The Compliment

by Jazz Night

Rating: mature
Tags: Other, Romance, Sex, Gilda, Human, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy
Length: 3168

John gives Gilda a compliment and it starts a naughty friendship.

John notices a beautiful griffin named Gilda in a club and accidentally gives her a loving compliment from the heart and it starts a friendship and ... a naughty spark.

(Based on a true event that happened in "Real Life" to yours truly XD.)

Published 2014-07-27 11:10:03 UTC
Last updated 2014-08-01 10:57:51 UTC

The Club

The beat of the music pounded Johns eardrums as the ponies around him danced and stomped to their hearts content. He really didn't have a thing for clubs, but he only came for the good drinks they served. Tonight was like any other typical Friday night after a long week of work and he came and sat down at the bar and ordered his regular drink to drown out his pain and sorrows. John worked as a construction worker for the Ponyville Construction Co. and he already hated the job only after the first 2 months of working there.

John sighed as the weight of being the only human in Ponyville dawned on him as he took a small sip feeling like an outcast. It seemed like everything was out to get him. He was always yelled at by his boss, his coworkers discriminated against him and bullied him on the job. Even in public when he wasn't working he would get strange stares from other ponies as he carried on about his business trying act normal and just blending in. But who else wouldn't notice a 6 foot 2 tall guy walking around a town full of ponies. Friends were also a problem since no one really ever talked to him, and things just kept piling up to make John feel worse and worse each day.

John took a long sip from his drink and cringed a little at the strong alcohol and sighed as he continued to contemplate his life and its worth.

“Hey bartender...get me another drink would ya!” he heard a raspy female voice call out.

John glanced over and stared at the griffin beside him surprised to see something that actually wasn't a pony. He stared at her taking notice of how her feathers shimmered and cascaded in the light making her look almost like a goddess. He couldn't really get a good look of her body as she was sitting on a stool but he didn't care as it seemed like she already had a nice form.

Gilda downed the drink in one gulp and growled as she slammed the glass down. She glanced over and noticed John staring at her and she quickly snapped at him already not in a good mood.

“AND WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU LOOKING AT?!” Gilda said as she dug her claws into the counter.

John quickly snapped back to reality and blinked as he stuttered.

“Oh. I-I..uh...I..was..just...Sorry...I was just looking at how beautiful you were…”he said.

Gilda let out a low growl beginning to feel annoyed,"Why don't you take a picture and jerk off to it later cause you're not getting a piece of this ass tonight!"

John blinked and looked at her questioningly. "All I was doing was giving you a compliment"

Gilda scoffed and waved it off not paying attention to it. "Pft, yeah right. That's what all you stupid guys say when your drunk, but don't really mean it. All you guys wanna do is just hit it and quit it. You males only think with y'alls dicks."

John felt a little heart broken and wanted to make things better, not wanting to start things off on the wrong foot. "No No, I do mean it, you are a very beautiful griffin. The most prettiest and most beautiful one I've ever seen. And also I'm not like those other guys..er stallions really. Im just trying to be a good friend and give a compliment to a pretty lady."

Gilda blushed slightly as no one really ever told her that before and she smiled, as the heat and fire in her slowly started dying away. But she suddenly snapped back and eye'd John carefully. "Oh yeah, well, how do I know you mean it and you're not trying anything."

John let out a small chuckle and smiled at her, "Trust me, I'm not like any of these douchebags here. I respect women and I respect you. Im not the type who wants a quickie or anything. I'm just looking for a good friend just to have fun with and maybe even hangout if possible."

Gilda smiled back at John and punched him in the shoulder in hard yet playful manner. " You know, your all right." Gilda said as she let out a long sigh of relief. " Its nice to finally meet someone whose not trying to bang me every 10 seconds. Also I'm Gilda by the way."

John winced at the punch and rubbed his sore shoulder and chuckled softly letting out a small silent grown of pain, "John."

"S-So Gilda what brings you here to pony club?"John asked nervously.

Gilda huffed and ordered another drunk and took a sip. "Eh...I've been having friend problems cause of my damn attitude that I can't control sometimes." She sighed and lowered her head. "Its ruined a lot of things for me so I was bummed out and came here to drown out my pain, but... as you saw earlier, I kind of snapped at the bartender cause he was taking to long to make my drink. Im not really mean or I don't try to be for the most part. I just want someone to see for who I am...past my attitude and everything." Gilda said with sadness in her voice.

John slowly reached out a hand and rubbed her back and Gilda let out small pur of comfort and sighed softly before she came back to herself again and punched the same spot on his shoulder again. "And don't you dare call me a softy bub!"

John cringed and sighed, "I wouldn't dare dream of it Gilda, but what confuses me are all these mixed personalities. We are friends Gilda, you can be yourself around me."

