Love is in the eye of the beholder

by Yoni

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Second Person, Dinky Hooves, Romance, Derpy Hooves, Sex, Slice of Life, Human, Anon, Original Character
Length: 4461

Anon lived with Derpy for quite some time now, and he feels like taking their relationship to the next level

Anon was a part of Derpy's life ever since he arrived just in time to save her daughter from an abrupt end. And now he feels the need to express his gratitude in the most sincere of ways

Second person story featuring you X Derpy

Published 2014-07-11 06:30:05 UTC
Last updated 2014-07-16 01:12:04 UTC

The Story

You groggily open your eyes as the first rays of sunshine filters through your curtains and straight into your face. You try to fidget towards a more shaded area on your bed, only to learn that Celestia can be very persisting.

"Tens of thousands of miles away from this planet and still a headshot. Scumbag sun." you mutter.

Then you decide to cover your face with your blanket, only partially effective since it was a thin one. You mutter some more unkind words about Celestia and the sun as you slowly rise from the comfortable confines of your bed. Somehow, the sun rays intensify in heat to a point of which you can actually feel as if your skin is on fire.

"Ouch! Fuck, I'm sorry, I'm sorry." You hurry to say, and as fast as the heat came, it left.

"Bloody hell…"

You move away from the bed and move closer to your dresser, picking a grey T-shirt, a simple looking boxers and a pair of jeans, and exit the room.

You quietly make your way towards the bathroom, as to not wake up the other inhabitants of the home, and upon entering, closing and locking the door. You near the sink and examine your face in the mirror. Your hair is messy and you can see remnants of sleep below your eyes. A look of melancholy crosses your face when you focus your attention on your right eye. It was completely white with a small scar going from the top of your eyebrow all the way to the bottom of your useless eye.

You sigh and move away from the sink, deciding that it was enough sulking for today; you take off your clothes and turn on the shower head, letting the water heat up before plunging into the warm shower. You can feel all the sweat and grime leave your body as you internally scowl, disgusted by your own filthiness.

About half way through your scrubbing, you can hear the frenzied knocks on the door, followed by a shout "Anon, please hurry up, I need to pee."

You chuckle and shake your head before responding-

"Be right out, little muffin, just let me wash away the soap."

You quickly finish with your shower and wrap a specially tailored towel around your waist before opening the door. The moment that you turn the knob counter-clockwise and hear a definite 'Click', a small filly immediately rushes in and shoves you outside, locking the door behind her. Good thing you took your clothes before leaving the shower.

You swiftly move to your bedroom and dry yourself up before changing into your clean clothes. Once finished, you exit the room and move towards the ground floor. As you descend the stairs, your nose is instantly bombarded by the sweetest smell known to man.

You actually find yourself smile.

You enter the dining room and take note of your surroundings. The dining table is already supporting three, porcelain plates at each side, with a bigger plate at the middle, completely filled with pancakes. Near said plate of pancake, stands a glass jar with freshly squeezed orange juice. Near the stove, you can detect the one responsible for the wonderful meal before you; a certain grey mare with blond mane.

She spins around to face you once she hears your footsteps and smiles at your direction, one golden eye looking at you and the other, towards the pan next to her.

"Good morning, Anon. I hope you slept well," Greeted Derpy, your generous hostess and definitely your favorite pony, with her adorable daughter close second.

"Morning Derpy, yeah I slept like a log. Too bad the curtains don't block the sun more efficiently."

"Oh, sorry about that," she apologized. Once you realize what you just said, you immediately shake your head.

"No, no, no. That's not what I meant, please forgive me, I was being rude."

Derpy giggles at your antics and you can't help but feel your face heat up from embarrassment.

"Where's Dinky, shouldn't she be up already? I don't want her to be late for school." Derpy looks up, scrunching her muzzle in a way that you find cute.

"Nah, she entered the bathroom as I left. She should be down any second now." You smile and take a sit in front of Derpy. A small frown appears across your features when a certain itch makes itself known. You move your hand to your right side and furiously rub your eye.

"It's a bad one, is it?" Derpy asks, earning a nod from you "I'm sorry," she says weakly, causing you to stop "If I was a little bit faster-"

"Derpy Stop!" You cut her midsentence "I am not accepting any apologies from you on this matter. Even the doctors said it was inevitable, that the manticore's claw cut too deep."

