Adventure of Rhythm the Music Mare

by Rhythm The Music Mare

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Random, Adventure
Length: 3503

This story is mainly about a mare called Rhythm. Rhythm has difficulty settling in and this results in lots of confrontation within staying in a set location within a given timeframe. Rhythm is currently traveling to Appleloosa

Introduction

I am currently making a story about my OC, my OC is a blue unicorn who has appeared in the show only as background after creating several previous fanfics and YouTube videos along with an email asking Hasbro to make Rhythm have a spider web cutie mark she finally got it, and has appeared in several shows with it, for this I’m deciding to make a long story for her.

Story
This story is mainly about a mare called Rhythm. Rhythm has difficulty settling in and this results in lots of confrontation within staying in a set location within a given timeframe. Rhythm is currently traveling to Appleloosa in the beginning, has a romantic event in the mid-story and has a surprise at the end. The story is a work in progress and I shall do it as I have time so please no 'hurry up' comments and whatnot.

Rhythm is new to the town and because of her nature, being rather bossy, commanding and rather rude she has not made many friends and made more ponies dislike her and is rather self-centred. Rhythm called herself a music mare and maestro since she believes she is the master of music and her songs are the best even if she made them while drunk one night, which can happen rather frequently if she has had a bad day. Even though she likes her own music not that many other ponies do, which results in her not being widely famous which causes her to be rather annoyed with every pony that has never even heard of her or her music. If Rhythm is not recognised then she might go into one of her 'moods'.

Thorax is a laid back stallion who meets Rhythm in the chapter called 'Golden Apple cafe', Thorax details can be found in the 'Story Characters' Chapter however here is a small description. Thorax is a dark coloured Unicorn who is rather shy around mares, he has many friends which are mainly stallions which has caused several rumours about his sexuality in the past however Thorax is secretly trying to find the right mare for him. (Your thinking after reading this oh their going to get together it’s obvious, however you don't realises how difference these two main characters are).
The setting is the town of Appleloosa where Rhythm lives in number 32 Hoofington (If it is a real place then ignore any relevance towards geographical locations since my story won’t be based on this, e.g. she walked out of her door went down the road and went into the Golden café where in the map of Appleloosa she lived on the other side of town doesn’t matter since it won’t affect the story unless you want a good hour reading of her walking?). The character of Appleloosa is all fictional since I have no idea who actually lives there, apart from Apart from Applejack and her family who I don’t really want to include otherwise it won’t be Rhythm’s story after all.

Disclaimer

I take no responsibility for any damage caused by this story since it is simply a story, if you take offense by anything here than just delete your history and forget it, I don't want tons of emails saying how bad it is either. Just use common sense since this is a work in progress I’ve not even finished doing the tags so saying ' you didn't add ***** tag' is not helpful even if you think it is, and if you catch me in a bad mood I will happily tell you where you can stick your missing tag.

Content with (Warning: Mature Content) means just that, if you don't want to see this then skip this chapter since this won't interfere with the main storyline "much", anyway anyone being smart and trying to find any loopholes with this is done at your own risk, and if you’re stupid enough not to read the damn title and complain it’s your own fault, you accept this condition by reading this story, if you accidentally open the chapter then do alt F4 quickly.

Enjoy Reading

Rhythm Music Mare and Maestro

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-07-17 23:26:14 UTC

Story Information (IMPORTANT)

Story info

Setting and Appleloosa Information

The setting for this story is Appleloosa, the setting will not change however other ponies from other places may mention their hometown or other inhabited places in Equestria. If any character does mention another setting or gives a past experience in another setting beside Appleloosa then I shall show clearly they are in a memory or past experience.

Appleloosa is a town which was built in less than a year and is located in a desert setting, it is a western style town with horse-drawn carriages, wild west dances a saloon and a local sheriff or 'mayor' in Rhythms view which is why she refers to the sheriff as 'mayor'. The main production of Appleloosa is apples among other crops, other animals which live nearby are a tribe of buffalo which sometimes eat the apples from the apple orchards causing tension among the tribe and townsfolk.

