Band of Five Attributes (Re-Written)
Chapter LXX, Part I- Sound Barrier
Previous ChapterNext ChapterNight had fallen after a few hours, everyone went to bed, and a few more hours passed since then. Tenmei lay on his bed, the covers only coming up to the gaskins on his back legs, and he stared at the ceiling rather blankly. The stallion began tossing and turning, but no matter his position, he couldn’t close his eyes and drift away. This night, sleep may as well be damned for him.
As if that wasn’t bad enough, his member was protruding again, and it was starting to hurt a little bit.
He winced and grit his teeth as a horrific jolt of pain shot through the spire. Okay, maybe it hurt a lot.
The earth pony sat up, shooting his third hind leg a stony glare as it rose up to greet its owner. He groaned at it, then laid back down on his back.
“May as well tie a white cloth to the damn thing and have a legitimate flagpole attached to my groin.” Tenmei mumbled, staring off at the ceiling again. He sat up again, ears perked to attention as he heard hooves hitting the floor beyond his room. His heart froze stiff in his chest for a second as the door knob began wriggling about a bit. It was then turned, and the door slowly creaked open.
Quickly, he took his pillow and tried to hide the pole that was attempting to salute him with it just as a tall white form with a horn strode in.
Raki closed the door behind her, her tail twitching nervously. She looked at the stallion, seeing something poke out from beneath the pillow. “Couldn’t sleep because of an itch?” She asked flatly, causing the earth pony to nearly jump in surprise.
“Y-Yeah…” The tan pony answered, shifting his rear legs nervously.
“I couldn’t either.” The mare replied, sighing after that. Her horn lit up, and the room was encased in a sort of magic barrier that molded itself to the walls, floor, and ceiling.
“What did you just do?” The stallion asked, brow arched.
“I set up a barrier. Nobody’s going to hear us.” Raki answered, sitting on her haunches as she spoke. Tenmei blushed redder than a tomato almost immediately, the words of the unicorn invading his room registering in his mind within a heartbeat. He felt his member twitch oh so slightly.
“I...I don’t think I’m ready for that…” The stallion murmured weakly, ears flat on his skull.
“Why...is that?” The unicorn asked, brow arched.
“I just...don’t feel comfortable about it…” Tenmei replied, eyes averting away. “It...feels wrong…”
Raki’s eyes widened. “That’s rather worrying.” She remarked, blinking. “But...why doesn’t it feel comfortable?”
“Can we just not talk about it, please?” The one sitting in bed sighed, wincing as his protrusion shot a wave of pain at his nerves. “Asking why just makes it worse…”
“Alright.” The intruding mare sighed in defeat, getting up before walking to the stallion slowly. She kept going until she stood at the side of his bed. “But...could I at least help you with your problem?” She asked.
“I know you’re trying to help, and I appreciate it, but…” The stallion trailed off, trying to finds words that would avoid offending the unicorn.
“It’s alright, I understand completely.” Raki said, sitting down to wrap him in her forelegs. “Just one of those nights, isn’t it?”
“Pretty fucking much…” The earth pony answered, his member twitching painfully again. He winced, but not much at this surge of pain.
“Ah.” The mare sighed with a nod of her head. She rubbed the stallion’s back with one of her front hooves, hoping to make him feel better.
Tenmei thought over his current scenario for a moment, as well as his current options. It felt like an eternity, though, as he analyzed everything to the best of his ability. “Just this once…” He sighed after a while. Reluctantly, he removed the pillow from his groin, and his flagpole rose up to salute him again.
Raki removed her forelegs from the stallion and set her hooves on the floor. “Would you like me to do anything in particular?” She asked.
“As long as things don’t go up my ass, and Mr. Meatstick goes away, I’m alright with whatever you choose to do.” The stallion replied bluntly, lying on his back again. “You already have a sound barrier up; might as well make it useful.”
The tan pony did have a point on his part. The unicorn clambered onto the bed on top of him, careful to avoid hurting him with her hooves in the process. She decided against kissing him on the lips for the time being, turning herself around so her folds were above his muzzle.