It was the same talk every time your blind eye was mentioned. You can remember clearly how you got that scar. It was your first day in Equestria, and you found yourself lying on the forest's floor. A few minutes after your awakening, you heard the scream of a child and practically tore your way through the thick shrubbery. When you arrived to the scene, you saw a monster like nothing you ever seen approach something between the bushes. You didn't know at the time that the manticore was about to devour the daughter of your would be savior as you launched forwards and tackled the creature to the ground. You fought it for a few good minutes, you were actually winning. During the final moment of the fight, you sat across his chest and the monster tried to claw at your face. You took notice of the stinger behind you, took it between your hands and rammed it through the monster's chest, ending his life, but not before he swiped one last time and took away your right sight with its own life.

Next thing you knew, you were atop a hospital bed with your right side completely bandaged. It took you some time getting used to the fact that you weren't on Earth anymore, and that you were, in fact, in a land called Equestria, filled with intelligent ponies.

You also discovered that you were carried away from the scene by a certain mail mare and that you will never be able to see with your right eye again.

You sigh as the events of day repeat themselves in your head.

"You know, Derpy…" you start "For all the misfortune inflicted on me, I can only reflect back on that day, and think to myself just how lucky I am."

"What do you mean?" she asks.

"Well, if it weren't for you, I would surely die. Not to mention that thanks to that manticore, I met you and Dinky in the first place. It was you who gave me a roof over my head, food, compassion and care, something that I lacked in my former life."

And it was true. As a child, you grew on the streets. Orphaned since birth, you learned to survive on your own. Until you wound up in Equestria, that is

Derpy blushes at the compliment, only she knows about your former life, and thus, the true weight behind your words, but before she could say something, Dinky enters the dining room.

"Good morning mom, Good morning Anon." she flashes you a wide smile and moves to hug her mother. Derpy returns the hug and nuzzles the filly's head, careful about her horn.

"Good morning little muffin, do you know where Sparkler is?" Derpy asks before flipping the last cupcake and putting it on top the pancake mountain.

"She spent the night with Rising Star again…" the filly teased, making her mother freeze and me to chuckle slightly.

"Come on Derpy, Sparkler is a big mare; she can take care for herself. And besides, I've met that Rising Star fella; he's a good guy through and through."

"Maybe you're right," Says Derpy "Maybe I'm just overreacting."

"You sure as hell are, now sit down and relax."

The three of you finally sit down and dig in. You take three pancakes into your plate and pour some homemade syrup on them. Then, you fill your glass with some orange juice.

"Mom, can Anon walk with me to school today?" the little filly looks at her mother with puppy dog eyes. The mother giggles and looks directly at you.

"I don’t know sweetie, you'll have to ask him yourself." Just as she finishes saying that, Dinky redirects her cuteness attack towards you. Your defense stands no chance against her.

"Sure, I see no reason why I shouldn't," you say, making the filly squeal with delight.

Within seconds, Dinky cleans her plate completely before jumping off the chair and standing by the door with her saddle bag, looking expectedly at you like a dog ready to be taken for a walk, only ten times cuter.

You chuckle and move to put your dishes, as well as Dinky's, in the sink, and exit the home, but before you took two steps forward, you heard Derpy call from the inside.

"Today I'll be on weather patrol so I'll be getting home late; I'm sorry if you planned anything for tonight but could you please stay and keep an eye on Dinky?"

"Sure," you call back "And don't worry Derpy, I wasn't planning anything special for today."

"Okay then, have fun at school, Dinky."

"I will mom, thanks," called Dinky.

You chuckle and pick Dinky up, letting her rest on your shoulders the way she likes it.

After dropping the filly at school –and exchanging a few words with Cheerilee- you head towards the post office to start a new shift. It was thanks to Derpy that she managed to convince her boss to hire you. She wasn't too sure about you, but thanks to Derpy, she agreed.

The only downside about this job is that you could never actually meet with Derpy, considering that you two took completely different routes, something that bothered for some reason.