Appleloosa uses the same currency as the rest of Equestria which is the bit or commonly known as bits. Unlike other places the pricing of several goods is greatly reduced such as locally produced apples and other produce, however more uncommon items such as wood based materials along with metals are more expensive and must be either carted or railed from elsewhere leading to increased prices.

Character Info

Rhythm: Rhythm is a blue unicorn mare who has sandy yellow eyes, her mane is a darker shade of blue compared to her coat. Her cutie mark is a white spider web despite this Rhythm's profession is as a music artist and has released several tracks which she believes are masterpieces however general sales doesn't support this in the slightest. Rhythm normally wears blue dresses the same colour as her coat which are normally decorated with some kind of musical pattern. Rhythm has a bossy and commanding personality and this has led to several problems where she has stayed before, she doesn't like other ponies that take a dislike to her attitude or music talents and normally will say this to anyone who gives their opinion. Rhythm is currently staying at 32 Hoofington which is a small house that is attached to other houses in Hoofington lane which is half a mile away from the main village however to a pony this is no distance at all.

Thorax: Thorax is a brown stallion with green eyes, like Rhythm thorax is also a unicorn which stands out within Appleloosa since most ponies are earth-pony. Thorax has a laid back attitude and doesn't normally get into any trouble also he is one of those ponies who hates confrontation and would like to resolve matters peacefully if possible. On a side note Thorax is shy around other mares and normally says the wrong things when he gets the courage to talk to them. Thorax lives in number 20 Hoofington and his house is rather messy which would put off most visitors, he is normally found at the Golden Apple Cafe.

Sandy Acre: Sandy Acre is a yellow coated mare with a darker golden coat, she is currently the Mayor of Appleloosa and is the eldest sister of Goldenrod. Sandy Acre lives in number 1 Hoofington which is also the mayor’s office. Sandy Acre has been the mayor of Appleloosa for the past 7 years and is considered one of the best mayors that any-pony can remember, the main reason for this is the lack of trouble caused by the Tribe of buffalo that lives nearby, because of this along with other successful polices Sandy Acre has the respect of most ponies living in Appleloosa. Sandy Acre is a earth-pony along with most other ponies that were born in Appleloosa.

Goldenrod: Goldenrod is the local decorator and surveyor for Appleloosa, she is the mare to go to with any planning problems or decorating issues. Goldenrod lives in 31 Hoofington and is also the younger sister of Sandy Acre. Goldenrod has a golden coat along with bright gold eyes, she is known as 'Golden' by most of her friends and several family members such as her eldest sister. Goldenrod is an earth-pony along with most other ponies that were born in Appleloosa.

Haystack: Haystack is another mare of the town who's relied on for local produce and other essential supplies, without her then Appleloosa would soon start to suffer. Haystack is an orange coloured mare with a yellow mane, she had sapphire coloured eyes and talks with an Appleloosa accent being born and bred in the town as the saying goes. Haystack is an earth-pony along with most other ponies that were born in Appleloosa.

Arriving In Appleloosa

Character Colour Code

Rhythm Is Blue

Haystack Is Red

Arriving In Appleloosa

Rhythm flicked her bright blue mane as she looked at the outskirts of Appleloosa and kept on walking down the sandy trail, she glanced at the building or more like barn structures however she could see nopony in sight. Rhythm got up and flicked her tail before stopping and looking around her, there were meadows full of lush grass, different types of crops on the nearby fields and several large barns where the hay will be stored when it is harvested, there was a sweet honey smell in the air along with a warm breeze, the hot summer rays was beating down onto the sandy trail making an apparition off the surface similar to one you will find in a desert or off a metal surface.