Tenmei chuckled nervously when the sight greeted him. “This...uh…” He trailed off.
“Was unexpected?” Raki finished for him.
“Yeah, that.” The one beneath replied with a quick nod.
“Then again, Koto didn’t expect me to kiss her on the lips one night.” The unicorn confessed, blushing now.
“Wait...you’re...bisexual?” The earth pony asked, eyes wide. That image was now playing out in his head.
“I guess you could say that.” The mare answered, chuckling daintily to herself. She lowered her head until her muzzle was inches away from the mere tip of the flagpole. The unicorn sighed contently, letting her tongue out and giving the shaft a tentative lick.
“I think...a chill just ran up my spine…” Tenmei murmured, wrapping both forelegs around the mare’s hind legs.
“That’s a good thing. It means your body is responding the way it should.” Raki replied before licking the head again. Before the stallion could react, he felt her mouth wrap around the head of his dong, and he gave off a soft moan in response.
Tenmei eyed the folds dangling just out of his reach. They were very tempting, but even his front hoof could not touch them--so close, and yet, so far--unless he chose to sit up. The earth pony let off a sharp gasp, feeling more of his flagpole enter the unicorn’s mouth at an alarming rate. “Could...you...lower your rear, please?” He asked.
The unicorn obliged quickly, figuring she may as well let him have it. She shuddered, feeling a front hoof probe around the folds tenderly. The stallion moved the hoof away--just as someone began knocking on the door. Raki gasped, eyes wide with shock. She pulled away from the member (while she accidentally sat down with her crotch in Tenmei’s muzzle in the process) and yanked the blanket up to her chest via magic to hide the view.
The knocking persisted for a moment or two before the room fell deathly silent. Whatever was knocking seemed to have gone away for the time being. The blanket was cast aside, and the unicorn noticed her partner’s front hooves trying to push her off. She lifted her rump and heard him coughing for air.
“Don’t...do that…again...!” Tenmei gasped, trying to regain his composure. “I could’ve suffocated…”
“Apologies...didn’t expect someone to start knocking.” Raki sighed, waiting until she was sure that whoever that may have been was truly away, which was only a few moments.
“Neither did I, to be honest…” Tenmei replied, waving a front hoof to the ceiling a bit frantically.
“I get the feeling we’re being watched…” Raki murmured, sighing again. She glanced around the room for a moment or so to confirm that there wasn’t a mysterious third party eavesdropping this nightly charade. Certain there was nobody watching, the unicorn promptly shoved the flagpole into her mouth again.
The stallion laid back, seemingly indifferent to the happenings down south for the moment. True, the treatment he was getting felt good, but it simply didn’t feel good enough for that fact to quite register in his brain yet. He wiped his dampened muzzle with a hoof and proceeded to wipe that mess onto the bedsheets. Tenmei jumped and then shuddered, feeling a front hoof tenderly caress his nuts.
The unicorn pulled away again. “You felt that, didn’t you?” She asked.
“Y-Yeah…” Tenmei replied with a nod. He was trying to divert his gaze to the ceiling again, but the rear end of the one who was touching him was in his way.
“How long have you had this erection?” Raki asked, causing the stallion’s heart to skip a beat.
“Uh...I haven’t kept track of time.” Tenmei answered, sweat dotting his wide-eyed face.
“It’s about eleven-thirty.” Raki sighed. “And we all hit the hay at seven-forty-five.”
“I had the pole...uh...five minutes after I covered up.” Tenmei said, shaking a bit.
That right there waved a red flag in the unicorn’s mind. “So, more or less three hours, and you’ve not tended to it?” She asked.
“Yeah...and it’s been hurting too…” Tenmei confessed, quickly covering his mouth with a hoof to stifle a yelp as the spire shot another surge of pain through his nerves.
“If this isn’t fixed soon, you’re gonna have a permanent lightpost dangling between your legs.” Raki scolded, letting off a sharp sigh tinged with annoyance. “You wouldn’t even be able to walk out in public at all if that were to happen.”