Thankfully, today wasn't too hot so it was rather nice to be out and about. Your rather… exceptional physique prevented you from wearing the normal attire of a mail-pony, though you could still wear the hat. You walk down the streets of this humble little town as you stop by each house and put the proper mail into the mailbox, your bag a little lighter with each stop.

It took you less than four hours to deliver every single letter, another thing that you loved about Ponyville is how small it is compared to the sprawling metropolis you used to 'live' before.

You walk back to the post office to return the bag and the hat, and head back home. On your way back, your mind starts to wonder. You thought about your conversation with Derpy this morning, and that you meant each and every word wholeheartedly. And then, you thought about Dinky and Sparkler. The fillies seemed to have filled a once empty hole in your heart.

You smile and whistle an old tune as you make your way towards Derpy's home. On your way back, you find yourself in the market. As your mind recalls back what you said to Derpy this morning, you decide you browse through the different stalls in order to find something nice for Derpy. If only to show her just how grateful you truly are in ways the mere words can't provide.

Your search led you to a stall owned by a platinum colored mare with a blond mane that could easily be mistaken for gold from a distance. Her wares consist mostly out of different kinds of jewelry.

"Afternoon Anon, nice to see you out and about," the mare greets you.

"To you as well Silver Light, how is Silver Spoon doing?"

The mare smiles brightly "Oh just wonderful, ever since you talked to her and Diamond Tiara, she's been behaving like the good little filly I always knew she is. She even made some new friends."

"I'm glad to hear, I honestly just explained to them why what they're doing is cruel. The change was in them all along." You finish with a sage tone, though the smirk on your face tells otherwise.

Silver Light giggles and says "So, what's our friendly neighborhood human is doing in the market? And more importantly, why did you stop in front of my stall?"

"Well…" you idly scratch the back of your head "I was reminded of some… things, and I wanted to show my appreciation for Derpy by buying something nice for her."

Silver Light's eyes suddenly shown with different kind of light "Oh, is that true… then in this case, I recommend this."

Silver Light takes a small necklace from the stand and brings it closer to you. You take it in your grasp and give it an onceover. It was made out of polished silver with a few golden linings at the sides and a shining amethyst stone in the middle. To say that it was beautiful is like saying that the sun is merely a flame.

"Amazing… How much?" you ask.

"For you… I'd say… two hundred bits."

You shift your eyes to the sales mare with a look of shock "Two hundred?! But the price is twice than that! Silver, I may be a mailman but I make good money, I can definitely pay you full price, there's no need for this."

"Don't you worry honey; believe me that I can handle myself quite well without your patronage. Tell you what; consider this as a thank you for what you've done for Silver Spoon, deal?"

You look at the necklace, and then back to Silver Light. You almost refuse on behalf of your pride when you realize something.

It's for Derpy.

Reluctantly, you place two hundred bits on the counter as Silver Light hands over you a nice case to put the necklace in.

"Thank you for your purchase Anon, please tell me how Derpy reacted."

"I will, thank you Silver Light, I owe you one," you say as you, once again, make your way towards Derpy's home.

"No problem." You hear Silver Light cry before you exit the market.

On your way back you pull the necklace out of its case and give it another look. It was gorgeous, and the color scheme was very appealing.

For some odd reason though, your heart fluttered when you approached the house, but why, Derpy has her weather patrol today so she's still at work. Then why are you feeling so nervous all of a sudden.

As you near the house you notice something odd. The door is unlocked. You step quietly into the house, moving silently down the empty hall. Could it be a burglar?

You hear a noise coming from the living room and you slowly make your way there, though what you see in front of your eyes is far from what you anticipated.

There, on the sofa, sits Derpy, crying.

"Goodness Derpy, what's wrong?" You cry in mild distress, putting the case down on the coffee table and sitting near the distraught mare.

"I-It's n-nothing Anon. I-I'm fine." she barely manage to utter between sobs.

You frown hard and grasp Derpy with both hands, squeezing her slightly but not enough to cause pain "Don't give me that bullshit, tell me the truth and tell me the truth now!"

"N-No! You'll think I'm stupid." She argues.

"Derpy, listen to me." This time, you speak gently and quietly. One hand goes to her chin and slightly redirects her gaze towards you, while your other hand already working on clearing her cheeks from any stray tears "I swear to you, on all that I hold dear, that I will not make fun of you, I promise."

