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My Little Pony: Prime

by Brony Tom
A sinister poison corrupts ponies and twists them into horrid mockeries of their old selves.

After an odd blue meteor crashes deep within the Everfree Forest, an insidious new substance spreads throughout Ponyville, and then to all of Equestria, corrupting the ponies it ensnares. Ponies everywhere must fight this new threat, but... they must also fight their friends, and even themselves.


Special thanks go to Silent Machina for being awesome and for helping to edit this story.


UPDATES:
29 June- Moderate changes to Firework Flare (chapters 2 through 5); he's now less of a Gary Stu. Also, minor changes in chapter 5 dialogue.
4 June- minor dialogue change in Fluttershy's scene in chapter 8
16 May- IMPORTANT UPDATE: The Griffins' role has been taken over by the Changelings; also, Captain Allbright was replaced with Shining Armor as Captain of the Guard; also, minor dialogue fixes and grammar/spelling fixes
17 March- fixed more grammar issues, modified a little dialogue here and there (nothing major)
26 November- Added chapter number as part of the title, fixed up some grammar issues
23 October- Modified Part 1, Celly/Luna dialogue

Teen
Cancelled
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Adventure
Crossover
 
MPOTP

50037 words: Estimated about 4 hours to read

11 Chapters:

  1. 1: Impact 2012-08-15 01:17:49 UTC
    5231
  2. 2: Sparks 2012-06-29 23:06:53 UTC
    6338
  3. 3: Unwelcome Guests 2012-06-29 23:29:11 UTC
    5444
  4. 4: Precursor 2012-05-16 22:41:44 UTC
    3575
  5. 5: Sowing Seeds 2012-06-29 23:51:44 UTC
    6479
  6. 6: Stirring 2012-05-16 23:10:48 UTC
    3118
  7. 7: Night Business 2012-06-30 00:00:42 UTC
    4451
  8. A Monster Lurks 2012-05-16 23:18:39 UTC
    509
  9. 8: Gestation 2012-06-30 00:05:03 UTC
    5322
  10. 9: Meetings 2012-08-01 20:00:19 UTC
    9047
  11. The Monster Within 2013-04-01 22:56:38 UTC
    523