Tricked heart

by Ghost_ Dust

Rating: teen
Tags: Comedy, Random, Slice of Life, Romance
Length: 2432

Echo likes him. She really does! The problem is he doesn't like her back...Will this end well?

Echo really likes the new guard. She likes him so much she trys to 'get rough' with him. When that doesn't work she tries asking him out. The problem is he doesn't like her back.

When she asks him out on a date, he goes to his friends for guidance. They insist he goes.
Will this end well?
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Cover art: Bat flirt by Minntyr

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-07-16 03:00:04 UTC

Crushes

Echo stood in the halls trying to keep her guard up. Litterlly,  her partner was already leaning on her snoring.

She sighed "wake up Nightsight!" She begged her.

Nightsight jerked her head. "Huh? What? Who?" She asked dazed.

Echo rolled her eyes "You were falling asleep again!" She said. She looked at Nightsight. Her ears were twitching. "What do you hear?" She ask whispered.

"Hoofsteps!" She whispered as she sunk down with her ears flattened.

Echo shot her a dirty look "we're Luna's guards! We're not supposed to be afraid!" She hissed. The hoofsteps got nearer. Echo felt fear rising in her own chest like smoke from a wildfire. She tried not to show her fear "Who goes there?!" She asked.

"Snow Blitz ma'am! New royal guard!" Said a white colt with a yellow mane. Echo's mouth hung open reaviling her fangs. He was absolutely handsome! She smiled.

"Hello, Charming!" She said.

Nightsight looked at Echo like she was sticking her armor up her nose. "What did you call him?!" It was her turn to hiss at her.

Snow Blitz turned around. He smiled at Echo "Night, ma'am" he said.

Echo giggled. "Oh please! Call me Echo" she said flirtasiously.

Snow Blitz smiled awkwardly "o-okay" he stammered.

Echo trotted up to him. She wiped her tail by his face giving him a glimpse of something he shouldn't see.

He gulped.

"Well Snow Blitz...you're shift is next to me" she said as she grinned slightly.

"What about me?" Asked Nightsight sadly.

"You go with Midnight Shadow!" She ordered.

"Yes ma'am" she grunted as she trotted over to the grey stallion.

"Ma'am-- I mean Echo, I'm not really comfortable with this" he said as he shrunk down ever so slightly.

"Oh don't worry about it...just our shift" she said as she layed down and opened her legs slightly.

Snow Blitz blushed. "Ma'am?" He asked nervously. A drop of sweat dropped from on his forehead.

"I told you! Call me Echo" she said as she closed her hind hooves and stood up.

"I'm sorry Echo but may I get a new partner?" He asked as he looked around.

Echo frowned. "I'm sorry, but your staying with me" she said as she pinned him down.

Snow Blitz looked around frantically. They were the only guards there. He gulped "E-echo?!" He asked.

She smiled at him "perhaps we need to meet each other better" she said as she climbed off him.

Snow Blitz was shaking "huh?" He asked.

"Oh you know..maybe we could 'play' for a bit" she said devilishly.

"N-no thanks" he said as he stood up.

"Just a little" she said as she slid her tail side to side, forcing Snow Blitz to see something he didn't want to.

"Please no ma'am" he said trying to sound confident.

"Well why not, Tiger?" She asked.

"I-i'm not really comfortable with th-this" he stammered.

"I know you want me" she said as she went next to him and pressed herself against him.

"What I want is to be a guard!" He complained.

"Well, as your captain I'm telling you to stay" she said more firmly.

Snow Blitz winced.

Echo smiled as she layed down "Now. As your captain I ORDER you to get on top of me" she said as she looked at him.

"N-no ma'am please no" he said nervously as he looked around silently begging for another pony to show up. Any pony to save him!

"That was an order, Snowy" she said as she leaned her head against the wall.

Snow Blitz closed his eyes as he climbed on top of her.

Echo smiled "good. Now ride me" She said sternly.

"Ma'am I don't think-" his sentence was cut off by a cold stare from his leader.

He wasn't sure what she meant by 'ride me' after all he was 17 and she was almost 18. " What do you mean ma'am, by ride me?" He asked nervously.

Ecco smiled. "It means-" her sentence was cut off by the sound of hoofsteps. She threw him off her as she stood up, chest puffed out. Snow Blitz did the same. It was Celestia's morning patrol.

"Your shift is over" said one of Celestia's guards.

Snow Blitz nodded his head at his former companion. He had been transfered to Luna's guard.

When the two ponies were out of earshot....

"Meet me at Sunshine park at 11:00 a.m sharp!" She said.

"And if I don't?" He challenged.

