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With the Best Intentions

by that guy from that thing
Fluttershy gets fed up of being pushed around.

Fluttershy has always been pushed around it seems. Her pet bullies her into feeding him more, her friends ignore her, and nopony respects her opinions. And she is tired of it. On a particularly bad day she is given the chance to have what she wants most. To have ponies do as she says and not the other way around. But is she going to be satisfied with just that or will the power corrupt her? Who will save Ponyville from the tyranny of a mad mare? Who will save Fluttershy from herself? Who wil get Angel his lunch? *Warning. This fic contains a crying Fluttershy. Not for the faint of heart. I also do not own the picture, artist credit goes to aeroytechyon-X.

Teen
Incomplete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Comedy
 
FMAO

10389 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

4 Chapters:

  1. Act One 2012-04-10 12:52:18 UTC
    3283
  2. Act One, Part Two 2012-04-11 19:09:33 UTC
    2291
  3. Act One, Part Three 2012-04-12 20:22:53 UTC
    3629
  4. Act Two, Part One 2012-04-21 13:45:36 UTC
    1186