Derpy sniffs a few more times though you can sense her body relaxed considerably. She then takes you by surprise when she tackles you into a bear hug, causing you to fall backwards, luckily, the sofa is comfortable enough.

"S-Some ponies at the weather team made fun over my eye again. They said that I can still manage to crash even if there's nothing but air around." Her sobs intensify for a few moments before submitting to your gentle rubbing against her back.

"That's no reason to cry Derpy; you're an amazing mare, and an exceptional mom. You're stronger than most ponies I know, and being a single parent only justifies my claims. I mean, just look at me, I've lost my right eye to fend off a freaking manticore and you know what… If I had a choice, I would gladly do it again, if only to relive the moment I meet a mare most kind and beautiful."

Your last word catches both you and her by surprise.

"Did you really just call me… beautiful?" She leans backwards far enough to make eye contact with you. One eye looking at your healthy one whilst her other one seems to finally take notice of the case on the coffee table.

"What's this?" she asks.

You take a deep breath –something that proves to be quite challenging considering Derpy is still on top of you- and move your hand towards the case. Once in your grasp, you shyly hand it to Derpy "I bought that for you on my way home. I just thought you might like to wear some jewelry once in a while.

Derpy eyes the case curiously as see slowly opens the lid. She gasps quietly once the contents of the case are completely revealed to her.

"Anon… it's beautiful…" she whispers.

"You deserve only the best Derpy, and it pains me to hear that ponies can't see beyond your imperfections. Though I must admit, I never saw your eyes as flaws, I always found them… cute."

Derpy blushes ever so furiously at the compliment before letting out a shaky breath as she closes her eyes. She moves the neckless above her head until it slides down all the way to rest on her neck.

"Anon, ever since you came into my life, I feel as if something completed itself in me, something that I needed in my very core."

"I feel the same way, Derpy, but I was always afraid to act on my emotions. I see you more than just a friend, and Dinky and Sparkler are like daughters to me. I guess what I'm trying to say is; if you would have me, I would very much like to be a permanent part of this family."

Derpy looks at you, her gaze somewhat unnerving you as silence holds an iron grip on your surroundings. Then, without a warning, Derpy is pouncing at you again, only this time she slammes her lips right into yours.

Firstly, you find yourself in quite a shock by this surprise attack, but quickly you're being whisked away by this wonderful feeling.

You quickly find Derpy's tongue pressing against your teeth, asking permission to enter your maw. You comply and let Derpy's tongue none too gently, enter your mouth. To say that you battled for dominance against each other would imply that you actually fought back, but you quickly discovered just how passionate Derpy truly is as she coils her long tongue around your and flicking hers against your teeth, occasionally stopping at your molars and letting out a sultry growl.

Finally, Derpy leans backwards, letting you inhale much needed air as a thin trail of saliva still connects the two of you. With a silent plea and a nod, Derpy crawls backwards until her head rests between your legs. She expertly removes your pants and tossing them across the room. Her eyes transfix onto your slowly growing tent in your underwear as she licks her lips in a seductive manner. She slowly takes off your underwear as your member springs from under its fabric prison. Sensing the mare in front of it, it twitches in excitement, even more so when Derpy started blowing hot air on it.

The mare then pokes her tongue and slowly moves it from the base of your shaft all the way to the tip, letting her tongue linger there before plunging the entire thing into her awaiting mouth.

"Holy shit!" you exclaim when Derpy took your entire length all the way to the base. Her tongue eagerly laps the underside of your member as she slowly moves her head backwards, just enough until only your head is still inside her, then, she swallows you whole again while making slurping noises and moans loudly.

Her tongue felt incredible, and her mouth was so warm and inviting. Derpy bobbed her head up and down along your shaft. Everytime she gobbles you whole, she makes slurping noises, and everytime she reaches your tip, she licks it with vigor.

Up and down, up and down, keeping a constant rhythm. She sometimes moanes, which sent vibrations along your shaft, making your mind go haywire.

"D-Derpy… If you keep this- agh…"

Derpy stops her bobbing and releases your member from within her maw. As you look down, you see your shaft is completely wet and twitching.

"Upstairs, in my bedroom," she says.