Tenmei could very easily envision how that scenario would’ve played out, and his eyes nearly bulged out of their sockets as it played in his head. Before he could utter another word, the mare flipped herself right back around and plunged the member into her vagina without so much as a warning. The breath was knocked out of him, another jolt of pain ran rampant in his system, and his front legs had stiffened for a second afterwards.
“You certainly felt that. This is a lot worse than I thought.” Raki sighed, her words eliciting a weak nod and pleading whimper from the stallion beneath her.
“Just make it go away…” Tenmei complained, eyelids slanting in a way he looked about ready to burst into tears. “It hurts so much…”
“Oh dear. Just how pent is he?” Raki thought, lowering her head so she could nuzzle the young stallion tenderly. “I’ll make it go away, it’s going to be alright…” She whispered softly. The mare felt front legs grasp her desperately by the neck, and she knew she didn’t need to waste time. Horn aglow, she slowly raised herself up and brought herself back down a few times, her movements garnering more needy whimpers from the earth pony.
She pulled the flagpole out just long enough to grasp it in her magic before jamming it straight back into her snatch. The stallion let out a sharp shriek of pain, causing the unicorn to wince as the ghastly sound assaulted her ears. Good thing the sound barrier had been set up in the first place.
Raki had no choice now. She rose her rear up and down with swift movements, hips smacking as they connected again and again. Her mouth locked with his, his screams of agony heavily muffled as a result. Tears were leaking from his eyes, but there was little she could do to stop them.
With magic and body combined, the earth pony felt the pain going away much quicker than what either could coax away alone. Another muffled scream came out as his member erupted its fluids like a volcano. As those fluids left, the pain went with, though a tinge of after-hurt still lingered as he was spent.
The room hung in silence, and the kiss was broken. The unicorn looked away from her partner, a pang of guilt wrenching itself in her heart. She’d just raped a pony when he was most vulnerable, and a tear fell from her eye as that fact lodged itself in her mind.
Tenmei calmed down, wiping his tears away with a hoof after prying it away from the unicorn. He felt the tear from his partner just barely hit his left ear, and he pulled her closer with his front legs.
“I….I just…” Raki started, her voice shaken. “I’m...a monster…I’m like them...”
“You’re not.” Tenmei said, his still-pained voice firm. “You just wanted to help.”
“But...you were vulnerable…” The unicorn replied, another tear streaking her face. The earth pony couldn’t deny her very valid point.
“I gave myself to you. There’s a difference.” Tenmei sighed, nuzzling her neck. “I gave you free reign, even though it hurt…”
Raki sighed, letting his words sink in for a moment. She realized he’d just countered her, and that put her mind at a bit of ease. She turned to look at him again and sighed softly. The mare wiped her tears away with one of her own hooves.
“I...suppose you’re right…” She murmured before finding her eyes widen when the earth pony pecked her on the lips.
The stallion flashed her a cheeky grin. “Hey, despite the pain, that was really good. Heck, I feel really comfortable now.” He said.
“Oh, that reminds me…” Raki sighed, realizing the member was still held in both magic and snatch. She rose her rear end, the aura grasping the flagpole going away as she did. A wet pop sounded as the shaft was released, which fell limp against the owner’s stomach afterwards. She lowered her rear again, though it was only to shift into a more comfortable position.
“Hey, could we keep the sound barrier up for a good half-hour longer?” Tenmei asked, eyelids slanted in worry.
“Why?” Raki asked, brow arched.
“There’s...something else I’ve kept pent up. You remember when I went near-mute for a day?” Tenmei stated.
“Yes...wait…” The unicorn connected the dots in her head. “You’re going to tell me?”
“All of it. And I’m not leaving any details out.” Tenmei answered, his voice firm.
Raki thought it over for a moment. “Tomorrow.” She said. “Right now….” The unicorn paused to cover her mouth with a hoof, “...we need to sleep.”
Author's Note
Er, yeah...things. Looks like I really outdid myself here.
~Dragon
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