Hey guys, give this story a try please. I wrote most this almost over a year ago and have had time to really add on to it. I need to know if I should continue or should I give up on this story and try again on one of my other ideas? If you message me, I may give you the direction of this supposed story and let you do it instead. Who knows. Thanks, Follows.
Unloved Trixie
by Followsorders
The show started out like any other show where my stage pops open in hopes to get more ponies attention. With a simple smoke trick, I make it seem like I appeared out of nowhere.
"Watch in awe as The Great and Powerful Trixie preform the most spectacular piece of magic ever witnessed by pony eyes." I shout. (As practiced my stage shoots out a couple of fireworks.)
I work my magic and boom, flowers appear in front of me. Thinking I was going to get my deserved attention I waited for applause, but instead I heard a boo from the rainbow colored pony in the front of the audience.
"Well, well, well, it seems I have some neigh-sayers in the audience. Who is so ignorant as to challenge the magical ability of the Great and Powerful Trixie?!" Followed by more of the ignorant and totally deserving boasting of my voice.
I shot off more fireworks until the rainbow pony comes up and challenges me face to face, no further then 5 inches away.
She asks me who I am to claim my awesomeness. A silly question really, or so I though. I tell her and the whole audience my bullshit claim about defeating an Ersa Major. More flashy things come out of my wagon when I said it. I then tell them the story as I came to defeat it with all my powerful might and sent it back to the forest.
I keep on boasting on and challenge any pony to a duel to see whose the best in all of Equestria. I start pointing hooves but had no takers at first until a brownish pony with a cowboy hat steps up. I beat her with my hooves behind my back until the rainbow pony came and did some flying tricks. I summon a quick tornado like thing and it left her spinning on the ground a few feet away. This was too easy so far and to provoke the neigh-sayers to not speak out again, I summoned a small rain cloud and had it shock her right on the flank. Harsh, yes but it was very much worth it.
Suddenly a very pretty unicorn steps up, she isn't as sexy as me though, and challenges her to a fashion off.
An evil grin appears on your face, you know exactly what to do Trixie, you told yourself. A with a loud poof like sound, her hair turn green and she ran away crying.
You see this purple pony in the audience talking to a baby dragon, it seems like she's saying she better then everypony so you challenge her. She said she had laundry and left, you figured she ran away crying too. You finish off by boasting that no one can defeat you and are the greatest and most powerful pony in all of Equestria.
Later you where brushing your very gorgeous mane when those too little colts ran up, they were the main fault off your present day problems when they brought an Ersa Minor out of it cave for you to vanquish.
Damn them and damn Twilight who embarrassed her in front of all YOUR subjects.
You leave the town that night but only after you swore to get your revenge, what stumped you was how she wasn't scared and ponies where laughing at you.
It was a couple of weeks after the accident when you find yourself another small town. You decide to strut your stuff upon entering the village knowing that they would all gravitate toward you like in other towns and cities. Except that wasn't the case at all. They all stood there for a moment until a filly asked what your name was and of course, you did what you've always did.
"Who am I? Why I am the Great and Powerful Trixie of course!"
Like you said something wrong, all of the ponies watching and listen where laughing at you. The commotion brought over more and more ponies who all started laught, again, at you. You couldn't handle it and you towed your wagon out of town as fast as your mighty legs could carry you.
Months passed and all of the cities you visited had "the haters" (what you called those who laughed at the Great and Powerful Trixie). Your money was at a all time low and you weren't able to restock your supplies. In fact you sold your wagon a week later for a couple months supply of food, you slept in an ally or beside a road when out of the city.
It was near the middle of Fall when it started getting cold but you refused to wear your cape and hat when you weren't preforming because they would get even more filthy. You needed money and fast, prostitution had even crossed your mind but The Great and Powerful Trixie was too good for the prostitute business.
Your profession was turning a bit or two a show and that would only cover a meal a day because prices were so damn high. So you got what you could, but you literally had nothing left except your clothing and once again you thought of prostitution.
You thought to yourself, "buck you twilight, this is all your fault in how The Great and Powerful Trixie must suffer along with the paupers. I...the Great and Powerful Trixie would've been Equestria's most talented pony by now, living in a five-story mansion eating seven meals a day... And now I have nothing... Absolutely nothing, no friends nor a dollar to my name. I am hopeless."
And that brings us to today...