Gilda huffed again and flicked her tail "Yeah but I don't want these ponies thinking I'm not or not hardcore or anything. I have a reputation to uphold here."

John tilted his head, "And that is?"

Gilda looked at him and blinked. "Well, being a badass of course."

There was short pause and then both of them began to laugh and they both took a sip of there drinks.

There was long moment of awkward silence between the two as John started to enjoy the company of Gilda while Gilda had turned her head to hide her light blush under her feathers as she started to feel a little something towards John.

Gilda started to think of something to say when suddenly her favorite song came on and she started to bob her head to the music. “H-Hey John…….Wanna dance?” Gilda asked nervously.

John gave a small smile and nodded as he followed Gilda over to the dance floor crowded with ponies. They stood near the back so they wouldn't be noticed and began to dance. He smiled and danced to music stumbling over his own feet a few times as he was still a little tipsy.

Gilda laughed at John she smiled and turned away from him and began to shake her hips in his direction. She bobbed her head and swayed her hips to the music as she danced not having a care in the world.

While they where dancing John decided to take a quick peak of Gilda’s nice curvy body and smiled as the lights reflected off her form. His eyes soaked in the lovely sight of her powerful and muscular legs as they complimented the fine form of her body. He decided to look lower since she wasn't looking and stared at her round ass. He had to admit to himself Gilda did take good care of her figure as he stared at her plump furry ass as it bounced and jiggled to his pleasure, her snake like tail teased him as it swayed side to side with her hips.

Just as the music died down Gilda took a step back and pressed her ass fully onto Johns crotch and froze.

John was in heaven as he felt his cock grow hard in his pants against Gilda's furry ass. The firm yet still soft pressure of her ass against his crotch was a whole new feeling for John and he let a soft moan and gently pushed forward into her ass trying to feel more.

Gilda only stared back at John as she felt his meat throb in his pants against her ass. She blushed a little more and she gave a small chuckle as she thought in her mind. "ohhh an ass man huh...well lets see how you do when I grind on you."

The music began to pick up again to the next song and Gilda grinned evilly in her mind and she slowly started to grind and sway her hips on Johns crotch to the slowly rising beat of the song.

John couldn't believe what he was seeing as he let out another soft moan as Gilda began to grind her sexy ass on his crotch making him harder than ever before.

Gilda smiled and wrapped her tail around John's waist as she sandwiched his cock between her ass and she bounced it playfully. She dropped her ass to the beat of the music and slowly rose it up against Johns length and she smiled and lowered her chest to the floor raising more of her ass and shook it sided to side making John moan again. Gilda got more and more turned on as she grinded on John. His hard throbbing cock pressing back up against her ass her was sending her over the top as dirty thoughts flooded her mind as she imagined John taking her a stuffing her tight snatch.

Gilda and John grinded to a few before Gilda couldn't take it any more and she looked back at John blushing. "H-hey John wanna come over to place?" She said trying to talk over the loud music as they still continued to grind.

John only nodded to embarrassed to say yes as they stopped dancing and Gilda pulled off John. To his surprise there was a wet stain on the bulge of his pants and Gilda's face blushed to new red and this time John began to laugh.

Gilda growled and punched him gut hard enough to make him stop and proceeded to head towards the exit, "Come on you dork!"

John coughed and gasped little but still smiled and followed Gilda out the club to her home.

Author's Note

Hehe, I hope this is enough to keep you craving for more. The story here is based on an event that actually happened with me and my girl and I hope y'all enjoy it. Also this is just a story to keep you naughty ponies entertained while I write my other story "Thats My Shy" that is still in progress. Part 2 will be posted soon so check back in 2 to 3 more days. So see you naughty ponies soon :P
~ Jazz Night ~

Gilda's Home

John arrived at Gilda's home that was at the edge of town, and smiled at how cozy and comfortable her home looked. The living room was spacious, a nice sized kitchen, two bathrooms, and two bedrooms. John felt relaxed and took his shoes off at the door and followed Gilda into the living room.

"Hey John, want something to drink?" Gilda asked as she headed towards the kitchen.

"Just water is fine, thank you." John said as Gilda only nodded and sensually swayed her hips as she went into the kitchen.

John sat on the couch and sighed happily as he waited for Gilda to come back. He noticed some pictures on the small coffee table in front of him and leaned in to get a closer look. He smiled at the picture of Gilda hanging her arm over a rainbow maned pony's neck as they where both smiling. The sound of ice clinking in glass caught his ears and he looked up just in time to see Gilda carrying a tray of ice water for both of them in her beak.

Gilda placed the tray on the coffee table and sat on the couch beside John and stared of into nothingness as they both looked away from each other blushing.

"N-Nice home Gilda." John said blushing taking a sip of his water and placing it back down on the tray.

