Obedience

by FIckle

Rating: mature
Tags: Queen Chrysalis, Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Other
Length: 3543

Shortly after the royal wedding in Canterlot, you have a fateful (and lustful) encounter with the Queen of the Changelings

Shortly after the royal wedding in Canterlot, you have a fateful (and lustful) encounter with the Queen of the Changelings.

Your face to face with Chrysalis teaches you what it means to obey and love your queen properly.

Published 2014-07-01 05:10:05 UTC
Last updated 2014-07-01 05:10:05 UTC

Obedience

That Zecora lady wasn't too bad. you found yourself trotting around through the Everfree forest. You were low on bits and decided to take an odd job for Zecora the zebra. There was something special happening at Canterlot today. Was it a birthday or...? No it was a wedding. You really didn't remember.
Now, if you remembered correctly, Zecora wanted you to catalogue some new plants and herbs in a clearing somewhere in the forest. She told you in her deep rhyming voice that you'd find something peculiar in the clearing. You agreed to do her chores and packed your saddlebag with a notebook, pen, and other odd objects and headed out. But there was only one little problem.

You were lost.

The forest seemed hostile and every noise made you jump a foot off of your hooves. You had been wandering for hours and had no sense of direction. Thankfully, after what seemed like FOREVER, you managed to find some sort of clearing. Whether it was the right one however, was yet to be determined.
Zecora told you, in a sly grin, that you'd find something odd in this clearing, something that would stick out and catch your attention. So you began to look. High and low, you found only the common bush and shrub.

And suddenly a scream.

It was a shrill scream that cut through the quiet forest air. You jerked your head up. The voice was unearthly and you were startled. Your mind was in a tug of war; fight or flight, your curiosity made you want to find out what made that scream but the other half of you wanted to get to safety. But whatever decision you were about to make was cut short.

A huge shadow, with a massive force and momentum, crashed ten feet in front of you. You leapt into the air in fright. You turned to run. You had to. But another crash, although smaller, blocked your way. You turned a sharp left only to meet another loud crash. And another. And another. Bodies seemed to be raining out of air through the thick canopy of the Everfree forest.

As the last body fell into the earth, the falling had stopped. You took this opportunity and jumped into the nearest bush you could find. You could see through a small hole in the bush. The bodies were starting to move. You could tell they had wings. Each creature slowly got up. You couldn't help but gasp. These creatures vaguely resembled ponies. They were jet black,their pale blue eyes were insect like, their bodies were angular and jagged, and the wings you saw earlier buzzed and flitted like that of a wasp's. You were transfixed. Out of all the creatures in the forest you had never seen anything like this. The creatures started congregating towards the largest mass in the center. It too started to shift.

A tall figure rose. Its body was slender and graceful. It two had insect like wings. They buzzed recovering from the fall. The sound was odd. Mesmerizing. On its head you could clearly see a horn. It was jagged, edged, and crude looking. Its mane was a dark blue. Even in the dim light of the forest, the fine silk like hair seemed to glow. It was now on all four... those didn't even look like hooves. Its hooves were porous. Like a beehive, its legs were riddled with holes. And then, it spoke.

"Damn them,"

So it was female. An alicorn..

"Damn them all," she continued. Her voice was deep, crisp, and distraught. Her voice demanded obedience. It was a soothing sound to hear her speak. "All of that guff about friendship and magic," she
snorted, "I don't need friends. Being alone is the best thing that's happened to me."

She didn't even look around at the bug like ponies surrounding her.

"But so much love in one area..." she sighed, "If I could just have had another taste.. We could have fed for an eternity."

She sat down. She heaved a sigh. It wasn't any ordinary sigh. Her soft green eyes were half closed. The tension was gone from her face as she looked down to the forest floor. The sigh was filled. You could tell that, behind that sigh, there was hidden emotion, disappointment, and anger. Still peeping through the hole in the bush, you sat there and watched as one of the insect ponies trotted up to her.

"I'm sorry your plan didn't go as you had wished, my queen," it said in a raspy whisper.

The queen's face became taut. She clenched her jaw and bared her teeth. You saw that she had two sharp fangs. Using her forehoof, the queen slapped the pony across the face, sending it flying into a tree. The rest of the ponies backed down in the shadow of their queen.

"How dare you pity me!" She yelled, "How dare you offer your petty sympathies!"

She was in a fit of rage. Something earlier in the day could not have gone right for her.

