raising two young jedi

by darthluna22314

Rating: teen
Tags: Crossover, Slice of Life, Human, Romance
Length: 4777

celestia and luna find a crashed ship (a republic light frigate) and find a surprise or should I say 2

celestia and luna find a crashed ship and looked inside it and activate a hologram recording of a republic officer. And later discover 2 young jedi and decide to raise them.(the person on the cover is kento merik he is the father of galen merik aka starkiller).
This story takes place a year after my little pony friendship is magic season 4 ended.
(And becuase this has been bugging me I will remove comments that are mean even if they are to help, they have to be in a nice way or I delete them)
And 2 years after darth revan's memory was taken from him by the jedi council.
1 year after meetra surik was exiled from the jedi order.
And takes place during the events of knights of the old republic.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-12-16 07:00:46 UTC

Discovery

9:30 PM

An hour after princess luna raised the moon her and her sister princess celestia saw a strange looking object crash on the other side of the mountain that canterlot was built on so they decided to see what it was. "I see it sister over here" luna called out calmly to celestia who just now landed.

"What do you think it is luna?" celestia asked calmly.

"I dont know tia but there's a hole in it over there lets look inside it" luna replied exitidly.

"Ok lulu but I think we should be carfull inside it" celestia told luna calmly.

"AHHHH!!!" Luna screamed.

"Luna whats wrong?" celestia asked worringly approaching luna.

"That" luna said scardly pointing at what scared her celestia looked at where she was pointing at and gasped. She saw a hallway filled with dead creatures. "What do you think happend to them sister?" luna asked calmly again snaping celestia back into reality.

"I think it was a battle luna" celestia said shockingly seeing the burn marks on the creatures and the walls.

"Maybe we should look for survivers tia?" luna asked worringly.

"Maybe if we follow these bodys we will find survivers luna" celestia said also worringly.

"Luna lets look for anything that could help us look for survivers" celestia told her calmly and thay looked only finding out that the crew on the bridge died in the crash until luna found a wierd object labled officer's log.

"Sister I found something" luna said proudly celestia walked over to luna who then activated the log.

OFFICER'S LOG ENTRY #5 "Its been 2 days sense we saved the 2 jedi younglings from that ship and wierd things are happening on the divinity lately people are going missing we dont know why maybe I will have more information at a later time end transmission" it said calmly. OFFICER'S LOG ENTRY #6 "Shoot we should of known that it was the sith we just sealed the bridge from the ship and we are hopeful that the younglings survive what ever happens to us and for a good measure to garenty their safety we sealed them in the cryo chambers and sealed the door shut now thay will survive no matter what happens even if the ship crashes" it said calmly.

*BOOOOOOM*

"Corpral what was that?" it asked worringly.

"Sir that was the engines exploding we are losing orbit" thay heard something tell him surprisingly.

"Time until impact?" thay heard him ask calmly.

"2 minutes sir" thay heard something tell him also calmly.

"Ok raise whats left of the shields and forward it to the cryo chamber" he said calmly.

"Yes sir" thay heard something say calmly in a feminine voice then thay heard the creature say.

"end transmission" it said calmly.

Luna and celestia looked at each other and celestia used her magic to scan for survivers and a smile crept on her face. "luna I found 2 survivers" celestia told her happily.

"Then lets go help them sister" luna said calmly as thay teleported to the cryo chambers.

Luna and celestia saw as thay appeared 2 very young creatures sleeping holding each other thay could tell that one was a filly and the other was a colt thay saw that the filly looked like the creature thay saw in the image and the colt looked somewhat the same the only difference was he had whiskers and a tail.

"Sister look at this" luna said shockingly celestia saw what luna was holding in her magic. "These creatures were only 1 year old sister what should we do with them?" luna asked her sister calmly. celestia looked at the creatures and saw how cute thay were.

"Luna have you ever thought about being a mother?" celestia asked calmly.

"Sister are you asking what I think your asking?" luna asked her sister excitedly. Celestia nodded luna then got happy. "I will adopt the colt" luna said happily.

"Then I will adopt the filly" celestia said also happily.

jedi master thunder quill

1 year later 10:50 pm

THUNDER QUILL'S P.O.V

I have been on the train for the past hour I am happy that before I returned home I recieved the rank of master. I hope they dont make me have to use my force abilities or my lightsaber.

"We are now arriving at canterlot station" the conducter said.

Ok now I just have to go to the castle "seems simple enough" I wisperd to myself.