After walking a good several miles Rhythm the music pony finally came to the town of Appleloosa, she saw several houses which looked rather important among the small shops lining the high streets, she considered these houses as the richer more older families who had inhabited this town over many generations. Rhythm blinked before rummaging in her saddlebag on her side, there was a small map of the town where she would find instructions to her new home. The blue unicorn quickly read the route and put the map away hating the thought that the townsfolk would consider her a tourist or some lost filly in a new setting. Rhythm lifted her nose and walked from the richer part of the town in the centre and back towards the outer side of the town, she continued north for around 100 hoof steps (or 75 meters to you or me). Rhythm blinked as she stared at a grey house nest to other grey houses This Will Not Do she thought as she glanced at the house and glanced back at her map, 32 Hoofington was the address and here she was, she read the house sign and snorted as she realised she was in the right house. She used her telekinesis power and lifted the key from her saddle bag and used it on the grey oak door which made a sharp *Click*sound, thus cleared all doubt at being in the wrong house.

Rhythm's House

Rhythm walked into the small house, and looked around, on the downstairs was her kitchen, living room, dining room and a small messy garden out back, upstairs was not much better with a messy bedroom and a bathroom along with a guest room, to her dismay there was only some sort of shower instead of a lovely bathtub which she preferred anyway. On closer inspection of the bathroom there was a clannish sink and wash area, toilet as expected and some mould growing above the shower which had seen better days. Rhythm wondered to her bedroom and sighed, the bedroom was out of fashion and it definitely needed a makeover. Rhythm decided one thing at a time, threw her saddlebag down on the bed and left the bedroom walking down the stairs which were also made of oak similar to the floors of all the rooms of the house which were oak flooring. Downstairs the kitchen was well equipped and to Rhythms satisfaction, the dining room was slightly smaller than expected but will serve her purpose since she wouldn't have many guests around and the living room was standard with a bookshelf, two brown oak chairs, a sofa and a radio.

The house design was of a modern layout, the ground floor had two doors a front and a back, the front door was a grey coloured hardened oak with a silver mailbox, while the outside had been painted grey to fit in with the other houses next to it, there were two windows looking outside the ground floor one of either side of the front door, around the back of the house there was another grey door which led to the small garden out back, the garden was around 10*4 meters squared resulting in a strange layout of small beds and an apple tree down the far end of the house. There was only one window next to the back door and this came from the dining room area, the kitchen was next to the front door while the living room was in the middle of the two, several doors allowed easy access into each room. Upstairs the bedroom was above the dining room, the bathroom was above the living room and the kitchen was a spare bedroom.

Rhythm decided that the house would do, however she would go shopping so she could finish up the place, she also decided to paint the outside of the house the same colour of her coat, the roof would also be painted the same colour of her mane. Rhythm went back downstairs and flicked though several large books advertising local services, after finding the local decorator she wrote them a letter explaining what she would want to be done on her house. Rhythm then went back to her room and picked up her bag and put the letter inside before closing it, after levitating it back onto her shoulder she went downstairs and left the house making sure to double lock it as she left.

Outskirts Of Appleloosa

Rhythm walked down the cobblestone path towards the centre of Appleloosa and made a mental map of where everything was located, there was a small coffee shop five minutes from her house, along with several local shops nearby. Rhythm glanced at a nearby shop realising it was selling locally grown crops, she decided to visit it taking care not to tread on any of the carrots or whatnot that was on the floor, apart from the strange earthy smell coming from inside it looked rather professional. Rhythm looked around before spotting several large orange carrots, she liked carrots which was one of her favourite types of food, not many things beats raw carrot in Rhythm's view well apart from her music of course but you couldn't eat that. Rhythm walked over to the bundle of carrots and forgetting where she was took a large bite of several of them however while she was happily nibbling on them there came several loud coughs behind her.

