Working on the Darkness

by xluferx

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Previous Chapter

Author's Note

Promises were made and promises were broken like many others in this site like really a lot.
Never counted never cared.
Honestly from the very beginning, I wanted to finish this, even more, when my favorite authors liked my work that's like the ultimate praise, the best reward and I was driven by that but then times passes and passes and I lost all interest of the show like a lot of authors here, pretty much the only reasons some old authors remain here is because of they are getting paid a considerable sum through patreon.
After moving to Fanfiction and Royal road, I stayed there because more attention I got and pretty much that's what author like, attention. And after the whole rush one day I thought about this site and came back and canceled everything except this one but I have to do it as well is a lost cause.
And when I remember the plot here, the ideas and execution are retarded, pretty much this story is overrated how could it get this far especially with the disastrous amount of grammar mistakes I will never know, I have an idea tho.
Anyways, I dunno if my readers are actually alive and had been loyally waiting for me to update, if so then sorry I guess?
But one thing I can tell is that thanks to these stories I improved as a writer, and this particular one let me get a little taste of success.
So as a partying gift I will simply put how this was supposed to go.
Btw alot of grammar mistake I will not even bother to check them or correct them so....
Enjoy or not, IDC honestly...


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-Some slice of life here and there and Luna invites Elijah for a cup of tea with the same intentions of Celestia, however, he sees through her plot and immediately turns the tables on her having her mind controlled but he humiliates her more than anything and having her dance with him before freeing her from his control and leaves, leaving her totally confused and afraid as well.

-elijah continues with his work and then returns to ponyville and more slice of life there Twilight having an important role and piqued his interest about spike growth so he secretly feeds him meat and keep an eye on him for an entire month and noticed many changes but had to stop the moment he developed very aggressive nature. Twilight found out and informed celestia who immediately intervened and forbid him from feeding him meat ever again and was kicked out of ponyville.

-A temporary thing, he remained at the capital dealing with anger that couldnt be expressed and occasionally an angry letter from Twilight.

-After a long time he found himself without nothing to do, he went to an orphanage where and initially called for Chrysalis for a friendly chat, and she tried to seduce him because the energy she gets from the kids is not enough. She fails miserably but learns interesting thing from him.

-Luna seeks to speak with him, it was about a travel around the world to search for old ,relatively speaking, friends. She offered him a lot of stuff that interest him in exchange of his companionship, and he recluntaly accepts and return to his house where is greeted with a female human.

-Elijah gets anoyed but surprised about Chrysalis antics

-They sit down and talk which ended up Chrysalis eating all his negativity as a favor.

-Elijah enjoys months free of anger, resenment, vengance, hate, any negative emotion.

-Chrysalis returns asking if he wants the same thing again, Elijah decies against it and allowed her to take away the positive feelings leaving him like before, a bitter person.

-Luna coes back and tell him that they will be traveling in a week and should prepare, and since he had nothing better to do he prepared everything in a single day and counted down the days.

-At the day he wrote down a small letter telling anybody who visited him that he would be gone

Stop here, honestly this is how it was supposed to go to certain degree, pretty much this where I have though the story just to this point and the adventure I haven't though of them like at all and writing them would mean to put effort in something I have absolutely no intention to do so, in other words I will be skipping everything since there is nothing. Sue me, don't care.

-They couldn't do anything to celestia but still delivered a blow to her image after some events, Elijah technically achieve a goal but not entirely and there was some anrchy in Equestria but didn't last much
-Celetia was angry but didn't lash out against Elijah or Luna, she continued her work like nothing happened at the end they had absolute no power anymore.

-Somehow Luna and Elijah agreed to fuck for weeks out of curiosity and mock celebration from Luna part since she would be transforming into a human thanks to elijah lesson in anatomy. Besides she had been for a long while curious how was life in a specific form
-Stupidily and obvious enough a month late she ended up pregnant and couldn't transform back.
-they agresseivly fought verbally and physycally and Luna almost aborted the baby by stabbing herself but in time he managed to move the knife away from the womb.
-Both calmed down and reached to a mutual agreement, she will have it but not raise it.
-Celestia lerned about it and laughed she didn't really care, but Luna stupidity was amusing and she would do nothing since she could tell from a mile away that she hated it so by actually killing it it would be a favour rather than a torture.
-Months later Luna gave birth to a baby girl, much to the surprise of people she had wings. However Luna after some rest trasnformed back to her original form and left Equestria and Elijah alone with the baby girl named Ellie.

-From that point he raised Ellie with some help of Twilight and rarely chrysalis until she was 8, Elijah had a brain hemorrhage and died shocking everybody. All those years of constant stress and bad habits finally took a toll on him.

-Out of some respect Luna tried to raise Ellie but failed miserably, She hated the living shit of Ellie and she also hated hated Luna to death to the point that their disscusion ended up in physical fight which Ellie always lost and sometimes with broken wings.
-When she was 15 she had a terrible but terrible fight with Luna again and fought, Ellie dragged her broken body to her father workshop and searched around the place where she found cigarettes and alcohol and she blisfully consumed everything, indulging herself in the hedonistic habits for a long while in the darkness remembering the happy times.

-End

Yeah bad end.

Honestly there also had been the idea after finishing this story I would write a sequel with Ellie ass the protagonist living a very shitty life with constant and real-life problems but as you can see that will never happen.

Bye bye 4ever.