"I am all powerful!" She continued, "I am your queen. Queen of the Changlings!"

The ponies roared in synchronization.

"Hail, Chrysalis! Queen of the Changlings!"

Chrysalis stood up, tall and dignified. Her green eyes swept her subjects. They worshipped her. She loved it. She fed on love and affection.

You couldn't help but keep staring. You were transfixed. Her slender body and her graceful movements. The humming from her wasp like wings were boring into the back of your mind. You didn't even notice that your saddlebag was slipping from your back. And with a loud CLATTER, your bag fell. Your books and pencils dropped to the floor making a small noise. One of the insect ponies turned to the source of your disturbance. He slowly trotted to your hiding spot. You were frozen, petrified. You didn't know what to do. The pony bent low and hissed. As he poked his head into the bush, his pale eyes glared into your eyes. He hissed again, grabbed your neck in his mouth, and tossed you out into the open.

"What is that?" Demanded Chrysalis, "Who dares intrude?!"

"I found this sneak in the bushes, my queen," hissed the pony. The others started closing in on you. "What shall we do with it?"

The queen stared at you for a second. You stared back. All you could do was stare. The other ponies started to call out.

"Eat him!"

"Feed!"

"We hunger!"

You looked around in terror. They were going to eat you. Your whole body trembling, you looked up to the queen, pleading in silent horror.

"Silence!", cried Chrysalis, "Leave him."

The crowd of hungry creatures groaned.

"I shall deal with this whelp..." she growled, "The rest of you, head back to our lair. That is an order."

The ponies took one last look at you. They then spread their wings and flapped. It sounded like you were in the middle of a swarm of bees, pony sized and black bees. One by one, the swarm took off. Soon it was only you and the queen in the clearing of the forest.

She circled around you, examined you. You could do nothing but sit and stare.
"I have just saved your life," she said quietly. You heard every word. "If it was up to my minions, you would've been mince meat."

You swallowed hard and said nothing. Chrysalis rushed up to you and lifted you up by the throat with her magic. It was tight around your neck and had a sick green glow.

"You owe me a great debt," she whispered, "or else I'll snap your neck like a twig. Do you understand me?"

Out of fear, You still said nothing. The queen bared her teeth.

"ANSWER ME!" she yelled. You flinched as her magic tightened around your throat.

"Yes!" You croaked.

The magic's grip loosened. You exhaled sharply; a bruise blossomed around your neck. Chrysalis looked at you in satisfaction. So much emotion..

"You will pay your debt now," she said.

"But I don't have my money-" you started.

"Imbecile!" Growled Chrysalis, "Does it look like I need money? I'm starving..."

She eyed you from head to hoof and smiled.

"I want your love," she whispered.

She dropped you to the ground. You fell with a small THUMP onto your back. You recovered and tried to process what she had just said. Love...?

"For your life," she whispered again, "I want your love."

She stood directly on top of you. Her porous forehooves were at each side of your head. She looked down at you with her green eyes. She had a smirk on her face. She leaned in closer to you almost nose to nose. Her eyes blinked slowly, gracefully.

"Do you agree with my terms?" She asked. Her breath wafted across your muzzle sending a chill down your spine.You didn't have a choice. You nodded.

"Good,"

Chrysalis slowly leaned closer and closer. It seemed like years as her lips slowly crept towards yours. And finally, they met. Her lips were soft and plush against yours. She pressed her muzzle into yours and opened her mouth. You kept yours shut out of fear. You could feel her fangs and her warm tongue against your lips. With a swift bite, she nipped your lower lip. You tasted blood and flinched in pain. Chrysalis grinned and took this opportunity to thrust her tongue into your mouth.

Your tongues wrestled. Yours was normal, common among most ponies. Hers was long and snake like. You shut your eyes as she slowly took control. Without even thinking, you kissed back. She toyed with your tongue and never broke the kiss. It was maddening how passionate her embrace was. You felt her tongue work its way to the back of your mouth. You could feel it going down your neck and tickle your throat. You let out a moan, not in discomfort but in surprise.

Chrysalis chuckled above you. Her tongue slid out of your muzzle as she broke the kiss. A thin line of saliva hung between you and her. She looked down at you, her eyes half closed and a devilish grin across her face, her thin, dark, and beautiful face.

"You seem disappointed, whelp," she said.