Rhythm looked around with her mouthful of carrot and blinked at the other grey colour mare with blue eyes who looked slightly ticked off. "Erm I like carrots" she explained to the store owner. The store owner frowned "call me haystack, and what the buck? You going to pay for that or do you think walking into every shop and eating everything is ok?" she growled flicking her tail in annoyance. "that snack their going to set you back a good 20 bits, you got no cash on you that’s not my problem and if that’s the case enjoy talking to the mayor about it, maybe it teach you some sense" she added narrowing her eyes at Rhythm. Rhythm swallowed the rest of the carrots "can I pay you later? And I’m kind of new here so I don't know your customs?" she added starting to also become agitated. Sandy rolled her eyes "your custom?, so where your from its ok for a stranger to wonder into a shop or house and eat everything?, cut the crap and get the buck out before I really lose it" Sandy roared before grabbing Rhythms tail and dragging her out of the shop, "come back when you get bits, some manners and common sense" she added before closing the door to the blue unicorn.

[WIP]

Arriving In Appleloosa    More Descriptive (adding up to 1000 words)

Rhythm's House More Descriptive writing, Detail, Room Visulisation (adding up to 5000 words)

Outskirts Of Appleloosa More detail, finish the chapter with rhythm returning home (adding up to 2000 words)

Word Total (max of 15,000 words, min of 10,000 words)

Thorax's House (Mature Content)

Warning/ Disclaimer

This Chapter Contains Graphical Sex Scenes, Along With Other Adult Theme's. If Your Not One For This Sort Of Thing Then Please Skip This Chapter, You Have Been Warned And You Accept Any Damages Or Future Harm To Yourself Or Others By Reading On. By Reading Past This You Revoke Your Right To Report This Story Or Auther Legally To A Site Admin Or Staff, Any Reports For NSFW or Adult Theme's Are Null And Void Which You Accept By Reading Onwards.

You Have Been Warned

Rhythm

(WIP- Spelling, grammar and puntuation has not been checked, along with missing detail XD)

Setting

Dining Room

The dining room has a large square wooden oak table in the centre of the room, the suronding walls are lit with round glowlights which is a modern invention which is similar to solar lamps, in the day they store energy and release it at night as light energy. These lamps are more effective then candles and do not run out which is a bonus compared to the candle. Their is a small bookshelf in one corner along with a desk and a chair, on the table their are four small stools where a pony can sit and eat, the brown walls are decorated with some paintings however these are rather faded due to their age.

Kitchen

Thorax's Room

Thorax's House

Rhythm flicked her bright blue mane as she stepped into the brown stallion's house, she snorted as she stepped over several boxes however she would call that 'clutter', she wondered where this stallion was and presumed he would be getting ready, however Rhythm had a habbit of arriving early and letting herself in. Rhythm closed the front door with her telekenisis and took in her suroundings. This was the front entrance and after several more steps Rhythm entered the dining room and glanced around the room which was slightly run down. Rhythm flicked her tail slightly annoyed by her absent host, however she heard rummaging noises coming from what she presumed was the kitchen. Rhythm walked over to the table and frowned seeing a thin layer of dust on it "Thorax your house is a mess and your table is filthy" she called out towards the kitchen. After waiting several seconds she saw a brown head with green eyes poke out of the kitchen looking confused, "So what a music pony got to do to get some grub around here?" she asked the startled stallion with a sly grin.

Thorax frowned at the blue unicorn mare, "your early, like three hours too early" he huffed narrowing his green orbs, Thorax was considering asking Rhythm to come back in a few hours but decided against it, her mood swings were eractic  enough without him needing to offend her. Thorax moved closer coming out of the kitchen "if your hungry then you can make yourself somthing now but i don't really have anything to eat" he added lamely before twiching his ear as the blue mare frowned, "or i erm could make you somthing if you want, maybe you can sit at the table while i go get you a snack" he said as he disapeared into the kitchen leaving the mare on her own.