"Then some pony will be fired!" She hissed at him.

"Oh great" he said sarcastically. "A date with the leader".

Some Guidance

Snow Blitz trotted in the saloon as he looked around. His friends, Ghost Dust, Braeburn and Dawn Deal were sitting down playing poker and drinking beer. He heard Ghost Dust's triumphant laugh.

'Probably just won' he thought as he trotted over to their table.

"Hey Snow Blitz!" Said Dawn Deal.

"Hi Dawn Deal" he said not very happily.

"What's your problem?" Asked Ghost Dust as she sat back and took a sip of her beer.

"The captain of the night guard" he said glumly.

"Lighten up and tell us what happened" said Braeburn.

"Well, I trotted in and she started flirting with me" he took a seat next to Dawn Deal. "And she was swiping her tail across my face!" He said.

They all gasped.

"Bitch!" said Ghost Dust.

"Whore!" Said Braeburn.

"Slut!" Said Dawn Deal.

Snow Blitz nodded his head. "And then she layed down and told me to 'ride her'" he said.

His friends opened their eyes wide.

"You were right Braeburn! She's a whore" said Dawn Deal as he drank some of his beer.

"And then the morning patrol came and our shift was over but then she asked me out" he finished.

"I think you shouldn't go" said Ghost Dust.

"Of course you should go!" Said Braeburn.

"Yeah, man! The slut wants you!" Said Dawn Deal.

Snow Blitz's mouth hung open. "Is Dusty the only sane pony here besides me?!" He asked as he motioned towards ghost Dust.

"I think you should go! I would like to be a uncle!" Pointed out Dawn Deal.

"I need you to go! Wanna know why?" Asked Braeburn.

Snow Blitz sighed. He knew what Braeburn was gonna say. "Why Braeburn?" he asked.

" 'Cause I'm a unicorn!" He joked.

Ghost Dust laughed along with Dawn Deal.

"Fine. I'll go" Said Snow Blitz.

"First hang out with us man!" Said Braeburn.

Ghost Dust gave him a beer. "Yeah c'mon" she said as she gulped down some of her own beer.

Snow Blitz smiled "okay" he said quietly.

"Up for a game of poker?" Asked Dawn Deal.

"No thanks" said Snow Blitz.

"But Ghost Dust always wins!" Complained Braeburn.

Ghost Dust grinned. "You two play. I'm gonna be talkin' to Snow Blitz" she said. She turned herself towards him.

"Hey. If you don't wanna do this you don't have to" she said.

"But I'm gonna get fired if I don't" he said as he looked at the ground.

Ghost Dust gave him a sympathetic look. "If she asks you to 'play' don't agree..it'll ruin your life. Happened to my sister" she said.

Snow Blitz frowned "I can't just turn her down like that!" He insisted as he took a sip of his beer.

"Yes. You can. I've turned down plenty of stallions down. Bat pony or not" she said as she drank some of her own beer.

"That's different.  You're a bat mare. I'm a stallion" he said.

"It makes no difference to me" she shrugged.

Snow Blitz looked deep into her yellow eyes and admired her sharp fangs along with her dark blue and dark purple mane and looked at her ash-grey coat and her bat wings.

She waved her hoof in his face "Earth to Snow Blitz!" She said loudly.

"Huh?oh sorry!" He said.

"Anyways I think you should be going" finished Ghost Dust as she drank all her beer.

"After the date with her can I come to your house? I need to tell you something" he said.

Ghost Dust shrugged. "If I'm not already asleep" she said.

Dreaded date

"Hello Snow Blitz" said Echo as she trotted up to him. It was night already. She had made a reschedule.

"Hi Echo" he said as he sat down on a bench. Echo went besides him.

She smiled. "Are you happy that your my coltfriend?" She asked.

Snow Blitz winced "I have another bat mare in mind" he admitted.

Echo frowned "no! Only me" she said.

"Okay" he said.

"Well. How was it when you worked for Celestia?" She asked as she scooted closer to him.

Snow Blitz tried not to be so nervous. "It was nice" he confessed.

"Better than me?" She asked.

"No" he lied.

"Good" she said. She moved in closer to his face until their lips were almost touching.

Snow Blitz tried not to lift his hoof and slap her silly.

She made the daring move as she pressed her lips against his. His eyes widened. He hated every second of this! She slowly went down until she was kissing his neck. She pinned him down on the bench.

"Let's go somewhere else!" He said. Anywhere to get away from this mare!

"Your right. We shouldn't do this here. Let's go to my house" she said.

