the nightmare knight

the night has come to the land of equestria and it seemed everyone has gone to sleep, but one stallion looked over a small town called ponyville particularly at the castle of twilight sparkle {so this is the famous castle of the princes of friendship} the stallion let out a small chuckle before leaving to everfree forest {not for long soon it will rise even higher and be the new home of nightmare moon} as he was walking trough the forest after 5 minutes he came to his destination the castle of the 2 sisters. and he entered the room when nightmare moon was defeated {mother.... i promise you i will avenge you and bring you the eternal night and you will rule the kingdom just like you wanted} the stallion smiled as he began casting a spell with his horn and then he disappeared .

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THE NEXT MORNING IN PONYVILLE

twilight sparkle was working on a advanced teleportation spell {come on this has to work!} twilight was becoming more and more irritated because she allready  failed the spell 10 times (i would be mad too honestly) the reason for that is after the princesses transferred there alicorn  magic to her and then drained and returned after tireks defeat shes been having problems with her magic, princess celestia told her it usually happens when magic transfer is used, that was indeed true since the rest of the princesses had difficulty using magic for 3 weeks but its been a year since then, twilight could do the other spells just fine but for some reason the teleportation spells caused the most problems for her. one time she teleported to canterlot from ponyville whne she just tried to get to sugarcube corner, (ok enough of that, lets get back to twilight casting the spell) twilight tried her hardest to concentrate but insted of teleporting an explosion happend in front of twilight, she wasent injured to much just a scratch or 2 the explosion was weak so i didnt do much, {uuggggggh WHY CANT I GET IT RIGHT?!} twilight yelled as she cleaned herself from the dirt that came from the explosion. suddenly twilight heard the sound of thunder she looked up to the sky and saw nothing {odd there isnt a cloud in the sky where did that-} before twilight could finish a sound caught her ear as if something exploded twilight looked to the way of everfree forest and saw 3 bright flashes of light, after the flashes twilght looked closer to the sky and noticed something falling from the sky she looked closer and it had 4 limbs twilight thought it was a pony {mother of celestia!} as the figure was falling to the ground with alarming speed twilight knew she didnt have much time she began casting the teleportation spell {please work just this once} and surprisingly twilight did teleport to everfree forest right below {haha it worked it finally worked} but twilight celebration was short lived as she remembered about the figure falling from the sky and as twilight looked up and saw the figure was about to hit the branch of a tree twilight quickly caught him with the levitation spell but do to the twilights use of teleportation earlier her magic was a  bit off she only managed to slow the fall down, the figure hit the branch with his back and then falling on the rest of em and landing near a tree {oh no!} wtilight ran to the figure but as she approached she noticed that while the fallen figure was still alive and breathing there was one part that shocked twilight {thats not a pony its a -}

TO BE CONTINUED (i hate cliff hangers too but still i ask you to wait it WILL get good)