Rhythm rolled her eyes as the stallion failed at host, she glanced at the table and quickly used a clensing spell on the room turning all the dust and grim and removing it, however the spell didn't destroy the unwanted dust but teleported it away, Rhythm quickly did the spell to include the whole house causing her to feel suddenly drained while her horn processed the magic and kept on with its task. "awww shoot, must remember rule 3" she groaned as she stumbled onto the stool feeling rather drained, however at least the room was clean along with the whole house. She heard Thorax return with the food and smiled at him "i cleaned the ouse for you, i got bored" she mumbled

Throax frowned as he saw the mare sitting rather akwardly, "well thanks, but you know you shouldn't forget the most important rule, whatever you do don't forget rule 3, anyway have some of this hay to restore your strength" he sighed giving rhythm the plate of hay and hidding a chuckle as she woofed it down, "come on glowy horn, you can come rest upstairs" he advised before helping Rhythm onto her hooves and leading her up his stairs. They left the upstairs landing and led him into his own room with a large bed however Thorax had noticed the house was much cleaner, spotless to say the least, he laid the blue mare onto the bed and gave her ear several licks before realising she had fallen asleep, he shock his head and mumbled "some date this is, at least shes not annoying like this though". While he muttered this Rhythm rolled over towards Thorax nearly poking him in the eye with her horn. Thorax pulled his head back in time and frowned before noticing Rhythm's backlegs were not quiet covering her blue marehood, before long Thorax's stallionhood had started to grow as he became aroused.

Rhythm snorted and opened one eye waking up before realising she was on her side and on a soft matress, Rhythm glanced infront of her spotting Thorax " what happend?" she started before realising he wasn't paying attension but he was staring intently at somthing, she followed his eyes and wondered why he was so intrested at her, then she saw his stallionhood and realsised he was staring at her exposed flank. far from being repulsed a slow fealing rose within her realising she was starting to become aroused, her marehood started to feel wetter than it was a few seconds ago, "Thorax you want to you know have some adult time?" she asked shyly blinking at the stallon.

Thorax looked at Rhythm and started blushing at the mare's words, he climbed onto the bed and snuggled closer to the mare "apart from your quirks, your a rather fun mare to be around" he whispered giving her blue horn a gentle lick. "i've not done this before so forgive me if i'm abit slow, but somthing tells me you should be on your back" he told her gently giving her ear and horn a lick getting a squeak as he touched her sensitive blue horn

Rhythm gently nibbled on Thorax's brown horn and rolled over onto her back, she tucked her front blue hooves onto her belly and spread her hind legs allowing him to easlly acess her marehood, "gently Thorax this is my first time too, and i don't think i've broken my hymen yet Rhythm squeaked as Thorax climbed ontop of her and pressed his stallionhood against her marehood.

Thorax put his hooves around Rhythm and made sure she wouldn't move when he started, Thorax lined up with her marehood and looked at her "you ready?" he asked, after she had nodded he smiled and gently pushed into her, he stopped as she groaned but after she had settled he contiued until he heard her hiss, he realised he must have just broken her hymen. "we can stop if you want" he asked but contiued to penertrate after she wanted him to contiue. When he was fully inside her he gently started to go in and out which started off slowly but increased in tempo. After several full humps Thorax's length was coated with Rhythm's marecum, and they were both moaning happily. Rhythms horn started to glow and several seconds later Rhythm gasped "i'm cumming", shortly afterwards several squiets of clear cold liquid splashed onto Thorax's ballsack. Rhythm then rested her head against the pillow and let out a small sigh as her orgasms lessened, finally she closed her eyes fully spent with the stallion.Thorax however had not quiet finished, however he soon was. He thrusted deep inside Rhythm's marehood and coated her depths with his cum, he then pulled out and dribbled some cum onto her marehood. When he had stopped leaking he curled up beside her and licked her ear befall falling asleep with her.

(WIP)

Rhythm woke up with sunlight flickering though the window, she snorted not in the mood to get up and hid under the covers getting away from the bright sunlight, somthing wet brushes against her ear making her