You felt the heat rise in your cheeks. You didn't want to admit it, but you didn't want the kiss to end. A small trickle of blood slid down your muzzle from the previous bite. Chrysalis bent her neck down and lapped it up.

"I want more," she whispered.

You only looked up into her eyes. As far as you cared, she could take all she wanted.

The queen took your silence as complacency. She was now literally laying on top of you. Her eyes never broke contact with yours and you were almost nose to nose. She started moving lower and lower. Your heart was pounding. Your breathing became heavier. She crept down until her face was level with your colthood. She seemed like she was hardly breathing but you felt her breath. It tickled your scrotum making your balls retract involuntarily.

"My my," said Chrysalis, "What a healthy pair. So appetizing..."

The Queen opened her lips and let her tongue slide out. It was long and glistening, forked at the end. She brought it down and, with one long gliding motion, licked both of your balls. You grunted and gasped as the queen worked. Her tongue slithered across your sack. She popped one of your balls into her mouth, toying with it, and then sucked in the other. You could feel her tongue lapping away at them. The tension was too much. She was slowly sucking on them, the pressure mind numbing.

Your cock was semierect by now. Its head was poking out of your stealth. Chrysalis released your sack. It fell out and landed with a wet smack. She broadly licked your growing cock. You felt the warmth of her tongue as it glided and twirled around your pulsing shaft. You were sweating now, silently urging Chrysalis on. She looked up at you in a bemused way. She was teasing you, making you want it. You swallowed hard.

"Please.." you whispered. She smiled.

The Queen kissed your cock's head. She then slowly sucked your dick into her mouth. You grunted and twitched as she slowly moved down. She was watching your reaction, savoring every moment. You felt her fangs rub against your shaft. But this didn't bother you. Rather, it was a thrill. Chrysalis now had her nose against your groin, deepthroating your cock. She sucked and played with your dick. As she moaned, you felt every vibration tingling across your shaft. It was an ordeal trying not to cum.

She then started to pump. Her head moved up and down as she fellated you. She moved faster and faster, working her tongue all the while. The stimulation was too much. Your balls grew tight as an orgasm was about to peak. You shut your eyes and clenched your teeth. You could feel that this orgasm was going to be a big one.

And then Chrysalis stopped.

Still breathing heavily, you opened your eyes and stared at her. Your cock was wet pulsing, laying against your belly. Chrysalis just sat there and watched you. She watched you with a look of superiority. She was teasing you.

"You want release?" She whispered.

You nodded.

"You'll do anything?" She continued.

You nodded again. You wanted to please her and you wanted sweet release. You were fit to burst.

"Then beg," demanded Chrysalis.

"Please..." you groaned, "I live to serve you. Please..."

You looked into her eyes with pleading want. She grinned once more.

"Very well,"

Again Chrysalis moved down to your pulsing shaft. But instead of taking it in her mouth again, she moved moved even lower. She slid her tongue out. You gasped as you felt it lap at your anus. You tried to relax. Her snake like tongue pushed against your anus, slowly making its way in. She was giving you a mind blowing rimjob. She thrust her tongue into your ass. As the thickest part of her tongue squeezed in, you threw your head back in surprize and ecstasy. This stimulation was incredible.

As if things couldn't get any better, a green glow enveloped your cock. The magical stroking added to the effect. You moaned and groaned as Chrysalis had her way with you. The magic stroking your rock hard dick and her rimjob almost made you black out. The stroking grew faster and the lapping became more intense. Feeling and knowing that you were close to orgasm, Chrysalis made her move. You felt her tongue squeeze against your prostate. You twitched and gave a short yell as you finally came. Each pulse or your orgasm shot out strands of sticky and ropey cum. As you came, Chrysalis managed to catch some on her face and in her mouth. As your orgasm subsided, you flopped to the forest floor. You were on your back panting and sweaty. You looked down at Chrysalis's cum splattered face. She had just finished licking up the last of your cum.

"Such a succulent taste," she sighed. She looked back up at you. You were caught in her seductive gaze. "But I wonder if you have more to offer..."

Chrysalis got up. She turned and trotted away from you. Her hips swayed and her tail swished as she moved. She craned her head back and watched you. You watched back. She sat down on all fours and rolled onto her side still watching you. She had you right where she wanted you. Chrysalis slowly spread her hind legs revealing a set of thick, dark, glistening lips. Your heart skipped a beat and your mouth started to water. You got the hint.