"Oh thanks," Gilda said as she thought of something to say. "So how big are you?" She asked John as her hormones where already starting to get the best of her.

John slowly got aroused from the question and blushed as a tint started to form in his pants. 'W-Why you wanna know?" he asked her.

Gilda smiled and scooted closer to John," Because.."she said in a low seductive voice, " I have a thing for...big...fat...long..meaty cocks". The bulge in his pants made Gilda smile as she eye'd its length and started to guess on it thickness as the bulge was already nice and big. "Plus..." she said. "You don't need to hide it from me. You can let it out," she said as she started to gently brush up against him.

Dirty thoughts flooded her mind as Johns face was bright red as he tried to fake a cough while discreetly adjusting is pants. He tucked his cock just under his belt line leaving the sensitive underside exposed as it still didn't cover his raging hard on.

"Awe, need some encouragement John?" she asked playfully as she got a naughty idea reached her hand up and gently grazed up the bulge of his length with her claws. John and Gilda eyes locked with each others as they both felt something grow and spark between them. Gilda blushed and smiled continuing to teased John with her little claw trick. She purred softly as she broke the stare, slowly trailing her claws up from the base of his cock to just under the head where she circled vigorously a few times initiating a moan from John and shed ran her claws slowly back down his length again. Repeating the process a few more times, she started to notice his cock flare in his pants she smiled and pulled her claws away while John let out a groan, still feeling the effects as if she was still running her claws over his cock.

"Oh no John, you can't cum yet, I'm just getting started," she said as she unzipped his pants and reached her hand inside and slowly began to stroke his cock. John let out another moan of pleasure as Gilda started to pick up the pace as she gently squeezed and rubbed his cock as it slowly grew to full length. "Mmm, gonna squirt extra hard for me John?" Gilda asked as she smiled evilly at him.

John struggled to find the words to speak as he was in pure escasty as this was his first hand job ever and all he could let out was a moan. Gilda laughed and pulled his cock free from his pants and gasped as it was a few inches bigger than what she thought it would be. Something turned on in Gilda, like a light switch being flicked to on, and she suddenly griped is cock again and began to pump her hand up and down his length. She pumped his cock fast and hard and purred her tail swishing back and for behind her as she was predatory mode not stopping until she got what she want. Lowering her head and holding her beak open, she started panting on Johns cock sending him over the edge as he fired she first few rounds inside and the rest over her face. Gilda swallowed and moaned at the unique taste of his seed as she craved more and let out a low growl, her wings spread wide as like as if she was gonna attack while John looked at her questioningly.

"Ready for round 2 John...?' she asked as she stared him down like prey.

"Round two?" John asked back sounding confused.

Before John could get another word out, Gilda pounced on John's cock immediately wrapping her small beak around the head of his cock, stuffing it inside, and pushing down, swallowing all of his cock in one smooth stroke.

John leaned his head back and moaned loudly as his cock was engulfed in her throat while Gilda gagged and drooled heavily on his cock. Gilda chocked and squirmed as her throat was stretched, it squeezing Johns cock tightly as it tested her gag reflex. But she didn't care as she held her breathe and began to bob her head on his length wanting his warm tasty cum. She raised her head until only the head was in her throat and she slammed he head back down, swallowing it all down again as John moaned loudly and placed a hand on her head enjoying every moment. Gilda deep throated him over and over taking a few breathes in-between until John felt like he was about to explode. "O-oh fuck Gilda...I-I'm close!"

Gilda took him back up to the head again and pushed down hard with all her might as she held him in her throat and swallowed over and over letting her throat do the work as it squeezed and pulled on Johns cock, milking it hard. John exploded down Gilda's throat sending wave after of fresh cum to her belly as she swallowed it all down until Johns orgasm subsided.

Gilda smiled and slowly raised her beak off Johns cock with a gentle "pop", leaving his cock nice and moist. John panted hard with his head back on the couch as he slowly tried to recover from the events that just occurred his mind still a blur. Gilda sat back on her haunches and tilted her head up and swallowed a few more times to clear her throat and air way of Johns excess cum as she placed a hand on her stomach and smacked her lips continently. A low rumble comes from her stomach and Gilda lets out a large cum filled belch and chuckles as she pats her stomach and smiles "mmm delicious."

John huffs and looks at Gilda and smiles as Gilda leans in and kisses his cheek gently with her beak and she hops from the couch and heads to her room.

"S-so what does this make us now Gilda?" John asked questioningly as he stood up and stared at Gilda.

Gilda looked back and smiled. "Don't worry John we are still friends...But with benefits," she said as she flicked her tail to the side flashing John letting him see a quick peak of her soaking folds before giving him a playful wink and headed off to her room.

John blinked and let out a sigh as headed to the guest bedroom. " Well so much for sleeping tonight."

Author's Note

Sooooooo, yeah. that stuff happened. o.o