10 minutes later

Well that complicates things I can understand I kind of look sketchy "I guess I will have to get in through the wall" I said with slight sadness in my voice (do to having to use his lightsaber) activating my lightsaber the blade was white with a black outline I then reached out with the force and sensed no pony on the other side of the wall or near it I then procceded to cut a hole in the wall. It took less then a minute to finish cutting through the wall "ok now I just need to sneak into the castle which is well guarded no problem" I wisperd to myself sarcasticly deactivating my lightsaber.

4 minutes later pvt.hammer's P.O.V

I was patroling the castle grounds with another of the lunar guards when we came upon a hole in the wall "that doesn't look good" I said to the guard with me.

"Private hammer tell the captain somepony has possibly broken into the castle" the sergeant said to me in a commanding tone.

"Yes sir" I said to the sergeant rushing off to find the captain of the lunar guard.

I found the captain talking with some of the guards I rushed over to silver fang "captain fang" I said as I tripped before reaching him. He had 2 of the guards help me up "private hammer what is wrong?".

He asked me in a slightly demanding tone "sir I found a hole cut into the the grounds wall I think somepony may have broken into the castle sir" I said still trying to catch my breath.

"You did good private now go get some rest, corporal take those 5 guards and go alert the rest of the guard, while you 2 go and watch that hole be sure that pony doesn't escape I will go and alert the princesses of the possible intruder" he instructed them.

"yes sir" they all said going off to do what he told them while he went to alert the princesses and I went to the barracks for some rest.

2 minutes later thunder quill's P.O.V

" Halt!!!!" a solar guard yelled from behind me flanking him were 4 lunar guards and 5 solar guards I stopped when I saw ahead of me were 14 solar guards and 18 lunar guards and then the guards behind me caught up and they all surrounded me "give up" one of the solar guards said in a demanding tone my guess is he's the captain of the solar guard.

"What about no sir" I said using force repulse sending all of them flying into the wall knocking them all out."Now to speak with the princesses" I said to myself  with relief in my voice pushing the doors to the throne room open.

6 minutes later and after a fight between thunder quill and the princesses

"So mister thunder quill you mean to tell us that you would like to train our children the ways of the "force" celestia asked thunder quill.

"Yes princess it would be a huge honor and privilege if you allowed me to do this you highness" I said with respect in my voice while bowing".A slight talk between the princesses and their adopted children later and they agreed to let thunder quill train their children.

Another jedi is discoverd

10 years later/ thunder quill's hut/ 4:30 am/ thunder quill's P.O.V

It's been 10 years since I was allowed to train their adopted children in the ways jedi. I have seen that richard is going to become a jedi guardian and lilly is going to be a jedi sentinal. Richard has constructed a green lightsaber and lilly constructed 2 blue lightsabers both were reversed hand grip. yesterday I let the princesses know that today they can come and take their children home since they are done their training we are now meditating and all three of us could sense their mothers were here."Master quill I sense my mother and aunt are here to take us home" lilly said to us.

"I can too master" richard told us while still meditating while I sense something in the everfree forest.

"Master are you ok I sense you have just now become on edge is something wrong?" lilly asked me.

"No my padawan its nothing" I told her just then their mothers came in to the meditating room.

"Mom" lilly said walking over to celestia and hugging her.

"Mother" richard said getting up and rushing over to luna and hugging her lovingly.

"Your highneses it was a pleasure and an honor to teach your children the ways of the jedi" I told them while bowing to them.

"It was a pleasure to have you train our children the ways of this "force" as you call it mr.thunder quill" celestia said to me then her and princess luna and their adopted children went home.

10 minutes later/ the everfree forest

I was now walking through the everfree forest without my robes on as to not get them dirty I did how ever still had my lightsaber out then I sensed something I quickly moved out of the way almost being blasted I then activated my lightsaber looking around."who is there" I said looking around then I heard something.

"I will not go back to the order and you cant make me" I heard somepony say in a female voice.

"what are you talking about?" I asked dodging another blaster bolt.

"I am not going back to the jedi order and I know your a jedi master I can sense it in you" she said to me and I could sense her trying to catch me in her sights again.

"So your a jedi why are you here and not at the temple or fighting revan and malak's sith empire" I said ducking in which the bolt missed him by few centimeters.

"Because I am not going to help the council that has made the remainder of my life a real living hell" she shouted now in anger I can now sense she is getting mad.

"Explian to me how has the council done this to you" I asked in a slight aggressive tone of her blaming the council.