Without missing a beat, you whisk Derpy away and carrying her to her bedroom, kissing her all the way.

Upon reaching the promised land, you gently lay Derpy on the bed as you move your hands along her barrel. Her soft felt like silk between your fingers, and her soft moans of pleasure only serve to fuel your lust.

Slowly, you move with your hand southwards, stopping just above Derpy's wet sex. She moves her hips in a vain attempt to rub her flower against your fingers, but you make sure to stay just a few millimeters above her.

'Revenge time' you think deviously as you suddenly move your lips to meet her lower ones. Derpy gasps loudly and moans afterwards. You tongue flicks against her clit a couple of time, making Derpy shudder with every lick, before promptly sticking your entire tongue down her soaking entrance.

This time, Derpy lets out a shout of pure ecstasy as you drink as much of her juices as you can. It tastes like blueberries.

Your hands find themselves fondling with Derpy's teats, further arousing the wailing mare as she constantly squirming in her place.

Then, her entire body tenses as she lets out a particularly loud shout, you brace yourself against the strong current of mare cum gushing all over your face as you try to gulp as much of this sweet nectar as possible.

Silence soon falls onto the room. Derpy's gasps for air are the only sounds to reach your ears as you stand up. You grab Derpy from her hind legs and pull her towards you until her ass lies on the edge of the bed.

Derpy is looking at you with a seductive look, her eyes almost point at the same direction. You quickly brought back to reality when you feel something silky batting against your member. You look down and see Derpy's tail trying desperately to wrap around your shaft and pull into her delicate flower.

Giving to basic temptations, you step closer and lining your rod with Derpy's folds. She lets out a small squeal when your tip comes in contact with her upper lip. You can feel the heat radiating from her folds as the scent fills your mind you lustful thoughts, and with one great thrust, you plunge.

Derpy releases a great cry of pleasure when you finally make contact with her long neglected sex. Your entire rod fills her to the brim as it tries to squeeze you with a vice-like grip.

You stay like this for a few moments, letting Derpy ride her mini orgasm and letting you adjust to this new sensation of tightness.

The two of you stare into each other for the longest time before you both nod simultaneously. You slowly pull your rod until only the tip stays inside of Derpy's warm embrace, and then you thrust right back in, making Derpy squeal again.

You slowly build a constant rhythm of pulling and thrusting. Each pull was slightly faster than the last and each thrust was slightly harder than the last. You started pumping faster and faster, letting your desires for this beautiful mare to take control over your body. Derpy herself couldn't contain herself. She wriggles and moans like there is no tomorrow.

Slowly, you feel something build inside you, and you know what it means. You start pumping with newfound strength as you reached the apex of pleasure, letting yourself dive over the edge and fill Derpy's womb with your seed until it drippes from her abused sex.

You both pant for air as you finally pull yourself out from the gorgeous mare and fall right next to her in bed. Within seconds, you find Derpy by your side, latching into your arm and nuzzling your cheek with all the love she has for you.

"So, does that mean… we're together now?" you ask.

"Hmmhmm…" said Derpy, letting her lips linger for a few seconds on yours before pulling out from the tender kiss "I love you Anon, and I wish for you to be part of my family, by my side."

You gently drape your hand over her cheek, feeling her coat warm your fingers "I would love to…" you whisper…

BONUS CHAPTER

"But- how is this possible!" you exclaim, looking at nurse Redheart with shock.

"Look Anon, we try our hardest to find the answer ourselves, even our best doctors are completely baffled."

Silence reins the room as you mull over what Redheart just said. Derpy is right next to you, lying on a patient's bed with a worried look on her face, though her worry was directed at you, rather at the subject at hand.

"I'll… leave you two alone for now. Please call me if you need anything," says nurse Redheart as she exits the room.

A few moments later the door opens to reveal Dinky and Sparkler, both has worried expressions on their faces as well.

"What is it, mom. We heard you are at the hospital, is anything wrong?" Sparkler asks.

You shake your head "Don't worry, honey, far from it, actually."

"What do you mean?" asks Dinky.

You smile and you scoop her up, letting her rest on your lap. At that moment, you knew you made the right choice, and you will all face it together, as a family.

"Sparkler, Dinky. You two are going to have another sister…"