bother to tell you who was talking until now.”

Yes, laziness. Blah, blah, blah, blah.... but it’s funny in a way, right?

“So, with Tia rolling her eyes, and Discord putting on a bath robe for no reason,”

The bath robe thing was kinda referenced from a comic. I kinda forgot what the name was....

“So, after all the preparations were finished, you decided to take a walk around your kingdom,”

I like to walk, walking is good. Why not make you (Sir. Lancealot) do it?

“It was a nice day, the sun was shinning, the sky was clear, there were a few golf clubs set up, there was a human, there wa- WAIT!!! You don’t play golf! Why are there golf clubs here! And what’s with the random human!?”

That is a reference to Phineas and Ferb, in the episode One Scare Ought to Do It, when Doofenshirtz had already left Perry behind with the bomb. So, while in the plane, he decided to go through a head count of all the stuff he packed, and at the end of the head count, he noticed Perry the Platypus, the bomb... and his golf set.... I wish I could find the scene on Youtube, but it is IMPOSIBLE to find!

“HALT!”

You yelled with your royal voice,”

Yes, Luna thing, I know. Thought it was rather appropriate.

“You two are now the best-est friends.”

Man, the ‘Best-est’ thing. I’ve heard that so many times, it made me wanna use it too.

“- and you both like bananas! Bananas are good.”

That was a reference to Doctor Who

“- and you will now attend to The Summer Festival! What could possibly go wrong...?”

In Fairy Odd Parents; the Fairies attempted to get Timmy Turner on a sitcom, and made his catch fraise ‘What could possibly go wrong’?

“So, after you took the time to settle everypony down”

This was basically a hint that Lancealot was the element of Order.

“The only Pony who didn’t seem to be scared was a Pony with a tan coat, wearing a green sweater, had a big brown beard, and a long brown mane, and wore sun glasses. All he did was look over at a handsome brown coated colt, with a darker brown mane, and a blue Fedora, and nodded at him in approval of this...”

Best easter-egg in the whole fanfic; those two Ponies there was Oppelscence and your’s truly. I hope you guys noticed this one on your own. And Oppelscene; If you are reading this, then I just want to say; I am honored. I may had missed the contest, this fanfic may be not even come close to comparing to the real winners. But I tried, I tried ever so hard to do it in time. I hope you understand... and I'll probably pass out if you comment on this...

“Sir. Charles Bronze Wolfgang Hesus Lancealot the 1st, WHAT is going on here?”

Charles Exazier (how ever you spell his last name) was from my old-time favorites; X-Men. Bronze is basically the color of his coat, Wolfgang was the middle name of Mozart Wolfgang Amadeus, Hesus was a name of a spanic I meet whom had this name, and everyone often liked to call him ‘Jesus’ because in Spanish, ‘H’ is basically ‘J’. Not so sure if I had it right. If not, then let me know.

“Tia, I told you not to call me by my whole name... it’s so long...”

That’s a reference to Spy Kids, how the girl (forgot her name, it’s pretty darn long) had to say her whole name in order to have accuses to stuff. And, well, she didn’t wanna, cause’ her name is sooo long.

“Discord smiled nervously, trying to formulate a lie.”

‘Formulate a lie’ is a reference to Digibro's video.

“Um... no... of curse not! I would never, ever, ever ever ever ever-”

“Discord, you know as well as I know that you did this.”

“-do this more then once, of curse...”

Okay, so this wasn’t as well quoted as the original, but I might remake this scene some other time. This is a reference of the beginning scene of Lio and Stich. And sadly, I could NOT find the original on Youtube.

“Yes Princess?”

Answered a.... very.... pretty... mere...."

Yeah, this is when it got awkward. Well, it got worse later on, so I managed to stand this one without pulling my eyes out.

"One walk into the castle to Discord’s bed chambers later"

From this point on, I accidentally erased the whole thing, but I managed to rewrite it.

"It looked quite small on the outside, but on the inside, it was an entire universe, filled with the most random of things."

This isn't the first time I've done something like this.

"There she was... right there... at the balcony of the castle, gazing in at the moon light... Twilight is so beautiful... you had finally found your chance to talk to her..."

Yeah, from this point on; THAT is when I wanted to pull my eyes out! But I manage to force myself through this, knowing full and well that I will write a scene like this again some day...

"You exclaimed. Slowly, you two got closer, and closer, and closer.... and closer... and finally... your muzzles were so close... then... you kissed..."

Ewwwwww....!!!! Gah.... that was so painful to write...

The Making of this Fanfiction:

In the spam of three weeks, was sadly a very busy three weeks. I was moving at the time, so I was often interrupted when I was in the middle of working on it to help with boxes n' such. I had failed Oppelscence.... I failed him so badly....

My Final Thoughts:

All n' all, it may had felt a bit awkward to write such a hasty, forced, and hallow fanfiction- but I had fun. There were a lot of moments I was proud of, and mark my words; there WILL be more meaning to this fanfiction, it will be more then a failed entry of The Most Dangerous Game! You'll see...

All My Best,

• Leonardo Oliver Osborn