Snow Blitz groaned under his breath. He followed the bat mare. He could almost here her mumbling about what she was gonna do to him in bed.

                                                                                  ~~~

"We're just gonna sleep...right?" Asked Snow Blitz hopefully as Echo climbed on the bed and layed down.

"Whatever you want to call it" she said as she motioned for him to get on the bed. She turned on a dim light. He gulped as he trotted over to her bed. She gave him a cold glare when he took a step back.

"You don't want to lose your job" she said in a singsong voice.

Snow Blitz hesitated. He reluctantly layed down next to her.

She smiled at him. He didn't smile back. She spread his hind hooves open very slowly. He felt like screaming for help. She paused.

"I'm forgetting something" she said as she opened the drawer next to her and took out ropes and a knife.

His eyes went wide in shock.

She tied the ropes around his hind and front hooves quickly. "This is if you misbehave" she said as she held up the sharp knife.

Snow Blitz felt like struggling to break free, but he knew better.

The wicked mare climbed on top of him. "I'll show you what a fun time is" she promised as she kissed his chest. She slowly went down until she was almost to the part she wasn't supposed to see. He shut his eyes tight. 'Here it comes' he thought.

Suddenly the door burst open. It was his friends! Dawn Deal jumped on the bed as he punched Echo in the face "I don't wanna be a uncle if this is the mother!" He said.

Braeburn helped hold the Echo's front hooves so she wouldn't punch Dawn Deal back.

Ghost Dust trotted up to him with fear shining in her eyes. She grabbed the knife off the nightstand and used it to break the ropes. First his front hooves then his hind hooves "told ya' she was a bitch!" Said Ghost Dust as Snow Blitz broke free. He hugged Ghost Dust. She blushed "let's not get all emotional here" she said as she pulled him away with a smile on her face. "Thanks so much, you guys!" He sent a silent thank you to Celestia.

"No problem" said Dawn Deal as he continued punching Echo.

"I'm gonna go tell the cops" said Braeburn as he galloped out of the house.

Trial

"Let's see" mumbled the judge as he shuffled through his papers. "Miss Echo versus Mr.Blitz?" He asked.

The stallion and bat mare nodded their heads yes.

"Allright,  Mr.Blitz let's hear your accusations" said the judge as he sat back. "Oh and your lawyers too" he added.

Dawn Deal, Ghost Dust and Braeburn stood up.

Dawn Deal cleared his throat. "Sir, this mare is accused of rape and possible murder" he began.

The judge cocked an eyebrow "go on" he said.

"This mare has been flirting with Snow Blitz ever sense he laid hoof in the royal castle for night guard" he continued. Dawn Deal had finished his part.

The judge stared at Echo expectantly. "Well Miss? We're waiting" said the judge.

"Well your honor, He's been pinning me down in the halls of the castle and trying to rape me!" She lied as she pointed her hoof at Snow Blitz.

Ghost Dust slammed her hoof on the desk "OB-JECTION!!!" she yelled.

The  judge turned his head towards her "Yes Miss Dust?" He asked.

"This mare is lying!" She said loudly. The audience murmured and whispered.

"Do you have proof?" Mocked Echo.

"Just watch me" she shot back.  "Your grace, why don't we check the halls camera?" She asked smugly as she put the tape in front of her.

The judge nodded "very well Miss Dust...play it" he said.

Ghost Dust tossed it in a nearby video player. She fast forwarded it to the part where Echo was swiping her tail at him and where she layed down with her hind hooves spread apart. The audience groaned in disgust.

Echo's eyes went wide as she shrunk down.

When Braeburn turned off the tape he looked at the judge expectantly.

The judge adjusted his glasses "well! As we clearly all see in this tape Miss Echo has been 'sexualy trying to asult' Mr.Blitz" he said.

Echo gulped "b-but where's the tape where  I tried to fuck him? And where I tied him up? And when I tried to kill-" she stopped short. She had just given away her lie. She laughed nervously.

The judge scowled "Miss Echo is proved guilty and therefore,  will face one year in prison! Case closed" he said as he slammed his gavel against the desk. The police escorted Echo to her horrible fate.

Snow Blitz hugged his friends one at a time.

"Thanks Dawn!" He said as he hugged his friend.

"Thanks Braeburn" he said as he hugged him too.

Finally he kissed Ghost Dust. She blushed. But she didn't pull him back but closed her eyes and kissed back.

"Aaaawwwww" said the audience.

Ghost Dust pulled away. They smiled at each other.

"NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!" Screamed Echo.

"SCREW YOU!!" Yelled Ghost Dust.

The audience laughed and left their seats. The friends? They stayed there and celebrated their success.