"Ohh I think I struck a nerve if you must know why I hate the council so much is because they exiled me on the false accusations of falling to the dark side and stripped me of my lightsaber" she said to me with sadness in her voice I then threw my lightsaber at the branch she was on "aghhhhhhh" she screemed falling to the ground and the branch landing on her leg. I then rushed over too her putting the white blade to her throat "do you yield exile?" I asked her.

"Meetra surik" she said to me I looked at her.

"What did you say?" I asked the young woman.

"Meetra surik my name is meetra surik if your going to end my life make it quick" she told me which caught me off guard.

"Why would you want me to kill you meetra surik?" I asked her shocked at her request.

"I have cut myself off from the force and I am an exile my life is in ruins now" she said to me with alot of sadness in her voice and some tears in her eyes.

"Come on get up meetra you are not going to stay here you can stay in my hut" I said to her removing the branch from atop her legand helping her up and starting to walk home with her on my back.

"Thank you master jedi" she said to me.

"Your welcome meetra surik and dont worry I will try to help you get you connection to the force back and help you build another lightsaber".

the solar Jedi & possible danger

20 minutes earlier Lilly's pov

I woke up after a good nights sleep I walked over to my dresser and changed out of my sleeping attire and put on my normal royal attire but while I was getting dressed I sensed something big was going to happen but I just shrugged it off. After I finished getting dressed I went to my bathroom and brushed my hair and put my circlet on and looked at myself in the mirror and smiled. I walked out of my room and saw my mom waiting for me "good morning mom" I said to her happily.

"Good morning to you too Lilly did you sleep well my daughter?" she asked me nicely.

"Yes thank you mother" I said back to her.

"Lilly is something wrong?"  she asked me.

"No mom I am fine" I said back to her with a fake smile on my face.

"Ok if you say so but remember you can tell me anything" she told me reassuringly.

"Ok mom can we go and eat breakfast now?" I asked.

"Sure honey lets go" mom said happily.

20 minutes later

When we reached the dining hall aunt Luna and Richard were coming in as well "good morning aunt Luna good morning Richard" I said to them cheerfully.

"Good morning to you as well my niece" Luna said tiredly and still happily.

"Good morning Lilly" Richard said tiredly.

"How was night court Luna?" mom asked Luna.

"It was quite peaceful Tia" Luna said with slight disappointment in her voice.

"Ok lulu" mom said worryingly.

We ate breakfast and we talked more then we did last night after breakfast aunt luna and richard started to walk to their rooms to go back to sleep. I looked at Richard having a strange feeling that this will be one of the last times that he will be being himself.

"Lilly are you sure your ok?" mom asked me.

"No mom" I said while looking down and walking next to her.

"What is wrong?" my mom asked worryingly.

"I have a strange feeling something is going to happen to Richard"I told her.

SITH CORRUPTION & SHOCKING INFORMATION OF RICHARD'S FATHER

Richard's POV

Richard's mind

I looked around myself and saw nothing but darkness I tried to dream of something but it did not change the darkness around me I started to get scared "Mother" I called when she did not reply or come I immediately got more scared even terrified. What could prevent my mother from entering my dreams I then felt something enter my mind I looked behind me and saw a person standing there I could very well tell it was a man. He was wearing a completely black robe and I could see he also was wearing armor under his robe and I saw he had two lightsaber's and his robes had a hood like a Jedi's and he had it up so I could not see his face but one thing I could see was his eyes they were both a yellow-orange color "Who are you?" I finally managed to ask.

"Lets just say I am a person who once knew your father" he told me in a voice that sent shiver's down my spine.

"What do you know about my father?" I asked in a bit of a demanding voice.

"I know that he was once a sith" he said in a way as if he hated my father.

"No he was not my mother told me when they found the ship we were in that his body was among the republic soldiers and master quill said my father was a Jedi" I said allowing anger to seep into my voice.

"He was a Jedi but he followed REVAN when he led Jedi to defend the republic from the mandalorien neo-crusaders he was also one of the first to see the Jedi were not the protectors they said they were but he gave up all the power of being a sith because he could not kill a female Jedi and he was weak" he said in a smirking way.

"I may not have known my father but I'm certain he was not WEAK AND HE WAS NOT A SITH" I yelled at the man with anger and hatred in the last words.

"Is that anger and hatred in you voice?" he asked in a smirk-full voice.

"Yes it is because I know your a sith" I said still angry.