You got up and slowly made your way to your queen. As you got closer, you could smell her. Drops of fluid oozed from her dark blue pussy. Although you had only came a few minutes ago, you felt yourself getting rock hard again. Chrysalis gave out a small chuckle.

"Perfect isn't it?" She said, "I can see it in you. You want to please me. You want to love me."

You nodded.

"Then show me," demanded Chrysalis, "Show me your love. Feed me."

You obeyed. Chrysalis rolled onto her back fully presenting herself to you. You bent your head down to her perfect pussy. The smell was pungent and intoxicating. Your head was starting to swim. All you could think about was how to please her. Chrysalis watched you, urging you on. You mounted her, your cock mere inches away from her delicate flower. you then pushed. Chrysalis grunted.

It was slow but deliberate. The warm fluids coated your member as you slowly parted her thick lips. Chrysalis hissed and twitched. The warmth and pulsations were amazing. Although she didn't look it, she was amazingly tight. After a few long seconds of pushing, you were in all the way. You and she were connected hip to hip, breathing loudly all the while.

You began to pull out. Chrysalis gasped. About half way out, you thrusted in again. She grunted, a wide smile across her face. You pulled out even further this time and thrusted harder. Chrysalis gave out a scream. Now that you started, you couldn't stop. You wanted to show her what you had to offer. You plowed again and again, plunging your fleshy spear into her again and again. Her yelps and moans only fueled your lust. You pushed and pushed, the stimulation clouding your mind. Her pussy seemed to be changing shapes adding on to the mind numbing experience. She was dripping underneath you, her fluids coating your sack. As you fucked and fucked, you felt your balls slapping sloppily against Chrysalis’s anus.

Chrysalis was now hyperventilating. Drool was dripping from her mouth as her eyes rolled up in ecstasy. It had been a while since she felt the love of another. You pumped and pumped. You could tell you were getting close to another orgasm. So was Chrysalis. Her moaning became louder and louder, echoing off of the trees and dense foliage. Her legs were kicking and by now she was screaming. Your only response was to fuck her harder and harder.

Chrysalis took a few more lungfuls of air and screamed. She hugged you tightly to herself as she came. You could feel her twitching and pulsing around your cock. You rammed her harder and harder as she twitched and groaned. After a few more pumps, you clenched your jaw and came. With each wave, each pulse, you thrust yourself deep into her dripping pussy, shooting your hot seed into her. Your cum overflowed and spurted out of Chrysalis's tight well fucked pussy. She held you close to herself, your cock slowly starting to retract. It slid out with a slight popping noise. Chrysalis only moaned in the aftermath. You latest on top of her, sweaty and panting.

You managed to roll off of her and onto your side. You were exhausted. Your muscles sore, you couldn't get up. Your mind was still buzzing from the most amazing sex you had ever had. Chrysalis however got up. She stood tall and proud again, your seman dribbling down her thighs. Still on the floor, all you could do was look up at your queen. She was beautiful. She leaned down, placed her hoof gently under your chin, lifted your head ever so slightly, and fixed her wondrous gaze upon you.

"Well done," she whispered.

You smiled lazily in contentment. She was pleased.

"Such a strong and potent pony..." continued Chrysalis.

You felt proud. She could tell. You didn't notice, but a wide, jagged, and evil smile crept across Chrysalis's muzzle.

"Do you love me?" She asked slowly.

You nodded.

"Will you provide me the means to spawn more Changlings?"

You nodded.

"Will you die for me?"

You nodded.

"Loyal forever more?"

"Yes," you whispered.

Chrysalis's wicked smile grew larger. You only stared blissfully back into her eyes. You didn't need anything else. All you needed was to please your queen. All that mattered was her. You didn't even notice the green glow swirling around your legs and neck. You didn't notice the black color creeping and spreading across your body. You didn't notice the transformation.

Chrysalis looked down at her new servant. Another poor soul sucked into the seduction. The hypnotic hum of her insectoid wings and the spellbinding power of her pheromones trapped him from the start. He would provide a good amount of love to feed off of, a source of seman for future eggs, and would be a nice sex slave until Chrysalis had sucked him dry, dry of both love and vitality. And the best part was that he would be blissfully happy and clueless. The perfect toy. The perfect happy slave. The transformation was nearly complete.

"Ignorance is bliss," sighed Chrysalis.

All you could do, all you wanted to do, was nodded in agreement.

She let out a cackle of laughter. You smiled in her glee.

~End.