"Didn't your master tell you anger and hatred is the path to the darkside" he said in more of a smug way.

"He did, oh my lord what am I even doing" I said in a shocked tone trying to get the anger and hatred out of my mind.

"Do you know you also can't be with that Pegasus" he said in another smugfull tone.

"What do you mean?" I asked in a slightly sad tone.

"The Jedi order forbids love didn't your master tell you that as well" he said in a way that sounded like a victorious person.

"He lied to me" I said in a depressed tone dropping to my knees although I was surrounded by nothingness.

"But there is a way around it" he said once again in a victorious tone.

"And what would that be?" I asked in a bit of a hopeful way.

"Become my apprentice learn the ways of the dark side and we will kill the Jedi from that country your in" he said with a slightly calming tone.

"I pledge myself to your teachings my master" I said in a defeated way.

"Good first you will have to act like this never happened and let me know what to take a lot of interest in when we arrive". he said in a prideful and gloating voice.

"Yes my master" I said in a obeying tone before waking up.

Richard's room, canterlot, equestria

I woke up with a start I then felt like I was going to throw up so I went to my bathroom and did just that. I was just about to just write off what happened as a dream until I looked in the mirror and saw my eyes were a yellow-orange color and my skin was pale I then splashed some water on my face and looked back at the mirror and saw my eyes were no longer a yellow-orange color and my skin was no longer pale I then realised something that shocked me and made me feel slightly comfortable I have become a sith. I then walked out of the bathroom and thought of what I could do and went to sleep smiling.

Andrew's meditating room, sith cruiser with 4 other sith ships

I came out of my meditation with a smile I now have an apprentice and a starting of a spy in equestria and a prince no less "They will never know what hit them ha ha ha ha" I laughed.

Introducing lilly to the mane 6

3:45

Celestias p.o.v

"Ah twilight, rainbow dash, rarity, applejack, pinkie pie, fluttershy it is good to see you on such short notice" I said calmly.

"We wouldent want you to wait princess twilight said in her normal respectful tone.

"But princess in your letter to twilight you said you wanted to show us something if I may ask what is it?" Rarity asked in a respectful tone.

"Follow me so I can show you what it is I said slightly excited while getting up and leading them into a hallway.

"And then me and luna teleported into the room that had the only 2 survivers" I said with a tear and sadness in my voice.

"Are you ok princess?" applejack asked worriedly.

"Yes now to to let you know when we saw the 2 surviving creatures we found out thay were both only one year old and saw that one was a filly while the other was a colt and the filly looked like the other creatures we saw and the colt looked somewhat like them he had whiskers and a tail while the others didnt so me and luna adopted them luna adopted the colt and I adopted the filly" I finished happily outside my chambers twilight and her friends let out a gasp.

"Princess then why are we outside your chambers?" rainbow dash asked confusingly.

"Becuase my duaghter is in here sleeping and I wanted you to see her" I told them happily.

"Can we huh huh huh" pinkie pie said excitidly jumping around I saw the others had an eager look on there faces.

"Yes but please be silent" I said calmly to them.

"Ok princess" thay all said excitedly and respectfully so I opened the door.

I heard the ah's coming from them I then enter'ed and we all looked at the sleeping form of my daughter I then walked over to her and nuzzled her head then her eyes flutterd open with a cute little yawn.

"What is it mama?" lilly asked with a hint of tiredness in her voice.

"I want you to meet some friends of mine lilly" I told her calmly she then sat up and let out another cute little yawn and looked at twilight and her friends and thay looked at her. "Twilight, rainbow dash, pinkie pie, rarity, fluttershy, applejack this is my daughter lilly, lilly this is twilight, rainbow dash, pinkie pie, rarity, fluttershy, and applejack" I said happily.

"Hi" lilly said calmly while also waving at them.

"Hi I am twilight I am your mothers student" twilight said proudly while shaking lilly's hand.

"I know my mom speaks fondly of you" lilly said happily twilight blushed at this.

"Pleasure to meet you I am rarity I design clothes at ponyville" rarity said proudly shaking lilly's hand.

"Nice to meet you" lilly said happily.

"Hi I am pinkie pie nice to meet you" pinkie pie said excitedly shaking lilly's hand cuasing lilly's arm to shake after pinkie pie let go.

"Nice to meet you" lilly said happily.

"Hi my name is applejack" applejack said happily shaking lilly's hand.

"Nice to meet you nice hat by the way" lilly said happily.

"Why thank you" applejack said happily.

"Hay I am rainbow dash" rainbow dash said politly shaking lilly's hand.

"Nice to meet you" lilly said calmly.

"Hi I am fluttershy I take care of the animals in ponyville" fluttershy said nervously in a low voice but not low enough for lilly not to hear her.

"Its nice to meet you" lilly said calmly. "Now I dont want to hurt any of your feelings but Id like to go back to sleep until richard and aunt luna wake up in about 2 hours" lilly said politly going back to sleep.

"Umm excuse me princess but will we also be meeting princess luna's son?" twilight asked politly.

"Why yes you will" I said happily.

Introducing richard to the mane 6

5:45 pm

princess luna's P.O.V

I woke up and looked down at my son sleeping using my wing as a blanket he had a smile on his face I leaned my head down and nuzzled his head causing him to yawn and slowly open his light green eyes.

"Yes mother" l heard him say with a hint of tiredness in his voice while rubbing his eyes and then scratching his dark brown mane.

"Its time to wake up my son and dont forget to put on your royal clothing" I told him while walking over to our balcony to raise the moon when that was done I saw he had just finished putting on his royal attire.

"You know I like watching you raise the moon mother" he said to me lovingly.

"Thank you richard" I said happily to him while hugging him.

"Now my son your aunt wants you to meet some friends of ours" I told him.

"Ok mother" he said back I then opened the door to the throne room to see lilly run by me and tackle richard.

"Ah!!!!" he shouted while being tackled by lilly.

"I got your tail richard" lilly said playfully showing the others in the throne room that she could pick him up.

"Let go lilly you know it hurts when you hold me like this" he said painfully. Which lilly obliged by droping him and walked over to tia "ouch ouch ouch ouch" richard said painfully while cradeling his tail.

After 4 minutes he stood up. "Hello my names richard and if what my mother has told me is correct then you are twilight" he said calmly pointing at twilight. "And you are rainbow dash" he said in a wierd way with a small blush while pointing at rainbow dash who also had a blush on her face. "And your fluttershy" he said calmly again pointing at fluttershy. "And your rarity" he said calmly pointing at rarity. "And your pinkie pie" he said calmly pointing at pinkie pie. "And your applejack" he said calmly pointing at applejack. "And its a pleasure to meet you all" he said calmly bowing".

"Why thank you" thay all said respectivly bowing and the rest of the night went by very well.

the lunar jedi

8:00 pm/ Richard's P.O.V

I sat up in my bed and rubbed the sleep out of my eye's and got up. "That was a good days sleep" I said with a small bit of sleep in my voice. I looked at my dresser seeing a picture of a younger me and my mother and next to it was my lightsaber inside it was a green adegan crystal that I recieved from my master. I then grabbed my royal clothes and went to my bathroom to get dressed and to use the bathroom. (4 minutes later) I exited the bathroom with my royal clothes on and went to my dresser and grabbed my lightsaber and put it in one of the pockets my pants then went to the door of my room and walked into one of the many hallways of the castle just as mother was exiting her room.

"Good evening my son" my mother said with a smile on her face and happiness in her voice like she always did when talking to me.

"Good evening to you as well mother" I said to her with a smile on my face and happiness in my voice.

We walked to the dining hall and we had a rather nice meal with lilly and aunt celestia. Then we walked to the throne room so mother can start night court and since I was 17 I was allowed to join mother during night court. "Mother what is night court like?" I asked her curiously.

"It is actually not exciting because nothing happens during it" mother said with a slight bit of boredom in her voice.

"But mother what about when master quill first came here or when you and aunt celestia adopted me and lilly" I said to her pointing out two occasion.

"Okay so there are some occasions when intresting and good things happen" she said to me with her happiness returning to her voice then we continued walking to the throne room. (2 minutes later) We walked into the throne room mother walked to the throne and sat in it while I sat next to the throne and began to meditate.

"What are you doing?" my mother asked me curiously.

"I am meditating mother" I told her.

"Son can you tell us about it though?" mother asked me at which I nodded.

"Well mother when a jedi meditates they block everything around them out to contentrate on their surroundings and use the force to highten their senses and it helps them become more a tune to the force". I explained to my mother happily about helping her understand.

"Wow that is quite facinating son" mother told me with slight excitment in her voice.

The rest of the night went by rather quickly do to my meditating. Me and mother got up and went to the dinning hall to eat and once again we ate with aunt celestia and lilly when we were done me and mother went to our rooms to sleep.